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3L - Spring of Dreams

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Dotsu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年7月29日 at 19:02:42

Artist: 3L
Title: Spring of Dreams
Source: Touhou
Tags: karenying Verdisphena ufo Undefined Fantastic Object nazrin at the end of spring nazurin DJ Command NJK Record TOHO EURO FLASH vol. 1
BPM: 153
Filesize: 20407kb
Play Time: 03:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.64 stars, 226 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 551 notes)
  3. Karen (5 stars, 683 notes)
  4. Normal (4.38 stars, 358 notes)
  5. Verdi's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1182 notes)
Download: 3L - Spring of Dreams
Download: 3L - Spring of Dreams (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 18th map~

4-24 : Video added! Thanks Suzully :D
And High quality video downloads here

Map: impossiblexu
Guest Diffs: Verdisphena karenying
Skin: CheZDa(Default numbers and reversearrow from his Minimal Skin) impossiblexu
Title: Spring of Dreams
Vocal: 3L
Arrange: DJ Command
Circle: NJK Record
Album: TOHO EURO FLASH vol. 1
Original: 春の湊に (At the end of spring)
jnkinsu
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Nymph
嗨~妮姆芙的新手MOD 请自行参考~

BG:1024*768 可能你自己没看见吧..

Easy:

很好呢 没发现什么..

Normal:

也很好呢 也是建议在那里加点CLAP

HARD:

强烈建议AR+1 !

01:01:229 (2) - 建议这里叠起来?分开感觉有点乱
01:01:425 (3) - 这里叠起来也比分开放舒服...可能是个人习惯么
02:16:524 (2) - 同上
02:16:720 (3) - 同上
02:06:818 - 建议这段旋律后面加点hitsound? 也许加几个CLAP在结尾点缀会更好 仅仅是建议
02:57:014 - 休息时间似乎有点太长了 03:09:563 - 从这开始再加点NOTES?

嗯..似乎没再发现什么了..真的很喜欢这么干净的Hitsounds MOD了这个图 我倒是学会了不少呢..


star~

PS: Ayane - ribbon 这个图EASY难度耗费我大量人参去杠呢.. >.<
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Nymph_ wrote:

嗨~妮姆芙的新手MOD 请自行参考~

BG:1024*768 可能你自己没看见吧..

Easy:

很好呢 没发现什么..

Normal:

也很好呢 也是建议在那里加点CLAP

HARD:

强烈建议AR+1 !

01:01:229 (2) - 建议这里叠起来?分开感觉有点乱
01:01:425 (3) - 这里叠起来也比分开放舒服...可能是个人习惯么
02:16:524 (2) - 同上
02:16:720 (3) - 同上
02:06:818 - 建议这段旋律后面加点hitsound? 也许加几个CLAP在结尾点缀会更好 仅仅是建议
02:57:014 - 休息时间似乎有点太长了 03:09:563 - 从这开始再加点NOTES?

嗯..似乎没再发现什么了..真的很喜欢这么干净的Hitsounds MOD了这个图 我倒是学会了不少呢..


star~

PS: Ayane - ribbon 这个图EASY难度耗费我大量人参去杠呢.. >.<
谢谢你的mod啊~ 很喜欢你的第一张图 :D
Sallad4ever
Hi impossiblexu~

[General]
- I'm not very knowledgeable with touhou music but is this a remix of the original song? well if it is don't forget to add the original title in the tags
- add kiai in the first chorus too? I know it maybe a bit long but only using kiai in the last chorus is a bit unfair
- The BG is weirdly stretched can you find any better one?
- the end of the Hard diff had an extra kiai fountain but the other 2 diff are not, I guess you forgot them~
- the second break is very too long, please map half of it. You've already bookmark half of the break so I assumed you'll map it. Really you have to map it

[Easy]
01:33:092 (2) - the only slanted slider in this diff and doesn't look very good either, maybe make them into curve or wavy slider

[Normal]

01:31:916 (7) - too cramp, just make in into a simple curve or wave slider
02:16:229 (1) - this overlap, by the previous slider, really bothers me. I suggest to move the end point so the slider body won't get overlapped
03:34:269 (7) - I really2 can't agree with this slider. Mostly because how it cover the high pitch rise in 03:34:661, it's better to put a circle or a slider in there (just like in Hard) or cut the slider by 1/2 then add a long slider in 03:34:661

[Hard]
00:50:739 (9) - the jump is too mini imo add some more distance?
01:39:367 (5) - uh...spacing
01:40:935 (10) - rather than using a 1/4 end slider, it's better if you follow the keyboard? sound in the music
02:38:386 (2,3,4,5) - I don't really like the flow of this pattern, kinda awkward. This is my personal preference btw
03:55:837 (9) - change the shape? maybe I just don't like a simple liner slider :P
I was expecting that you'll use some 1/4 in this song cause some of the vocal are on it~

That's all I guess, the thing that's bother me the most is that 2nd break. Also this vocal is kinda like a Nightcore mix lol
Anyway Good Luck~
Star
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi impossiblexu~

[General]
- I'm not very knowledgeable with touhou music but is this a remix of the original song? well if it is don't forget to add the original title in the tags Added
- add kiai in the first chorus too? I know it maybe a bit long but only using kiai in the last chorus is a bit unfair
- The BG is weirdly stretched can you find any better one? This is the only BG that I can find
- the end of the Hard diff had an extra kiai fountain but the other 2 diff are not, I guess you forgot them~ I forgot it :P
- the second break is very too long, please map half of it. You've already bookmark half of the break so I assumed you'll map it. Really you have to map it I don't want to increase the maximum score in hard diff

[Easy]
01:33:092 (2) - the only slanted slider in this diff and doesn't look very good either, maybe make them into curve or wavy slider changed

[Normal]

01:31:916 (7) - too cramp, just make in into a simple curve or wave slider make it easy to read
02:16:229 (1) - this overlap, by the previous slider, really bothers me. I suggest to move the end point so the slider body won't get overlapped fixed
03:34:269 (7) - I really2 can't agree with this slider. Mostly because how it cover the high pitch rise in 03:34:661, it's better to put a circle or a slider in there (just like in Hard) or cut the slider by 1/2 then add a long slider in 03:34:661

[Hard]
00:50:739 (9) - the jump is too mini imo add some more distance?
01:39:367 (5) - uh...spacing Just make it more smooth
01:40:935 (10) - rather than using a 1/4 end slider, it's better if you follow the keyboard? sound in the music
02:38:386 (2,3,4,5) - I don't really like the flow of this pattern, kinda awkward. This is my personal preference btw
03:55:837 (9) - change the shape? maybe I just don't like a simple liner slider :P
I was expecting that you'll use some 1/4 in this song cause some of the vocal are on it~

That's all I guess, the thing that's bother me the most is that 2nd break. Also this vocal is kinda like a Nightcore mix lol :)
Anyway Good Luck~
Star
Thank you very much~ :D
Backstep
Hello impossiblexu ~ XD

[General]
- I think your sound it's okay for me
- please edit nazrin to nazurin in your tag.
- add something in your tag ?
SPOILER
Title: Spring of Dreams
Vocal: 3L
Arrange: DJ Command
Circle: NJK Record
Album: TOHO EURO FLASH vol. 1
Original: 春の湊に
(At the end of spring)


My Noob Suggestion O_o"
- in Easy difficulty add custom slider-tick in your beatmap ?

Easy~
01:18:975 (5) - end of slider add finish.
01:31:524 (4) - ^
01:53:484 (1) - add green timing with normal sound until 01:54:269 ?

Normal~
01:19:759 (3) - front of slider add finish.
01:32:308 (3) - ^
01:53:484 (1) - add green timing with normal sound until 01:54:269 ?

Hard~
00:49:367 (4) - x : 240 , y : 244
00:51:131 (10)- x : 496 , y : 100
01:19:759 (3) - front of slider add finish.
01:32:308 (3) - ^
01:53:484 (1) - add green timing with normal sound until 01:54:269 ?
Topic Starter
Dotsu

backstep wrote:

Hello impossiblexu ~ XD

[General]
- I think your sound it's okay for me
- please edit nazrin to nazurin in your tag.
- add something in your tag ?
SPOILER
Title: Spring of Dreams
Vocal: 3L
Arrange: DJ Command
Circle: NJK Record
Album: TOHO EURO FLASH vol. 1
Original: 春の湊に
(At the end of spring)

Added

My Noob Suggestion O_o"
- in Easy difficulty add custom slider-tick in your beatmap ?

Easy~
01:18:975 (5) - end of slider add finish.
01:31:524 (4) - ^
01:53:484 (1) - add green timing with normal sound until 01:54:269 ? Added

Normal~
01:19:759 (3) - front of slider add finish.
01:32:308 (3) - ^
01:53:484 (1) - add green timing with normal sound until 01:54:269 ? Added

Hard~
00:49:367 (4) - x : 240 , y : 244
00:51:131 (10)- x : 496 , y : 100
01:19:759 (3) - front of slider add finish.
01:32:308 (3) - ^
01:53:484 (1) - add green timing with normal sound until 01:54:269 ?Added
Thank you very much~ :D
Cirno
Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.

[General]
BG看起来像是被纵向挤压过了
(看之前的mod,应该是由正常比例改成这样的 改分辨率请按比例剪裁然后根据需要缩放,不要直接挤压)


[Hard]
送分送SShard <3
Map is nice~ So just some minor suggestions here
00:40:543 (7,8) - 有点浪费歌曲本身的蓝线节奏 换成00:40:543 - 00:40:837 + 1 repeat的slider? 后面有好多类似的... 现在这样也挺好 只是感觉稍微有点boring
00:49:955 (5) - new combo?
00:49:955 (5,7) - 建议和00:50:739 (9,10) 一样用Normal音效 并且做一个渐强,00:50:151 (6,8) 保持soft
00:57:406 (7) - new combo & remove new combo on 00:57:798 (1)
01:02:504 (7) - new combo?
01:02:504 (7,8) - 同00:49:955 (5,7),7 8 开头用Normal ..?
01:03:484 (11) - 有点歪 向上一点..?大概半格
01:27:406 (7) - 是要放到01:27:602 (8)中间的话关grid向下一点
02:17:798 (7) - 同00:49:955 (5,7)
03:59:759 (7) - 叠回03:58:778 (1,2,3), 或者放四边形中间?

[Normal]
No spinners....? 按hard的位置加一个? 03:20:543
02:03:288 (7) - 删去从开始数第二个control point? 或者翻转一下,趋势向 02:03:680 (1) 的会比较好看 >.>
02:49:955 (7) - like this?
02:56:622 (8) - 中心对称再Ctrl+R可能会好点...?
03:54:661 (3) - 删去最左边的那个control point?

Cirno wrote:

- Total map length (sum of all diffs) < 10mins
所以Easy就不看了>.> impossiblexu's Easy must be perfect :D
Star~
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Cirno wrote:

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.

[General]
BG看起来像是被纵向挤压过了 太神了 这都能看出来
(看之前的mod,应该是由正常比例改成这样的 改分辨率请按比例剪裁然后根据需要缩放,不要直接挤压)[/color]
已经调好了

[Hard]
送分送SShard <3
Map is nice~ So just some minor suggestions here
00:40:543 (7,8) - 有点浪费歌曲本身的蓝线节奏 换成00:40:543 - 00:40:837 + 1 repeat的slider? 后面有好多类似的... 现在这样也挺好 只是感觉稍微有点boring 这样一改 整个图风格就变了 :P
00:49:955 (5) - new combo?
00:49:955 (5,7) - 建议和00:50:739 (9,10) 一样用Normal音效 并且做一个渐强,00:50:151 (6,8) 保持soft
00:57:406 (7) - new combo & remove new combo on 00:57:798 (1)
01:02:504 (7) - new combo?
01:02:504 (7,8) - 同00:49:955 (5,7),7 8 开头用Normal ..?
01:03:484 (11) - 有点歪 向上一点..?大概半格
01:27:406 (7) - 是要放到01:27:602 (8)中间的话关grid向下一点 √ (话说我做图从来不开Grid snap
02:17:798 (7) - 同00:49:955 (5,7)
03:59:759 (7) - 叠回03:58:778 (1,2,3), 或者放四边形中间? 摆了个五边形

[Normal]
No spinners....? 按hard的位置加一个? 03:20:543
02:03:288 (7) - 删去从开始数第二个control point? 或者翻转一下,趋势向 02:03:680 (1) 的会比较好看 >.>
02:49:955 (7) - like this?
SPOILER
[attachment=0:53af8]xu_sldr.JPG[/attachment:53af8]
02:56:622 (8) - 中心对称再Ctrl+R可能会好点...?
03:54:661 (3) - 删去最左边的那个control point?

Cirno wrote:

- Total map length (sum of all diffs) < 10mins
所以Easy就不看了>.> impossiblexu's Easy must be perfect :D
Star~
非常感谢 :D :D :D
Mastodonio
hello)

delete osb file if you are not going to make here SB.
I think that offset 26442 is much better here)
02:57:014 - 03:22:112 : Break Point is more than 20 seconds..it is not allowed. Make it shorter
Nice hitcircles lol)

Easy:
Better to put HP Drain 3 and AR 3
OD 3?


Normal:
Well,it looks good but if I were you I'd increase a little Distance Spacing :/
Hp Drain 4?

Hard:
Hp drain 8 is too much for Hard diff O.O Put 5 or 6

That is all! Star!
Tony
[Normal]
03:09:563- map that break from here, i think it's more fun to play that instrumental part :D

[Hard]
01:56:622 (8) - i'm nazy now, this slider looks bad :( do it like this :

i wanted to paste the code. but i don't know...
03:09:563- map that break from here, like i said in normal :D

love the mapset. nothing to complain about..
star~.
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Tonoicutzu wrote:

[Normal]
03:09:563- map that break from here, i think it's more fun to play that instrumental part :D

[Hard]
01:56:622 (8) - i'm nazy now, this slider looks bad :( do it like this :
i wanted to paste the code. but i don't know...
03:09:563- map that break from here, like i said in normal :D

love the mapset. nothing to complain about..
star~.

Giorgos wrote:

hello)

delete osb file if you are not going to make here SB.
I think that offset 26442 is much better here)
02:57:014 - 03:22:112 : Break Point is more than 20 seconds..it is not allowed. Make it shorter
Nice hitcircles lol)

Easy:
Better to put HP Drain 3 and AR 3
OD 3?


Normal:
Well,it looks good but if I were you I'd increase a little Distance Spacing :/
Hp Drain 4?

Hard:
Hp drain 8 is too much for Hard diff O.O Put 5 or 6

That is all! Star!
Fixed some~ Thanks a lot :D
loveFantasy
hi

沒發現什麼問題, 所以扔個星

[General]
- 建議tags只用原曲名, Nazrin 和 Undefined Fantastic Object, 其他字串應該很少人會用來蒐

[Easy]
- 這個notes密度建議ar+1

[Normal]
- cool

[Hard]
- cool
<02:56:237> (3,4,5) 擺得不太好看
<03:58:198> (7) x:360 y:156
Verdisphena
Can make a taiko diff? x.x
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Verdisphena wrote:

Can make a taiko diff? x.x
Of course you can :D
Topic Starter
Dotsu

loveFantasy wrote:

hi

沒發現什麼問題, 所以扔個星

[General]
- 建議tags只用原曲名, Nazrin 和 Undefined Fantastic Object, 其他字串應該很少人會用來蒐 Tag什么的越多越好 XD

[Easy]
- 這個notes密度建議ar+1

[Normal]
- cool

[Hard]
- cool
<02:56:237> (3,4,5) 擺得不太好看
<03:58:198> (7) x:360 y:156
太谢谢了~ :D
Kyonko Hizara
:)
chungskale
:D
Verdisphena
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