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ginkiha - nightfall (full ver) [OsuMania]

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Deep Sea
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 8 августа 2016 г. at 18:46:54

Artist: ginkiha
Title: nightfall (full ver)
Source: BMS
Tags: G2R2014 Ne​/​nuit NIZI-RINGO -_[_L_e_a_h_]_- piano alchemists violin deemo
BPM: 92
Filesize: 6778kb
Play Time: 04:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Leah's Normal - 4Key (1,84 stars, 836 notes)
  2. Twinkling stars - 4Key (2,95 stars, 1447 notes)
Download: ginkiha - nightfall (full ver)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Author BG 防人 (Sakimori)


Ends day and comes a magical night

Bubble by A v a l o n

Ranked by Fresh Chicken


Leah's Normal = 100%
*Hitsound = 100%*
Twinkling stars = 100%
*Hitsound = 100%*



Special Thanks
- [ L e a h ] - for GD
Allezard for mod
SpinForWin for mod and 2 star
semyon422 for mod
Akary for mod and image with title in about map
eyes for mod and star
EYA- for star
WolfyArmato- for mod
Critical_Star for mod and star
A v a l o n for check and 2 star
Kuo Kyoka for star
genkicho for mod
Fresh Chicken for check
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[ A v a l o n ]
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[ A v a l o n ]
art of perfection <3
NayoLeah
144 posts
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NayoLeah
take this GD pls thx :D

http://puu.sh/pPUNd/12127069c3.osu
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Deep Sea
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Allezard
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Пропущен звук 00:24:864 - и тут тоже 00:35:298 - . А на местах где у тебя начинаются ЛНы вроде по идее должны быть ударки... но место все же сомнительное.

00:02:934 - исходя из твоей системы здесь нужна нота.

00:03:260 - сюда наверное тоже.

00:05:217 (5217|0,6195|0) - эти ноты удалить, а сюда 00:05:543 - 00:05:869 - добавить.
В общем так будет лучше думаю:




00:07:499 - Ноту можно в 3 колонку.

00:08:152 - здесь тоже два звука.

00:10:760 - сюда тоже можно ноту.

В общем буду скринами кидать паттерны где у тебя ноты пропущены 00:13:043 -


Тут 00:15:652 - аналогичный момент как и на первом скрине.


00:17:608 (17608|2) - на 2 колонку, 00:17:934 - пропустил звук, на 4ую его можно.

00:29:021 (29021|1) - эту ноту думаю можно убрать, а вот сюда добавить 00:30:652 -

00:30:978 - сделай лучше так:


00:34:565 (34565|3) - можно удалить эту ноту ноту, а эту 00:34:891 (34891|1) - в четвертую колонку.

00:36:847 - здесь лучше так сделать:


00:38:152 (38152|1,38804|3) - не понимаю к чему эти ЛНы, удали:D

00:40:760 - здесь сделай один Лн во второй колонке.

00:42:065 (42065|2) - Удалить!

00:42:554 - Добавить! (во вторую)

00:42:717 (42717|1) - на первую колонку, 00:43:043 (43043|1) - на вторую(тут еще звуки пропущены в этом месте 00:42:880 - как лескнка на 1/8 можно в принципе замапать), 00:43:695 (43695|0) - на первую.

00:44:673 (44673|2,44999|0) - тут снова не слышу под ноты звуков, можно удалить.

00:46:304 (46304|0) - под нотой нету звука.

00:46:630 - а вот тут есть, на первую колонку можно.

00:46:793 - вторая колонка.

00:47:282 (47282|1) - нету звука под ноту.

00:48:913 - здесь много пропустил:


00:52:989 - пропустил.

00:53:315 - 00:53:396 - сюда тоже можно ноты добавить.

00:55:108 (55108|1,55434|0) - Казнить! 00:55:108 (55108|3) - на первую.

00:59:184 - отсюда начинается пасcаж нот на 1/4. Я бы на твоем месте убрал ЛН на 4ой и замапал пассажик.

01:01:195 - здесь уже она выделяется на 1/6 как звук.
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Meiju
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Meiju
Leah's Normal
00:02:608 - add note

00:03:586 - ^

00:05:217 - ^

00:06:195 - ^

00:13:043 - ^

00:14:021 - ^

00:15:652 - ^

00:16:630 - ^

00:31:304 - ^

00:32:608 - ^

00:37:826 - ^

00:40:108 - ^

00:41:086 - ^

00:50:217 - 00:50:869 - 00:55:434 - 00:56:902 - 00:57:717 - 00:59:510 - ^ and etc...

01:21:847 - http://puu.sh/pWFwl/647efe7e2d.jpg - looks better

01:36:521 - add note

01:37:499 - ^ and etc...
Stars
00:06:195 - ноту?

00:11:413 - ^

00:16:630 - ^

00:18:260 - сделай здесь дабл, 00:18:913 - а тут трипл

00:19:565 - здесь тоже трипл можно, 00:20:217 - и тут

00:59:021 - еще ноту?

01:40:108 - ноту?

01:50:543 - ^
NayoLeah
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NayoLeah

SpinForWin wrote:

Leah's Normal
00:02:608 - add note

00:03:586 - ^

00:05:217 - ^

00:06:195 - ^

00:13:043 - ^

00:14:021 - ^

00:15:652 - ^

00:16:630 - ^

00:31:304 - ^

00:32:608 - ^

00:37:826 - ^

00:40:108 - ^

00:41:086 - ^

00:50:217 - 00:50:869 - 00:55:434 - 00:56:902 - 00:57:717 - 00:59:510 - ^ and etc...

01:21:847 - http://puu.sh/pWFwl/647efe7e2d.jpg - looks better

01:36:521 - add note

01:37:499 - ^ and etc...
Fixed all thx for your mod :D
fhttp://puu.sh/pWG2E/f64a84e2e5.osu
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semyon422
124 posts
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semyon422
Stars
Вот эти ноты, думаю, стоит убрать:
00:01:304 (1304|2)
00:05:217 (5217|3)
00:06:195 (6195|0)
00:06:521 (6521|1)
00:11:413 (11413|1)
00:11:739 (11739|3)
00:13:043 (13043|0)
00:15:652 (15652|2)
00:38:152 (38152|1)
00:38:804 (38804|3)
01:35:217 (95217|1)
01:40:108 (100108|3)
01:40:434 (100434|2)
01:45:652 (105652|0)
01:54:782 (114782|2)
01:55:434 (115434|0)

А вот сюда добавить:
00:07:499 - 3-я колонка
00:17:934 - 2-я колонка
01:41:413 - 3-я колонка
01:51:521 - 2-я колонка
01:51:847 - 3-я колонка
Akary
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Akary
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18:53 *Akary is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1010808 ginkiha - nightfall [Stars]]
18:53 Akary: 00:24:864 - а сюда не нужно ноту стамить? >_> 
18:54 [Shana Lesus]: секунду Маакс
18:54 [Shana Lesus]: и чекну
18:54 [Shana Lesus]: я карту обновлю
18:54 Akary: 00:27:309 - ^
18:54 Akary: Оке
18:56 [Shana Lesus]: обнови
18:56 Akary: 00:24:888 - 
18:57 Akary: 00:27:333 - 
18:57 [Shana Lesus]: на 24 и 27 добавил
18:57 [Shana Lesus]: точнее
18:57 [Shana Lesus]: на 27
18:57 [Shana Lesus]: уже есть нота
18:57 [Shana Lesus]: и лн
18:57 Akary: 00:29:942 -
18:57 [Shana Lesus]: или ты хочешь чтобы было 2 ноты ?
18:57 Akary: Не
18:58 Akary: Там же есть звук
18:58 Akary: А не
18:58 Akary: Сорян :D
18:58 [Shana Lesus]: а
18:58 [Shana Lesus]: не
18:58 Akary: А нет
18:58 Akary: Есть
18:58 [Shana Lesus]: там лучше ноту не ставить
18:58 Akary: 00:29:942 - 
18:59 [Shana Lesus]: понял
18:59 Akary: 00:32:469 - ^
18:59 [Shana Lesus]: но лучше ставить не буду :D
18:59 [Shana Lesus]: не хочу спокойный ритм ломать
18:59 Akary: 00:32:551 - ^ 
18:59 Akary: :D
19:00 Akary: Ну, я ток такие могу находить, в остальном все нормально
19:01 [Shana Lesus]: прям
19:01 [Shana Lesus]: все все ?
19:02 Akary: 03:49:915 - ноту добавь
19:02 Akary: 03:52:197 - тут ты главное делал по 2 ноты
19:02 Akary: 03:49:915 - а тут нет 
19:02 Akary: Падазрительно 
19:03 [Shana Lesus]: ОООООООООООООО
19:03 *[Shana Lesus] runs
19:03 [Shana Lesus]: добавил
19:03 Akary: Дальше еще посмотри
19:03 Akary: Там также
19:04 Akary: 04:07:197 - адд
19:05 Akary: 04:07:523 - и сюда я думал тоже
19:05 Akary: 04:10:458 (250458|2) - а ее удалить
19:06 [Shana Lesus]: най
19:06 [Shana Lesus]: с
19:06 [Shana Lesus]: мой герой
19:07 [Shana Lesus]: все сделал
19:07 Akary: 01:56:763 - может тоже добавить?
19:07 [Shana Lesus]: не не
19:07 Akary: 02:01:980 - и сюда
19:08 Akary: 01:59:371 (119371|3) - однако ж ты сюда добавил
19:08 [Shana Lesus]: ауч
19:08 Akary: 02:12:415 - сюда б я еще поставил нотку
19:08 [Shana Lesus]: не бей
19:08 [Shana Lesus]: добавил
19:09 Akary: 1\8 нотки не будешь делать?
19:09 [Shana Lesus]: неть
19:09 [Shana Lesus]: тут и не слышал толком
19:10 Akary: 02:48:284 - сюда нотку?
19:10 Akary: 02:53:502 - ^
19:11 Akary: Ну, вроде все
19:11 [Shana Lesus]: спасибо дорогой
19:11 Akary: Честно говоря, я б еще много где нотки поставил :D 
19:12 [Shana Lesus]: где ?
19:12 Akary: Да я про 1\8 все говорю
19:12 Akary: :D
19:12 [Shana Lesus]: изыйди демон
19:12 [Shana Lesus]: :D
19:13 [Shana Lesus]: пости ирк чат на форум
19:13 [Shana Lesus]: я кудосай дам
19:13 Akary: 00:22:034 - а то тут есть
19:13 Akary: А в других похожих местах нет
19:13 [Shana Lesus]: хорошо
19:13 [Shana Lesus]: предлагай
19:13 Akary: *мунфейс*
19:14 Akary: 00:29:860 - ну вот, момент один
19:14 Akary: 00:32:469 - второй
19:14 Akary: 00:42:904 - пианка считается? XD
19:15 Akary: Ну и все в этом духе
19:15 [Shana Lesus]: вот теперь
19:15 [Shana Lesus]: надо сидеть и думать
19:16 [Shana Lesus]: ставить или не ставить
19:16 [Shana Lesus]: а если ставиь
19:16 [Shana Lesus]: придется делать ре-рейнж
19:17 Akary:  Ну, в общем это все
Deep Sea
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Deep Sea
Thanks Allezard, Spin, Semyon, Akary, almost all fixed <3
eyes
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eyes
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SPOILER
00:32:469 - http://puu.sh/pWXP1/2c25e9a9b9.jpg
00:35:241 - http://puu.sh/pWXSF/a7a979a0f4.jpg
00:37:768 - добавь ноту
00:39:154 - ^
00:42:985 - ^
00:53:339 - http://puu.sh/pWY3M/d7b5dd7d73.jpg
00:56:437 - я бы еще ноту добавил
01:49:589 - ^
02:19:589 - http://puu.sh/pWYgn/e35ade5643.jpg
02:24:725 - http://puu.sh/pWYjh/c841d6c5d1.jpg
02:27:252 - http://puu.sh/pWYl5/226fc5914e.jpg
02:32:551 - http://puu.sh/pWYop/3992b7c2dc.jpg
02:37:360 - добавь ноту
02:37:768 - ^
02:48:121 - http://puu.sh/pWYu3/2182a46278.jpg
02:56:002 (176002|0) - это сюда>02:55:947
02:56:110 (176110|3) - этот лн отсюда>02:56:110 (176110|3)
02:56:110 (176110|3) - добавь ноту
Deep Sea
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Deep Sea

eyes wrote:

Stars
SPOILER
00:32:469 - http://puu.sh/pWXP1/2c25e9a9b9.jpg
00:35:241 - http://puu.sh/pWXSF/a7a979a0f4.jpg
00:37:768 - добавь ноту
00:39:154 - ^
00:42:985 - ^
00:53:339 - http://puu.sh/pWY3M/d7b5dd7d73.jpg
00:56:437 - я бы еще ноту добавил
01:49:589 - ^
02:19:589 - http://puu.sh/pWYgn/e35ade5643.jpg
02:24:725 - http://puu.sh/pWYjh/c841d6c5d1.jpg
02:27:252 - http://puu.sh/pWYl5/226fc5914e.jpg
02:32:551 - http://puu.sh/pWYop/3992b7c2dc.jpg
02:37:360 - добавь ноту
02:37:768 - ^
02:48:121 - http://puu.sh/pWYu3/2182a46278.jpg
02:56:002 (176002|0) - это сюда>02:55:947
02:56:110 (176110|3) - этот лн отсюда>02:56:110 (176110|3)
02:56:110 (176110|3) - добавь ноту
all fixed, thanks
WolfyArmato-
228 posts
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WolfyArmato-
Hi Shana-sama~ (My M4M req in game PM)
|1|2|3|4|
Sorry for my grammar, I'm not good in English :(
Leah's Night
00:01:980 (1980|2) - move to |1|
00:09:154 (9154|3) - move to |2| ,because 00:07:850 - 00:09:806 becuase pattern is repetitive
00:28:067 (28067|2) - move to |2| maybe flow better
00:41:110 (41110|3,41110|0,41273|1,41437|2,41600|3,41763|0,41763|2) - Ctrl+H ?
01:36:545 (96545|1,96545|3,97034|2,97034|0,97523|1,97523|2) - I think change to single note will be consistency with 01:26:110 (86110|3,86600|2,87089|3) - I think it isn't emphasize so make it be single note
01:40:458 (100458|1) - to |3| ?
02:00:023 (120023|2) - end here 02:02:469
02:19:589 - add note at |2|, because you make double in 02:30:023
03:53:176 - maybe add note at |1| ?
04:03:610 - ^

Stars
02:08:828 - add note at |1|, because emphasize sound here
02:20:893 (140893|2) - Delete, maybe flow better
02:31:328 (151328|1) - ^
02:39:154 - very emphasize sound here add note at |2|
02:41:110 (161110|2) - Yeah.. I can here the sound, but it's really light, maybe delete
04:08:502 - add note at |3|
04:08:828 (248828|2) - move to |4| because different sound with 04:09:154 (249154|2)
04:09:806 - maybe add 1 note here
04:10:784 (250784|1) - change to normal note ,I didn't hear long sound here xD

Overall is good, I like this song too!
feel free to reject my suggestions! I hope this can help you.
Good Luck!
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Deep Sea
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Topic Starter
Deep Sea

WolfyArmato- wrote:

Hi Shana-sama~ (My M4M req in game PM)
|1|2|3|4|
Sorry for my grammar, I'm not good in English :(

Stars
02:08:828 - add note at |1|, because emphasize sound here
02:20:893 (140893|2) - Delete, maybe flow better
02:31:328 (151328|1) - ^
02:39:154 - very emphasize sound here add note at |2|
02:41:110 (161110|2) - Yeah.. I can here the sound, but it's really light, maybe delete
04:08:502 - add note at |3|
04:08:828 (248828|2) - move to |4| because different sound with 04:09:154 (249154|2)
04:09:806 - maybe add 1 note here
04:10:784 (250784|1) - change to normal note ,I didn't hear long sound here xD

Overall is good, I like this song too!
feel free to reject my suggestions! I hope this can help you.
Good Luck!
Thanks for mod Wolfy, almost all advices have been taken !
NayoLeah
144 posts
Joined May 2016
NayoLeah

WolfyArmato- wrote:

Hi Shana-sama~ (My M4M req in game PM)
|1|2|3|4|
Sorry for my grammar, I'm not good in English :(
Leah's Night
00:01:980 (1980|2) - move to |1|
00:09:154 (9154|3) - move to |2| ,because 00:07:850 - 00:09:806 becuase pattern is repetitive
00:28:067 (28067|2) - move to |2| maybe flow better
00:41:110 (41110|3,41110|0,41273|1,41437|2,41600|3,41763|0,41763|2) - Ctrl+H ?
01:36:545 (96545|1,96545|3,97034|2,97034|0,97523|1,97523|2) - I think change to single note will be consistency with 01:26:110 (86110|3,86600|2,87089|3) - I think it isn't emphasize so make it be single note
01:40:458 (100458|1) - to |3| ?
02:00:023 (120023|2) - end here 02:02:469
02:19:589 - add note at |2|, because you make double in 02:30:023
03:53:176 - maybe add note at |1| ?
04:03:610 - ^

Overall is good, I like this song too!
feel free to reject my suggestions! I hope this can help you.
Good Luck!
Fixed all thx :D
http://puu.sh/pXXof/1dd12840cf.osu
Last edited by NayoLeah , edited 2 times in total.
Deep Sea
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Topic Starter
Deep Sea

- [ L e a h ] - wrote:

WolfyArmato- wrote:

Hi Shana-sama~ (My M4M req in game PM)
|1|2|3|4|
Sorry for my grammar, I'm not good in English :(
Leah's Night
00:01:980 (1980|2) - move to |1|
00:09:154 (9154|3) - move to |2| ,because 00:07:850 - 00:09:806 becuase pattern is repetitive
00:28:067 (28067|2) - move to |2| maybe flow better
00:41:110 (41110|3,41110|0,41273|1,41437|2,41600|3,41763|0,41763|2) - Ctrl+H ?
01:36:545 (96545|1,96545|3,97034|2,97034|0,97523|1,97523|2) - I think change to single note will be consistency with 01:26:110 (86110|3,86600|2,87089|3) - I think it isn't emphasize so make it be single note
01:40:458 (100458|1) - to |3| ?
02:00:023 (120023|2) - end here 02:02:469
02:19:589 - add note at |2|, because you make double in 02:30:023
03:53:176 - maybe add note at |1| ?
04:03:610 - ^

Overall is good, I like this song too!
feel free to reject my suggestions! I hope this can help you.
Good Luck!
Fixed all thx :D
http://puu.sh/pXXof/1dd12840cf.osu
updated
Frozen_Rhythm
52 posts
Joined April 2016
Frozen_Rhythm
I just want to suggest few things for you..... ^^



Leah's Night
I have a link to my dropbox for the osz file of this mod in "Leah's Night" difficulty....
https://www.dropbox.com/s/e01weyfhxfu706n/ginkiha%20-%20nightfall.osz?dl=0




00:25:295 - move this note to the 3rd column….I found this pattern better & most relative to the change of pitch in the music ( though it's not 100%
accurate since we're in just 4Keys)…. This will make the player feel the pitch of the music better……

00:35:730 - move this note to the 3rd column…

00:45:350 - add a note...( better at 1st column)

00:51:545 - I recommend removing the single note here (There is no corresponding beat or musical note)…..This will do better…. Making your holds pattern
richer….

02:20:078 - move this note to the 3rd column…

02:29:697 - move the long note to the 1st column (to fit my adjustments above this note)

02:30:023 - move this two notes one column to the right (resulting to one note in the 2nd column and one in the 4th)

02:30:187 - move it to 3rd column

02:30:350 - move it to 2nd column

02:30:513 - move it to 3rd column

02:30:676 - move it to 4th column

02:30:839 - move it to 3rd column

02:31:002 - move it to 2nd column

02:31:165 - move it to 1st column

02:31:328 - move this two notes one column to the right (one on the 2nd and one on the 4th)

02:31:654 - move it to the 3rd column

02:31:980 - move it to the 1st column

02:35:567 - add note (better in 3rd column)

02:40:132 - also add note (better in 3rd column)

02:46:328 - remove the single note here to make your holding patterns richer (same reason earlier, the "note" have no relative beat, "musical note" or pitch)

03:59:371 - add note (better in the 4th column)

04:05:893 - add note (better in 3rd column)

04:05:219 - move note to 2nd column (to fit with the change in 4:05:893)

04:10:947 - move it to 2nd column

04:11:110 - move it to 4th column………I suggest you end you map here….We know that it is better to map your "notes" relative to audible music notes
especially when it is low in tempo and not very high in difficulty….. It would surely make the player "feel the music more"….I really appreciate the
music and patterns from the start but I'm so sorry because I didn't feel the beauty of the music while seeing this pattern from 04:11:437 towards
above it…. But still, it's just my own suggestion……. it's all up to you…


Everything here is only my suggestions........^^ Again, it's all up to you.... ^^


Your Beatmap is almost perfect for ranking..!!!!
I really love the song ... ^^
Deep Sea
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Topic Starter
Deep Sea

Benson_Miakoun wrote:

I just want to suggest few things for you..... ^^



Leah's Night
I have a link to my dropbox for the osz file of this mod in "Leah's Night" difficulty....
https://www.dropbox.com/s/e01weyfhxfu706n/ginkiha%20-%20nightfall.osz?dl=0




00:25:295 - move this note to the 3rd column….I found this pattern better & most relative to the change of pitch in the music ( though it's not 100%
accurate since we're in just 4Keys)…. This will make the player feel the pitch of the music better……

00:35:730 - move this note to the 3rd column…

00:45:350 - add a note...( better at 1st column)

00:51:545 - I recommend removing the single note here (There is no corresponding beat or musical note)…..This will do better…. Making your holds pattern
richer….

02:20:078 - move this note to the 3rd column…

02:29:697 - move the long note to the 1st column (to fit my adjustments above this note)

02:30:023 - move this two notes one column to the right (resulting to one note in the 2nd column and one in the 4th)

02:30:187 - move it to 3rd column

02:30:350 - move it to 2nd column

02:30:513 - move it to 3rd column

02:30:676 - move it to 4th column

02:30:839 - move it to 3rd column

02:31:002 - move it to 2nd column

02:31:165 - move it to 1st column

02:31:328 - move this two notes one column to the right (one on the 2nd and one on the 4th)

02:31:654 - move it to the 3rd column

02:31:980 - move it to the 1st column

02:35:567 - add note (better in 3rd column)

02:40:132 - also add note (better in 3rd column)

02:46:328 - remove the single note here to make your holding patterns richer (same reason earlier, the "note" have no relative beat, "musical note" or pitch)

03:59:371 - add note (better in the 4th column)

04:05:893 - add note (better in 3rd column)

04:05:219 - move note to 2nd column (to fit with the change in 4:05:893)

04:10:947 - move it to 2nd column

04:11:110 - move it to 4th column………I suggest you end you map here….We know that it is better to map your "notes" relative to audible music notes
especially when it is low in tempo and not very high in difficulty….. It would surely make the player "feel the music more"….I really appreciate the
music and patterns from the start but I'm so sorry because I didn't feel the beauty of the music while seeing this pattern from 04:11:437 towards
above it…. But still, it's just my own suggestion……. it's all up to you…


Everything here is only my suggestions........^^ Again, it's all up to you.... ^^


Your Beatmap is almost perfect for ranking..!!!!
I really love the song ... ^^
Thank you for mod, waiting reply Leah ~
NayoLeah
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NayoLeah

Benson_Miakoun wrote:

I just want to suggest few things for you..... ^^



Leah's Night
I have a link to my dropbox for the osz file of this mod in "Leah's Night" difficulty....
https://www.dropbox.com/s/e01weyfhxfu706n/ginkiha%20-%20nightfall.osz?dl=0




00:25:295 - move this note to the 3rd column….I found this pattern better & most relative to the change of pitch in the music ( though it's not 100%
accurate since we're in just 4Keys)…. This will make the player feel the pitch of the music better……

00:35:730 - move this note to the 3rd column…

00:45:350 - add a note...( better at 1st column)

00:51:545 - I recommend removing the single note here (There is no corresponding beat or musical note)…..This will do better…. Making your holds pattern
richer….

02:20:078 - move this note to the 3rd column…

02:29:697 - move the long note to the 1st column (to fit my adjustments above this note)

02:30:023 - move this two notes one column to the right (resulting to one note in the 2nd column and one in the 4th)

02:30:187 - move it to 3rd column

02:30:350 - move it to 2nd column

02:30:513 - move it to 3rd column

02:30:676 - move it to 4th column

02:30:839 - move it to 3rd column

02:31:002 - move it to 2nd column

02:31:165 - move it to 1st column

02:31:328 - move this two notes one column to the right (one on the 2nd and one on the 4th)

02:31:654 - move it to the 3rd column

02:31:980 - move it to the 1st column

02:35:567 - add note (better in 3rd column)

02:40:132 - also add note (better in 3rd column)

02:46:328 - remove the single note here to make your holding patterns richer (same reason earlier, the "note" have no relative beat, "musical note" or pitch)

03:59:371 - add note (better in the 4th column)

04:05:893 - add note (better in 3rd column)

04:05:219 - move note to 2nd column (to fit with the change in 4:05:893)

04:10:947 - move it to 2nd column

04:11:110 - move it to 4th column………I suggest you end you map here….We know that it is better to map your "notes" relative to audible music notes
especially when it is low in tempo and not very high in difficulty….. It would surely make the player "feel the music more"….I really appreciate the
music and patterns from the start but I'm so sorry because I didn't feel the beauty of the music while seeing this pattern from 04:11:437 towards
above it…. But still, it's just my own suggestion……. it's all up to you…


Everything here is only my suggestions........^^ Again, it's all up to you.... ^^


Your Beatmap is almost perfect for ranking..!!!!
I really love the song ... ^^
I fixed them all thx for your mod :D
http://puu.sh/q06oj/6834683918.osu
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00:21:871 (21871|0,21871|2) - может расположить их на 2 | 4 ?

00:39:480 (39480|3,39806|0) - я бы убрал их, и добавил ноту 00:39:480 (39480|3,39806|0) - так как там самый громкий sound

00:56:437 (56437|1,56600|0) - ctrl+j

01:23:176 (83176|2) - может в 2 колонку?

00:56:437 (56437|1,56600|0) - ctrl+j

01:12:415 (72415|1,72578|2) - ^

01:12:415 (72415|1,72578|2) - ^ столько раз используешь этот паттерн, что я запутался, стоит ли и правда юзать ctrl+j, прост немного раздражает глаза когда вижу это, но если все же примешь, сделай все такие же паттерны которые будут дальше так же

02:30:023 (150023|0,150187|1,150350|2,150513|1,150676|3,150839|2,151002|1,151165|0) - этот парт могбы сделать по аналогии с 02:19:670 (139670|2,139752|1,139915|2,140078|1,140241|0,140404|1,140567|2,140730|3) -

02:29:697 (149697|1) - лишняя

02:53:176 (173176|3) - ^

02:58:719 (178719|1,178719|0) - мне кажется что ноты отстают от звука, послушай на 25, ну и вроде все хлопки выше тоже отстают

03:06:545 (186545|3) - вот здесь вот пожадничал с нотами

03:16:980 - и здесь тоже

03:17:632 (197632|3,197958|1) - не понимаю предназначение даблов здесь, можно было бы и оставить синглы

03:55:784 (235784|3) - здесь вроде звук затихает(сингл)
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