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kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2011-03-04T12:40:36+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年3月21日 at 17:55:49

Artist: Kalafina
Title: Hikari no Senritsu (TV Size)
Source: Sora no Woto
Tags: Wakana Ootaki Keiko Kubota Hikaru Masai
BPM: 96
Filesize: 14984kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.04 stars, 55 notes)
Hard (4.45 stars, 156 notes)
Normal (3.61 stars, 111 notes)

Download: Kalafina - Hikari no Senritsu (TV Size)
Download: Kalafina - Hikari no Senritsu (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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ソ·ラ·ノ·ヲ·ト's OP
Kalafina-光の旋律
So...I would like to map more relax map? xD
Thanks Joshua Lost for BG

Mapset:
Easy - Done
Normal - Done
Hard - Done

Last edited by kanpakyin 2011-08-08T12:02:10+00:00, edited 9 times in total.

KanaRin

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KanaRin 2011-03-04T12:44:14+00:00

#1
btw preview point禁落去有點奇怪ww
好似' yooooo sora no ....""
wwwwww 改一改

JoJo

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JoJo 2011-03-04T14:35:01+00:00

先占座=w=

Sure

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Sure 2011-03-05T02:14:18+00:00

[General]
- Offset -967 (negative). You don't need to resnap.
- Audio leand-in is a bit short. Change it from 1000 to 1500~2000.

Nice hitsound stuff. But each diff have a bit different way.
I don't know they were intended. However I have some suggestions about hitsound.

[Hard]
OD+1
00:02:783 (1) - S:C2 add clap
00:29:970 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:32:783 (1) - Remove clap from end of slider
00:41:533 (1) - Add finish
01:08:408 (3) - Add whistle at end of slider
01:12:783 (1) - ^
01:20:595 (2) - Add finish at end of slider
01:22:783 (6) - ^

[Normal]
00:04:033 (1) - Put finish at start of slider instead of whistle
00:23:720 (1) - Add finish at end of slider
00:45:283 (7) - ^
01:08:408 (1) - Remove finish from start of slider
01:20:908 (1) - Put finish at start of slider instead of whistle
01:22:158 (3) - Remove finish from first return arrow / Put clap at second arrow instead of finish

[Easy]
Increase circle size?
00:02:158 (2) - Add finish at return arrow
00:45:283 (1) - Add finish at end of slider
00:56:533 (5) - Add finish at start of slider / new combo
01:00:908 (8) - new combo
01:04:033 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:158 (2) - new combo
01:16:533 (1) - Add finish at start of slider
01:20:908 (4) - Put finish instead of whistle
01:21:533 (1) - Add finish at start of slider
01:24:033 (1) - ^

Nice map though.

JauiPlaY

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JauiPlaY 2011-03-05T05:02:39+00:00

hihi~

一些建議:

[General]
感覺前面的lead-in才1秒會不會太短了...

[Easy]
00:56:533(5) - new combo

[Normal]
00:30:283(4) - 用一個短slider加個circle代替?

[Hard]
00:00:283(1) - 不要把這個note跟后面那幾個重疊,一開始就這樣弄很奇怪
00:12:470(2) - 跟00:10:908(5)重疊好?
00:17:158(4) - 用一個折返slider代替?
00:29:033(1,1,1,2) - 同時選中這幾個,然后edit>reverse selection,這樣聽上去更適合歌詞
此外這裏應該不用這么多new combo才是

nice map
so
star~

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2011-03-05T06:59:22+00:00

>JauiPlaY . ykcarrot
Take some..Thanks ><

DeadAlready

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DeadAlready 2011-03-05T08:28:49+00:00

nice~ >w</

Musty

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Musty 2011-03-05T14:17:56+00:00

Hi kanpakyin

[General]

Offset : must be 4026 >w<
Delete all notes before the first timing section !!!

[Easy]

No error find.. nice!

[Normal]

Nice too

[Hard]

I Can't open that, try to resubmit?

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2011-03-05T14:37:26+00:00

Mustaash wrote:
[General]

Offset : must be 4026 >w< Done
Delete all notes before the first timing section !!! Done

[Easy]

No error find.. nice!

[Normal]

Nice too

[Hard]

I Can't open that, try to resubmit?Done

Well..Please mod the hard diff if you can .
thanks

Numbers 596108

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Numbers 596108 2011-03-05T17:33:08+00:00

Just for 1 star

Musty

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Musty 2011-03-05T17:53:01+00:00

also, my hard mod is here ( if you want, you can kudosued this post but it's not neccesary )

[Hard]

mmh, it's a slow map, also use "2" in Slider Tick Rate..
too much timing section with nosense imo

00:10:119 (3) - Delete this circle?, streams on this map is silly
00:16:994 (3) - ^
00:29:026 (4,5,1) - Not sure about this sliderspeed change
00:35:119 (5) - Delete this circle?
00:28:401 (2) - mmh, i don't like the structure of this slider :S change?
00:55:119 (7) - Delete this one?
00:56:369 (10) - ^
00:57:619 (3) - ^
00:58:713 (5) - New Combo
00:59:026 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:14:494 (3) - Delete this ?

Hitsounds are awesome.

Charles445

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Charles445 2011-03-06T05:00:49+00:00

I can't find anything without nazi'ing; it's solid.

CCHV-16

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CCHV-16 2011-03-06T05:05:05+00:00

把歌转成192kbps否则unrankable
建议在01:05:276这里先把KIAI收了然后在01:06:526这里再放出来效果会更好

hard
00:28:401 (2) - 这个不怎么好看的说
00:57:776 (4) - 左一格上一格
01:15:276 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个是不是弄成一个圆弧一样的轨迹比较好，直角型感觉有点突兀【纯属个人感觉】
01:25:901 (5) - 将SILDER红点拉至(64，216),这样歌曲的转折和这个silder就能对应起来了，打起来感觉会好点

normal
01:00:276 (3) - 结尾的白点移至（104，296）
01:05:276 (1) - 取消NEW COMBO
01:06:213 (2) - new combo
01:15:901 (7) - 这里前后都是圆弧型的NOTE这个为什么要做成折角的...
00:08:401 (8) - new combo
00:09:026 (1) - 取消new combo
00:27:151 (1,2) - 换成00:27:151 (6,1) -
00:36:838 (1) - 取消new combo
00:38:713 (3,1) - 换成00:38:713 (1,2) -
00:46:526 - 放出KIAI之后立刻空一拍感觉好奇怪建议00:46:838 - 放个NOTE
建议OD-1，不然对于新手来说最后一个SPINNER容易反应不过来

easy
01:07:151 (1) - 建议这个做成这样

把鼓点全抓掉效果会比较好
01:20:901 (4) - 这个finish音量放低点
00:23:401 (4,1,2) - 分开放比较好【个人感觉】
01:07:151 (1) - silder开头也finish一下？

star

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2011-03-06T06:48:09+00:00

>CCHV-16
Fix some.

Leorda

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Leorda 2011-03-07T18:27:48+00:00

NI HAO

Easy
00:08:493 (3) - Make parallel, if this slider are 5% curve, it's just like parallel, so make parallel. Otherwise, the player will confuse about what shape is that...
00:16:618 (2) - ^
00:48:493 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:04:118 (2) - Remove clap at end?
01:26:618 (1) - Spinner was too short for easy diff, or the beginner player will don't have time to spin that short spinner. Please extend it or replace to slider

Normal
00:32:243 (3) - Make parallel?
00:50:993 (4) - New combo?
01:05:368 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:06:930 (3) - New combo?
01:24:430 (4) - ^
01:26:774 (1) - Spinner are too short!

Hard
00:29:118 (4) - New combo for notify that this slider are slow, or it may confusing for player

That's all I can find

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2011-03-08T02:41:28+00:00

Leorda wrote:
NI HAO 你好

Easy
00:08:493 (3) - Make parallel, if this slider are 5% curve, it's just like parallel, so make parallel. Otherwise, the player will confuse about what shape is that... Fix
00:16:618 (2) - ^Fix
00:48:493 (1) - Remove new combo?Fix
01:04:118 (2) - Remove clap at end?Fix
01:26:618 (1) - Spinner was too short for easy diff, or the beginner player will don't have time to spin that short spinner. Please extend it or replace to sliderFix

Normal
00:32:243 (3) - Make parallel? X
00:50:993 (4) - New combo?Fix
01:05:368 (1) - Remove new combo?Fix
01:06:930 (3) - New combo?Fix
01:24:430 (4) - ^Fix
01:26:774 (1) - Spinner are too short! X.I think it is OK in normal

Hard
00:29:118 (4) - New combo for notify that this slider are slow, or it may confusing for player Fix
That's all I can find

Thanks

eveless

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eveless 2011-03-08T07:42:35+00:00

[General]
找过个finish 现在这个不合，或者留着再找一个一起用推荐找找ntr图里那个铃的finish

[Hard]
00:10:993 (5) - 听起来不舒服的finish 要么换音效要么删finish
00:12:556 (2) - 尾巴finish删或换
00:21:306 (4) - 这个尾巴上的音很明显是长铃声了
00:30:368 (1) - 其实我想说这finish估计换了也会不好听吧..
...不想说finish了
00:35:212 (5) - 删note...
00:38:181 (2,3) - 其实我觉得这里的两个重音摆开来放note比较好
01:16:150 (2) - 删note
00:42:868 (5) - 这三个重音换note 而且既然你前面用了2个2连的话，我觉得这边节奏再满一点也会更好(比如x xxx)
00:45:993 (13) - 这slider换三个note啊
kiai段没有高潮的感觉 spacing可以再放开点或者这段直接来个2x?(被揍

有点不太懂你为什么在该快节奏的地方反而来个长slider(抽搐
比如
01:05:993 (6) - 好吧我知道你是为了善良，可是你用1/4折返不就好了...

理解不能的下法太多了 ._.

00:30:368 (1) - 取消new combo

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2011-03-08T08:48:25+00:00

eveless wrote:
[General]
找过个finish 现在这个不合，或者留着再找一个一起用推荐找找ntr图里那个铃的finish 找到了.

[Hard]
00:10:993 (5) - 听起来不舒服的finish 要么换音效要么删finish
00:12:556 (2) - 尾巴finish删或换
00:21:306 (4) - 这个尾巴上的音很明显是长铃声了
00:30:368 (1) - 其实我想说这finish估计换了也会不好听吧..
...不想说finish了
00:35:212 (5) - 删note...
00:38:181 (2,3) - 其实我觉得这里的两个重音摆开来放note比较好
01:16:150 (2) - 删note
00:42:868 (5) - 这三个重音换note 而且既然你前面用了2个2连的话，我觉得这边节奏再满一点也会更好(比如x xxx)
00:45:993 (13) - 这slider换三个note啊
kiai段没有高潮的感觉 spacing可以再放开点或者这段直接来个2x?(被揍因為我善良:>

有点不太懂你为什么在该快节奏的地方反而来个长slider(抽搐同上 :O
比如
01:05:993 (6) - 好吧我知道你是为了善良，可是你用1/4折返不就好了...

理解不能的下法太多了 ._.

00:30:368 (1) - 取消new combo 關於這個..有些人說NC..有些人說Remove...真的搞亂了..

Thanks

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2011-03-08T17:06:57+00:00

[General]:

Video未消音

[Hard]:

x0.5 的部分不太合不一定所有的歌都适合变速.

改好了通知下 +_+/

Edit: my videoplayer's fault x_x audio lean-in removed and bubbled.

yongtw123

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yongtw123 2011-03-09T15:04:55+00:00

[Easy] is so slowwwwwwwww

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