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Karen
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Karen
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年7月19日 at 13:45:28

Artist: Sharlo
Title: Songs Compilation
Tags: エウテルペ Euterpe ギルティクラウン Guilty Crown ebb and flow 凪のあすから Nagi no Asukara 爱啦啦 Ai La La 寝・逃・げでリセット！ Ne Ni Ge de Reset! らき☆すた Lucky Star 凪 -nagi- Sleeping Butterfly 神様のメモ帐 Kami-sama no Memo-chou ビードロ模样 Vidro Moyou あの夏で待ってる Ano Natsu de Matteru 深海少女 Shinkai Shoujo VOCALOID ねぐせ Neguse たまこまーけっと Tamako Market メランコリック Melancholic クローバー Clover ユアダイアリー your diary 孤独なHeaven Kodoku na Heaven ラブライブ！ School idol project Love Live! START:DASH!! アスフォデルス Asphodelus 秽翼のユースティア Aiyoku no Eustia 詠奏妖華 ～明鏡止水～ Eisou Youga ~Meikyou Shisui~ 東方Project Touhou Fantastic Future 変態王子と笑わない猫 Hentai Ouji to Warawanai Neko Authentic symphony ましろ色シンフォニー -The color of lovers- Mashiro Iro Symphony ふわふわ Fuwafuwa 初恋の絵本 Hatsukoi no Ehon かくしごと Kakushigoto HildasXD 夏萝 -[Koinuri]
BPM: 90
Filesize: 28229kb
Play Time: 13:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Sharathon (4.96 stars, 2425 notes)
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Sharlo - Songs Compilation



Storyboard by -[Koinuri]

BG by HildasXD



Track List

  • エウテルペ / Euterpe BPM 90
    ebb and flow BPM 106
    爱啦啦 / Ai La La BPM 120
    寝·逃·げでリセット! / Ne Ni Ge de Reset! BPM 120
    凪 -nagi- / Nagi -nagi- BPM 120
    Sleeping Butterfly BPM 130
    ビードロ模样 / Vidro Moyou BPM 131
    深海少女 / Shinkai Shoujo BPM 137
    ねぐせ / Neguse BPM 137
    メランコリック / Melancholic BPM 140
    クローバー / Clover BPM 140
    孤独なHeaven / Kodoku na Heaven BPM 144
    START:DASH!! BPM 150
    アスフォデルス/ Asphodelus BPM 160
    詠奏妖華 ～明鏡止水～ / Eisou Youga ~Meikyou Shisui~ BPM 170
    Fantastic Future BPM 172
    Authentic symphony BPM 175
    ふわふわ / Fuwafuwa BPM 180
    初恋の絵本 / Hatsukoi no Ehon BPM 190
    かくしごと / Kakushigoto BPM 200
Last edited by Karen , edited 30 times in total.
Sharlo
667 posts
Joined May 2012
Sharlo
拒绝几把
提倡善良
捧红我萝
人哥万岁
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
沙发留给偶像 我坐个板凳就行
Nakano Itsuki
1,218 posts
Joined July 2014
Nakano Itsuki

Sharlo wrote:

拒绝几把
提倡善良
捧红我萝
人哥万岁
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
kanor
[Sharathon]
01:20:456 (1) -这个反选感觉和后面接的上一点
01:27:531 - 这个地方不下音有点难受
01:50:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - 应该是故意下成这样的？不过感觉童一句话里同时有故意漏音和打节奏总感觉怪怪的。
02:01:500 (5) - 这里换成两个短滑条会不会更好读一点？
02:09:500 (6) - ^
02:34:580 (3,4,5,6) - 这个三连放到5和6中间感觉更合适一点
04:17:982 (3) - 试试反选一下？这样就和04:32:751 (3,4) - 保持同样的样式了......
06:08:170 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - 深海少女这个结尾是不是有些太高能了......毕竟曲子已经趋于减弱了。要么试着把音频再延长一段，把06:10:797 (1) - 之后的渐弱试试看？
11:03:098 (7) - 做个花式滑条感觉也不错。
11:36:000 (1) - 这个滑条拐得有些迟钝.......好像和人声错开了一点点
12:47:569 - 这个音真的不打算填吗？
13:13:402 (1) - 这个感觉最好再折返一次压住重音。
13:46:440 (1) - 这个转盘的结尾感觉意义不明，一般来说是停在13:47:862 - 这里？

人哥太神只能水摸......
确实学到了很多东西呢0w0，自己的图有哪些要改的也有点思路了√
萌新求眼熟♪(^∇^*)
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
[General]

不太能理解为什么combo color有一个灰的

1086*767的bg不知道要不要开宽屏支持

[Sharathon]

00:55:550 - 这种地方我觉的是要kiai一下的

01:23:286 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - 直接120度这样子转过去就好

01:50:250 - 这地方空着不太好，01:51:750 - 跟这个地方是不一样的

02:07:750 - 02:08:750 - 感觉也是没必要空在那边，02:07:000 (3,4) - 一定要空的话这两个最好NC

02:11:750 - 同上，有vocal有发条的声音可以跟但是这两个最后都没跟

02:28:018 (1,2,3) - 这种地方不变速感觉就不太好，建议是一个一个的慢下来 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4854185

03:45:778 (3) - 为啥会是1/8还是连着三个的那种。。要是我就并成一个了否则容易掉，05:09:078 (9) - 就像这样

05:09:078 (9) - NC

05:23:963 (5,6) - 感觉这两个应该再靠左一点否则看上去感觉有点不太舒服

05:51:746 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 我觉得这个NC不用都没关系

07:11:044 (2) - 这地方感觉应该拆，感觉跟vocal比较好

07:14:044 (1,2,3,4) - 也是感觉一个一个的减速比较好

07:42:411 - 这个break的时间莫名其妙，这个绿色的部分没啥必要的

09:22:858 (1) - 为啥要拉这么个奇怪的形状。。

09:40:058 (1) - 这地方感觉应该是1/2滑条和一个圈，25%应该比较明显

09:50:058 - 还有我觉得这歌应该做到这里再开始break

11:17:163 (5) - NC

11:17:860 - 这里感觉不太应该空着，填上感觉节奏比较充实

13:14:736 - 同样我觉得这首歌应该做到这里

13:38:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个串建议用0.7或者0.8的间距，不需要跟前面两个3连的间距一样，另外形状的话可以加点弧度上去

美丽，有点搞不懂为什么网吧都会音画不同步
Sharlo
667 posts
Joined May 2012
Sharlo

Karen wrote:

那天我跟女神表白，她甩了我一巴掌，对我说叫我撒泡尿照照自己的样子，我刚拉开拉链还没开始尿呢，女神突然又对我说其实可以试着交往看看。 年轻人，只要某些方面过人，你就有机会。
@夏狗币 combo color是我选的耶;x;
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW

Sharlo wrote:

Karen wrote:

那天我跟女神表白，她甩了我一巴掌，对我说叫我撒泡尿照照自己的样子，我刚拉开拉链还没开始尿呢，女神突然又对我说其实可以试着交往看看。 年轻人，只要某些方面过人，你就有机会。
@夏狗币 combo color是我选的耶;x;
说实在的我觉得一个灰的 combo color真的不太好，我还是觉得4个亮色比较好一点
Len
2,812 posts
Joined June 2012
Len
i just dropped out for you


Sharlotte:
  1. 01:58:000 (1) - i think it should be emphasized more
  2. 02:33:174 (4) - ctrl+g is better imo xd
  3. 07:13:830 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - it makes me confusing; what about avoiding that overlap with thsoe sliders like this? 07:27:759 (1,2,3,4) -
  4. 08:14:524 - ~ 08:17:799 - try to add spinner?
  5. 09:22:858 (1) - make me boring ;w; try this: http://puu.sh/oayxT/9eee017432.jpg i think its better than before !
  6. 09:46:858 (1) - ^
  7. 11:23:093 (5) - move to x159 y187 for making triangle with 2,4?
  8. 11:30:418 (1) - i think you can make beautiful 'S' Slider XD
  9. 13:09:486 - ~ 13:14:736 - add spinner instead note and sliders?
  10. 13:51:414 (4,5,6) - remove whistle?
i hope it helps you! and sorry for trolling =w=
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru
偶像拉松了再不送摸还是人？
[夏拉松]
00:55:550 (1) - 头放00:53:286 (1,2,3,4) 叠一起多好
01:02:059 (1,2,3) - 我会这样放：http://puu.sh/oaFGZ/f82108165a.jpg
01:03:899 - 不建议放掉这里
01:50:250 - ↑
02:07:750 - ↑
02:08:750 - ↑
02:11:750 - ↑
02:58:486 (3) - http://puu.sh/oaFTn/baff184bb6.jpg
04:16:135 (6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/oaG0j/da0dbb5e15.jpg
04:22:135 (6,7,8) - 没必要三连 换个折返如何
04:24:212 (6) - 别跟04:23:982 (5) 叠一起最好 04:23:520 (3,4,5,6) 连续四个升音阶 应该放跳
04:41:058 (1) - CTRL+G 后续跟进调整
05:14:574 (3,4,5,6) - 两个莫名的二连 略坑
05:29:230 (3,4,5,6) - ↑
06:03:790 (1) - 建议NC在06:04:228 (2) 上
06:54:157 (4) - 拆成三个单点吧
07:08:259 (4) - 07:08:687 (1) - stack歪了
09:38:258 (4,5,6,7) - 这样歪着好难受啊 推荐把09:38:258 (4,5,6) 叠一起
11:40:186 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 有点微妙的歪了

美丽
Last edited by KaedekaShizuru , edited 1 time in total.
Deppyforce
1,961 posts
Joined November 2014
Deppyforce
hi, m4m :3

[Sharathon]
add start: dash in tags? since thats songs playing at 09:10:058
i dont know if theres more song missing in tags though but i only know this one xD
00:09:486 - 00:11:819 - there are notes on 1/8 ticks in these area, given that you didnt ignore the sound at 00:05:819 (4) , you shouldnt ignore these too
00:37:319 (3) - mayb try 1/8 kicksliders instead ;o
01:07:154 (2) - imo this should be 1/2 circles instead so both vocals would be clickable and also it'll be different from the previous pattern
01:12:956 - you shouldnt ignore this sound imo
01:25:267 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g rhythm follow vocals better
01:43:750 (7,1) - spacing should be bigger like 5 ->6 jump to emphasize downbeat? xd
02:29:893 (1,2,3) - spacing supposed to be even here?
03:05:283 (7) - since theres sound at the 1/4 tick, change this to 1/4 slider would fit better imo
03:23:917 (3,4,5) - nazi thing but this is not perfectly straight
03:43:452 (1,2) - should have bigger spacing to emphasize the cymbal+clap
04:23:982 (5,6) - since the tension is rising here, i think you shouldnt stack these. its just anti climatic
04:38:982 (6,1) - i think spacing should be bigger here
04:55:366 - add kickslider? kinda feels empty
05:07:933 - ehh i think spinner should end here
06:25:033 ~ in this song, maybe change some 1/1 sliders to 1/2 slider + circle? since theres obvious sounds on the 1/2 ticks
07:03:759 (1,2) - should be 1/2 sliders like the other part with same vocals, the fact that 07:04:187 - got ignored is weird imo
07:24:759 (2) - add finish to head? theres cymbal sound
07:59:841 (6) - maybe nc this bcuz 12 combo in insane diff looks weird :s
08:28:122 (1,2,3,4) - not really necessary but you could merge these to a kickslider to emphasize the snare on 678
09:22:858 (1) - normal curve will flow better than this edgy one imo :/
10:00:753 - theres sound here xd
10:42:804 (2,3) - this jump should be bigger
11:18:732 (4,5,1) - would flow better if rotate these ccw a bit so the movements from 3 -> 451 are sharper and more comfortable
11:36:000 (1) - missing finish?
12:16:162 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g rhythm follows vocal better here
13:14:736 - i think you should end the song at this tick instead
14:08:408 (2,3) - unstack? the vocal on 3 defintly should be emphasized
14:11:408 (7,8,9,10) - these are strong but you stacked them ;;
14:30:908 (1,6,2) - stack these? lol

good luck!
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
kanor

kanor wrote:

[Sharathon]
01:20:456 (1) -这个反选感觉和后面接的上一点
01:27:531 - 这个地方不下音有点难受 不跟vocal
01:50:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - 应该是故意下成这样的？不过感觉童一句话里同时有故意漏音和打节奏总感觉怪怪的。 不跟vocal
02:01:500 (5) - 这里换成两个短滑条会不会更好读一点？ 这里很平和，两个滑条太难了
02:09:500 (6) - ^
02:34:580 (3,4,5,6) - 这个三连放到5和6中间感觉更合适一点 中间有个音耶
04:17:982 (3) - 试试反选一下？这样就和04:32:751 (3,4) - 保持同样的样式了......
06:08:170 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - 深海少女这个结尾是不是有些太高能了......毕竟曲子已经趋于减弱了。要么试着把音频再延长一段，把06:10:797 (1) - 之后的渐弱试试看？ 额，减弱的话该放串还是要放的呀
11:03:098 (7) - 做个花式滑条感觉也不错。 没有延长音
11:36:000 (1) - 这个滑条拐得有些迟钝.......好像和人声错开了一点点
12:47:569 - 这个音真的不打算填吗？ 不跟vocal
13:13:402 (1) - 这个感觉最好再折返一次压住重音。
13:46:440 (1) - 这个转盘的结尾感觉意义不明，一般来说是停在13:47:862 - 这里？

人哥太神只能水摸......
确实学到了很多东西呢0w0，自己的图有哪些要改的也有点思路了√
萌新求眼熟♪(^∇^*)

T-Mac

T-Mac wrote:

[General]

不太能理解为什么combo color有一个灰的

1086*767的bg不知道要不要开宽屏支持

[Sharathon]

00:55:550 - 这种地方我觉的是要kiai一下的 只有最后一首放kiai吧

01:23:286 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - 直接120度这样子转过去就好 这个需要90度因为还有01:25:267 (2) - 这滑条

01:50:250 - 这地方空着不太好，01:51:750 - 跟这个地方是不一样的 01:50:000 (1) - 这音很重啊，想强调一下

02:07:750 - 02:08:750 - 感觉也是没必要空在那边，02:07:000 (3,4) - 一定要空的话这两个最好NC 这里想故意做个节奏梗

02:11:750 - 同上，有vocal有发条的声音可以跟但是这两个最后都没跟

02:28:018 (1,2,3) - 这种地方不变速感觉就不太好，建议是一个一个的慢下来 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4854185

03:45:778 (3) - 为啥会是1/8还是连着三个的那种。。要是我就并成一个了否则容易掉，05:09:078 (9) - 就像这样 跟着这三声vocal简直合曲

05:09:078 (9) - NC

05:23:963 (5,6) - 感觉这两个应该再靠左一点否则看上去感觉有点不太舒服

05:51:746 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 我觉得这个NC不用都没关系 变距了想提示一下

07:11:044 (2) - 这地方感觉应该拆，感觉跟vocal比较好 为什么跟vocal要拆了，这里vocal跟前面两个一样的

07:14:044 (1,2,3,4) - 也是感觉一个一个的减速比较好 要前后一致

07:42:411 - 这个break的时间莫名其妙，这个绿色的部分没啥必要的

09:22:858 (1) - 为啥要拉这么个奇怪的形状。。 不奇怪啊

09:40:058 (1) - 这地方感觉应该是1/2滑条和一个圈，25%应该比较明显 那个音就忽略吧，感觉不是很重要

09:50:058 - 还有我觉得这歌应该做到这里再开始break

11:17:163 (5) - NC

11:17:860 - 这里感觉不太应该空着，填上感觉节奏比较充实 这里完全就没有音。。

13:14:736 - 同样我觉得这首歌应该做到这里

13:38:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个串建议用0.7或者0.8的间距，不需要跟前面两个3连的间距一样，另外形状的话可以加点弧度上去

美丽，有点搞不懂为什么网吧都会音画不同步

Len

Len wrote:

i just dropped out for you


Sharlotte:
  1. 01:58:000 (1) - i think it should be emphasized more this is a straight flow so i think it has been emphasized much
  2. 02:33:174 (4) - ctrl+g is better imo xd
  3. 07:13:830 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - it makes me confusing; what about avoiding that overlap with thsoe sliders like this? 07:27:759 (1,2,3,4) - at least i tried
  4. 08:14:524 - ~ 08:17:799 - try to add spinner?
  5. 09:22:858 (1) - make me boring ;w; try this: http://puu.sh/oayxT/9eee017432.jpg i think its better than before ! i've used many 1/2 sliders before this so it would be more boring if i used it again!
  6. 09:46:858 (1) - ^
  7. 11:23:093 (5) - move to x159 y187 for making triangle with 2,4?
  8. 11:30:418 (1) - i think you can make beautiful 'S' Slider XD didn't tend to make a 'S' slider lol
  9. 13:09:486 - ~ 13:14:736 - add spinner instead note and sliders? umm the music is still a bit strong here so...
  10. 13:51:414 (4,5,6) - remove whistle? following piano >w<
i hope it helps you! and sorry for trolling =w= 'slaps'

KaedekaShizuru

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

偶像拉松了再不送摸还是人？
[夏拉松]
00:55:550 (1) - 头放00:53:286 (1,2,3,4) 叠一起多好 这时候overlap一下很好看
01:02:059 (1,2,3) - 我会这样放：http://puu.sh/oaFGZ/f82108165a.jpg 有点难打
01:03:899 - 不建议放掉这里 前面已经二连+滑条，如果再放连打会很难
01:50:250 - ↑
02:07:750 - ↑ 这里想试一下做节奏梗，感觉没那么无聊
02:08:750 - ↑
02:11:750 - ↑
02:58:486 (3) - http://puu.sh/oaFTn/baff184bb6.jpg 你这个我别的地方用过，所以想用不一样的
04:16:135 (6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/oaG0j/da0dbb5e15.jpg 红线起的滑条没特殊情况不会用的
04:22:135 (6,7,8) - 没必要三连 换个折返如何 跟前面三连合起来好玩
04:24:212 (6) - 别跟04:23:982 (5) 叠一起最好 04:23:520 (3,4,5,6) 连续四个升音阶 应该放跳 为了凸显04:24:212 (6,1) - 这个跳
04:41:058 (1) - CTRL+G 后续跟进调整 换了个梗
05:14:574 (3,4,5,6) - 两个莫名的二连 略坑 你听音乐里就是二连啊。。
05:29:230 (3,4,5,6) - ↑
06:03:790 (1) - 建议NC在06:04:228 (2) 上 NC当然放在anti jump上
06:54:157 (4) - 拆成三个单点吧 这里音很弱，放松一下可以了
07:08:259 (4) - 07:08:687 (1) - stack歪了
09:38:258 (4,5,6,7) - 这样歪着好难受啊 推荐把09:38:258 (4,5,6) 叠一起 换了个角度
11:40:186 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 有点微妙的歪了

美丽

Deppyforce

Deppyforce wrote:

hi, m4m :3

[Sharathon]
add start: dash in tags? since thats songs playing at 09:10:058
i dont know if theres more song missing in tags though but i only know this one xD
00:09:486 - 00:11:819 - there are notes on 1/8 ticks in these area, given that you didnt ignore the sound at 00:05:819 (4) , you shouldnt ignore these too 1/8 is a bit hard here and i feel kinda weird to map 1/4 on 1/8 sound ;w;
00:37:319 (3) - mayb try 1/8 kicksliders instead ;o too hard i think, i want it simple
01:07:154 (2) - imo this should be 1/2 circles instead so both vocals would be clickable and also it'll be different from the previous pattern umm you're right but i kinda like the pattern so let me keep it for now
01:12:956 - you shouldnt ignore this sound imo
01:25:267 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g rhythm follow vocals better my rhythm fits with the vocals better imo
01:43:750 (7,1) - spacing should be bigger like 5 ->6 jump to emphasize downbeat? xd
02:29:893 (1,2,3) - spacing supposed to be even here?
03:05:283 (7) - since theres sound at the 1/4 tick, change this to 1/4 slider would fit better imo changed to a triple
03:23:917 (3,4,5) - nazi thing but this is not perfectly straight
03:43:452 (1,2) - should have bigger spacing to emphasize the cymbal+clap
04:23:982 (5,6) - since the tension is rising here, i think you shouldnt stack these. its just anti climatic that would be too hard to read
04:38:982 (6,1) - i think spacing should be bigger here
04:55:366 - add kickslider? kinda feels empty
05:07:933 - ehh i think spinner should end here 05:07:704 - here's a sound ;w;
06:25:033 ~ in this song, maybe change some 1/1 sliders to 1/2 slider + circle? since theres obvious sounds on the 1/2 ticks there are full of 1/4 sounds in this song so it can't be avoided, and i mapped 1/1 sliders for vocals that should be emphasized
07:03:759 (1,2) - should be 1/2 sliders like the other part with same vocals, the fact that 07:04:187 - got ignored is weird imo it is the beginning of a new part so i used a 1/1 for emphasizing
07:24:759 (2) - add finish to head? theres cymbal sound
07:59:841 (6) - maybe nc this bcuz 12 combo in insane diff looks weird :s
08:28:122 (1,2,3,4) - not really necessary but you could merge these to a kickslider to emphasize the snare on 678 i love streams c:
09:22:858 (1) - normal curve will flow better than this edgy one imo :/
10:00:753 - theres sound here xd not so obvious
10:42:804 (2,3) - this jump should be bigger
11:18:732 (4,5,1) - would flow better if rotate these ccw a bit so the movements from 3 -> 451 are sharper and more comfortable made them straight
11:36:000 (1) - missing finish?
12:16:162 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g rhythm follows vocal better here
13:14:736 - i think you should end the song at this tick instead
14:08:408 (2,3) - unstack? the vocal on 3 defintly should be emphasized i can't agree with this, sounds like 4 should be emphasized instead
14:11:408 (7,8,9,10) - these are strong but you stacked them ;; ;;
14:30:908 (1,6,2) - stack these? lol

good luck!

thanks for mods!
Sharlo
667 posts
Joined May 2012
Sharlo
Add Tags: HildasXD 夏萝

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Track List

  • Track List

    1.エウテルペ
    2.ebb and flow
    3.爱啦啦
    4.寝·逃·げでリセット!
    5.凪 -nagi-
    6.Sleeping Butterfly
    7.ビードロ模样
    8.深海少女
    9.ねぐせ
    10.メランコリック
    11.クローバー
    12.孤独なHeaven
    13.START-DASH!!
    14.アスフォデルス（Asphodelus）
    15.詠奏妖華 ～明鏡止水～
    16.Fantastic Future
    17.Authentic symphony
    18.ふわふわ
    19.初恋の絵本
    20.かくしごと
Reillia
1,162 posts
Joined August 2014
Reillia
M4M : Hanatan - Attakain Dakara

[Sharathon]
01:02:484 (2) - This note is to feel awkward.
02:49:346 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - how about make a star?
04:17:058 (1) - how about this slider shape?
EX
05:32:436 (2,3) - fix blanket?
07:47:376 (1,4) - how about blanket this?
09:41:458 (4) - how about this slider shape?
EX
10:06:566 (2) - ^
EX
13:49:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - make star more perfectly.
14:27:608 (3) - how about this rhythm?
EX

I think this map will be rank soon. GL!
Moa
453 posts
Joined December 2012
Moa


hi m4m https://osu.ppy.sh/s/439024
not BN's mod now i want NM
[general]
BG's size is not 16:9 and 4:3 plz change

[sharathon]
01:50:250 - u follow vocal but not mapped here
03:40:429 (3,4,5) - not good flow here
05:09:994 (1,2) - fix blanket
05:12:742 (3) - so near
05:14:574 (3,4,5,6) - i think it's not good rhythm my suggestion http://puu.sh/oaSvR/faa13e2475.jpg
05:29:230 (3,4,5,6) - ^
06:44:960 (2,3) - u'll give more distant like 06:41:457 (2,3) - that
08:27:288 (1,2,1) - not good flow i think
08:49:372 (2) - u put finish hitsound so u'll give more distant
13:09:402 (1) - more distant here? :?

sorry for baka mod..
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
C u r i

[C u r i] wrote:

M4M : Hanatan - Attakain Dakara

[Sharathon]
01:02:484 (2) - This note is to feel awkward. fine to me o.o
02:49:346 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - how about make a star?
04:17:058 (1) - how about this slider shape? i want make 04:16:597 (9,1) - parallel
05:32:436 (2,3) - fix blanket?
07:47:376 (1,4) - how about blanket this? not tend to blanket that
09:41:458 (4) - how about this slider shape? no much difference
10:06:566 (2) - ^
13:49:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - make star more perfectly.
14:27:608 (3) - how about this rhythm? sometimes using 1/1 sliders is more interesting


I think this map will be rank soon. GL!

Moa

Moa wrote:



hi m4m https://osu.ppy.sh/s/439024
not BN's mod now i want NM
[general]
BG's size is not 16:9 and 4:3 plz change bg is ok as long as it's below 1366x768

[sharathon]
01:50:250 - u follow vocal but not mapped here
03:40:429 (3,4,5) - not good flow here it's fine i think
05:09:994 (1,2) - fix blanket
05:12:742 (3) - so near any problem? it's distance snap ;w;
05:14:574 (3,4,5,6) - i think it's not good rhythm my suggestion http://puu.sh/oaSvR/faa13e2475.jpg prefer my rhythm
05:29:230 (3,4,5,6) - ^
06:44:960 (2,3) - u'll give more distant like 06:41:457 (2,3) - that
08:27:288 (1,2,1) - not good flow i think
08:49:372 (2) - u put finish hitsound so u'll give more distant
13:09:402 (1) - more distant here? :?

sorry for baka mod..

thanks!
Sharlo
667 posts
Joined May 2012
Sharlo
Hi hitsound mod here lol

  • Sharathon♥

  1. 01:01:267 (3) - 头Drum-hitwhistle
  2. 01:02:965 (2) - 头Drum-hitwhistle
  3. 01:06:927 (6) - Drum-hitwhistle
  4. 01:07:069 (7) - Drum-hitwhistle
  5. 01:19:380 (3) - 头Drum-hitwhistle
  6. 01:21:078 (2) - 头Drum-hitwhistle
  7. 01:21:644 (3) - Drum-hitwhistle
    其实看不大懂这一段是怎么加的orz
  8. 02:05:012 (3) - 头Normal-hitclap
  9. 03:12:004 (1) - 头Finish
  10. 03:24:562 (1) - remove或者默认的Drum-hitfinish
  11. 03:25:492 (5) - remove
  12. 03:25:958 (8) - 头Clap
  13. 03:54:330 (1) - 头这里是我昨晚说的地方查了一下为了加Finish所以丢掉了Drum-hitfinish 我建议（在不改音效文件的前提下）还是加后者舍弃前者吧
  14. 04:01:888 (1) - wrong placement
  15. 04:06:330 (2) - remove 应该是手误
  16. 04:11:176 (1) - whistle?
  17. 05:54:285 (3) - 尾似乎认为drum-hitwhistle更好
  18. 05:56:913 (1) - 头finish
  19. 06:07:205 (1) - 这个转盘并没有对在timing上耶...这样可以吗 直接remove?
  20. 06:54:762 (2) - 头&尾Clap
  21. 07:48:810 (4) - Drum-hitfinish
  22. 08:47:834 (1) - 也是wrong placement
  23. 09:27:885 (1) - 折返处Clap
  24. 09:43:165 (1) - 头Finish
  25. 10:50:545 (1) - 又放错了啦
  26. 10:53:205 - 这里漏音诶 考虑7改成1/4滑条? 会不会太几把
  27. 11:16:664 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个都应该Normal-hitnormal
  28. 11:29:255 (3) - 头Clap
  29. 11:37:141 (3) - 头Drum-hitwhistle
  30. 11:45:713 (2) - Clap
  31. 11:52:398 (4) - 头Drum-hitwhistle
  32. 13:20:130 (1) - remove NC?
  33. 13:22:680 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 讲道理这段的间距能不能大一点点
  34. 13:47:430 (1) - 尾Normal-hitwhistle?
另外记得改Preview Time 我要福娃福娃/w/
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

Sharlo wrote:

Hi hitsound mod here lol

  • Sharathon♥

  1. 01:01:267 (3) - 头Drum-hitwhistle
  2. 01:02:965 (2) - 头Drum-hitwhistle
  3. 01:06:927 (6) - Drum-hitwhistle
  4. 01:07:069 (7) - Drum-hitwhistle
  5. 01:19:380 (3) - 头Drum-hitwhistle
  6. 01:21:078 (2) - 头Drum-hitwhistle
  7. 01:21:644 (3) - Drum-hitwhistle
    其实看不大懂这一段是怎么加的orz
  8. 02:05:012 (3) - 头Normal-hitclap
  9. 03:12:004 (1) - 头Finish
  10. 03:24:562 (1) - remove或者默认的Drum-hitfinish 改成了whistle
  11. 03:25:492 (5) - remove 这里本来就是24clap的
  12. 03:25:958 (8) - 头Clap
  13. 03:54:330 (1) - 头这里是我昨晚说的地方查了一下为了加Finish所以丢掉了Drum-hitfinish 我建议（在不改音效文件的前提下）还是加后者舍弃前者吧
  14. 04:01:888 (1) - wrong placement
  15. 04:06:330 (2) - remove 应该是手误
  16. 04:11:176 (1) - whistle?
  17. 05:54:285 (3) - 尾似乎认为drum-hitwhistle更好
  18. 05:56:913 (1) - 头finish
  19. 06:07:205 (1) - 这个转盘并没有对在timing上耶...这样可以吗 直接remove? 手误。。
  20. 06:54:762 (2) - 头&尾Clap
  21. 07:48:810 (4) - Drum-hitfinish
  22. 08:47:834 (1) - 也是wrong placement
  23. 09:27:885 (1) - 折返处Clap
  24. 09:43:165 (1) - 头Finish
  25. 10:50:545 (1) - 又放错了啦
  26. 10:53:205 - 这里漏音诶 考虑7改成1/4滑条? 会不会太几把 多加了个note
  27. 11:16:664 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个都应该Normal-hitnormal
  28. 11:29:255 (3) - 头Clap
  29. 11:37:141 (3) - 头Drum-hitwhistle
  30. 11:37:141 (3) - Clap
  31. 11:52:398 (4) - 头Drum-hitwhistle
  32. 13:20:130 (1) - remove NC?
  33. 13:22:680 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 讲道理这段的间距能不能大一点点
  34. 13:47:430 (1) - 尾Normal-hitwhistle?
另外记得改Preview Time 我要福娃福娃/w/
神摸
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
m4m with https://osu.ppy.sh/s/395160 o.o

[General]
  1. Your bg size is still wrong? doesn't it should be 1024x768
[Sharathon]
  1. 01:17:965 (6) - add finish?
  2. 01:44:762 (5) - additional Normal-clap
  3. 01:45:262 (8) - additional drum-whistle
  4. 01:49:262 (6) - ^
  5. 01:50:387 - add note and additional drum-whistle?
  6. 01:57:012 (5) - wrong snap? imo it's more like 1/3 o.o
  7. 02:05:012 (3) - ^, umm if you not sure, avoid to map it? you also didn't map that rhythm at 02:13:012
  8. 02:27:768 (2,3) - this might not necessary but how about NC to each for SV changing?
  9. 02:45:815 (8) - imo would be better if you make this note less spacing than (1) because there have a cymbal sound. please reconsider.
  10. 02:57:300 (1) - aaa how about move this further, similar reason as above.
  11. 02:59:643 (2) - curve is more flow but if you want to make various shape, it's fine :3
  12. 03:20:376 (5) - add finish?
  13. 03:25:260 (4) - *cough* looks like you mind about stack so why don't you make this stack as well *cough*
  14. 03:25:725 (6,7,8,1) - I really recommend this rhythm because to give more impact to cymbal sound. please reconsider.
  15. 03:27:818 (7) - add finish?
  16. 03:31:772 (6,1) - how about this pattern? to make cymbal note having a bigger spacing and more impact. this pattern is just an example.
  17. 03:42:702 (5) - I recommend to remove one reverse to make it have 1/4 gap between a note. 1/8 is probably cause people to get 100. aaa up to you, 1/8 is also fine.
  18. 04:51:792 (1) - lol why don't put at the slider tail? I know that place is nearer with the players' cursor but it's so unnatural.
  19. 05:40:708 (1) - aaa finish on tail, not wrong but >_> imo it's better if clickable.
  20. 05:48:154 (1) - add finish?
  21. 05:57:351 (3) - finish on tail?
  22. 05:58:227 (7,2) - add finish?
  23. 08:28:250 (1,2,3) - add finish on their head? fit with the song imo.
  24. 08:41:584 (1,2,3) - ^
  25. 09:33:485 (3,4,5,6,1) - reduce volume more? the music is more fade out here.
  26. 09:54:977 (2) - add finish?
  27. 10:21:074 (1) - no need NC imo, it's not even a big white tick >_>
  28. 10:23:545 (1) - hmm NC on the middle of stream train looks kinda weird. how about NC on 10:23:898 (4) instead? apply to all similar case if you agree.
  29. 12:29:743 (3) - stack?
  30. 12:39:743 - aaaa tbh, the ending of this song is weird. better start fade out at 12:37:076 or continue mapping another three parts that got cut.
  31. hardest song at the final again o.o people will cry ahaha XD maybe write a warning.
This is really greattttttttttttttttttttttt vocal and map tbh. good luck ! take my star !
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

P A N wrote:

m4m with https://osu.ppy.sh/s/395160 o.o

[General]
  1. Your bg size is still wrong? doesn't it should be 1024x768 it is rankable o.o
[Sharathon]
  1. 01:17:965 (6) - add finish?
  2. 01:44:762 (5) - additional Normal-clap
  3. 01:45:262 (8) - additional drum-whistle
  4. 01:49:262 (6) - ^
  5. 01:50:387 - add note and additional drum-whistle? i think the sound here doesn't need to be mapped
  6. 01:57:012 (5) - wrong snap? imo it's more like 1/3 o.o it's 1/4 i think, the sound baka, also there is sound on 01:57:262 - so it's right i guess
  7. 02:05:012 (3) - ^, umm if you not sure, avoid to map it? you also didn't map that rhythm at 02:13:012 removed this 02:05:012 (3) -
  8. 02:27:768 (2,3) - this might not necessary but how about NC to each for SV changing?
  9. 02:45:815 (8) - imo would be better if you make this note less spacing than (1) because there have a cymbal sound. please reconsider.
  10. 02:57:300 (1) - aaa how about move this further, similar reason as above.
  11. 02:59:643 (2) - curve is more flow but if you want to make various shape, it's fine :3
  12. 03:20:376 (5) - add finish?
  13. 03:25:260 (4) - *cough* looks like you mind about stack so why don't you make this stack as well *cough*
  14. 03:25:725 (6,7,8,1) - I really recommend this rhythm because to give more impact to cymbal sound. please reconsider.
  15. 03:27:818 (7) - add finish?
  16. 03:31:772 (6,1) - how about this pattern? to make cymbal note having a bigger spacing and more impact. this pattern is just an example.
  17. 03:42:702 (5) - I recommend to remove one reverse to make it have 1/4 gap between a note. 1/8 is probably cause people to get 100. aaa up to you, 1/8 is also fine.
  18. 04:51:792 (1) - lol why don't put at the slider tail? I know that place is nearer with the players' cursor but it's so unnatural.
  19. 05:40:708 (1) - aaa finish on tail, not wrong but >_> imo it's better if clickable.
  20. 05:48:154 (1) - add finish?
  21. 05:57:351 (3) - finish on tail?
  22. 05:58:227 (7,2) - add finish?
  23. 08:28:250 (1,2,3) - add finish on their head? fit with the song imo.
  24. 08:41:584 (1,2,3) - ^
  25. 09:33:485 (3,4,5,6,1) - reduce volume more? the music is more fade out here.
  26. 09:54:977 (2) - add finish?
  27. 10:21:074 (1) - no need NC imo, it's not even a big white tick >_>
  28. 10:23:545 (1) - hmm NC on the middle of stream train looks kinda weird. how about NC on 10:23:898 (4) instead? apply to all similar case if you agree.
  29. 12:29:743 (3) - stack?
  30. 12:39:743 - aaaa tbh, the ending of this song is weird. better start fade out at 12:37:076 or continue mapping another three parts that got cut. blame sharlo lol
  31. hardest song at the final again o.o people will cry ahaha XD maybe write a warning. it's not so hard haha
This is really greattttttttttttttttttttttt vocal and map tbh. good luck ! take my star !
greatttt mod, thank you!
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