2^2 × 3 × 5 × 7 × 17
the ending really buttsecked me a little too hard, i was not expecting that at all tbqh
mainly would be focusing on toning down the ending a little
01:15:676 (75676|2,75676|0,75788|1,75788|0,75901|0,75901|2,76014|1,76014|0,76127|2,76127|0) - for sections like these id suggest splitting the jack right at the middle and handing it over to the other hand
img this pattern would be way kinder on the hands
01:17:706 (77706|0) - shift to right col, left looks too clogged
also for the above^ 01:17:254 (77254|1,77254|3,77367|1,77367|2,77480|2,77480|1,77593|2,77593|1,77706|2,77706|1,77818|2,77818|1) maybe you could do something like
(mark)img this, would be way kinder on the hands too
01:17:931 (77931|0,78044|0,78157|0,78269|0,78269|1,78608|1,78608|0,78721|0,78833|0,78946|0,79059|0,79059|1) - felt that the pressure on the left is a little too much
01:18:382 (78382|2,78382|3,78495|2,78495|3) - dont think this deserves to be jacked on 2 cols. tbh
01:19:059 (79059|1,79172|2,79172|1,79285|1,79285|2) - if this is jacked then 01:19:961 (79961|3,79961|1,80074|0,80074|2,80187|3,80187|1) - 01:20:300 (80300|0,80300|1,80412|0,80412|2,80525|3,80525|1) - why arent these jacked then?
01:20:412 - also triple here pls
from 01:20:300 - i tried keeping the 3 note jacks to preserve what you did, dk if i broke anything. also i balanced the jacks a little here too.
01:22:330 (82330|0,82330|1,82442|0,82442|1,82555|1,82555|0) - rather you keep jacking here on both hands tbqh, crtl-h 01:22:330 (82330|1,82442|1,82555|1,82668|2) -
ALSO crlt-h the above thing makes this 01:22:668 (82668|2,82781|2,82894|2) - jack thing go away, ive noticed in similar sections (at like 01:23:570 -) they dont feature this three note thing so
01:25:149 (85149|2,85262|2,85375|2,85488|2) - would rather you not have the jack from before flow into this section, 01:25:488 (85488|1,85488|2,85600|1) - move to the left by 1 and 01:25:713 (85713|0) - to the right by 2
01:26:277 (86277|2,86390|2,86503|2) - idk if these are unintentional or not, best if you could remove them as established above.
01:29:097 (89097|1,89209|1,89209|3,89322|1,89322|3,89435|3) - i dont really like having the jacks be in the same col as before, maybe you could shift them.
01:29:548 (89548|1,89548|0,89660|0,89660|1,89773|1,89773|0) - same thing about having these jacks, best if you could spread the load to the other hand
01:29:886 (89886|3,89886|0,89886|2) - since you already did the 3 note jack thing for all similar sections here (see 01:30:337 (90337|1,90337|0,90337|3) - 01:30:788 (90788|0,90788|2,90788|3) - 01:31:239 (91239|1,91239|0,91239|3) - ) you might wanna have a 3 note jack thing here too
01:30:901 (90901|2) - to 2 please, 01:30:788 (90788|2,90901|2,91014|2,91127|2) - pretty sure this is a mistake innit
01:31:691 - same thing here as with
(mark), dont wish to suggest too many patterns lest i break your map
01:33:495 (93495|1,93608|1,93721|1,93833|0,93946|0,94059|0) - maybe for here you might wanna do something like at 01:34:397 (94397|0,94510|0,94623|1,94736|0,94848|0,94961|1) - just to give the player a little break. after all theyre the same sections arent they
01:36:427 (96427|3,96540|3,96653|3,96766|3,96879|3,96991|3,97104|3) - mang please :c
01:39:473 (99473|1,99585|2,99698|2) - would be ideal if this was crtl-g'd
if you did ^^ then 01:39:811 (99811|1) - to 3, 01:39:924 (99924|2) - to 1, 01:40:036 (100036|2,100149|1) - crtl-h
01:42:518 - you can exit the section with 1/8s
img 1/8s here are nicer because the sound is kinda dying out
01:43:589 - note on 1/8 at 3 pls (same for 5332)
00:32:480 - 00:34:285 - 00:36:089 - why are these empty tho
yup nothing more than that, mainly just chorus things
i guess other than the chorus in 7140 id say the next big thing would be the diff jump from 5332 to 7140; its a tad bit too big for my tastes tbh. maybe you could look into making another diff in the middle or buffing up 5332, idk
if you need any clarification ill either reply to your reply or you could just PM me about it or smth