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HOME MADE Kazoku - FREEDOM (TV Size)

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Haneii
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on May-31-11 at 3:08:40 PM

Artist: HOME MADE Kazoku
Title: FREEDOM (TV Size)
Source: Naruto Shippuuden
Tags: Ending weezy saten-san
BPM: 156
Filesize: 11136kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.76 stars, 178 notes)
  2. Normal (3.75 stars, 135 notes)
  3. Saten's Insane (4.97 stars, 229 notes)
  4. Taiko (4.83 stars, 435 notes)
  5. Weezy's Easy (1.99 stars, 91 notes)
Download: HOME MADE Kazoku - FREEDOM (TV Size)
Download: HOME MADE Kazoku - FREEDOM (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3rd Naruto map - hopefully the last one!

Thank you Weezy and Saten-san for your guest difficulties :)
LuPiiTa
8-)
Megaparadox
8-)
Ignacio_old
loved it *!
Weez
Almost done :)
just need some hitsounds and I'll work on that later.

Download: HOME MADE Kazoku - FREEDOM (TV Size) (Haneii) [Weezy's Easy].osu
Saten
Tehee~

Also, don't forget to add Weezy to the tags as well (it's not there atm)

starr~~

Download: HOME MADE Kazoku - FREEDOM (TV Size) (Haneii) [Saten's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Haneii
Thank you Saten-san <3
Weez

Saten-san wrote:

Tehee~

Also, don't forget to add Weezy to the tags as well (it's not there atm)

starr~~
I guess where ever I go, Saten-san is not far behind :P
Saten

Weezy wrote:

I guess where ever I go, Saten-san is not far behind :P
Yeah, I'm stalking you, you know <3

nah, I'm just kidding :3
Haneii asked me
Weez
Topic Starter
Haneii

Weezy wrote:

And I'm done :D
yay :) thx
Zelos
Folder Check:

Everything is good here!

Weezy's Easy:

00:39:815 (1) - grab the 2nd slider tick and move down 1? it makes it more symmetrical. (i slider nazi sorry :3)

00:52:122 (1) - grab the end of the slider and move it up 1?

Very nice Weezykins.

Normal:

00:18:661 (1,2,3,1) - this is irreguarly shaped but it seemed no matter where I moved one note to fix it, it would throw off distance snap.

01:22:891 (1) - make this the length of the other spinners in the difficulty?

Also very nice

Hard:

00:28:276 (1,2,3,1) - center these?

00:40:584 (2) - clap at the end of slider?

01:01:545 (4) - isn't grid snapped. grid snap and move down 1 tick?

01:22:891 (1) - make this the length of the other spinners in the difficulty?

Saten-sans insane:

00:41:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - if your gonna make an epic symmetrical map, you should at least make this star symmetrical saten-san :3

Haneii you get a star.
Saten

Zelos wrote:

Saten-sans insane:

00:41:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - if your gonna make an epic symmetrical map, you should at least make this star symmetrical saten-san :3
Maybe this looks better then, tehe~

Download: HOME MADE Kazoku - FREEDOM (TV Size) (Haneii) [Saten's Insane].osu
Weez

Zelos wrote:

Weezy's Easy:

00:39:815 (1) - grab the 2nd slider tick and move down 1? it makes it more symmetrical. (i slider nazi sorry :3)

00:52:122 (1) - grab the end of the slider and move it up 1?

Very nice Weezykins.
done
and thanks :D

Download: HOME MADE Kazoku - FREEDOM (TV Size) (Haneii) [Weezy's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Haneii

Zelos wrote:

Normal:

00:18:661 (1,2,3,1) - this is irreguarly shaped but it seemed no matter where I moved one note to fix it, it would throw off distance snap.

01:22:891 (1) - make this the length of the other spinners in the difficulty?

Also very nice

Hard:

00:28:276 (1,2,3,1) - center these?

00:40:584 (2) - clap at the end of slider?

01:01:545 (4) - isn't grid snapped. grid snap and move down 1 tick?

01:22:891 (1) - make this the length of the other spinners in the difficulty?
All done. Thanks for the mod and star Zelos :)
Weez
its showing that crappy bg now >w<
hurry up and find a new one! D:
Saten

Weezy wrote:

its showing that crappy bg now >w<
hurry up and find a new one! D:
D:
Topic Starter
Haneii

Saten-san wrote:

Weezy wrote:

its showing that crappy bg now >w<
hurry up and find a new one! D:
D:
YES! FINALLY!

Have to find someone good with graffiti to make the bg :D


Edit: Tried to make one..it's okay

will still continue to look for someone to draw this set a bg :p
Gonzvlo
[General]
  1. Tags: "17" is too generic, remove it please. (Keeping "Ending" is enough)
  2. Folder is clean~
  3. Whoa that vid <3
[Weezy's Easy]
  1. 00:04:430 (2,3,1) - I suggest to move (3) some grids right, so the spacing between (2)&(3) and (3)&(1) is the same~
  2. 00:38:276 (2,1) - Woops! these objects are too close, fix this spacing please :3
  3. 00:39:815 (1) - This would sound much better if you start this Kiai time using "Finish"
  4. 00:54:622 (1) - tbh this slider doesn't seem easy to hit for rookies, I suggest to start this 1/2 earlier.
  5. 01:00:776 (2) - ^
  6. 01:09:815 (4,1) - The BPM of this song is kind of high so this kind of jumps for doesn't suit [Easy], reduce spacing please
  7. 01:19:238 (2,3) - A 1/2 circle by itself is really hard to hit for beginners, it's even harder if 2 of these circles are stacked, so I suggest to remove the stack and replace those circles with a sliders. (Also the same suggestion about starting it 1/2 earlier)
  8. 01:25:391 (2,3) - ^
[Normal]
  1. Claps only during kiai ?! This is really nice diff, but it feels really empty without claps, add some during the verses please :3
  2. 00:15:199 (1) - I think that this needs a "Finish" to remark the music change
  3. 00:52:315 (1) - This spinner sounds better if it starts 1/2 before, (That's where "Freedom" starts)
  4. 01:25:584 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest to spice up this pattern with some claps too~
  5. Good Job! no major complains here, just add those claps during the verses please ;_; (Some Finishes too)
[Hard]
  1. OD and HP Drain: 6 suits better this diff, consider reducing them to 6. (-1 tick)
  2. The same suggestion about claps here, there are place where you really have to use claps like: 00:30:007 (3,4) - 00:33:084 (2,3) - 00:36:161 (4,5) -
  3. 00:15:199 (1) - Same as [Normal] you should start this with Finish to remark the music change.
  4. 01:19:238 (1,2,3,4,5) - The lack of hitsounds is clearly noticeable for this pattern, add some please.
  5. 01:25:392 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^
  6. Wow, I really like your patterns Haneii, good job! (again)
[Saten's Insane]
  1. Jumpy diff, cool! it suits this song.
  2. 00:49:815 (5,1) - Oh noes! this stack doesn't look or play nice, I highly suggest to unstack these sliders.
  3. 00:52:122 (1) - I missed on these sliders :/ Well at least you used 0.75, but I still think that these sliders (00:58:276 (1) - 01:16:738 (1) - 01:22:892 (1) - ) are killing the great flow you created. Would you replace some of them with spinners please ?
  4. 01:06:545 (1,2,3,4) - Make spacing consistent please, It will be easier to read if you use constant spacing for these jumps.
  5. 01:29:238 (4) - Well, first of all I suggest to keep the consistency with the other diffs and end this diff here: 01:29:045 - , If you don't want to follow this suggestion, at least use "Finish" instead of "Clap" for the end of the map, Finish sounds way better.
This is going to most played for sure, good job :3
Topic Starter
Haneii

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]
  1. Tags: "17" is too generic, remove it please. (Keeping "Ending" is enough) Okay (Always thought search would pick it up - apparently not >_<)

[Normal]
  • ALL DONE
  1. Claps only during kiai ?! This is really nice diff, but it feels really empty without claps, add some during the verses please :3
  2. 00:15:199 (1) - I think that this needs a "Finish" to remark the music change
  3. 00:52:315 (1) - This spinner sounds better if it starts 1/2 before, (That's where "Freedom" starts)
  4. 01:25:584 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest to spice up this pattern with some claps too~
  5. Good Job! no major complains here, just add those claps during the verses please ;_; (Some Finishes too)
[Hard]
  • ALL DONE
  1. OD and HP Drain: 6 suits better this diff, consider reducing them to 6. (-1 tick)
  2. The same suggestion about claps here, there are place where you really have to use claps like: 00:30:007 (3,4) - 00:33:084 (2,3) - 00:36:161 (4,5) -
  3. 00:15:199 (1) - Same as [Normal] you should start this with Finish to remark the music change.
  4. 01:19:238 (1,2,3,4,5) - The lack of hitsounds is clearly noticeable for this pattern, add some please.
  5. 01:25:392 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^
  6. Wow, I really like your patterns Haneii, good job! (again) Thanks >///<

This is going to most played for sure, good job :3

Thanks for the star and Mod Gonzvlo :)
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