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Haruna Luna - Ripple Effect

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Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年6月23日 at 13:38:11

Artist: Haruna Luna
Title: Ripple Effect
Source: ハイスクール・フリート
Tags: High School Fleet はいふり Hai-Furi haifuri ZAQ ending Kawaiwkyik Rizia
BPM: 139
Filesize: 2909kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.36 stars, 98 notes)
  2. Hard (3.11 stars, 243 notes)
  3. Insane (3.82 stars, 318 notes)
  4. Normal (1.92 stars, 148 notes)
  5. wkyik's Insane (3.86 stars, 300 notes)
Download: Haruna Luna - Ripple Effect
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Opening by Rizia
Last edited by Karen , edited 14 times in total.
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
http://puu.sh/oxOo1/b370d17c40.rar
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru
[General]
我觉得对于这歌没必要slider静音 尤其是从开头到00:15:603
00:29:416 - 00:35:891 - 这么长一段里没有严格意义上的hitsound是什么情况

[Ripple]
00:21:430 (5,6) - 节奏互换 00:21:430 是circle而00:21:646 是slider
别的没啥好说的

[柚子]
00:33:733 (4,1) - 弧线没平行
00:48:085 (7) - 莫名的单点 前后没有节奏去支撑它 建议del


[Hard]
00:08:481 (6) - 放00:07:617 (3) 的slider head下面？


[Normal]
00:04:164 (5) - 这个slider起的地方没音啊


[Easy]
00:04:164 (3) - 同NM
00:07:617 (3) - ↑
00:35:028 - 这里放个clircle然后把00:35:243 (3) 缩到00:35:459 起

美丽
Last edited by KaedekaShizuru , edited 1 time in total.
AgeSheRi
55 posts
Joined May 2013
AgeSheRi
wkyik's insane

00:59:848 (4) - 这个滑条角度接下一个滑条不太好 而且中间有个白点。。扭这么小看不出来的话和上一个滑条一样是直的好些吧

01:02:438 (2,3,4,5,6) - 稍微缩小一点怎么样啊 移动五连打还是很容易断的梗

01:08:481 (3,4) - 这里唱的很重。。是不是应该弄跳一点 比如这样-> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5137225 （瞎摆一下。。）

01:13:229 (3) - 改成1/4+单点节奏好像好一点

01:23:373 (1,2) - 这个角度其实不怎么好打 就复制上一组平行呗



Ripple

00:12:150 (1) - 尾巴角度对着后面那个NOTE好一点吧

00:22:510 (1,2,3,4) - 稍微有点不太好 12ctrl g怎么样

00:28:121 (2) - 个人感觉放在这个位置和前面不太协调 也许叠到前面的5会好一些

00:28:984 (1) - 换个别的形状的滑条呗，和前面那个滑条长得一样但是音完全不一样 有一点点怪怪的感觉

00:39:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里好像突然远了不少 而且单点又多 稍微近一点点怎样啊

01:05:675 (1,2,3) - 这个轨迹不是很好啊 ->https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5137281 大概这样会好玩点

01:08:481 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - 这里跳一点比较好 因为我觉得唱的比较响。。 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5137306

01:21:215 (1,2,3) - 这个好玩~

小夏恋无敌 图又萌又好玩！
Binguo
308 posts
Joined April 2015
Binguo
[Ripple]
00:13:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 可以分开一点
00:16:682 (4,5) - 可以放个跳
00:26:394 (3) - 拉一点弧度吧
00:34:164 (6) - NC
01:21:215 (1,2,3) - 感觉叠在一起不是很好
01:26:826 (3) - 为什么非要放在这里呢
[wkyik's Insane]
01:26:394 (1,2,3,4) - 这里不考虑改进一下吗
[hard]
00:46:682 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉这个节奏在这样的难度里面很坑 建议改一下

学习了一下嘿嘿
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx

Karen wrote:

Opening by Rzia
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
o_o
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
KaedekaShizuru

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[General]
我觉得对于这歌没必要slider静音 尤其是从开头到00:15:603 那个拖滑条的声音真的很难听
00:29:416 - 00:35:891 - 这么长一段里没有严格意义上的hitsound是什么情况 加了点

[Ripple]
00:21:430 (5,6) - 节奏互换 00:21:430 是circle而00:21:646 是slider 为啥？这里有特殊音
别的没啥好说的


[Hard]
00:08:481 (6) - 放00:07:617 (3) 的slider head下面？ flow垃圾


[Normal]
00:04:164 (5) - 这个slider起的地方没音啊 你听不到嘛。。


[Easy]
00:04:164 (3) - 同NM 同
00:07:617 (3) - ↑
00:35:028 - 这里放个clircle然后把00:35:243 (3) 缩到00:35:459 起 看看00:34:380 (2) - 这个滑条就知道我跟什么声音

美丽

AgeSheRi

AgeSheRi wrote:

Ripple

00:12:150 (1) - 尾巴角度对着后面那个NOTE好一点吧

00:22:510 (1,2,3,4) - 稍微有点不太好 12ctrl g怎么样

00:28:121 (2) - 个人感觉放在这个位置和前面不太协调 也许叠到前面的5会好一些

00:28:984 (1) - 换个别的形状的滑条呗，和前面那个滑条长得一样但是音完全不一样 有一点点怪怪的感觉

00:39:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里好像突然远了不少 而且单点又多 稍微近一点点怎样啊 想拉一下星不然就没i标了= =

01:05:675 (1,2,3) - 这个轨迹不是很好啊 ->https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5137281 大概这样会好玩点 这个感觉还可以

01:08:481 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - 这里跳一点比较好 因为我觉得唱的比较响。。 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5137306

01:21:215 (1,2,3) - 这个好玩~

Binguo

Binguo wrote:

[Ripple]
00:13:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 可以分开一点 二连比较有难度，太难不好
00:16:682 (4,5) - 可以放个跳
00:26:394 (3) - 拉一点弧度吧 没必要
00:34:164 (6) - NC 没必要
01:21:215 (1,2,3) - 感觉叠在一起不是很好 挺好的啊
01:26:826 (3) - 为什么非要放在这里呢 跟前面滑条一起做梗好玩
[hard]
00:46:682 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉这个节奏在这样的难度里面很坑 建议改一下 normal比较难所以我觉得这里还好

学习了一下嘿嘿

thanks!
Winnie
1,343 posts
Joined November 2013
Winnie
Everything looks fine you can try grabbin a BN to see what else they can say, but it looks great the way it is. Only a few mentions

wkyik's Insane - 00:48:085 (7) - Can try to NC it's on a blue tick and people might misread this for a white or red

Normal - Touching HP bar 00:08:265 (7) -

Other than that *bubble*
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia

AgeSheRi wrote:

wkyik's insane

00:59:848 (4) - 这个滑条角度接下一个滑条不太好 而且中间有个白点。。扭这么小看不出来的话和上一个滑条一样是直的好些吧 還可以

01:02:438 (2,3,4,5,6) - 稍微缩小一点怎么样啊 移动五连打还是很容易断的梗 不難斷吧(坑點pc)

01:08:481 (3,4) - 这里唱的很重。。是不是应该弄跳一点 比如这样-> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5137225 （瞎摆一下。。）

01:13:229 (3) - 改成1/4+单点节奏好像好一点 有點難

01:23:373 (1,2) - 这个角度其实不怎么好打 就复制上一组平行呗 整體改了

Binguo wrote:

[wkyik's Insane]
01:26:394 (1,2,3,4) - 这里不考虑改进一下吗 跟vocal

学习了一下嘿嘿

Kocari wrote:

Everything looks fine you can try grabbin a BN to see what else they can say, but it looks great the way it is. Only a few mentions

wkyik's Insane - 00:48:085 (7) - Can try to NC it's on a blue tick and people might misread this for a white or red

Normal - Touching HP bar 00:08:265 (7) -

Other than that *bubble*

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[General]

[柚子]
00:33:733 (4,1) - 弧线没平行
00:48:085 (7) - 莫名的单点 前后没有节奏去支撑它 建议del 我抄的guy


美丽
00:48:085 (7) - 人哥幫我ADD NC
今天才發現我都比你高星了

code
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59524
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 69344
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Ripple Effect
TitleUnicode:Ripple Effect
Artist:Haruna Luna
ArtistUnicode:春奈るな
Creator:Karen
Version:wkyik's Insane
Source:ハイスクール・フリート
Tags:High School Fleet はいふり Hai-Furi haifuri ZAQ ending Kawaiwkyik Rizia
BeatmapID:963936
BeatmapSetID:446205

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Doormat
2,049 posts
Joined September 2013
Doormat
aaaa sorry for late i am really busy lately ;;
[Easy]
  1. 00:27:474 (3) – are you sure about having this sliderend point to the right? I think making it point to the left towards the (4) would be more intuitive for beginners because of lead in.. maybe try S-shape here instead?
  2. 00:34:380 (2,3) – uhh maybe reverse order of these notes here, i.e. 3/2 slider first then 1/1 slider? i know that you’re following the instrumentals here, but with how the previous few notes were mapped to vocals I think this should be mapped to vocals as well, and then transition to instrumentals/drums with the next combo
  3. that’s about it for the Easy, really nice (:
[Normal]
  1. 01:12:581 (3,4) – zzzz blanket and that’s it lol
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:028 (5,1) – a minor nitpicky thing but the map starts off like so clean and then this overlap is kind of meh :/ it’s not even centred around the slider’s centre ;w;
  2. 01:26:394 (1,2,3) – maybe even spacing here? you could move the (3) to x273|y108 to fix that
[wkyik]
  1. 00:17:114 (2) – uhh shouldn’t nc be here instead because very similar to the trumpet 00:24:020 (1) – but then ncs are different ???
  2. uhh forget to turn off kiai time near the end?
[(Rest In Peace)ple]
  1. 00:34:380 (1) – maybe don’t stack this one with the (5) and (6)? having 1/2 stack right after 1/1 stack at the same spot might confuse some people, plus I think you can give nc here some more emphasis if you created some snap distance to help emphasize it
good map zzzz sorry again for late /w\
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
Kocari
touching hp isn't an issue

Doormat
easy
00:34:380 (2,3) – hmm for me vocal always has the lowest priority so if the instrumentals are strong i prefer following them
ripple
00:34:380 (1) – added nc here, i don't think it's so hard to read since it's a widely using pattern o.o

no comment = fixed

thank you for the mods :D
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Ganbatte Karen :)
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
o.o...
everyone is busy...
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Want to M4M? ^-^
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
Sure ><
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
[Easy]
  1. 00:34:380 (2) - The rhythm here is pretty weird. Your major rhythms are following the drums, while this kinda following the vocals and ignoring the drums. I can't feel that this part is something special to demand such an abnormal rhythm setting. Keeping the 1/1 rhythms here feels more natural for me.
  2. 00:51:862 (4) - Seems you don't have a downbeat hitsound in a regular usage, but leaving this slider with no hitsounds felt too weak.
  3. 00:58:984 (3) - Since this is a separated instrument with the previous pattern, consider adding NC.
  4. 01:26:394 (3,1) - Just a personal taste, but I think making these slider a parallel will look better.
[Normal]
  1. The intro's spacing is 1.1x while the middle section (around 00:44:983 - ) is 1.0x. Consider spending some time to make it consistent.
  2. 00:51:862 (4) - Same with easy.
  3. 00:54:020 - Missing Clap.
  4. 00:58:984 (3) - Consider NC.
  5. 00:58:984 (3,4,1) - Spacing is inconsistent due to the sv change. Please make the spacing consistent. You can check the actual spacing by using the approach circle of (4).
  6. 01:22:294 (2,3,4) - The formation of (3) feels kinda random here while (2) and (4) seems to be a same shape. Any intentions behind here?
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:862 (3) - 00:24:452 - Consider adding whistle. It seems to fit well with the music.
  2. 00:49:272 (6) - The rhythm feels unnatural since you are following the drums mostly here. Consider starting the slider at 00:49:164. If the original intention was to express the instrument of 00:49:272, consider adding a whistle instead changing the rhythms.
  3. 00:50:135 (1,2) - 1.5x spacing for consistency please.
  4. 00:59:632 (3,1,1) - (3,1) has a bigger spacing than (1,1). Hope these are consistent, or at least (1,1) having a bigger spacing.
[wkyik's Insane]
  1. 00:02:869 (5,1) - This part is the intro of the beatmap, and the song is pretty weak yet. This kind of jump in this section is too much.
  2. 00:48:085 (1) - This rhythm needs an improvement. Is it following the drums? Then please add a drum hitsound here and 00:47:761 - to indicate the rhythm properly. Is it following the vocals? Place at 00:48:193 and remove nc at 00:48:409 (1) please. I personally recommend the second option since that's a more regular way of mapping, and since the drums weren't strong enough here.
  3. 01:22:941 (1,2,3,4) - These 1/4 feels a bit over expressed compared to song. Rather I'd suggest you to map 01:24:344 this out to fit the actual rhythms better.
  4. You forgot to turn the kiai off.
[Ripple]
  1. 00:46:682 (1) - I won't recommend this 1/4 here. The feeling of 00:46:682 (1,4,5) is kinda like abusing of 1/4 kick sliders for me while the music doesn't demands that much. Consider making this as a note. The 1/2 interval will emphasize the further pattern better.
  2. 01:24:236 (2) - Consider adding NC to devide 01:22:941 (1,1,1) as a separate pattern.
  3. 01:26:394 (1,3) - The pattern was not bad at playing, but this overlap of 1/4 sliders felt a bit random and not appealing in visual.
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
Sonnyc

Sonnyc wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:34:380 (2) - The rhythm here is pretty weird. Your major rhythms are following the drums, while this kinda following the vocals and ignoring the drums. I can't feel that this part is something special to demand such an abnormal rhythm setting. Keeping the 1/1 rhythms here feels more natural for me.
  2. 00:51:862 (4) - Seems you don't have a downbeat hitsound in a regular usage, but leaving this slider with no hitsounds felt too weak.
  3. 00:58:984 (3) - Since this is a separated instrument with the previous pattern, consider adding NC. I don't think it's so special so keeping this
  4. 01:26:394 (3,1) - Just a personal taste, but I think making these slider a parallel will look better.
[Normal]
  1. The intro's spacing is 1.1x while the middle section (around 00:44:983 - ) is 1.0x. Consider spending some time to make it consistent. but i can't find anything wrong here o.o it's 0,8x
  2. 00:51:862 (4) - Same with easy.
  3. 00:54:020 - Missing Clap.
  4. 00:58:984 (3) - Consider NC.
  5. 00:58:984 (3,4,1) - Spacing is inconsistent due to the sv change. Please make the spacing consistent. You can check the actual spacing by using the approach circle of (4).
  6. 01:22:294 (2,3,4) - The formation of (3) feels kinda random here while (2) and (4) seems to be a same shape. Any intentions behind here? hmm i intentionally to not make them parallel so that it wouldn't be so boring
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:862 (3) - 00:24:452 - Consider adding whistle. It seems to fit well with the music.
  2. 00:49:272 (6) - The rhythm feels unnatural since you are following the drums mostly here. Consider starting the slider at 00:49:164. If the original intention was to express the instrument of 00:49:272, consider adding a whistle instead changing the rhythms.
  3. 00:50:135 (1,2) - 1.5x spacing for consistency please.
  4. 00:59:632 (3,1,1) - (3,1) has a bigger spacing than (1,1). Hope these are consistent, or at least (1,1) having a bigger spacing.
[Ripple]
  1. 00:46:682 (1) - I won't recommend this 1/4 here. The feeling of 00:46:682 (1,4,5) is kinda like abusing of 1/4 kick sliders for me while the music doesn't demands that much. Consider making this as a note. The 1/2 interval will emphasize the further pattern better.
  2. 01:24:236 (2) - Consider adding NC to devide 01:22:941 (1,1,1) as a separate pattern.
  3. 01:26:394 (1,3) - The pattern was not bad at playing, but this overlap of 1/4 sliders felt a bit random and not appealing in visual. made it more visible, i think it's fine

Thanks for the mod!
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
all fixed
756767654745
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59524
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 69344
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Ripple Effect
TitleUnicode:Ripple Effect
Artist:Haruna Luna
ArtistUnicode:春奈るな
Creator:Karen
Version:wkyik's Insane
Source:ハイスクール・フリート
Tags:High School Fleet はいふり Hai-Furi haifuri ZAQ ending Kawaiwkyik Rizia
BeatmapID:963936
BeatmapSetID:446205

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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