Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Hi~ 我来mod了..下面的只是建议而已
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.
红色 = 我特别觉得这个应该被改掉
帖很长，抱歉= =
[Insane]*这是外国人的GD 所以用英语写了 如果这个GD不是他管,你又想看中文就PM我吧 >.>
Lower the volume, especially in the Normal sections. It's quite a bit noisy.I suggest you use more soft-whistle than soft-finish, the latter one is quite noisy, and most soft-finishes you used in this map could be replaced with soft-whistle.
00:10:628 (9) - new combo
00:10:835 (3) - maybe delete this?
00:13:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - those notes doesn't fit the song. please maintain the rhythm pattern used in the second last stanza, as demonstrated with image:
00:17:972 - add circle here
00:18:076 - ^
00:30:490 (8) - new combo and remove new combo on 00:31:317 (1)
00:58:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make a volume tween (increasing) here, and maybe use Normal set.
00:31:731 (10) - new combo this if you followed the line above
01:20:972 (5) - new combo
01:23:248 (4) - move this up a grid. fixes spacing, and makes 01:24:386 (2) perfectly hidden
[Normal+]减小一下音量吧,尤其是normal的section 挺吵的00:10:628 (5) - new combo
00:11:455 (1,2) - slider画的不是很完美 如果觉得下面的图更好就用给出的代码吧
SPOILER
176,304,11455,6,0,B|142:232|176:160,1,150,0|8
293,145,12283,2,0,B|327:217|293:289,1,150,0|8
用法:用记事本开osu，搜索11455，把那两行换成给出的代码
00:17:248 (9) - 减1个repeat 改完了别忘记 00:17:662 补上clap 改过重复次数后hitsound会丢
00:23:662 (6,7,8) - 这是歪的...看你slider是横的 摆正了吧00:37:110 (7) - slider画的实在不好看 结尾处的节点和开始节点X位置应该一样(建议 x=264) 把时间线调到00:37:524, 然后拖红点，直到红点在球心而且slider在00:37:938 结束 像这样:
00:51:386 (2) - 中间repeat没意义 换成00:51:386 00:51:593 两个circle比较好
00:56:145 (5) - 建议用0.5x或者0.75x的slider速度
01:06:076 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 放歪了 建议开grid snap来放正方形. 01:08:972 (4) 也没有stack好01:09:386 (1) - repeat没藏好
01:16:421 (4) - 减一个repeat
01:25:731 (7) - spacing
[Easy]个人觉得开头节奏下的不是很好 以下的你可以试一试然后考虑是否改
以下说的都是指时间轴，如果决定按这样改的话请重新排列一下
00:08:145 (1) - 结尾加clap
00:09:800 (2,3) - 移到00:09:386, 2上加clap
00:12:283 (1) - 移到00:11:455, 开头去掉clap 结尾加clap
00:13:938 (2) - 移到00:12:283, 开头结尾去掉clap 中间加上clap
00:13:938 - 00:14:352 - 00:14:766 加note, circle或者slider都可以. 00:13:938 - 00:14:352 加上clap
00:56:145 (1) - 结束在00:57:800
这个diff应该减少遮挡，重新排列一下，毕竟是easy 要考虑一下新玩家的感受啊歌不错>.> 希望加油~ Star
