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G.Addict - monochrome (Short Ver.)

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kanpakyin
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年3月4日 at 10:19:10

Artist: G.Addict
Title: monochrome (Short Ver.)
Source: Goulart Knights
Tags: Kazuma Horie Abe Atsushi Takuma Terashima Kaji Yuuki
BPM: 135
Filesize: 2476kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.83 stars, 101 notes)
  2. Hard (4.76 stars, 261 notes)
  3. Normal (3.49 stars, 146 notes)
  4. Taiko (4.83 stars, 541 notes)
Download: G.Addict - monochrome (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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グラール骑士団 OP
This is not TV size...>_<
Thanks Joshua Lost for Taiko BG

mapset:
Easy - Done
Normal - Done
Hard - Done
Taiko - Done
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JoJo
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JoJo
占座~>w<

Edit:唯一的建议：Easy diff 01:40:455 (1) - 离前面转盘太近了，删掉？>.>

顺便~=w=
Taiko BG
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KanaRin
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KanaRin
bakaaaaaaaaaaa :P
SamiPale
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SamiPale
[General]
Title变成monochrome (Short Ver.)可以吗
统一好Taiko难度与其他难度的PreviewTime以防被挑刺:O

[Easy]
00:05:567(6) - 不跟前面的slider对称会更好读。。
00:50:233(5) - new combo
01:45:567(1) - 缩到01:48:900

[Normal]
这难度用normal-hitwhistle2的地方太大声了，适当降低点音量比较好
00:16:678(3,4) - Normal难度slider并不长，用这种遮很难堪/.
01:04:455(1) - 这太大声了把whistle取消掉or换掉好吗

这种古怪的节奏。。你是为了减星吗

[Hard]
00:50:455~01:04:233 - default Normal-clap这样用很suck，建议改成C1 or 重新remix

[Insane]
00:52:678(1) - 我按快了，这距离相隔能再大点吗 DX


这diff质量差距比较大吧。。大概感觉是Insane>Hard>>Easy>>>Normal，而且低难newcombo的分布也很古怪。下次做低难应该花多点力上去才行啊 :>
wanhyrzh
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wanhyrzh
8-) 又一首不同的monochrome
看来这歌名挺流行的。
lol star~

p.s.骑士团这四只我原本就都挺有爱的……
不过没想到经过一部动画就凑一起了>_>
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin

SamiPale wrote:

[General]
Title变成monochrome (Short Ver.)可以吗 Sure 8-)
统一好Taiko难度与其他难度的PreviewTime以防被挑刺:O 一樣啊 :O

[Easy]
00:05:567(6) - 不跟前面的slider对称会更好读。。 Fix
00:50:233(5) - new comboFix
01:45:567(1) - 缩到01:48:900 X.我這樣是為了統一結束點.

[Normal]
这难度用normal-hitwhistle2的地方太大声了，适当降低点音量比较好 Fix
00:16:678(3,4) - Normal难度slider并不长，用这种遮很难堪/.Fix
01:04:455(1) - 这太大声了把whistle取消掉or换掉好吗Fix

这种古怪的节奏。。你是为了减星吗 >_>

[Hard]
00:50:455~01:04:233 - default Normal-clap这样用很suck，建议改成C1 or 重新remix Fix

[Insane]
00:52:678(1) - 我按快了，这距离相隔能再大点吗 DX Fix
謝謝>_<
Numbers 596108
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Numbers 596108
lollollollollollollollollol
Nothing can mod -> just a great map~ do your best to ranked it ;)
qinche
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qinche
OvO/


tag什么都没有吗？

Monochrome大写如何？Short Ver.也是

easy
00:47:567 (3) - 这个clap相当突兀，要么缩小音量让它混进背景音乐，要么去掉吧？
01:22:23这条绿线好像可以删掉

normal
没什么问题。

hard
四个diff中最喜欢的一个。
00:52:678 (6) - 这段节奏有点微妙……感觉没卡对。
01:35:78这个绿线有必要吗？

insane
……O_O我仿佛看到了e婆的影子。
01:04:45这条绿线好像可以删掉
01:35:78这个绿线有必要吗？
最后的转盘建议静音，音乐没了却会听到叮叮叮

taiko
:<i cant mod

我觉得主要问题还是在于节奏不够稳……偶尔一些地方vocal很紧，排的却很松，很多三连其实并没有必要，00:42:011 (4) - 像这种的二连，也用的不够出彩:<
insane的slider overlap我不是很习惯orz

我建议你可以问问e婆看她怎么想:D
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin

qinche wrote:

OvO/

tag什么都没有吗？

Monochrome大写如何？Short Ver.也是 monochrome不用..Short ver大寫了 :O

easy
00:47:567 (3) - 这个clap相当突兀，要么缩小音量让它混进背景音乐，要么去掉吧？FIX
01:22:23这条绿线好像可以删掉FIX

hard
四个diff中最喜欢的一个。
00:52:678 (6) - 这段节奏有点微妙……感觉没卡对。X.我覺得還好.
01:35:78这个绿线有必要吗？FIX

insane
……O_O我仿佛看到了e婆的影子。 O_O
01:04:45这条绿线好像可以删掉 FIX
01:35:78这个绿线有必要吗？ FIX
最后的转盘建议静音，音乐没了却会听到叮叮叮 XXXX.這個還好..不會太大聲.
arien666
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arien666
[Taiko]
00:06:011 (30) - kat
00:21:567 (117) - don
00:52:011 (166) - Delete finish
01:13:789 (32) - don
01:31:567 (129) - don
01:36:455 - Move this Kiai end into 01:38:233 <3



Whatever >.>
wmfchris
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wmfchris
sick, so taiko mod only +_+

preview time of tiako diff (68011) from others (68001)

00:21:122 - kd dd
00:33:900 - kddk
00:42:567 - dd
01:10:011 - dkddk d
01:25:567 - kdddd

Rating
Pattern - 0.5/1
Density - 1/1

star
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin

arien666 wrote:

[Taiko]
00:06:011 (30) - kat Fix
00:21:567 (117) - don Fix
00:52:011 (166) - Delete finish Fix
01:13:789 (32) - don Fix
01:31:567 (129) - don Fix
01:36:455 - Move this Kiai end into 01:38:233 <3 Fix

wmfchris wrote:

preview time of tiako diff (68011) from others (68001) Fix

00:21:122 - kd dd Fix
00:33:900 - kddk Fix
00:42:567 - dd Fix
01:10:011 - dkddk d Fix
01:25:567 - kdddd Fix
Thanks .
Herschel
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;)
spboxer3
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:)
banvi
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banvi
hi :D

[General]
delete .osb file & fullsubmit

[Easy]
circle size -1 for easy
00:04:456 (5) new combo?

[Normal]
00:50:233 (3) new combo?

[Hard]
01:41:344 (8) change direction?
[attachment=0:82ab4]1.jpg[/attachment:82ab4]

[Insane]
00:05:344 (5) (nazi) move 1 grid up at the middle?
00:47:122 (2,3,4,5) hmm , can you make spacing narrow?
01:19:789 (5) new combo?
01:48:678 (n) add note?

[Taiko]
This is just my taste , so you can afford to ignore xd
00:06:900 (34) k?
00:20:678 (111) k?
00:39:344 (93) k?
nice taiko diff (:

Nice mapset >.<
star (:
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin

banvi wrote:

[General]
delete .osb file & fullsubmit Fix

[Easy]
circle size -1 for easy X.
00:04:456 (5) new combo?Fix

[Normal]
00:50:233 (3) new combo? Fix

[Hard]
01:41:344 (8) change direction?Fix
[attachment=0:0ebdb]1.jpg[/attachment:0ebdb]

[Insane]
00:05:344 (5) (nazi) move 1 grid up at the middle?Fix
00:47:122 (2,3,4,5) hmm , can you make spacing narrow?X.I think it's OK now.
01:19:789 (5) new combo? Fix
01:48:678 (n) add note? Fix

[Taiko]
00:06:900 (34) k? Fix
00:20:678 (111) k? Fix
00:39:344 (93) k? Fix
nice taiko diff (:

Nice mapset >.<
star (:
Thanks for modding
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eveless
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moded in IRC

and if you need

SPOILER
19:23 <kanpakyin> : 0.0/
19:23 <eveless> : o.o
19:23 <kanpakyin> : Daidai:我建议你可以问问e婆看她怎么想:D
19:23 <eveless> : 什么东西:<
19:23 <eveless> : 我会喷人的:<
19:24 <kanpakyin> : viewtopic.php?f=6&t=46087&st=0&sk=t&sd=a
19:24 <kanpakyin> : :<
19:26 <eveless> : 00:10:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这边有点乱来。。
19:26 <kanpakyin> : lol有嗎= =
19:27 <eveless> : spacing这样看起来不舒服啊。。
19:27 <eveless> : 不能打图 不知道打起来怎么样就是了
19:27 <kanpakyin> : 打起來不錯- -
19:27 <eveless> : 00:24:455 (5,6,7,8) - 5678也是
19:28 <eveless> : 00:28:011 (5) - 这不能完全遮住..
19:29 <kanpakyin> : 第2次做insane- -太難了..
19:29 <eveless> : 还不错啦
19:30 <eveless> : 00:52:011 (7) -
19:30 <eveless> : 这里到后面那个没必要空起来。。因为你毕竟不是跟着歌声下的note...建议中间至少加个note :<
19:30 <kanpakyin> : 可能是第1次做fall in love的時候被人說得沒了信心..
19:31 <eveless> : 我最喜欢做Insane了
19:31 <kanpakyin> : lol..
19:34 <eveless> : 01:02:678 (1,1) - 这边试着这么放吧? 主要我觉得真正适合spin的是那个i will following 啥啥啥那里
19:34 <eveless> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/58357
19:36 <eveless> : 01:13:567 (1,2,3,4) - 我是觉得放规则图形比较好啦..
19:36 <kanpakyin> : lol..例如?
19:37 <eveless> : 菱形四边形什么的o.o?
19:38 <kanpakyin> : 為甚麼我總覺得菱形不太好看= ="
19:39 <eveless> : = =规则图形总比不规则的要好打 不规则的话很难猜地方lol
19:39 <eveless> : 01:17:122 (1,2,3,4,5) - 还有这边间距有点处理不太好:<
19:39 <eveless> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/58360 如果像这样会比较好一点@_@
19:40 <eveless> : 01:23:344 (3) - 这边也挡住了lol
19:42 <kanpakyin> : lol
19:42 <kanpakyin> : 要怎樣排?
19:43 <eveless> : 哪个o.o?
19:43 <kanpakyin> : 01:23:344(
19:43 <kanpakyin> : 3)-
19:44 <eveless> : 嘛主要数字不能被完全挡住。。
19:44 <eveless> : 而且我也不觉得好看就是:< 数字被挡住了就会被MAT挑lol
19:44 <kanpakyin> : lol
19:46 <kanpakyin> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/58362 這樣大丈夫
19:46 <kanpakyin> : ?
19:46 <eveless> : 没必要特意别ｎｃ吧o.o
19:46 <eveless> : 恩打起来还不错:3
19:47 <kanpakyin> : 因為spacing變了所以NC (www
19:47 <eveless> : 没必要变这么勤啦lol
19:47 <eveless> : 那这样所有的大跳不都有NC不好看啊lol
19:47 <kanpakyin> : lol
19:48 <eveless> : 主要是一段一段的spacing变那种换nc还比较好o.o
19:48 <kanpakyin> : 好把=w=remove 了.
19:48 <eveless> : 其他还不错 跟fall in love比起来好很多啊=w=
19:48 <kanpakyin> : fall in love處女作 >_<
19:49 <kanpakyin> : 不能評論!!
19:49 <eveless> : lol

good map :3
kanpakyin
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[General]
The title needs space. 'monochrome (Short Ver.)'


[Insane]
OK... Here are some finish mod due to the diff for standard player.
It lacks finish hitsound. I suggest add finish where cymbal sound real exist.

00:00:455 (1) - add finish
00:01:789 (3) - add finish at end of slider
00:02:233 (4) - ^
00:04:011 (5) - add finish
00:05:344 (5) - add finish at return arrow
00:06:011 (6) - add finish at start of slider
00:07:567 (7) - add finish
00:14:678 (2) - add finish at start of slider
00:21:789 (1) - ^
00:35:122 (6) - remove finish from end of slider
00:36:011 (1) - add finish
00:57:344 (3) - add finish at start of slider
01:02:233 (3) - remove finish
01:02:678 (1) - try on finish with audio volume 40. whistle sound weird to me.
01:06:233 (1) - remove whistle?
01:08:011 (1) - add finish at start of slider
01:15:122 (1) - add finish
01:22:122 (1) - remove new combo? / add finish at end of slider
01:31:567 (2) - add finish
01:45:344 (2) - add finish at start of slider


[Hard]
00:04:011 (1) - add finish at start of slider
00:05:344 (3) - add finish at return arrow
00:06:011 (4) - add finish
00:14:678 (4) - add finish at start of slider
00:21:789 (1) - ^
00:43:122 (3) - ^
00:50:011 (5) - add finish at end of slider
00:57:344 (2) - add finish at start of slider
01:04:233 (9) - remove finish
01:15:122 (1) - add finish at start of slider
01:22:233 (1) - ^
01:29:789 (3) - ^
01:31:122 (6) - add finish at return arrow
01:36:011 (6) - add finish at end of slider


Allright, I think it was enough to give you sense. I won't mention it again from now.


[Normal]
01:45:344 (6) - new combo


[Easy]
01:01:344 (6) - hmm... return sound off beat?


Mapset is pretty good. Sorry for hit finish mod. >_<
kanpakyin
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>ykcarrot

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