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Uehara Rena - Todokanai Koi

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mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
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mjw5150
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年4月8日 at 16:16:25

Artist: Uehara Rena
Title: Todokanai Koi
Source: WHITE ALBUM 2 ~introductory chapter~
Tags: AQUAPLUS Leaf
BPM: 135
Filesize: 5127kb
Play Time: 04:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.7 stars, 273 notes)
  2. Hard (4.57 stars, 469 notes)
Download: Uehara Rena - Todokanai Koi
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届かない恋
WHITE ALBUM2 ~introductory chapter~ OP
Last edited by mjw5150 , edited 11 times in total.
lorvd
26 posts
Joined March 2010
lorvd
（<ゝω·）绮罗星 ~☆
hp200006
13 posts
Joined February 2010
hp200006
啊...沙发被L大魔王抢了...
Last edited by hp200006 , edited 1 time in total.
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Arusha Shuna
hey this is pretty nice
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
[General]
Combo color为什么要用两个一样的黄和两个一样的蓝...这样不好读 删掉只剩一个


[Insane]
00:34:387 (6) - 尾部可以再往下一点 让slider看起来更圆
00:39:721 (2) - 拉远一点 至少不要和1贴一起
00:43:054 (2) - 123之间间距不一样
00:45:943 (1) - 可以再拖远一点 让7的尾部和1的尾部之间的距离看上去像两个正常note之间的距离 改完记得调整后面的slider
03:13:943 (3) - 尾部加clap
03:17:498 (3) - ^

还不错
mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
mjw5150

eveless wrote:

[General]
Combo color为什么要用两个一样的黄和两个一样的蓝...这样不好读 删掉只剩一个


[Insane]
00:34:387 (6) - 尾部可以再往下一点 让slider看起来更圆
00:39:721 (2) - 拉远一点 至少不要和1贴一起
00:43:054 (2) - 123之间间距不一样
00:45:943 (1) - 可以再拖远一点 让7的尾部和1的尾部之间的距离看上去像两个正常note之间的距离 改完记得调整后面的slider
03:13:943 (3) - 尾部加clap
03:17:498 (3) - ^

还不错
fixed thx :)
-Chitose Sana-
12 posts
Joined August 2008
-Chitose Sana-
WA2 :D star
samuel_old
55 posts
Joined July 2009
samuel_old
can I make a guest diff ?
star~~~~~~ :)
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Hi hi~

Overall
Type something in Creator's Words lol


[Easy]
There are some long combos. Place new combos to fix those.

00:38:832 (1,2) - consider make these into a 1/8 repeating slider? (There's an unmapped drum sound at 00:39:054)
02:11:498 (x) - add a note?
02:35:276 (2) - you should use custom slidertick for whistle, NOT here 02:35:943.
03:18:832 (5) - consider mapping until 03:19:721
03:47:276 (x) - there is a drum sound here, try mapping it?

Very nice~


[Hard]
00:39:054 (x) - there's an unmapped drum sound here: replace 00:38:832 (1) with 3 circles?
02:45:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - try arranging these into a better circle
03:42:832 (6) - curve this slider?
03:48:610 (2) - compared this with 03:47:721 (9). Both are under the slider but are of different rhythm (1/8 vs. 1/16). I suggest you to differentiate them by using different patterns. (Check the entire map if required.)
03:51:721 (1) - consider silencing some sliderticks in this x0.5BPM section

Patterns aren't top-notch, but overall very good.

=============

Is your mapping teacher kioukiou? LOL
Star~
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
混蛋 赶快做我老婆!
mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
mjw5150

samuel wrote:

can I make a guest diff ?
star~~~~~~ :)
of course :)

yongtw123 wrote:

Hi hi~

Overall
Type something in Creator's Words lol


[Easy]
There are some long combos. Place new combos to fix those.

00:38:832 (1,2) - consider make these into a 1/8 repeating slider? (There's an unmapped drum sound at 00:39:054)
02:11:498 (x) - add a note?
02:35:276 (2) - you should use custom slidertick for whistle, NOT here 02:35:943.
03:18:832 (5) - consider mapping until 03:19:721
03:47:276 (x) - there is a drum sound here, try mapping it?

Very nice~


[Hard]
00:39:054 (x) - there's an unmapped drum sound here: replace 00:38:832 (1) with 3 circles?
02:45:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - try arranging these into a better circle
03:42:832 (6) - curve this slider?
03:48:610 (2) - compared this with 03:47:721 (9). Both are under the slider but are of different rhythm (1/8 vs. 1/16). I suggest you to differentiate them by using different patterns. (Check the entire map if required.)
03:51:721 (1) - consider silencing some sliderticks in this x0.5BPM section

Patterns aren't top-notch, but overall very good.

=============

Is your mapping teacher kioukiou? LOL
Star~
mostly fixed
thx for modding
Creator's words will be typed later(i really don't know what to type now :(
and my mapping teaher is Mrs.DRS XDDDDDDDDDD
Last edited by mjw5150 , edited 1 time in total.
Zelos
1,111 posts
Joined May 2010
Zelos
Any mod i post is a suggestion and can be freely disregarded if you disagree.

Folder Check:

everything is good there.

Easy:

02:17:943 (4,1,2) - only a bit unsymmetrical

02:41:054 (2,3,4) - tiny spacing error. (there are more throughout this entire diff but they are just tiny)

02:53:721 (1) - remove new combo?

Wow i couldnt really find to much wrong. that was a very nice difficulty.

Hard:

01:39:276 (1,2,3,4) - tiny spacing error (more like it throughout the entire diff but they are just tiny)

02:22:387 (1,2,3) - a bit ugly

02:52:832 (4) - move to the left one grid point

Thats it. Both were very nice difficultys.

Star~
mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
mjw5150

Zelos wrote:

Any mod i post is a suggestion and can be freely disregarded if you disagree.

Folder Check:

everything is good there.

Easy:

02:17:943 (4,1,2) - only a bit unsymmetrical

02:41:054 (2,3,4) - tiny spacing error. (there are more throughout this entire diff but they are just tiny)

02:53:721 (1) - remove new combo?

Wow i couldnt really find to much wrong. that was a very nice difficulty.

Hard:

01:39:276 (1,2,3,4) - tiny spacing error (more like it throughout the entire diff but they are just tiny)

02:22:387 (1,2,3) - a bit ugly

02:52:832 (4) - move to the left one grid point

Thats it. Both were very nice difficultys.

Star~
mostly fixed
thx :)
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
8-) 渣mod 请选择性无视
[timing]
hard 强烈建议 SV调为1.4
02:43:165 (6) - del
02:54:498 (-) - add a note
↑
这图在长白线起小3连比较好 红线起节奏不是很好

排版我还觉得太随意了一点... :roll:
mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
mjw5150
Mrs.DRS神马时候成专业modder了lol
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
General
Shouldn't the last kiai section activate at 04:05:943 instead of 04:02:387?
Source should be White Album 2: Introductory Chapter?

Easy
02:22:832 (2) - Perhaps don't stack this? You already stacked 1/2 notes. Having a 1/1 stack may be confusing.
03:18:832 (3) - ^
03:19:276 (x) - Perhaps add a note here so the break won't start as odd.

Hard
03:19:276 (x) - Perhaps add a note here so the break won't start as odd.

Overall
Solid map. A Normal would be nice though :(

Edit: As the mapper stated two diff was fine, Bubbled.
Last edited by NoHitter , edited 1 time in total.
mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
mjw5150
all fixed except:

NoHItter wrote:

Source should be White Album 2: Introductory Chapter?
i think it has no problem(as the LOGO write
thx for your modding :D
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
plz move your offset to 7721 (為了讓重拍子打在長白線上,這樣osucore聽了才爽!!!!)
音效的話已經相當穩定了,clap用的沒話說,接下來可以試試看跟著音樂來下一些finish
以下參考用

Download: Uehara Rena - Todokanai Koi (mjw5150) [@_@].osu
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
羡慕嫉妒恨
lol
Alace
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
Alace
ok sounds better now
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