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Kayo Aiko - Hitomi no Naka no Meikyuu

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rika_old
103 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
rika_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 23 kwietnia 2011 at 16:31:24

Artist: Kayo Aiko
Title: Hitomi no Naka no Meikyuu
BPM: 129
Filesize: 5995kb
Play Time: 02:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,55 stars, 399 notes)
  2. Normal (3,66 stars, 293 notes)
Download: Kayo Aiko - Hitomi no Naka no Meikyuu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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<from the deepest cave>
Last edited by rika_old , edited 48 times in total.
rika_old
103 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
rika_old
Bring Up My Post
awp
osu! Alumni
11,869 posts
Here since the beginning
awp
First offset is 1,320 or so (Pretty hard to tell without a beat). Second looks good. Resnap your notes as needed.

Your beatspacing is good but your notes are snapped randomly, some using eighth notes. Easy maps rarely snap outside of 1/1 and 1/2, so set the Beat Snap Divisor to 1/2 and go over your snap placements. Your beatspacing is pretty good, but don't get too out of hand for Easy modes - if you want to do half-beat streams they should be either stacked or very close together (00:57:41 (1,2,3,4) [Easy] - this is a bit dangerous). Also watch out for things like 01:12:06 [Easy] (1,2,3,4,5,6) as the beatspacing will throw people off.

There's plenty of potential to make this map quite good once you've got the basics down. If you've got any more questions after this, go ahead and ask.
rika_old
103 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
rika_old
yes, sir!


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done :)

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Background is prevert?
Darkytron
6 posts
Joined August 2008
Darkytron
Fine song! Hope i could beat a record on it xD
Utena
90 posts
Joined June 2008
Utena
Song is nice and the maps looks good xD
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Revived.
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
MoonFragrance
[General]
Use grid level 3
Use distance snap and replace all.
Resnap all note.
Set a Preview Point ad 01:04:496

[Normal]
Too many 1/4 beats. It isn't good for normal
01:28:101 (1) - remove new combo
01:49:729 (1) - remove new combo
01:51:124 (6) - new combo
01:53:450 (1) - remove new combo
02:01:589 (1) - ^
02:02:287 (2) - new combo
02:02:985 (1) - remove new combo
02:16:241 (1) -
02:20:892 (7) - new combo
02:21:589 (1) - remove new combo
02:45:575 (1,1,1) - remove new combo
02:47:435 (1,1) - ^
02:49:296 (1,1,1) - ^

[Hard]
00:07:369 (1,1) - remove new combo
01:53:450 (1) - ^
02:03:217 (1) - move 1/2 forward and remove new combo
02:06:473 (1) - remove new combo
02:11:124 (1) - ^
02:16:124 (1) - move 1/4 backward and remove new combo
02:17:055 (1) - move 1/4 backward
02:21:589 (1) - remove new combo
02:21:822 (3) - remove
02:23:683 (1) - move 1/4 backward and remove new combo
02:24:613 (1) - move 1/4 backward
02:31:008 (1) - remove new combo
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
MoonFragrance
Oh, you still don't use grid level 3 :o
And resnap all note. (Timing Tap - Resnap all notes)
Also, set a preview time (Timing Tap - Set Current Position as Priview)

Offser : 1288 (Remember you must resnap all notes after change offset)

[Normal]
1/4 beat notes still exist.
Turn them into 1/2 beat.

Please Use Grid Level 3 and Replace :o
niedz
719 posts
Joined May 2008
niedz
irc modding,star
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
lk common modding~

Overall
I didn't find source and tag
music track=1.5s~2s
timing/set current position as preview=[01:04:38]
please use green line (expect first red line

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you made to much spacing mistakes..i suggest you use grid level=3 and open the distance snap Button
make sure you set hitsound on Correct place,or it will make people confused
you need check your map . I will be back and mod again when you fixed
rika_old
103 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
rika_old

LKs wrote:

timing/set current position as preview=[01:04:38]
please use green line (expect first red line
done~

LKs wrote:

you made to much spacing mistakes..i suggest you use grid level=3 and open the distance snap Button
make sure you set hitsound on Correct place,or it will make people confused
you need check your map . I will be back and mod again when you fixed
1. I do not think so.. I've made some jumps to :improve: map. Grid - level 3 is used.
2. It is correct.
3. Checked 2x time.
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
LK COMMON MODDING~

ok, i came back, let me mod again

Tips : I check spacing by grid level=3

[b]normal
finish set on white line[/b]
[00:03:84] no finish
[00:05:24] ^
[00:06:86] stop at [00:07:33]
[00:09:42] stop at [00:10:59]
[00:11:52] add note
[00:11:98] ^
[00:16:17] finish
[00:31:82] up two grids
[00:32:05] stop at [00:32:75]
[00:37:40] (4,5) move 3 grids right
[00:41:12] stop at [00:41:82]
[00:41:98] stop at [00:43:45]
[00:43:91] add note
[00:46:93] move 4 grids down
[00:47:69] (2)--->[00:47:75]
[00:48:79] stop at [00:49:49]
[01:08:10] move 3 grids right
[01:42:98] move 2 grids up
[02:06:07] move 1 grid up
[02:36:93] move 1 grid right

hard

[00:32:90]~[00:41:74] all notes in this part need move beat placements-----> [00:33:02]~[00:41:86]
others is ok..

+ star
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
saymun
General:
change offset to 1344 =)

should change :(
suggestion only

(these times are assuming you changed offset to 1344 and resnaped your circles)
Normal:
I suggest you keep the same distance spacing throughout the song (except for sections suitable for jumps)

00:01:809 (3,1) - spacing
00:03:846 (1) - remove combo
00:03:846 (1) - what happened here? move it back up
00:04:776 (4) - feels weird, maybe put a slider that start at 00:04:543 and end at this time instead?
00:05:995 (4) - repeating slider? (repeat at 00:06:343, then delete the 5)
00:08:553 (4) - move slider to 00:08:785 then place another circle at 00:08:553
00:11:343 (1,2,3) - remove jumps
00:12:274 (1) - start the spin at 00:12:506, and end it at 00:14:134
00:12:041 (?) - add circle
00:12:274 (?) - add circle
00:14:367 (?) - add another spinner and end it at 00:14:367
00:31:590 - delete this time section, then add a time section using 'inherit previous timing section' and setting the time at 00:31:460 instead

Zzz, i'll continue after you change the offset and resnap your circles before i continue
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
Do saymun's mod first, then I'll mod :)
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
...what the hell is this timing...

Delete all the timing points please...

then...

Offset: 1340
BPM: 129.00

You only need 1 Red Timing section for this. If you want to change the soundset, please use an inherited timing section instead of an uninherited one.

Can't mod on faulty timing. Fix this first, resnap, and go over all the notes again to make sure that everything's sounding as they should.

Oh, and Grid Snap Level 3 plz.
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- (?) Asking for a second thought.
- (!) Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Add the song's source and some tags.
2. The song is piercing through my ears.
3. Change the first offset to 1,320. Or follow Zekira's timing.
4. I mod with the old timing.
5. Decrease slider tick rate to 1.
6. Use some more hitsounds.
7. Make a new easier diff. I suggest this.

[Normal]
1. Do not make jump in the easiest diff of a map. Remove jumps or make a new easier diff.
2. Use small grid size (CTRL+2), then fix all the spacing.
00:04:575 - Add note here.
00:06:668 (5) - Should be on 00:06:436.
00:08:529 (4) - Reduce one 1/2 tick.
00:11:552 - Add note here.
00:12:250 (1) - Move forward one 1/2 tick. Reduce one 1/2 tick. Then add note on this point.
00:32:055 (3) - Reduce one 1/2 tick.
00:32:985 - Add note here.
00:33:915 - ^
00:39:031 (1) - Extend or reduce one 1/4 tick.
00:41:357 (5) - Extend one 1/4 tick.
00:42:985 (3) - ^
00:46:706 (3) - Oh God please! Remove this jump.
00:48:217 (4) - Move forward one 1/4 tick.
00:48:799 (6) - Should end on 00:49:264.
00:51:590 (6) - Extend one 1/4 tick.
00:55:543 (5) - Move forward one 1/4 tick.
00:58:334 (5) - ^
00:58:799 - Add note here.
01:10:194 (5) - Should end on 01:10:659.
01:24:380 (5) - Move forward one 1/4 tick.
01:31:590 (1) - Should end on 01:32:520 or 01:34:380.
01:49:496 (2) - Oh God please! Remove this jump.
01:50:427 (6) - Move forward one 1/4 tick.
01:58:799 (4) - ^
01:59:264 (5) - Reduce one 1/2 tick.
02:00:659 (1) - Extend one 1/4 tick.
02:01:589 (1) - Move forward one 1/2 tick. Reduce one 1/2 tick.
02:06:938 (6) - Reduce one 1/4 tick.
02:06:473 (4) - Go backward one 1/4 tick.
02:09:148 (5) - ^
02:12:055 (1) - Should start on 02:11:822.
I think I will stop my notes placement here. You know how to fix the rest. Put some notes on blue tick if it's fit to the vocal.
02:25:776 - Add note.
02:38:566 - ^
02:40:892 - ^
02:47:900 (1,2,3) - Oh God please! Remove this jump.
02:52:551 - Add note here for finish move effect.

[Hard]
Oh no. I can't mod this any further. Many notes don't fit to the vocal or even music. Fix the timing then pay attention at where the notes should be place so they fit to the vocal or music.
1. Just a suggestion. Don't use small hitcircle.
2. Generally, notes are placed on white or red tick, not on blue tick for most notes.
00:42:674 (2,3,4,5,6) - WTF. The only fit note is (2). The rest is on red tick.
01:04:302 - The soft sound from here is kinda like silence notes.
Star.
Last edited by Vanmonky , edited 1 time in total.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Well, I don't want to turn around this map, but I sadly see various errors along the modes...
First of all, about timing. There are a lot of beats and sliders that don't follow the song's rhythm, like on 00:05:581 (2,3) (Hard mode); this is a little example, but there are more situation similar...
Then, about slider's lenght in Normal mode. Even in cases like 00:42:985 (3) slider's mlenght is very irregular and it doesn't follow the rhythm...
Plus, spacing is REALLY horrible in some passages. Like on 00:46:241 (1,2,3,4).

For now, I suggest you to check overall beat and sliders's timing once again, to resnap all the beats and to apply most of the tips supplied from the AIMod in the Editor mode (press Ctrl+Shift+A on Edit Mode)
If I'll see serious improvement for this song, I'll be back ;3
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
The modders said a lot and I won't repeat~
Plz fix then Ill check~
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
[Normal]
SPOILER
General:

PreviewTime: "Please set a Preview Time"
Source: "Please add a source"
Tags: "Please add some tags"

Timing:
Seems fine

Nazi Mod:

Please use distance snap, and remap the whole diff, I see a lot of inconsistencies and its not good.

The following are examples of things not allowed in normal diffs (Un-rankable), and generally frowned upon in harder diffs.

00:03:613 (3,1) -
00:04:078 (2,3) -
00:06:869 (6,1) -
00:46:473 (2,3) -

General Mod:

00:39:031 (1) - Should End on 00:39:496 ((a white tick)(1/4 beat selector))
00:41:357 (5) - Should End on 00:41:822 ((a white tick)(1/4 beat selector))
00:42:985 (3) - Should End on 00:43:683 ((a white tick)(1/4 beat selector))
00:48:799 (6) - Should End on 00:49:264 ((a white tick)(1/4 beat selector))
00:55:543 (5) - Should End on 00:56:008 ((a red tick)(1/4 beat selector))
00:58:566 (5) - Move to 00:58:566 ((a white tick)(1/4 beat selector))
01:59:264 (5) - Should end on 01:59:962 ((a white tick)(1/4 beat selector))
02:00:659 (1) - should end on 02:01:124 ((a red tick)(1/4 beat selector))

02:45:110 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - sounds way off, take another look at it please.

Also run AIMod and fixed Unsnapped notes on the timeline.
[Hard]
SPOILER
General:

PreviewTime: "Please set a Preview Time"
Source: "Please add a source"
Tags: "Please add some tags"

Run AIMod and fixed Unsnapped notes on the time-line.

also, the whole diff seems like a mess, you need to go though it again and fix it please, I think you resnapped on a 1/2 beat selector and it broke the diff.

Feel free to ask me to mod this once you fix this

[General Thoughts]
I see potential, but there is still a lot of work to be done.

Feel free to pm me when you made above changes, and I'll gladly take another look
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