1. Extra (5.65 stars, 1388 notes)
2. Insane (4.83 stars, 1070 notes)

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  02:32:916 (1,2,3,4) - ноты спешат относительно музыки, может здесь должна быть еще одна бпм секция?
  00:40:013 - этот бит должен быть кликабелен
  00:48:012 (2,4) - бланкет
  01:04:012 (4,5,6) - не стоит игнорировать гитару, её можно замапать юзая подобный ритм
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  03:40:016 (1,2,3,4) - ^
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  02:33:461 (4) - нужно больше спейсинга, т.к музыка возрастает
  02:58:874 - стримить эту часть очень тяжело, т.к громкие хитсаунды сбивают с толку, не давая вслушаться в музыку + стрим-паттерны не самые удобные для инсейн-игроков
  03:21:159 (5,6) - зачем здесь нужны эти кикслайдеры? замапай их нотами
  04:45:955 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - rip acc

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  03:30:759 (7) - здесь неправильный бпм ? ноты отстают, и это четко слышно
  05:14:318 (1) - это единственный слайдер 2\1 слайдер в этой части, в которой не выделен звук на 05:15:409 - , может его сделать 1\1?

vanucik wrote:

m4m

Insane

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  02:32:916 (1,2,3,4) - the objects are slightly ahead of music, perhaps one more BPM section is needed
  00:40:013 - эthis needs something clickable.
  00:48:012 (2,4) - blanket
  01:04:012 (4,5,6) - please, don't ignore the guitar sound here, it can be mapped with something like this
  SPOILER

  
  
  03:40:016 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  SPOILER

  
  
  02:33:461 (4) - increase the DS as music has some kind of increase as well?
  02:58:874 - it's pretty hard to stream here as loud hitsounds are somewhat confusing + the patterns are not quite comfortable for insane-level players
  03:21:159 (5,6) - why kicksliders? just regular circles should fit better
  04:45:955 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - rip acc

Extra

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  03:30:759 (7) - perhaps, the BPM is off. notes are late and it's very noticeable
  05:14:318 (1) - that's the only 2/1 slider in this part, besides it ignores the sound on 05:15:409 - , make it 1\1?

can't point out anything else, good job!

pishifat wrote:

a lot of unsnapped objects you can catch in ai mod yes

disable countdown plss yes

00:29:287 (3,4,6) - inconsistant spacing/emphasizing always went with 00:27:832 (1,2,4) - 00:26:378 (1,2,4) - etc. except that one mentioned doesnt seem any better/worse than linked timestamps:(

00:36:013 (1) - 00:38:377 (2) - sooo don't fit with the music, the first one can still be acceptable due to strong downbeat but the other one is z, you followed the main instrument then suddenly ignored one tick is lol yes

00:40:013 - 00:44:739 - you're gonna use finish here so having it on slider end is lol main instruemnt pauses on downbeat tho

00:41:285 - 00:41:831 (1) - 00:42:376 (1) - 00:42:922 - etc sounds cooler if you put 1/2 sliders on them instead to emphasize the music better same for the later part at 00:46:012 (1) - not the kind of emphasis im going for here

01:13:012 (6) - putting this above 7 is better for flow around 361,0 or you could move 01:12:557 (3,4,5) -point is to miss slider implied movement

02:34:370 (3,4) - rip visual spacing bigger now

02:54:521 (1) - timing fix

03:35:816 (6) - I don't hear this note bass

03:37:274 - shorten slider to here? or to 03:37:188 - and add clickable object changed hitsounds to make it not feel wrong

04:04:188 (4) - dunno how come it's seperated from the rest of the group 04:02:645 (1,2,3) -finish

good for sleep zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

m4m

Insane

02:32:916 (1,2,3,4) - the objects are slightly ahead of music, perhaps one more BPM section is needed yes
00:40:013 - эthis needs something clickable. would make rhythm not clearly follow any instrument
00:48:012 (2,4) - blanket yes
01:04:012 (4,5,6) - please, don't ignore the guitar sound here, it can be mapped with something like this
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03:40:016 (1,2,3,4) - ^ i think it's clear what im following here
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02:33:461 (4) - increase the DS as music has some kind of increase as well? yes
02:58:874 - it's pretty hard to stream here as loud hitsounds are somewhat confusing + the patterns are not quite comfortable for insane-level players weird stream for weird sounds
03:21:159 (5,6) - why kicksliders? just regular circles should fit better bg has 1/6
04:45:955 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - rip acc

Extra

03:30:759 (7) - perhaps, the BPM is off. notes are late and it's very noticeable yes
05:14:318 (1) - that's the only 2/1 slider in this part, besides it ignores the sound on 05:15:409 - , make it 1\1? supposed to stand out

can't point out anything else, good job!