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9mm Parabellum Bullet - Inferno [Taiko]

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Nofool
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lundi 3 octobre 2016 at 21:31:39

Artist: 9mm Parabellum Bullet
Title: Inferno
Source: ベルセルク
Tags: Berserk (2016)
BPM: 195
Filesize: 2766kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.08 stars, 210 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (4.59 stars, 548 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.43 stars, 117 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (3.02 stars, 295 notes)
  5. Oni (4.14 stars, 410 notes)
  6. Ura Oni (5.38 stars, 621 notes)
Download: 9mm Parabellum Bullet - Inferno
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Painfully Easy mapped and hitsounded by Monstrata
Blistering Normal mapped and hitsounded by Monstrata
Traumatized Hard mapped and hitsounded by Monstrata
Agonizing Insane mapped and hitsounded by Monstrata
Excruciating Extra mapped and hitsounded by Monstrata
Tragic Death Extra mapped and hitsounded by Monstrata
Tortured Soul Extra mapped and hitsounded by Monstrata
The Eclipse mapped and hitsounded by Monstrata
Mp3 fixed by pishifat


SPOILER
mp3 stolen from this set
background's quality improved by Midnaait
unstable timing... sad

ty modders
Arrival
Midnaait
Surono
Labyr
IControl
Nardoxyribonucleic
Nwolf
Arrival
Le timing est vraiment pété omfg

[Kantan]

00:10:843 - Tu devrais rajouter un D ici, ça manque sans je trouve
00:17:920 (6) - Tu devrais décaler la note a 00:17:766 - , ça fit beaucoup mieux avec la guitare et la song en général. Si tu le fais fais le pour tous les kiais obvsly.
00:36:228 (33) - Je pense que tu devrais mettre cette note sur le tick blanc d'après.
00:49:151 (48,51) - Pourquoi pas changer ces notes en d, ça diversifiera et ça fit toujours avec la song.
00:58:843 - Comme a 00:10:843 -
01:26:536 (17) - d imo

[Futsuu]

00:01:459 (4,5) - Suggestion, je vois que tu suis la guitare mais pourquoi pas déplacer ces notes comme ça ?
Tu as déjà un doublet qui fais jouer la guitare juste avant et les deux notes comme ça remplissent mieux la musique et linkent mieux avec la suite de la map.
Après tu peux faire pareil une fois sur deux ou sur tout le reste de l'intro.
01:07:151 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - D K K D K D D K ?
01:17:613 (15) - Déplace la note ici 01:17:766 - ?
01:26:382 (30,31) - Pareil je vois que tu veux suivre la guitare mais pk les déplacer comme ça ?
Dans la meme optique qu'en haut, ça remplit et rend un peu mieux + t'as déjà la guitare jouée juste avant.

Bon je propose pas d'ajout de notes sur la diff pour ton délire.

[Muzukashii]

00:02:228 (8) - A changer en d je pense. Ca va mieux avec la structure que tu fais par la suite et avec la musique.
00:30:997 (75) - k ? La voix fit plus avec un k qu'un d et ça suit toujours la logique de 00:30:228 (72,73,74) -
00:40:074 (100) - A déplacer a 00:39:920 - , fit mieux je pense, a faire avec 00:43:766 (105) - ça ensuite. C'est plus agréable a jouer.
00:46:536 (114) - Comme en haut
00:52:074 (140) - A changer en d pour suivre la logique de ton premier pattern au tout début où tu avais mis un d. Le son est le même y'a pas de raison de le changer.
01:05:920 (7) - Déplacer a 01:05:766 - ?

[Oni]

00:02:228 (11) - Pareil que pour la muzu
00:29:151 (89,90) - Je verrais vraiment plus k d au lieu de d k.
00:32:074 (103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111) - Ca fit pas des masses imo... Je proposerais ça ou ça

[Inner Oni]

00:32:074 (133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141) - Pareil que sur la Oni
00:40:843 - ddd ici ?
00:44:382 - 00:44:690 - Deux d ici iront avec la batterie et "lanceront" le stream juste après, ça rend mieux je trouve.

[Ura Oni]

00:11:766 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - Je préférais les streams de la Inner, plus sympa a jouer.. Mais en soi ça va comme ça.

Surpris que tu aies fais les kiais plus simples que sur la Inner. Assez bizarre imo, pourquoi pas rajouter des quintuplets ? Genre 00:15:920 (5,6,7,8) - faire un kkddk puis pareil ici 00:16:843 (13,14,15,16) - etc pour aussi rester dans le style du mapset tout en augmentant la diff ? Et pour la deuxieme partie du kiai faire quelque chose de plus streamy avec par exemple a 00:19:305 (27) - et tu continues jusqu'a la fin de la partie. Ca fait un bon crescendo sur tout le mapset et c'est assez sympa a jouer !

00:29:228 (111) - J'enleverais cette note
00:30:228 (117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125) - Pareil que pour les autres diffs
00:40:843 - ddd, pareil que sur la Inner
00:44:382 - 00:44:690 - La aussi pareil

Voila sympa le mapset globalement. Mais timing pété et pas fan de la musique :o
Topic Starter
Nofool

Arrival wrote:

Le timing est vraiment pété omfg

[Kantan]

00:10:843 - Tu devrais rajouter un D ici, ça manque sans je trouve mouais c'était pour le nb de notes mais bon j'aurais fini par l'add idk
00:17:920 (6) - Tu devrais décaler la note a 00:17:766 - , ça fit beaucoup mieux avec la guitare et la song en général. Si tu le fais fais le pour tous les kiais obvsly. y not, si j'fais un changement ailleurs qui nique le sr je remettrais ceux là comme av tho
00:36:228 (33) - Je pense que tu devrais mettre cette note sur le tick blanc d'après. mouais jsais pas, je laisse pour l'instant mais idk ça pourrait changer
00:49:151 (48,51) - Pourquoi pas changer ces notes en d, ça diversifiera et ça fit toujours avec la song. nan j'sais que y'a changement d'importance pour les 2 derniers mais les ddd me vont pas, j'trouverais peut-être autres chose
00:58:843 - Comme a 00:10:843 - done
01:26:536 (17) - d imo jpref k

[Futsuu]

00:01:459 (4,5) - Suggestion, je vois que tu suis la guitare mais pourquoi pas déplacer ces notes comme ça ?
Tu as déjà un doublet qui fais jouer la guitare juste avant et les deux notes comme ça remplissent mieux la musique et linkent mieux avec la suite de la map. mmm c'est pas une mauvaise suggestion, atm je préfère garder mon truc juste parceque ça colle mieux avec les endroit où j'ai rajouté des notes sur la muzu, mais si quelqu'un me reparle de ça je vais probablement changer en ton truc
Après tu peux faire pareil une fois sur deux ou sur tout le reste de l'intro.
01:07:151 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - D K K D K D D K ? j'préfère la simplicité
01:17:613 (15) - Déplace la note ici 01:17:766 - ? nan je suis la guitare, le son sur 766 est trop low imo
01:26:382 (30,31) - Pareil je vois que tu veux suivre la guitare mais pk les déplacer comme ça ?
Dans la meme optique qu'en haut, ça remplit et rend un peu mieux + t'as déjà la guitare jouée juste avant. same je changerais tout si quelqu'un d'autre me parle de ces parties

Bon je propose pas d'ajout de notes sur la diff pour ton délire.

[Muzukashii]

00:02:228 (8) - A changer en d je pense. Ca va mieux avec la structure que tu fais par la suite et avec la musique. ouais j'ai mit un k juste pour éviter d'enchainer trop de d lol, puis ça fait une variation maigre avec la structure qui suit aussi
00:30:997 (75) - k ? La voix fit plus avec un k qu'un d et ça suit toujours la logique de 00:30:228 (72,73,74) - gnnnnn oui mais j'préfère avoir dddk pour avoir seulement une variation avec - 00:32:843 (85,86,87,88) -.
00:40:074 (100) - A déplacer a 00:39:920 - , fit mieux je pense, a faire avec 00:43:766 (105) - ça ensuite. C'est plus agréable a jouer. ok
00:46:536 (114) - Comme en haut /
00:52:074 (140) - A changer en d pour suivre la logique de ton premier pattern au tout début où tu avais mis un d. Le son est le même y'a pas de raison de le changer. pas faux, je suis pour laisser pour l'instant tho, comme y'a masse de c/c une variation comme ça est pas forcément plus mal sachant que d ou k ça passe
01:05:920 (7) - Déplacer a 01:05:766 - ? ok

[Oni]

00:02:228 (11) - Pareil que pour la muzu /
00:29:151 (89,90) - Je verrais vraiment plus k d au lieu de d k. le son qui m'a fait mettre d k est archi en retard sur le timing... mais s'il était bien placé ça s'entendrait mieux j'pense
00:32:074 (103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111) - Ca fit pas des masses imo... Je proposerais ça ou ça j'pref le mien, fit juste la mélodie de la guitare électrique

[Inner Oni]

00:32:074 (133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141) - Pareil que sur la Oni /
00:40:843 - ddd ici ? ok
00:44:382 - 00:44:690 - Deux d ici iront avec la batterie et "lanceront" le stream juste après, ça rend mieux je trouve. ok

[Ura Oni]

00:11:766 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - Je préférais les streams de la Inner, plus sympa a jouer.. Mais en soi ça va comme ça. les 2 passent, je vois les gens dirent que dkdkdkd c'est dûr, je sais aps d'où mais bon du coup je l'ai choisi pour celle là

Surpris que tu aies fais les kiais plus simples que sur la Inner. Assez bizarre imo, pourquoi pas rajouter des quintuplets ? Genre 00:15:920 (5,6,7,8) - faire un kkddk puis pareil ici 00:16:843 (13,14,15,16) - etc pour aussi rester dans le style du mapset tout en augmentant la diff ? Et pour la deuxieme partie du kiai faire quelque chose de plus streamy avec par exemple a 00:19:305 (27) - et tu continues jusqu'a la fin de la partie. Ca fait un bon crescendo sur tout le mapset et c'est assez sympa a jouer !
ok j'ai changé plus ou moins en ça

00:29:228 (111) - J'enleverais cette note pas moi, idk je changerais ce stream un jour tho
00:30:228 (117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125) - Pareil que pour les autres diffs /
00:40:843 - ddd, pareil que sur la Inner ok
00:44:382 - 00:44:690 - La aussi pareil ok

Voila sympa le mapset globalement. Mais timing pété et pas fan de la musique :o
ty
Midnaait
Hi, bad mod here

[General]

Your BG is 1228x767, let me resize it
Join the kiai times lol

[Futsuu]

00:21:613 - How about making this a k? You have it like d in other diffs
- Same with the other kiai

[Muzu]

You might need to nerf a bit the kiai times, you'll see there is a big gap in difficulty



I recommend to place 1/1 breaks after the finishes ( 00:15:459 and 00:19:151 ) and deleting 00:17:459 - 00:17:536 - 00:21:151 - for a little rest

[Oni]

00:36:228 - // Delete this to make some difference between this and next diff? //
01:13:536 - idk this note seems out of place imo lol

[Inner Oni]

This has the same problem like the Muzu (kind of) with the long streams, check if you could delete some notes to make it a bit easier and for better spread. Screenshot just for comparison



00:11:228 - wtf low volume
01:18:151 - I'd delete this. I'd keep the kkkkD for the hardest diff

Ok the rest is fine, good luck :^)
Surono
dats modding assistance xd
Topic Starter
Nofool

Midnaait wrote:

Hi, bad mod here

[General]

Your BG is 1228x767, let me resize it
Join the kiai times lol yeah...


[Futsuu]

00:21:613 - How about making this a k? You have it like d in other diffs
- Same with the other kiai hmm that's already a k atm xd, i guess wrong itming looking at the comment?

[Muzu]

You might need to nerf a bit the kiai times, you'll see there is a big gap in difficulty



I recommend to place 1/1 breaks after the finishes ( 00:15:459 and 00:19:151 ) and deleting 00:17:459 - 00:17:536 - 00:21:151 - for a little rest
made it less denser in a different way

[Oni]

00:36:228 - // Delete this to make some difference between this and next diff? // deleted following K instead
01:13:536 - idk this note seems out of place imo lol used for the 1/4 instrument right after it, but also to make a lil difference with the previous section

[Inner Oni]

This has the same problem like the Muzu (kind of) with the long streams, check if you could delete some notes to make it a bit easier and for better spread. Screenshot just for comparison


iiiiiiii cant find right ideas to cut the stream because the song is so bad for this part that if i cut it patterns sound too weird x_____x gonna blindly say that inner is out of the spread for now rip

00:11:228 - wtf low volume 8-)
01:18:151 - I'd delete this. I'd keep the kkkkD for the hardest diff well y not i guess

Ok the rest is fine, good luck :^)
ty



Surono wrote:

dats modding assistance xd
haaaa so that was that thing..... i was wondering how the fuck he got those good looking comparisons.. also y do u stop modding rip :|
Surono

Nofool wrote:

haaaa so that was that thing..... i was wondering how the fuck he got those good looking comparisons.. also y do u stop modding rip :|
yus sir, dem noice to use dat. but me lazy xd me mad when alt tab and review on the apps or in-game dem xd.. dem cuz I just need breathink right now :?
Labyr
hi
I do mod after an interval of a half year lol so bad...

[ General]
  1. all diff → a green line is misalignment. please check it.
[ Kantan]
  1. 00:00:690 ~ 00:07:151 - notes color is monotonous. 00:02:536 - and 00:06:228 - try use reverse color of the notes color just before that. (00:00:690 - and 00:04:382 -)
  2. 00:18:228 - and 00:21:920 - this slider is needless? need a break, please put notes to change.
  3. 00:44:997 ~ 00:51:459 - refer to 00:00:690 ~ 00:07:151 -
  4. 01:03:459 (1,2,3) - K - - K - - K ?
  5. 01:20:997 - and 01:24:690 - delete slider and put notes.
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:17:920 - change k use a pattern unlike kkd.
  2. 00:21:613 - change d ^
  3. 00:18:228 - and 00:21:920 - hmm... same as Kantan. please think once.
  4. 01:11:766 - change d fits a vocal.
  5. 01:03:305 (7,8,9) - change ddk ^
  6. 01:20:690 - change k
  7. 01:24:382 - change d
  8. 01:20:997 - and 01:24:690 - same as Kantan.
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:228 - change d?
  2. 00:46:536 - ^
  3. 01:13:536 - add k follow a vocal.
[ Oni]
  1. 00:12:536 - ,00:13:459 - and 00:14:382 - need a break. please note delete.
  2. 00:17:920 - change k fits the sound of the guitar.
  3. 00:21:766 - change d ^
  4. 01:00:536 - ,01:01:459 - and 01:02:382 - delete
  5. 01:20:690 - change k
  6. 01:24:536 - change d
[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:04:151 (46,47,48) - delete notes pattern is very long despite Inner Oni.
  2. 00:17:920 (24,25,26) - ddk → kkk change? fits a guitar.
  3. 00:21:613 (51,52,53) - ddk → ddd
  4. 00:48:459 (225,226,227) - delete
  5. 01:20:690 - change kkk
  6. 01:24:382 - change ddd
  7. 01:26:690 ~ 01:27:151 - you can put ddk ddk.
[ Ura Oni]
  1. 00:17:459 - kkk kkd k → kkd kkk k ?
  2. 00:28:690 - ddddkdkdk → ddddkdkkd fits a guitar, and 00:29:305 - can follow to the drumbeat from here neatly.
  3. 01:20:228 - refer to 00:17:459 -
  4. 01:26:690 - same as Oni, you can put ddkkd k.
it's mapset made very well, good luck.
IControl
iControl's Mod :)


Kantan


00:04:382 (7) - change to d
00:05:305 (9) - d
00:07:151 (12) - d I think all these should end on d because the drum sounds lower also I thought 00:04:382 (7) - d would be nice since it goes well with the guitar


00:11:459 - add d
00:13:305 - add d again to match the vocals


00:59:459 - ^


Futsuu


00:07:151 (23) - d? sounds lower


00:21:459 (24,25) - ctrl g sounds lower than higher


01:11:459 (2) - move to here 01:11:151 -
01:13:305 (7) - move to 01:12:997 - I feel the vocals really stand out here and shouldn't be ignored


01:24:228 (24,25) - ctrl g again


01:25:920 (28) - remove? it doesn't sound nesscary


Inner Oni


01:13:997 (20) - remove
01:14:151 (21) - remove
01:14:228 (21,22) - change to kkk D (should be a triple than a finsher) This sounds better imo and not to over mapped


Ura Oni


00:21:766 (53) - change to d sounds lower


01:06:536 (11,12,13) - change to d d d I didn't think the finisher was necessary and it didn't sound very high here so this fits


01:26:536 - ->01:27:151 - You could add more notes here but I think it sounds fine either way up 2 u :)


The diffs I didn't mod I thought there sounded fine Good luck!
Topic Starter
Nofool

Labyr wrote:

hi
I do mod after an interval of a half year lol so bad... np 8-)

[ General]
  1. all diff → a green line is misalignment. please check it.
[ Kantan]
  1. 00:00:690 ~ 00:07:151 - notes color is monotonous. 00:02:536 - and 00:06:228 - try use reverse color of the notes color just before that. (00:00:690 - and 00:04:382 -) i think current structure has enough variety (and fit more the song than reverse)
  2. 00:18:228 - and 00:21:920 - this slider is needless? need a break, please put notes to change. haa fits well the guitar imo
  3. 00:44:997 ~ 00:51:459 - refer to 00:00:690 ~ 00:07:151 - changed a bit
  4. 01:03:459 (1,2,3) - K - - K - - K ? done
  5. 01:20:997 - and 01:24:690 - delete slider and put notes. /
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:17:920 - change k use a pattern unlike kkd.
  2. 00:21:613 - change d ^ applied both
  3. 00:18:228 - and 00:21:920 - hmm... same as Kantan. please think once. /
  4. 01:11:766 - change d fits a vocal.
  5. 01:03:305 (7,8,9) - change ddk ^ i prefer current patterns
  6. 01:20:690 - change k
  7. 01:24:382 - change d applied both
  8. 01:20:997 - and 01:24:690 - same as Kantan. /
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:228 - change d? prefer k
  2. 00:46:536 - ^ /
  3. 01:13:536 - add k follow a vocal. done
[ Oni]
  1. 00:12:536 - ,00:13:459 - and 00:14:382 - need a break. please note delete. patterns are too simple and fit instrumental, i dont think it needs break
  2. 00:17:920 - change k fits the sound of the guitar.
  3. 00:21:766 - change d ^ applied both
  4. 01:00:536 - ,01:01:459 - and 01:02:382 - delete /
  5. 01:20:690 - change k
  6. 01:24:536 - change d applied both
[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:04:151 (46,47,48) - delete notes pattern is very long despite Inner Oni. plays weird with break because of unstable timing x_x
  2. 00:17:920 (24,25,26) - ddk → kkk change? fits a guitar. i think ddk is better
  3. 00:21:613 (51,52,53) - ddk → ddd ok
  4. 00:48:459 (225,226,227) - delete /
  5. 01:20:690 - change kkk no
  6. 01:24:382 - change ddd yes
  7. 01:26:690 ~ 01:27:151 - you can put ddk ddk. this sound is too low and all the rest follow the guitar melody
[ Ura Oni]
  1. 00:17:459 - kkk kkd k → kkd kkk k ? i prefer current pattern
  2. 00:28:690 - ddddkdkdk → ddddkdkkd fits a guitar, and 00:29:305 - can follow to the drumbeat from here neatly. hmm i prefer ddddkdkdk because kdkdk fits the previous patterns
  3. 01:20:228 - refer to 00:17:459 - /
  4. 01:26:690 - same as Oni, you can put ddkkd k. /
it's mapset made very well, good luck.
thanks Labyr!


IControl wrote:

iControl's Mod :)


Kantan


00:04:382 (7) - change to d
00:05:305 (9) - d i pref keeping the same color here, i don't like trying too hard for variety
00:07:151 (12) - d I think all these should end on d because the drum sounds lower also I thought 00:04:382 (7) - d would be nice since it goes well with the guitar im just like making a lil difference on those pattern to show the guitar's intensity change, not really trying to perfectly follow it


00:11:459 - add d
00:13:305 - add d again to match the vocals hmm might be seen as too hard yet, im just getting space for long sliders


00:59:459 - ^


Futsuu


00:07:151 (23) - d? sounds lower /


00:21:459 (24,25) - ctrl g sounds lower than higher changed those


01:11:459 (2) - move to here 01:11:151 -
01:13:305 (7) - move to 01:12:997 - I feel the vocals really stand out here and shouldn't be ignored im just trying to get clear break and separating things as much as possible instead of consistently having notes all over the part lol, so yeah ide rather miss that vocal


01:24:228 (24,25) - ctrl g again changed


01:25:920 (28) - remove? it doesn't sound nesscary consistency with similar parts


Inner Oni


01:13:997 (20) - remove
01:14:151 (21) - remove
01:14:228 (21,22) - change to kkk D (should be a triple than a finsher) This sounds better imo and not to over mapped hmm i think kkddk fits more, even drums


Ura Oni


00:21:766 (53) - change to d sounds lower too many kkd


01:06:536 (11,12,13) - change to d d d I didn't think the finisher was necessary and it didn't sound very high here so this fits this part is meh, timing is so unstable that i chosed to make it all finishers so it's not too noticeable honestly lol


01:26:536 - ->01:27:151 - You could add more notes here but I think it sounds fine either way up 2 u :) just emphasizing the melody a bit i guess


The diffs I didn't mod I thought there sounded fine Good luck!
Thanks a lot!
raty919
Hope this beatmap will be ranked.!
I am wholeheartedly with you
Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi, here is the M4M as requested. (Finally I have some time to mod again...)

  • [General]
  1. You should resnap and unify the kiai time of all difficulties.
  2. Time signature is 4/4 in some sessions of Futsuu, Oni, Inner Oni and Ura Oni. Please turn them to red lines, make them as 3/4 and inherit again.
  3. Remove unnecessary timing points in the Onis (e.g. 00:15:382 and 01:18:151 - ).
  4. Source: ベルセルク
  5. Tags: Add "Berserk 2016", remove "ベルセルク"
  • [Kantan]
  1. 01:12:074 (3) - consider changing this note to d for the pitch decrease of vocal ? This would result in a good contrast to 01:13:613 (5,6) -
  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:50:228 (86) - maybe k to keep it consistent with 00:04:074 (12,18) and 00:48:382 (80) - ?
  2. 01:12:074 (5) - same as Kantan
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:31:151 (70,72) - swapping these notes to k d would accompany the vocal nicely. In this way the triplet at 00:31:613 (73,74,75) - could be further emphasized as well.
  2. 01:12:074 (6) - same as Kantan
  3. 01:13:613 (12) - maybe d as you did in Kantan and Futsuu ?
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:31:151 (97,99) - same as Muzukashii
  2. 01:12:074 (7) - same as Kantan
  3. 01:13:613 (14) - same as Muzukashii
  • [Inner Oni]

    This difficulty is too similar to Ura Oni in terms of note density. You should either remove it or make it simpler by cracking the 1/4 chains. Rename Ura to Inner if you choose the former.
  • [Ura Oni]
  1. 00:31:151 (127,129) - same as Muzukashii
  2. 01:18:151 (43) - this note could be removed to free the subsequent big note considering how 01:21:766 - is mapped. If you think that a triplet lacks emphasis, you may add d at 01:17:766 and 01:17:843 - and then move the timing point at 01:17:843 - to 01:17:766 -
You may call me back after reaching +12 SP~ :D
Topic Starter
Nofool

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the M4M as requested. (Finally I have some time to mod again...)

  • [General]
  1. You should resnap and unify the kiai time of all difficulties. ? this was done on the latest version already
  2. Time signature is 4/4 in some sessions of Futsuu, Oni, Inner Oni and Ura Oni. Please turn them to red lines, make them as 3/4 and inherit again. i don't get that part, there is only one time signature and this is 3/4 in all difficulties
  3. Remove unnecessary timing points in the Onis (e.g. 00:15:382 and 01:18:151 - ). Those are used to prevent SV bugs as the SV is supposed to change just for the kiai, keeping only the second line may create a bug where the first note is not at the right speed, this happens a lot in SV maps and using another timing point a bit earlier fixes the issue. This technique is rarely/almost never used on ranked maps as they rarely use SV changes, there are a few example of this bug on ranked maps, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/405815 for example on this one that was ranked recently, you can see at - 03:32:471 (955) - the the note and the line are not coming at the same speed while they should be.
  4. Source: ベルセルク
  5. Tags: Add "Berserk 2016", remove "ベルセルク"
  • [Kantan]
  1. 01:12:074 (3) - consider changing this note to d for the pitch decrease of vocal ? This would result in a good contrast to 01:13:613 (5,6) - ok


  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:50:228 (86) - maybe k to keep it consistent with 00:04:074 (12,18) and 00:48:382 (80) - ? id like to keep just for some variation, same happens for - 00:52:074 (92,93) -.
  2. 01:12:074 (5) - same as Kantan
ok

  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:31:151 (70,72) - swapping these notes to k d would accompany the vocal nicely. In this way the triplet at 00:31:613 (73,74,75) - could be further emphasized as well. changed those to d d k d kkk and made what you said at - 00:32:997 (80,81,82) - instead
  2. 01:12:074 (6) - same as Kantan
  3. 01:13:613 (12) - maybe d as you did in Kantan and Futsuu ? both done
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:31:151 (97,99) - same as Muzukashii emphasizing the melody more than the vocal this time, si i'd rather keep as it is
  2. 01:12:074 (7) - same as Kantan
  3. 01:13:613 (14) - same as Muzukashii both done
  • [Inner Oni]

    This difficulty is too similar to Ura Oni in terms of note density. You should either remove it or make it simpler by cracking the 1/4 chains. Rename Ura to Inner if you choose the former. i did cut the long streams, but to be honest i dont see the density as an issue at all, ura doesnt necessarily means harder than inner, it's fine as long as they provide different patterns.. there ranked maps having inner and ura very similar, i just can't call them both inner.
  • [Ura Oni]
  1. 00:31:151 (127,129) - same as Muzukashii /
  2. 01:18:151 (43) - this note could be removed to free the subsequent big note considering how 01:21:766 - is mapped. If you think that a triplet lacks emphasis, you may add d at 01:17:766 and 01:17:843 - and then move the timing point at 01:17:843 - to 01:17:766 - it definitely plays better with this k to me, i would rather keep it
You may call me back after reaching +12 SP~ :D
updated
Nardoxyribonucleic
A quick recheck here. (no kd)

  • [General]
  1. Time signature is 4/4 in some sessions of Futsuu, Oni, Inner Oni and Ura Oni in the editor. Although it does not affect the actual gameplay, please turn them to red lines, make them as 3/4 and inherit again to avoid confusion.
    (screenshot at 00:16:074 - in Futsuu showing 4/4 metronome in the editor)
  2. The map you showed has such a problem because the start of the kiai is not snapped. If it is snapped at 03:32:470 - but not 03:32:471 - , both the note and the line will be in sync. So I would strongly recommend you to remove unnecessary green lines in Oni, Inner Oni and Ura Oni as shown below.
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:15:382 - this green line could be removed.
  2. 01:18:151 - same as ^
  • [Inner Oni]
  1. 00:15:382 - same as Oni
  2. 01:13:613 (17) - could be changed to d as well to make it consistent with Oni.
  • [Ura Oni]
  1. 00:15:382 - same as Oni
  2. 01:25:382 - maybe add a timing point here with 1.0x SV as you did in Oni and Inner Oni ? This would also cohere with the slowdown you made at 00:22:613 -
Topic Starter
Nofool

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

A quick recheck here. (no kd)

  • [General]
  1. Time signature is 4/4 in some sessions of Futsuu, Oni, Inner Oni and Ura Oni in the editor. Although it does not affect the actual gameplay, please turn them to red lines, make them as 3/4 and inherit again to avoid confusion.
    (screenshot at 00:16:074 - in Futsuu showing 4/4 metronome in the editor) this is not the case in my version of the map... i have 3/4 absolutely everywhere, same screen on futsuu with no change :
  2. The map you showed has such a problem because the start of the kiai is not snapped. If it is snapped at 03:32:470 - but not 03:32:471 - , both the note and the line will be in sync. So I would strongly recommend you to remove unnecessary green lines in Oni, Inner Oni and Ura Oni as shown below. i mean this actually happens with correctly snapped lines/notes too sometimes, but alright i will rmove them and make sure there is no issue
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:15:382 - this green line could be removed.
  2. 01:18:151 - same as ^ done
  • [Inner Oni]
  1. 00:15:382 - same as Oni done
  2. 01:13:613 (17) - could be changed to d as well to make it consistent with Oni. done
  • [Ura Oni]
  1. 00:15:382 - same as Oni
  2. 01:25:382 - maybe add a timing point here with 1.0x SV as you did in Oni and Inner Oni ? This would also cohere with the slowdown you made at 00:22:613 - this time i would like to keep the higher SV because that is the last diff/i think the stream suddenly on slower SV doesnt play as well as the patterns on first part
removed green lines before kiais, about the 4/4 i honestly dont see it anywhere, i dont have what is on your screen. I even deleted and re-downloaded the map i still dont see any 4/4 at all
Nardoxyribonucleic
Alright, the set looks fine now. Difficulty spread is acceptable to me overall and rest moments are sufficient in lower difficulties.

Bubbled~
Nwolf
oh a bubbled set

[General]

00:37:613 - Very calm part compared to the rest of the song, maybe you wanna use a lower volume (50% would make sense maybe)

[Muzukashii]
00:01:305 - 00:03:151 - Muzukashii is the only difficulty that features a difficulty curve in the beginning (00:04:843 - ) which by itself I find a very nice idea actually, but it's not present in the other difficulties, leading to inconsistency across the set. Might as well just map the two mentioned spots.
> 00:45:613 - 00:47:459 - same story

[Oni]

01:13:536 (13) - Don't quite understand this note. It makes sense in Inner Oni because it's followed by several more notes, but here it just feels inconsistent with 01:11:690 -

[Inner Oni]

00:23:536 (63) - Maybe consider deleting this. Unlike Ura Oni where the colors help a little bit to differentiate between the guitar sounds it's just a huge bunch of one sound here.
> 00:25:382 (80) - 00:29:074 (113) - same

00:40:843 - same in Ura Oni: With the general suggestion, either remove this volume change or have this be louder. I don't quite get why this has a lower volume anyway as this is more sound than the other notes here.



very good set
Topic Starter
Nofool

Nwolf wrote:

oh a bubbled set

[General]

00:37:613 - Very calm part compared to the rest of the song, maybe you wanna use a lower volume (50% would make sense maybe) changed on all difficulties to 70% volum

[Muzukashii]
00:01:305 - 00:03:151 - Muzukashii is the only difficulty that features a difficulty curve in the beginning (00:04:843 - ) which by itself I find a very nice idea actually, but it's not present in the other difficulties, leading to inconsistency across the set. Might as well just map the two mentioned spots.
> 00:45:613 - 00:47:459 - same story removed notes on both spots

00:23:074 (41) - All diffs use this as a gap to split 00:22:843 - and 00:23:151 - , Muzukashii is again the only one not doing so. It takes away emphasis for 00:23:151 - so it's a rather disturbing note. One solution would be moving it to 00:22:920 - , another solution would be moving it 00:23:228 - AND deleting 00:22:997 (40) - .
> 00:24:690 - 00:28:382 - repeat if applied
/

[Oni]

01:13:536 (13) - Don't quite understand this note. It makes sense in Inner Oni because it's followed by several more notes, but here it just feels inconsistent with 01:11:690 - used 1/4 here to kind of emphasize the 1/4 rhythm that stars on - 01:13:613 (14) -. having only 1/2 like for the previous part you mentionned sounds a bit empty to me, it is mapped the same way in lower difficulties because they are undermapped as a whole anyways. doesnt disturbe me while playing
[Inner Oni]

00:23:536 (63) - Maybe consider deleting this. Unlike Ura Oni where the colors help a little bit to differentiate between the guitar sounds it's just a huge bunch of one sound here.
> 00:25:382 (80) - 00:29:074 (113) - same removed 2 notes for each spot

00:40:843 - same in Ura Oni: With the general suggestion, either remove this volume change or have this be louder. I don't quite get why this has a lower volume anyway as this is more sound than the other notes here. other notes on this part are mainly on the vocal reasons explained in pm



very good set
Nwolf
you can't live without the fire
Monstrata
Add this to your map description!

Kantan mapped and hitsounded by Nofool
Futsuu mapped and hitsounded by Nofool
Muzukashii mapped and hitsounded by Nofool
Oni mapped and hitsounded by Nofool
Inner Oni mapped and hitsounded by Nofool
Ura Oni mapped and hitsounded by Nofool
Mp3 fixed by pishifat


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