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Sona - Odoriko

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Nymph
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Nymph
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年3月23日 at 0:07:52

Artist: Sona
Title: Odoriko
Source: Sora no Otoshimono: Forte
Tags: Ending Heaven's Lost Property Kouzou Murashita
BPM: 94
Filesize: 6878kb
Play Time: 03:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beginner (0.53 stars, 136 notes)
  2. Normal (2.56 stars, 222 notes)
  3. Nymph's Favourite~ (4.27 stars, 275 notes)
Download: Sona - Odoriko
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2011 3 20.
Nymph_'s first beatmap~~Another version of Sora no Otoshimono's Ed.Odoriko: Sona-踊り子
Thanks for all the modders~
Special thanks for saten-san~
Last edited by Nymph , edited 92 times in total.
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Nymph ❤

The BG dimension should be 4:3 (800x600 1024x768)
You also need a preview point~
And of course, more difficulties :D

Nothing wrong really, just some spacing errors, I don't really know which distance spacing you're usin'

Star~
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Nymph
ok I will try my best~
Nymph
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter
Nymph
..I made a mistake. I lost my hard version. I will make it once again
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
hmm, the both difficulties looks identical O_o the only difference is smaller circle size :?
Make it different please~ :(

No kudosu for this

also, ask for mod here (Make sure you read the rules) or in-game at #modreqs
YinXL
7 posts
Joined January 2011
YinXL

Nymph_ wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年1月24日 星期一 at 16:55:21

Artist: Hayami Saori & Takagaki Ayahi
Title: Odoriko
Source: Sora no Otoshimono
Tags: nymph sora no otoshimono ikaros Astraea
BPM: 94
Filesize: 10550kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Astraea's Easy (0.66 stars, 64 notes)
  2. Ikaros's normal (3.12 stars, 264 notes)
  3. Nymph's hard (4.25 stars, 278 notes)
Download: Hayami Saori & Takagaki Ayahi - Odoriko
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first beatmap= =
First storyboard...
First upload...
Everything is my first try...
And I will do my best to make it ranked~
Sawatari Makoto
7 posts
Joined January 2011
Sawatari Makoto
肉包。阿姨洗铁路，一个二个三个四个………………萌大奶>_,<
Last edited by Sawatari Makoto , edited 1 time in total.
YinXL
7 posts
Joined January 2011
YinXL

Nymph_ wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年1月24日 星期一 at 16:55:21

Artist: Hayami Saori & Takagaki Ayahi
Title: Odoriko
Source: Sora no Otoshimono
Tags: nymph sora no otoshimono ikaros Astraea
BPM: 94
Filesize: 10550kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Astraea's Easy (0.66 stars, 64 notes)
  2. Ikaros's normal (3.12 stars, 264 notes)
  3. Nymph's hard (4.25 stars, 278 notes)
Download: Hayami Saori & Takagaki Ayahi - Odoriko
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
My first beatmap= =
First storyboard...
First upload...
Everything is my first try...
And I will do my best to make it ranked~
MIKUMIKU01
1 post
Joined July 2010
MIKUMIKU01
:D Big monster, if you want my star, you should add a tip when the sliders speed up.
And it will be better if you put lyrics into your beatmap.
The third, you should reduce the size of your beatmap, 10.8MB is too large for a beatmap without video.
:P So, I want to see this beatmap being better. Thank you.
Last edited by MIKUMIKU01 , edited 1 time in total.
artpiggo
315 posts
Joined December 2009
artpiggo
General : your mp3 file is far longer than your mapset. you have 2 choice ,reduce file mp3 or do other 2 mins of song
Normal
01 21 992 wrong distance snap
02 49 455 ^
Hard
03 25 195 up 1 grid

I still want hitsound more louder , I can't hear anything

Star
Twinkle Crusaders
1 post
Joined December 2010
Twinkle Crusaders
我推
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
*red* you really need to fix it
*green* my opinion....

Please cut mp3 file ( remove un-mapped part of Mp3)
song which more than 5 minutes long is UNRANKABLE
delete all of unused image like in .picasaoriginals
Source : Sora no Otoshimono Forte
and "ed" and "Ending" n the Tag
[Storyboarding]
The Maximun dimesions for Wallpaper is 1024x768
The Maximun dimesions for SB image(foreground+background) = 800x600 (640x480)
HD image with 4:3 screen ratio will be more preferable
I highly recommend you fade in/out background image SB (now you just use white background to hide it!)
Do not set its overall diffuculties(OD) higher than Approach rate(AR)
The hitcircle format must be in gray-sclae...( now RGB right? )

cut mp3 and fix all above issue first...
after all of your mapset is rankable we shall discuss about mapping it later :3

Im Nymph lover!!! LOL

moved it into WIP
you still need a lot of work
fhworld
3 posts
Joined November 2010
fhworld

vincerio wrote:

*red* you really need to fix it
*green* my opinion....

Please cut mp3 file ( remove un-mapped part of Mp3)
song which more than 5 minutes long is UNRANKABLE
delete all of unused image like in .picasaoriginals
Source : Sora no Otoshimono Forte
and "ed" and "Ending" n the Tag
[Storyboarding]
The Maximun dimesions for Wallpaper is 1024x768
The Maximun dimesions for SB image(foreground+background) = 800x600 (640x480)
HD image with 4:3 screen ratio will be more preferable
I highly recommend you fade in/out background image SB (now you just use white background to hide it!)
Do not set its overall diffuculties(OD) higher than Approach rate(AR)
The hitcircle format must be in gray-sclae...( now RGB right? )

cut mp3 and fix all above issue first...
after all of your mapset is rankable we shall discuss about mapping it later :3

Im Nymph lover!!! LOL

moved it into WIP
you still need a lot of work
fhworld
3 posts
Joined November 2010
fhworld
=。=GOOD JOB!
fhworld
3 posts
Joined November 2010
fhworld
=。=GOOD JOB!
ai tu zi
1 post
Joined December 2010
ai tu zi
sssss 8-)
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Nymph

vincerio wrote:

*red* you really need to fix it
*green* my opinion....

Please cut mp3 file ( remove un-mapped part of Mp3)
song which more than 5 minutes long is UNRANKABLE
delete all of unused image like in .picasaoriginals
Source : Sora no Otoshimono Forte
and "ed" and "Ending" n the Tag
[Storyboarding]
The Maximun dimesions for Wallpaper is 1024x768
The Maximun dimesions for SB image(foreground+background) = 800x600 (640x480)
HD image with 4:3 screen ratio will be more preferable
I highly recommend you fade in/out background image SB (now you just use white background to hide it!)
Do not set its overall diffuculties(OD) higher than Approach rate(AR)

The hitcircle format must be in gray-sclae...( now RGB right? )

cut mp3 and fix all above issue first...
after all of your mapset is rankable we shall discuss about mapping it later :3

Im Nymph lover!!! LOL

moved it into WIP
you still need a lot of work


:) Yeah,I've already fix these problems,need further modding..
wmfchris
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wmfchris
SB
turn on flashy warning?

[Hard] - Just change the diff name to Hard is good enough.
SPOILER
00:34:821 (1) - whistle?
00:39:928 (1) - whistle at ending?
00:42:481 (5) - whistle?
00:46:311 (10) - ^
00:57:800 (2) - ^?
01:00:292 (2,3) - (2) up 1 grid, (3) touches the HP bar to adjust it into a curved slider?
01:10:885 (3) - left 1 grid
01:13:119 (6) - touched the boundary
01:19:821 (1,1) - whistle at beginning of the first (1), remove NC in the next (1)?
01:21:055 (4) - whistle?
01:23:970 (6) - whistle at begining?
01:25:995 (12) - remove whistle?
01:27:162 (1) - finish?
01:29:396 (1) - whistle?
01:35:460 (1) - whistle at beginning?
01:39:289 (1) - ^?
01:40:566 (5) - ^
02:10:247 (5) - left 1 grid
02:23:332 (7) - whistle?
02:25:885 (1) - ^?
02:26:683 (4) - remove whistle?
02:37:375 (5,6) make it parallel
02:44:396 (4,5) - whistle at ending?
02:48:864 (2) - whistle?
02:51:417 (5) - ^?
03:00:092 (1) - down 1 grid + left 1~2 grids

Just some suggestions on hitsounds

[Normal]
00:31:630 (1~5) - left 1 grid
02:42:841 (1,2,3) - (1) touch the boundary slightly, (2) uneven spacing, also whistle on (5)?

[Easy]
ok

this song worth a pink star.
:3
Nymph
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3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Nymph

wmfchris wrote:

SB
turn on flashy warning?

[Hard] - Just change the diff name to Hard is good enough.
SPOILER
00:34:821 (1) - whistle?
00:39:928 (1) - whistle at ending?
00:42:481 (5) - whistle?
00:46:311 (10) - ^
00:57:800 (2) - ^?
01:00:292 (2,3) - (2) up 1 grid, (3) touches the HP bar to adjust it into a curved slider?
01:10:885 (3) - left 1 grid
01:13:119 (6) - touched the boundary
01:19:821 (1,1) - whistle at beginning of the first (1), remove NC in the next (1)?
01:21:055 (4) - whistle?
01:23:970 (6) - whistle at begining?
01:25:995 (12) - remove whistle?
01:27:162 (1) - finish?
01:29:396 (1) - whistle?
01:35:460 (1) - whistle at beginning?
01:39:289 (1) - ^?
01:40:566 (5) - ^
02:10:247 (5) - left 1 grid
02:23:332 (7) - whistle?
02:25:885 (1) - ^?
02:26:683 (4) - remove whistle?
02:37:375 (5,6) make it parallel
02:44:396 (4,5) - whistle at ending?
02:48:864 (2) - whistle?
02:51:417 (5) - ^?
03:00:092 (1) - down 1 grid + left 1~2 grids

Just some suggestions on hitsounds

[Normal]
00:31:630 (1~5) - left 1 grid
02:42:841 (1,2,3) - (1) touch the boundary slightly, (2) uneven spacing, also whistle on (5)?

[Easy]
ok

this song worth a pink star.
:3
:D all these problems fixed
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
410 posts
Joined November 2009
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
[General]

Your skin doesn't have a "cursortrail.png".

[Astraea's Easy]

HP -2
AR -2

[Ikaro's Normal] <------ Caps the N in the diff.

AR -2
OD -1

01:19:184 (7,1,2) - Use the "Distance Snap" in these. Like this: http://puu.sh/O1R
02:45:673 (6,7) - Move them ?
03:18:546 (1,2,3) - Remove the 2.

[Nymph's Hard] <------ Caps the H in the diff.

00:44:396 (1,2) - Doesn't fit to me. Stack them at least.
00:44:875 (3,4) - ^
01:25:247 (8,9) - ^
01:25:726 (10,11) - ^
03:07:375 (5,6) - ^
03:07:853 (7,8) - ^

And I don't really think this song with 2x BPM Speed in the kiai time. Only the volume gets higher, the rhythm still the same.

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