1. Easy (1,11 stars, 182 notes)
2. Hard (4,54 stars, 439 notes)
3. Normal (2,37 stars, 256 notes)

1. 12/30: Uploaded and moved to pending.
   Removed skin.
   Turned sliders into circles in the pattern at 02:42:230 - in the Normal diff.
   Replaced the mp3 with Kite's.
   Fixes according to Fight69's mod.
   Fixes according to nante's mod.
   Fixes according to arien666's mod.
2. 12/31: Fixes according to Beuchi-chan's mod.
   Fixes according to GladiOol's mod.
   Fixes (IRC discussed) according to RandomJibberish's mod.
   Bubbled by RandomJibberish.
   Ranked by Mogsworth.

Fight69 wrote:

[Easy]

03:06:062 (3) - 1/2 plus tôt ? Ca sonnerai mieux je trouve, surtout pour une Easy nope, je trouve que mon pattern sonore est sympa
03:15:875 (1) - Clap a la fin de ce slider ? voui j'ai oublié

[Hard]

03:42:791 (1) - Clap ? oubli
03:44:473 (4) - ^ pareil
Ces 2 claps la, juste histoire que ca ne casse le rythme du clap toutes les 2 beats

03:47:277 - Cercle ici avec un finish ? non :/
J'trouve que ca sonne mieux comme cercle final, 'fin, comment expliquer ?... >.<


Bref, c'est déjà fini !

nante wrote:

general:
It's an ending, not opening. Please change tags. my bad, fixed

+ a few nazi suggestions:

[Hard]
00:12:511 (5) - maybe change it into a repeating slider, just like 00:08:025 (4)? There is a sound to follow + it'd be nice to consistent hm... I don't see why not so okay
00:48:959 (2) - 1 grid up? looks better nope, it is placed here so that the spacing of (7,1,2) is consistent
03:08:025 (11) - move it to somewhere else? I know you wanted to place it in a center of previous slider, but when you're hitting it slider is no longer visible, SO better put it in line with (10) the pattern makes a spiral at the end to reach the center of the screen, then the spinner starts :3 didn't fix
03:38:305 (4,5) - maybe move them 1 grid up and 1 grid left? tried, but I didn't like it

[Normal]
nothing? yay

[Easy]
Maybe drain rate -1? hm... drain rate seems fine as it is for me
01:52:885 (1) - why a spinner here? It's there for the held notes from the singer. Since there are several of them and this is an easy diff, I made only one instead of making several short spinners.
02:24:286 (1) - maybe do it exactly as at 01:10:268 (4)? Nope, the second slider is longer.
02:36:623 (4) - move few grids left nazi =(


and my star

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
02:54:567 (3) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid down to make same distance? augh, I am ashamed such an error could happen in my map ;_;

[Normal]
00:45:314 (3) - Is there any simple slider orz? [TOO MANY GREY DOTS] :3 I love complicated sliders, and this one doesn't look that bad
02:44:193 (8) - [Suggestion] You can make it more symmetric :3 I didn't think someone would nazi my sliders to that degree but okay
02:46:436 (2) - ^ Can't make it more symmetrical here, it's a blanket, I'd need to try to guess where it should start to be exactly symmetrical :/

[Hard]
02:09:707 (8,9,10,11,12) - [Suggestion] Intended non-square ;_;? nope, spacing issue



:3
Good luck.

ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi~! hello

Remember these are just suggestions you can totally ignore

~Easy~
00:43:913 (1) - I think this is pretty close to the end of the spinner. I think in general newbies would need a bit more time for recovering from spinners. What do you thin about making it something like this? moved the slider 1/2 forward and changed the pattern a bit
01:52:885 (1) - Same as before. Maybe change it for something like this? hm, no, not going to change this :/
02:31:015 (2) - Make this a New Combo to make it more noticeable from (1)? okay
03:11:950 (1) - Same as before. Maybe change it for something like this? not changing either :/
03:43:352 (1) - Finish the spinner 1/1 later? nope, it ends where the drums end as well, I thought that if I made a note starting on the next lyrics I'd have to map the rest of the lyrics as well, which would have made the map too long.

~Normal~
00:45:314 (3) - Ugly slider is ugly ;~; Make the curve a bit more smoooth and beautiful, I know you can <3 not ugly
03:45:314 (1) - Finish the spinner 1/1 later? same as previously

~Hard~
02:31:015 (8) - New Combo here to mark the jump? hm... nah, this one and (7) need to be in the same colour becase they're mapped on the same thing. Made (5) a new combo.
03:47:277 (x) - Add a note here? Just for consistency if you change the final spinners on Easy and Normal. didn't change, so nope

Great map! I love how the hitsounds sound so natural :3
Good luck Odaril~ *star*

1. Offset feels a bit early, I come up with 4.110. (Even that feels a bit early D:)
2. Make beatmap end on 03:47:287 please~ sounds more sexy.

GladiOol wrote:

[General]

1. Offset feels a bit early, I come up with 4.110. (Even that feels a bit early D:) I asked other people, changed the offset~
2. Make beatmap end on 03:47:287 please~ sounds more sexy.

I felt that if I placed a beat there I had to map all the rest of the chorus, so I'd rather not :/

[Hard]

00:15:885 (3) - Why doesn't the slider beginning have a clap on it? ~ forgot it =(
00:33:268 (1) - Remove new combo. okay
00:33:829 (9) - Add new combo. okay
01:32:427 (3) - Put one grid to the left~ (Grid Level 3 / Small) oups =(
01:50:091 (4) - Put one grid to the right~ not supposed to be symmetrical to (3) so nope
01:56:820 (1) - Delete this note ? hm... okay
03:17:147 (x) - Extra note here please. Feels really silly to play now. D: ? how is this silly to play
03:37:194 (1) - Remove new combo. okay
03:37:754 (2) - Add new combo. okay
03:41:680 (1) - Remove~ okay for the next two as well
03:42:240 (11) - Add~
03:42:801 (1) - Remove~


[Normal]

00:16:446 (1) - Remove new combo ? It's actually used for a colourhax detail

Starred~