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KELUN - CHU-BURA (TV Size)

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arien666
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011년 5월 24일 화요일 at 오전 7:55:52

Artist: KELUN
Title: CHU-BURA (TV Size)
Source: BLEACH
Tags: taiko taikosu op8 arken1015
BPM: 180
Filesize: 15435kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.33 stars, 119 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.04 stars, 92 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (4.79 stars, 238 notes)
  4. Oni (5 stars, 376 notes)
Download: KELUN - CHU-BURA (TV Size)
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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TaikOsu for BLEACH

OP7 (After Dark) - OP8 (CHU-BURA)

If you hate TaikOsu, why don't you play ranked set by Kuroneko first ?
Also, Secre made nice catch mapset! Here is the ranked set

29th beatmap and 25th TaikOsu song
OP8 of Anime 'BLEACH'
lepidopodus
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Topic Starter
arien666

lepidopodus wrote:

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Thanks for checking :3
Zekira
[General]
-Offset: -14 from current

[Kantan]
01:22:320 (3) - - align with 2?

[Futsuu]
I just noticed that this entire diff almost entirely goes counter clockwise

[Muzukashii]
00:23:487 (5) - doesn't seem perfectly reflecting 4
00:39:987 (7,8,9,10) - maybe at least curve this
00:53:987 (1) - ugly antijump

[Oni]
00:49:320 (3) - WHAT do you think you are doing with this anti-jump
00:50:653 (3) - ^
I do notice the larger and larger jumps at later parts, but please no anti-jumps, damn it. Start from the base distance and THEN go larger >_>
Topic Starter
arien666

Zekira wrote:

[General]
-Offset: -14 from current Damn you timer lol

[Kantan]
01:22:320 (3) - - align with 2? Instead, moved 2 :3

[Futsuu]
I just noticed that this entire diff almost entirely goes counter clockwise

[Muzukashii]
00:23:487 (5) - doesn't seem perfectly reflecting 4 Okay :3
00:39:987 (7,8,9,10) - maybe at least curve this Okay :3
00:53:987 (1) - ugly antijump Fixed into stack orz

[Oni]
00:49:320 (3) - WHAT do you think you are doing with this anti-jump Just going Windmill ;_;
00:50:653 (3) - ^ Just going Windmill ;_;
I do notice the larger and larger jumps at later parts, but please no anti-jumps, damn it. Start from the base distance and THEN go larger >_> Since other modders said okay, I'll keep orz
Damn you BLEACH fan lol
JoJo
"o((>ω< ))o"
pieguyn
Kantan:

00:27:306 (1,2) - I'd recommend moving these somewhere else instead of having them be in the same spot as the previous notes
01:21:306 (2) - Align with (1)

Futsuu:

01:06:973 (4) - Align with (2)
01:07:640 (1) - Too far from (4)
01:08:973 (3) - Align with (1)

Muzukashii:

00:39:973 (7,8,9,10) - Make these into a line

Oni:

00:16:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'd recommend moving these somewhere else (this copy-paste makes it a lot more boring)
00:24:639 (1) - Too close to (10)
01:19:306 (10) - New combo?

Nice map. :) *stars*
Topic Starter
arien666

pieguy1372 wrote:

Kantan:

00:27:306 (1,2) - I'd recommend moving these somewhere else instead of having them be in the same spot as the previous notes Okay
01:21:306 (2) - Align with (1) Okay

Futsuu:

01:06:973 (4) - Align with (2) Okay
01:07:640 (1) - Too far from (4) Mirrored and not too high jump ;_;
01:08:973 (3) - Align with (1) Okay

Muzukashii:

00:39:973 (7,8,9,10) - Make these into a line Okay

Oni:

00:16:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'd recommend moving these somewhere else (this copy-paste makes it a lot more boring) Some done but ;_;
00:24:639 (1) - Too close to (10) Fixed
01:19:306 (10) - New combo? Okay

Nice map. :) *stars*
:3
Krisom
General-
End your kiai at 01:28:639 - ?

Futsuu-
01:27:806 (1,2,3) - Looks a bit ugly for the ending pattern, why not try this?

Muzu-
00:44:973 (6,7,8,9) - Try this for symmetry with (2,3,4)? It also looks nicer.
00:45:806 (1) - This slider looks specially bad for a long slider,try something like this (you'll have to modify the following pattern to make this fit).
00:55:639 (5,6,7,8,1) - These two are the same as I mentioned avobe, just flipped horizontally and vertically. Here,I made another slider.
Here are both slidercodes.
SPOILER
464,228,45806,6,0,B|416:344|284:324|256:288|256:288|228:324|96:344|48:228,1,504,2|0
48,156,56472,6,0,B|184:180|152:44|256:44|256:44|360:44|328:180|464:156,1,504,2|0

Oni-
00:53:473 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is really confusing, place it in a diferent way please.


Not much to say about this.
Topic Starter
arien666

Krisom wrote:

General-
End your kiai at 01:28:639 - ? Since last note might be on Kiai score bonus zone, it would not be on here. Also as authentic, Kiai ends later ;_;

Futsuu-
01:27:806 (1,2,3) - Looks a bit ugly for the ending pattern, why not try this? Okay :3

Muzu-
00:44:973 (6,7,8,9) - Try this for symmetry with (2,3,4)? It also looks nicer.
00:45:806 (1) - This slider looks specially bad for a long slider,try something like this (you'll have to modify the following pattern to make this fit).
00:55:639 (5,6,7,8,1) - These two are the same as I mentioned avobe, just flipped horizontally and vertically. Here,I made another slider.
Here are both slidercodes.
SPOILER
464,228,45806,6,0,B|416:344|284:324|256:288|256:288|228:324|96:344|48:228,1,504,2|0
48,156,56472,6,0,B|184:180|152:44|256:44|256:44|360:44|328:180|464:156,1,504,2|0

Oni-
00:53:473 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is really confusing, place it in a diferent way please. Moved to another route :3


Not much to say about this.
<3
Kuroneko-sHerald
Good luck on this :)
Star ~
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. another 1:1 to 4:3 BG D:
[Oni]:
  1. 00:58:640 (9) - make the slider's end more visible? in Taiko Skin too difficult to tell that's a slider
[Kantan]:
  1. 01:03:306 (2) - HP touch in HardRock mod
star~
Topic Starter
arien666

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. another 1:1 to 4:3 BG D: ;_:
[Oni]:
  1. 00:58:640 (9) - make the slider's end more visible? in Taiko Skin too difficult to tell that's a slider Re-arranged :3
[Kantan]:
  1. 01:03:306 (2) - HP touch in HardRock mod Some adjusted :3
star~
Thanks for modding :3
Hijiri Tezuka
'OTL It's good. Really can't say anything bad about it.
HeatKai
[kantan]
00:35:306 (2,3,4,5) - I don't know why , but i think this part isn't that fit to the song :P
00:51:639 (1) - spacing
01:03:306 (2) - 1 grid left ? * spacing
01:11:639 (2) - 2 grid left ? * spacing

[futsuu]
00:38:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - do like this ? make it straight ? http://puu.sh/1afn
01:01:306 (x) - add a circle ?
01:10:639 (x) - ^
01:11:973 (4) - ^
01:13:306 (2) - whistle ?
01:23:973 (2,3) - 1 grid left :3
01:28:473 (x) - add a circle.

[Muzukashii]
00:40:473 (10) - delete.
01:04:473 (8) - put other place ?

nice :3

[Oni]

nice
But slider usage so little :P
Use too many circle D:
xD

[Overall]
8-) Star
Topic Starter
arien666

heatwave95 wrote:

[kantan]
00:35:306 (2,3,4,5) - I don't know why , but i think this part isn't that fit to the song :P Dunno but Taiko-authentic orz
00:51:639 (1) - spacing Not big deal orz
01:03:306 (2) - 1 grid left ? * spacing Not big deal orz
01:11:639 (2) - 2 grid left ? * spacing Not big deal orz

[futsuu]
00:38:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - do like this ? make it straight ? http://puu.sh/1afn Some moved
01:01:306 (x) - add a circle ? Sorry, Taiko-authentic
01:10:639 (x) - ^ Sorry, Taiko-authentic
01:11:973 (4) - ^ Sorry, Taiko-authentic
01:13:306 (2) - whistle ? Sorry, Taiko-authentic
01:23:973 (2,3) - 1 grid left :3 I think it's fine orz
01:28:473 (x) - add a circle. Sorry, Taiko-authentic

[Muzukashii]
00:40:473 (10) - delete. Sorry, Taiko-authentic
01:04:473 (8) - put other place ? Moved :p

nice :3

[Oni]

nice
But slider usage so little :P
Use too many circle D:
xD

[Overall]
8-) Star
Pizza :3
NoHitter
General
A different mapping style?
Maybe change the BG to something more related to Bleach?

Kantan
I already see a problem with this. There has to be a note at 00:43:306, but the time interval between the spinner before is too short for an Easy. Normal is acceptable.
01:28:639 (2) - Don't stack this.

Futsuu
Patterns look kind of messy :( [Like 00:28:973 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4)]
00:31:973 (6,7,8) - Repeat slider instead?
00:39:973 (4,5,6) - ^
01:15:973 (2,3,4) - ^

Muzukashii
00:47:806 (4,5) - Perhaps you could make the notes not be overlapped by the slider?
00:58:473 (4,5) - ^
01:13:306 (2) - Slider stack on another slider looks ugly IMO.
01:14:806 (1) - Maybe make spacing here constant for readability?
01:17:806 (1) - Looks ugly IMO.

Oni
01:11:139 (1) - Suggestion: Perhaps you should not anti-jump this?
01:12:473 (1) - ^
01:21:306 (3,4,5,6) - Suggestion: Perhaps make them into a square formation instead like in previous patterns?
01:22:639 (3,4,5,6) - ^
(On a sidenote, I like 00:48:806 -> 00:52:473, 00:59:473 -> 01:03:139)
Topic Starter
arien666

NoHItter wrote:

General
A different mapping style? Past style is so close orz
Maybe change the BG to something more related to Bleach? I had thought if there's no ranked set I would add BG related with BLEACH on [Kantan],[Futsuu] but there's 1 ranked set so I added album jacket ;_;

Kantan
I already see a problem with this. There has to be a note at 00:43:306, but the time interval between the spinner before is too short for an Easy. Normal is acceptable. Actually, there's 333ms between spinner and next note, I can't deal with this thing with moving since both are authentic but... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/71546 It doesn't matter very well imo and some opinion. The user can choose the way to play this I guess orz
01:28:639 (2) - Don't stack this. Moved

Futsuu
Patterns look kind of messy :( [Like 00:28:973 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4)] Some fixed
00:31:973 (6,7,8) - Repeat slider instead? Okay :3
00:39:973 (4,5,6) - ^ Okay :3
01:15:973 (2,3,4) - ^ Not on here since it's just almost last part orz

Muzukashii
00:47:806 (4,5) - Perhaps you could make the notes not be overlapped by the slider? Okay orz
00:58:473 (4,5) - ^ Okay orz
01:13:306 (2) - Slider stack on another slider looks ugly IMO. Okay orz
01:14:806 (1) - Maybe make spacing here constant for readability? Moved
01:17:806 (1) - Looks ugly IMO. But doesn't matter well imo orz

Oni
01:11:139 (1) - Suggestion: Perhaps you should not anti-jump this? Claiming down part so sorry orz
01:12:473 (1) - ^ Claiming down part so sorry orz
01:21:306 (3,4,5,6) - Suggestion: Perhaps make them into a square formation instead like in previous patterns? If this is not necessery, I would keep it sorry ;_;
01:22:639 (3,4,5,6) - ^ If this is not necessery, I would keep it sorry ;_;[color=#0000FF]
(On a sidenote, I like 00:48:806 -> 00:52:473, 00:59:473 -> 01:03:139)
I wonder ;_;
LuPiiTa
starr
kanpakyin
Yeah..Here my mod.

[General]
I think Lead in 1500 is enough for me.
Kiai tme should end at 01:25:973?

[Kantan]
00:08:639(1.2.3)-Vertical this pattern?
00:40:639(x)-Remove finish on this spinner..It sounds better to me.
00:43:306(1)-Put this note in centre because this note appears too fast after spinner.So newbie can catch it easily.
00:51:639(1)-Remove New combo.
01:15:973(2.3.4)-A Suggestion here: 01:24:639(4.5.6)-emm...How about let this pattern Horizontal with (1.2.3)?

[Futsuu]
00:12:306(3)-Probably use 2 notes to substitite this.1/2 short slider is weird imo.
00:14:973,00:17:639,00:20:306(3)-^
00:26:306(4.5.6.1)-You shou ld make this "square" regularly!Like this
01:15:973(2.3.4)-If possible..Could you use a slider to instead of these?
01:25:806(5)-How about make the slider like this?It looks better than previous..
[Muzukashii]
HP +1 or 2
00:13:973(1)-4 grid up? (LV3).
00:14:973(3)-^ Same.
00:15:973(5)-Fine..but a little bit ugly.
00:52:473(6)-How about make a square with (1.2.3.4.5)-?
00:52:806(7.8.9.10)-According to your pattern.You should make a New combo here.
00:56:473(1)-emm...Probably make this slider same as 00:45:806(1)-.
01:08:639(5)-New combo here? if you done it please remove new combo at 01:09:806.
01:17:806(1)-This slider...Would you draw it more beautiful? ;_; like this?

[Oni]
00:05:139(8)-Sound here has a accent point so add a New combo here.
00:07:639(6)-A new combo here would be nice.
00:31:973(8.9)-Use some notes to instead of? Probably some triplet can make more fun ;)
00:49:306(3.4.5.6)-Increase spacing of this(Jump)!It's more appropriate to music, also players can get more fun if you do it.
00:50:639(3.4.5.6)-^ Same.
00:54:139(1.2)-Don't stack here :<
01:08:639(8)-New combo here?

That's all.Not any terrible stuff .Almost nazi and design thing.
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