DoKito wrote:

04:11:208 - Maybe you can do something more intense here because of these whistles (?) in the background. ill remap this section soon its pretty terrible right now
05:24:089 (3) - You could turn this slider into a 1/8 kickslider. for the build up cymbal thing? feels weird to snap stuff when theres not strict notes there so na
08:16:753 - I like those expanding streams more. Maybe you can expand the streams here as well? or increase the SV in general with every new slider/stream. every 4th stream in this song im doing that separated-by-sliders thing tho
14:39:664 - Drag the break until here.tru

Oh boi. 23 minutes and all I got is 4 lines. thanks!!

Ponoyoshi wrote:

Hello, M4M

I don't know if it's allowed but some objects touching/being off of my screen like that
02:40:516 (4) - 04:03:593 (3) - 05:19:250 (3) - 09:55:511 (5) - 10:53:011 (3) - they're fine ingame lol. the editor squishes stuff near the bottom so there's enough room for the timeline at the top

12:15:664 (1) - Maybe doing more little sliders on this part ? reverse is good but kinda boring sometimes :/ song isnt really doing anything special so id rather keep it super calm. last time i mapped this at https://osu.ppy.sh/s/239360 i made it constant 1/2 sliders which was more intense than i liked g

14:01:789 (13) - combo isn't too much ? not all tha tdifferent from 07:46:389 (2) - the streams in this song

14:53:194 (1) - You'll do the timing later on this part ? [simple note] yeah timing will be fixed at some point lol

18:49:875 (3) - First play I miss that triple cause I mingled it with a double just before it, change the orientation of the triple could be good for people full comboing for 19 minutes i think reading a 1/2 stack vs a triple stack isnt gonna be much of a concern:(

22:50:534 (1) - Add some nice slider shapes here ? :< spin looks terribly exhausting [theanticlimax]

Well, sorry if my mod is bad, but your map is so cool ! ty!!

Left wrote:

M4M~

[Long Long map but Short Short mod]
02:57:593 (2,3) - I think just one slider is better. because there's no noticable beat in 02:57:708 (3) - and you used 02:55:516 (1,2) - like this. yes
03:27:247 (2,3) - ^ thers definitely a sound on 3 there tho lol
02:55:516 (1,2,1) - strong beat in tail of slider? how about this rhythm? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5439751 that follows percussion alright, but im focusing on the string instrument g
05:31:359 (3,1) - too close considering 05:31:495 (1) - 's beat is great establishing when to click stuff with variable timeline gaps more important than emphasis at this point
10:59:011 (2,3) - blanket very
12:27:664 (1) - why it's only 1/1 with missing one sound? only way to express the high pitch instrument lo
15:45:432 (2) - I thought this could be more suitable pattern according to music. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5439835 yes
16:22:805 (3) - ^ ctrl G liking the parallel on 1/2s actually (and i repeat the same thing later)
17:23:313 (4,5) - blanket
22:41:694 (5,6,1) - wow this part of song is amazing how about this? i think it needs more Distance to show tension of here. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5439885 yes
22:50:534 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - how about slider art? It's visually more appealing. i like how spinners are consisetntly the same. hard to do that with sliders unless i just make a huge circle shape then copy paste it for each spinner, which is just as dumb as repetitive spinners lol

OwO Good Luck! thank s!

Sharkie wrote:

[Extra]
(Uh, this map is perfect, as always. Just doing nazi things cuz there's nothing wrong.) g

1. 02:48:362 (2,2) - These don't look perfectly parallel to me (lol nazi af) yes
   
2. 02:52:170 (2,1) - You probably don't care, but its not a perfect blanket. yes
   
3. 03:09:708 (2,) - 03:10:747 (1) - Same thing as earlier. yesyes
   
4. Okay I'm going to stop pointing out blankets lol
   
5. 03:24:593 (1,2,3,4,1) - I found this kinda weird because you stacked on the snare hits but changed the spacing on a bass drum. Usually, you do the opposite. Unless you're following the chord change? I dunno fam. Just my opinion. stacking for the same sound then moving for different sound i guess
   
6. 03:27:824 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - So good om g g
   
7. 03:35:670 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same thing as 03:24:593 (1,2,3,4,1) -
   
8. 03:43:055 (1,2,3,4,1) - I guess it does make sense because the spacing and the rhythm has been consistent, so its logical. In any case, I'd just give the pattern some more thought about changing.
   
9. 05:48:950 (1) - Hmm, Maybe ctrl+g this? I think it makes sense with similar patterns like 05:50:859 (2,3,1) - . rather give the single circle->slider stuff sharp motion and the multi circle stuff continuous motion. just easier to play it like that
   
10. 09:20:011 (1,1,1,2,1) - For a second I thought it was a different map...? more like 7 different maps
    
11. 10:50:011 (1) - I think this jump's a tiny bit too big. Maybe not? Iunno. expressing intensity with low density rhythm means mlg spacing
    
12. 11:36:635 (1) - Not gonna make this a slider? I'm saaaad. slider was for whent here were multiple cello sounds
    
13. 13:52:601 (4) - Would you consider moving this to x:209 y:66, I think the larger spacing would fit. o k
    
14. 14:00:664 (1) - This stream was so badass it made my computer lag. G
    
15. 20:52:608 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Kinda expected this spacing to be larger. did
    
16. 22:25:008 (1) - Really love this transition. i also like sliders
    
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CaffeAmericano wrote:

Hi Pishi, M4M
Extra

• 04:27:380 - 22:37:663 - Timing point and inherited point volume conflict oops
  
  05:13:057 (3,4) - This seem to have almost twice the DS relative to comparable sounds the ones after this are even larger idk what u mean
  
  08:49:480 (1,6) - Shape looks similar, maybe you intended to stack these o ok
  
  08:34:753 (1) - 08:43:480 (1) - I think these can use larger jumps to emphasize snare progressive spacing more important than individual sounds right here

There's nothing wrong, why is this not ranked yet :/ I'm not gonna be helpful here, so I'll finish my M4M with another mapset you linked me.

Good luck~