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Dzeko & Torres - 2013 In 10 Minutes

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KappaPraise
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 31 декабря 2016 г. at 16:48:36

Artist: Dzeko & Torres
Title: 2013 In 10 Minutes
Tags: Marvollo Shmiklak M_a_r_v_o_l_l_o House Trance Electro Progressive Remix Acapella Instrumental Calvin Harris Ellie Goulding Need Love Nicky Romero Alesso One Republic Lose Myself Lana Del Rey Young Beautiful Kaskade Symphonica Burn Tiesto Steve Angello Matisse Sadko SLVR Sebjak Marcus Schossow Liceu Krewella Legacy Arno Cost Chasing R3hab Quintino Atmosphere Moguai Dimitri Vegas Like Mike Mammoth Hard Rock Sofa Rasputin Summertime Sadness David Guetta GLOWINTHEDARK Fatboy Slim Eat Sleep Rave Repeat Thomas Newson New World Sound Flute Knife LRAD Tommy Trash Aston Shuffle Sunrise GTA Henrix Digital Lab Hit It Showtek Get Loose Martik Garrix Animals Zedd Lucky Date Fall Into The Sky Alive Dannic Clobber Wakanda Deorro Yee TJR Suckaz Don Diablo Matt Nash Starlight Chuckie Down This W&W Ummet Ozcan Code Hardwell MakJ Countdown DVBBS Borgeous Tsunami Avicii Aloe Blacc Wake Party Axwell Center Universe Capital Cities Safe Booyah Armin Van Buuren Trevore Guthrie What Feels
BPM: 129
Filesize: 19217kb
Play Time: 10:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Marathon (4,08 stars, 1571 notes)
Download: Dzeko & Torres - 2013 In 10 Minutes
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Dailycare
Beatmap Nominator
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Dailycare
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2016-09-27 19:00 WISPG_G: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1091478 Dzeko & Torres - 2013 In 10 Minutes]
2016-09-27 19:05 WISPG_G: Oh, only I have problems with connecting?
2016-09-27 19:05 WISPG_G: I am often disconnecting :(
2016-09-27 19:05 Dailycare: i guess your internet has a problem ;w
2016-09-27 19:06 Dailycare: cuz i haven;t experienced disconnecting
2016-09-27 19:06 WISPG_G: bad
2016-09-27 19:06 Dailycare: QwQ
2016-09-27 19:06 Dailycare: and
2016-09-27 19:06 WISPG_G: I missed your test play xd
2016-09-27 19:06 Dailycare: lol
2016-09-27 19:06 Dailycare: it sucks
2016-09-27 19:06 WISPG_G: anyway
2016-09-27 19:06 WISPG_G: test play or map? xD
2016-09-27 19:06 Dailycare: My Play Sucks
2016-09-27 19:07 Dailycare: but tbh
2016-09-27 19:07 Dailycare: the offset is a bit fast
2016-09-27 19:07 Dailycare: imo, offset has to be set 1840
2016-09-27 19:07 WISPG_G: rly? I find Aleks's version with wrong offset and decied add 30 ms
2016-09-27 19:08 Dailycare: oh lol
2016-09-27 19:08 Dailycare: idk honestly
2016-09-27 19:08 Dailycare: but when i was playing
2016-09-27 19:08 Dailycare: there's too many 100s ;w
2016-09-27 19:08 WISPG_G: Idk
2016-09-27 19:08 Dailycare: lol then
2016-09-27 19:08 WISPG_G: Let me check
2016-09-27 19:08 Dailycare: okok
2016-09-27 19:08 Dailycare: set the offset around 1840 first
2016-09-27 19:09 Dailycare: anyway i'm not good at checking offset tho
2016-09-27 19:10 Dailycare: oh well
2016-09-27 19:10 Dailycare: i have to fix my gd
2016-09-27 19:10 Dailycare: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5506311
2016-09-27 19:10 Dailycare: i'll check your map after that
2016-09-27 19:11 WISPG_G: Hm, looks like 1840 fits here too sounds not bad, well, I'll try map with that offset if I wont find anything wrong
2016-09-27 19:11 Dailycare: xd
2016-09-27 19:11 Dailycare: okay sir
2016-09-27 19:26 WISPG_G: Updated xd
2016-09-27 19:27 Dailycare: cool
2016-09-27 19:29 Dailycare: 01:19:979 (1,2) - 
2016-09-27 19:29 Dailycare: their spacing is too distant for me
2016-09-27 19:29 Dailycare: 01:49:281 (4) - 
2016-09-27 19:29 Dailycare: it's also distant too ;w
2016-09-27 19:31 WISPG_G: Idk how those spacing between sliders can be such distant for you o.o
2016-09-27 19:32 Dailycare: compared to 01:17:653 (4,1) - 
2016-09-27 19:32 Dailycare: anyway,
2016-09-27 19:32 Dailycare: 00:50:095 (1,2) - 
2016-09-27 19:32 Dailycare: they are wrong
2016-09-27 19:32 Dailycare: i think there's no sound at 00:50:095 - 
2016-09-27 19:33 Dailycare: put a circle at 00:50:212 - , and put the slider at 00:50:328 - 
2016-09-27 19:33 Dailycare: and make the slider 3/4 instead of 1/1
2016-09-27 19:33 WISPG_G: hmm I think you right
2016-09-27 19:33 Dailycare: i guess it works better
2016-09-27 19:33 Dailycare: lol  xd
2016-09-27 19:34 Dailycare: um
2016-09-27 19:34 Dailycare: consider putting circle at 01:06:723 - 01:08:119 - 01:08:584 - 
2016-09-27 19:34 Dailycare: they might make a player confused
2016-09-27 19:35 Dailycare: I mean following the drum would more better
2016-09-27 19:36 Dailycare: *would be
2016-09-27 19:36 WISPG_G: at this part I tried following vocal, I thought about circles ther, may be I'll add them
2016-09-27 19:36 Dailycare: ahh
2016-09-27 19:36 Dailycare: ok then
2016-09-27 19:37 Dailycare: uh
2016-09-27 19:37 Dailycare: 01:13:933 (2) - 
2016-09-27 19:37 Dailycare: why did you snap it by 1/8?
2016-09-27 19:37 Dailycare: I think there's no reason to use 1/8 tbh
2016-09-27 19:38 WISPG_G: because Aleks did xDDDDDDDDD And I think it fits here
2016-09-27 19:38 Dailycare: and
2016-09-27 19:38 Dailycare: lol
2016-09-27 19:38 Dailycare: then okay 
2016-09-27 19:38 Dailycare: but you should gather more opinions
2016-09-27 19:38 Dailycare: 01:21:839 (5) - 
2016-09-27 19:38 Dailycare: consider adding nc here
2016-09-27 19:39 WISPG_G: It was there, but if I add there NC it will be combo with 2 objects, because here 01:22:537 (1) - need NC too
2016-09-27 19:40 Dailycare: i think it doesn't matter
2016-09-27 19:40 Dailycare: but anyway
2016-09-27 19:40 Dailycare: it's up to you
2016-09-27 19:40 Dailycare: :p
2016-09-27 19:40 WISPG_G: xd
2016-09-27 19:42 Dailycare: rest are..
2016-09-27 19:42 Dailycare: lol idk
2016-09-27 19:42 Dailycare: 01:35:677 - ~ 01:45:909 - 
2016-09-27 19:43 Dailycare: whole spacing in the part seems a bit awkward for me
2016-09-27 19:43 Dailycare: I think it should be a portion for this map
2016-09-27 19:44 Dailycare: but you used kinda distant spacing at those 1/4s tho
2016-09-27 19:44 Dailycare: like 01:43:467 (5,6,7) - 
2016-09-27 19:45 WISPG_G: Ye
2016-09-27 19:45 Dailycare: i want you to decrease them as well 
2016-09-27 19:45 WISPG_G: I'll try to do something here
2016-09-27 19:46 Dailycare: lol ok
2016-09-27 19:46 WISPG_G: Pretty hard part
2016-09-27 19:46 Dailycare: ;w yea
2016-09-27 19:46 Dailycare: the rest are fine i guess
2016-09-27 19:46 WISPG_G: Nice :3
C00L
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C00L
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Vannyha
12 posts
Joined August 2015
Vannyha
𝓛𝓲𝓽𝓽𝓵𝓮 𝕸𝖔𝖉
07:56:258 (1,2,3) - Не в такт слайдеры, можно попробовать что-то такое по ритму
06:28:002 (1,2,3,4) - Далековато друг от друга стоят, уже не простримить их хочется, а доджампать при АР8
06:37:498 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - А тут их можно поставить подальше друг от друга. На расстояние длины этих слайдеров 06:38:894 (2) - или по убывающей, тон всё ниже - и две нотки всё ближе.
Хороший марафон, гуд мапа ;)
Hikan
430 posts
Joined February 2016
Hikan

General
  1. Disable countdown
     
  2. Add tags: Shmiklak EDM Trap Chill Trance Electro Remix Acapella Instrumental House Progressive ( and lots of the song and composer names if you can add it XD )

2013 In 10 Minutes
  1. 00:12:072 (5) - Ctrl G it for better flow imo
     
  2. 00:31:607 (1) - move it over 1 grid to avoid it overlap with 00:32:537 (2) , also these 00:31:142 (5,6,1) - will be more balanced imo
     
  3. 00:42:653 (1) - I think this spinner is following vocal right? So I recommend matching 00:42:304 (1,2) - those 2 circles into a slider. It will make this part more rational bcause slider will follow the vocal better than circle
     
  4. 00:58:584 (6,7,8) - I think the rhythm must be this, it will follow the pattern before more reasonable, and more fun to play :3

     
  5. 01:06:723 - good tick to map
     
  6. 01:08:119 - 01:08:584 - as well, I know you want to follow vocal here. So change 01:07:886 (4,5) - to 2 1/2 sliders will better imo
     
  7. 01:13:933 (2) - nice overmap stuff XD
     
  8. 01:19:514 (5,6) - move these to (262;187) for a better triangle
     
  9. 02:05:095 (3,4) - move to (309;194) for a reason as above
     
  10. 02:18:584 (3,4,5) - this part is 1/8 i believe, pls change it somehow
     
  11. 03:35:793 (2) - seem a bit overmapped here, the slider should be start at 03:35:560 - , because I don't hear anything at 03:35:793 -
     
  12. 03:43:235 (3) - like above Dx
     
  13. 04:11:142 (3) - move it to (182;237) will be more nicer xd
     
  14. 05:10:367 - this need emphasising, change reverse slider to a circle - 1/3 slider will be better
     
  15. 06:21:607 - missed one beat right here, consider changing 06:21:374 (1) - to a 1/2 slider to follow rhythm more accurate
     
  16. 06:24:398 - same Dx
     
  17. 08:01:839 (1,2) - symmetrical?
     
  18. 08:36:956 - I think this beat need to be highlighted, how about this

That's all, good luck ;)
Fanteer
483 posts
Joined February 2016
Fanteer
00:12:072 (5) - может ctrl+G ?
00:22:305 (1) - нк
00:23:933 (1) - нк
01:21:839 (1) - нк
01:22:537 (1) - убери нк
01:19:049 (3,4,5,6) - 01:26:491 (3,4) - 2 одинаковых момента замапаны по разному
01:30:560 (8,1) - а зачем спейсинг увеличивать было ?
02:41:839 (1) - там не слышно этой ноты
07:46:258 (1,2,3) - мб стак ноты ? Так себе выглядит
07:53:700 (1,2,3) - ^
Мне вообще нечего говорить, замано скучно, нету форм, между каждой нотой перерывы по секунде, ошибок критических нету, но замапано скучновато.
GL :)
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak

Vannyha wrote:

𝓛𝓲𝓽𝓽𝓵𝓮 𝕸𝖔𝖉
07:56:258 (1,2,3) - Не в такт слайдеры, можно попробовать что-то такое по ритму
06:28:002 (1,2,3,4) - Далековато друг от друга стоят, уже не простримить их хочется, а доджампать при АР8 Музыка становится там громче, так что увеличение дс тут нужно.
06:37:498 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - А тут их можно поставить подальше друг от друга. На расстояние длины этих слайдеров 06:38:894 (2) - или по убывающей, тон всё ниже - и две нотки всё ближе. нет, такой стиль. должно быть так.
Хороший марафон, гуд мапа ;)
ага

Hikan wrote:

[*] 06:21:607 - missed one beat right here, consider changing 06:21:374 (1) - to a 1/2 slider to follow rhythm more accurate
  at least, I sholdn't map everysound. If i would map this sound, rythm could be kinda hard.
[*] 06:24:398 - same Dx same
 
That's all, good luck ;)
bye

Fanteer wrote:

07:46:258 (1,2,3) - мб стак ноты ? Так себе выглядит нет, такая задумка.
07:53:700 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
Мне вообще нечего говорить, замано скучно, нету форм, между каждой нотой перерывы по секунде, ошибок критических нету, но замапано скучновато.
GL :)
пока.
thx to everyone for modding. fixed only rythm from Vannyha's mod.
upd: http://shmiklak.s-ul.eu/wispg_gpidor
Misure
951 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure
hi here is my short post :D
[General]
  1. enable countdown needed?
[Marathon]
  1. 00:09:281 (2,1) - swap NC?
  2. 00:20:328 (5) - not needed imo, kinda strange with a click here
  3. 00:22:305 (5) - NC?
  4. 00:31:607 (1,2) - maybe you can avoid overlap xd
  5. 01:14:398 (3) - NC to emphasize?
  6. 01:39:514 (4,5) - make them wider than 01:39:746 (5,6) - to avoid rhythm midreading?
  7. 02:41:258 (1,2,3,1) - ^ differ the distance better
  8. 03:46:026 (1,2,3,4,1) - things like this? as the distance
  9. 05:10:677 (2,1) - I'd better see them to be closer since rhythm here is closely related between them imo, like distance here 05:14:630 (1,2) -
  10. 06:15:793 (1,2) - things like this or something seems better than stack imo
  11. 06:28:816 - this part is cool indeed, but for me I prefer to make 1/3s closer for an easier play with DT, just as me xD
  12. 07:16:026 - makeand same places silenced?
  13. 07:46:258 (1,2,3) - no problem for me but I think others will mention it to be stacked LUL
  14. 09:42:537 (2,3,4) - nazi stack
  15. 10:19:514 (5,6,7,8,1) - since these are 1/8 gaps, maybe closer better to avoid sliderbreaks
  16. 10:23:700 (3,4,5,6) - no sense to make such imo... I mean 10:23:700 (3,4,5) - them are too far
  17. besides NC have to be more consistent, I mean some are compact but some are sparse (I'm lazy to point all out xd)
nice nice, good luck! :)
ksg
351 posts
Joined November 2011
ksg
m4m~

Marathon

00:09:281 (2) - NC here instead of the next slider for consistency's sake.

00:14:863 (7) - NC again because you NC'd the previous long repeat too.

00:23:002 (3) - x:340 y:318 so it's the same distance from 00:22:305 (1,2) - these two.

00:23:933 (3) - Having the major beat on the repeat could be questionable but this is up to you entirely.

00:32:537 (2,3) - Blanket

00:58:584 (6) - Consider NC for emphasis on the changing sound.

01:05:560 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try to make this star pattern more "even" for visual quality. 72° angles are your friend!

01:45:677 (4) - Would look better if you align this with 01:45:328 (3) -

02:16:723 (1) - Not sure if this needs NC

03:48:700 (5) - x:195 y:214?

06:15:560 (1) - This NC is a bit weird since it ends up just being 2 1/4 notes

06:16:258 (2) - Consider moving down+left a little bit to make more readable. It is a bit awkward now because so much stuff stacked on top.

06:19:979 (2) - Something similar

06:27:537 (1,1) - These combos/corners in the stream at blue ticks??? Doesn't make sense really :F

06:39:979 (1) - Remove NC

07:13:467 (1,2) - Fix stacking manually

07:14:863 (5) - Major beat is on sliderend, maybe use two circles instead for better emphasis. Applies to the rest of this section too.

07:15:560 (2) - Would emphasize the song better if this ended on red tick already. Again, applies to the rest of this section

07:42:305 (9) - NC to emphasize the new vocals?

07:46:258 (1,2,3) - These don't look good at all to me.

07:56:258 (1,2,3) - Music has 1/3s here, yet you have mapped it 1/4 for some reason

08:40:677 (1) - Move starting point to the left a little bit for better symmetry

08:42:770 (3) - NC

09:58:002 (5) - x:424 y:198

10:01:723 (3) - Something similar to ^

10:19:514 (5,6,7,8,1) - Because of the overall difficulty of the map, the spacing between these is pretty big. Either move them closer or make them 1 tick shorter to make it easier to transition.

That's all, good luck with the map, it's really cool!
KappaPraise
316 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
KappaPraise
Mod replies \o/

Fanteer

Fanteer wrote:

00:12:072 (5) - может ctrl+G ? Не, так задуманно
00:22:305 (1) - нк Ок
00:23:933 (1) - нк Тут следую вокалу так что нет необходмости в нк.
01:21:839 (1) - нк Ну ок попробуем
01:22:537 (1) - убери нк Тут меняется ритм
01:19:049 (3,4,5,6) - 01:26:491 (3,4) - 2 одинаковых момента замапаны по разному Ты этого не заметишь, когда будешь играть
01:30:560 (8,1) - а зачем спейсинг увеличивать было ? Звук выделяется очень, но возможно надо будет чуть меньше сделать
02:41:839 (1) - там не слышно этой ноты Слышно
07:46:258 (1,2,3) - мб стак ноты ? Так себе выглядит
07:53:700 (1,2,3) - ^
Мне вообще нечего говорить, замано скучно, нету форм, между каждой нотой перерывы по секунде, ошибок критических нету, но замапано скучновато.
GL :)
Спс за мод

Misure

Misure wrote:

hi here is my short post :D
[General]
  1. enable countdown needed? No
[Marathon]
  1. 00:09:281 (2,1) - swap NC? This 00:09:281 (2) - sound belongs prev slider
  2. 00:20:328 (5) - not needed imo, kinda strange with a click here I think you right
  3. 00:22:305 (5) - NC? Yea
  4. 00:31:607 (1,2) - maybe you can avoid overlap xd fixed
  5. 01:14:398 (3) - NC to emphasize? Okay, why not
  6. 01:39:514 (4,5) - make them wider than 01:39:746 (5,6) - to avoid rhythm midreading? Yep
  7. 02:41:258 (1,2,3,1) - ^ differ the distance better placed them closer
  8. 03:46:026 (1,2,3,4,1) - things like this? as the distance Looks like you gave me wrong screenshot
  9. 05:10:677 (2,1) - I'd better see them to be closer since rhythm here is closely related between them imo, like distance here 05:14:630 (1,2) - Hm, idk how to place it closer to not ruin next patterns and save spacing
  10. 09:42:537 (2,3,4) - nazi stack wut?
  11. 10:19:514 (5,6,7,8,1) - since these are 1/8 gaps, maybe closer better to avoid sliderbreaks follow circles placed pretty close to next slider, I think players shouldnt have problems here
  12. 10:23:700 (3,4,5,6) - no sense to make such imo... I mean 10:23:700 (3,4,5) - them are too far I somehow thought, what that is 1/2 jump xd, placed little closer
  13. besides NC have to be more consistent, I mean some are compact but some are sparse (I'm lazy to point all out xd)
nice nice, good luck! :) Thx
Thx for mod o/

Hikan

Hikan wrote:

General
  1. Disable countdown Ye-ye...
     
  2. Add tags: Shmiklak EDM Trap Chill Trance Electro Remix Acapella Instrumental House Progressive ( and lots of the song and composer names if you can add it XD ) I'll fill tags later

2013 In 10 Minutes
  1. 00:12:072 (5) - Ctrl G it for better flow imo Nope
     
  2. 00:31:607 (1) - move it over 1 grid to avoid it overlap with 00:32:537 (2) , also these 00:31:142 (5,6,1) - will be more balanced imo fixed
     
  3. 00:42:653 (1) - I think this spinner is following vocal right? So I recommend matching 00:42:304 (1,2) - those 2 circles into a slider. It will make this part more rational bcause slider will follow the vocal better than circle May be, lets see what will say other peoples
     
  4. 00:58:584 (6,7,8) - I think the rhythm must be this, it will follow the pattern before more reasonable, and more fun to play :3
    My currnet rhythm looks fine for me.
     
  5. 01:06:723 - good tick to map I am still not sure about this pause, I tried follow vocal
     
  6. 01:08:119 - 01:08:584 - as well, I know you want to follow vocal here. So change 01:07:886 (4,5) - to 2 1/2 sliders will better imo
     
  7. 01:13:933 (2) - nice overmap stuff XD Made that for some epic ending xd
     
  8. 01:19:514 (5,6) - move these to (262;187) for a better triangle Ok
     
  9. 02:05:095 (3,4) - move to (309;194) for a reason as above Mhm
     
  10. 02:18:584 (3,4,5) - this part is 1/8 i believe, pls change it somehow May be, but you should notice that, when you playing xd. I'll try keep it for a while
     
  11. 03:35:793 (2) - seem a bit overmapped here, the slider should be start at 03:35:560 - , because I don't hear anything at 03:35:793 - Sounds fine for me, I hear like there changing sound, so I decided make like that
     
  12. 03:43:235 (3) - like above Dx ^
     
  13. 04:11:142 (3) - move it to (182;237) will be more nicer xd Not this time xd
     
  14. 05:10:367 - this need emphasising, change reverse slider to a circle - 1/3 slider will be better I know, but start with circle 1/3 feels sudden, i decided start with slider here
     
  15. 06:21:607 - missed one beat right here, consider changing 06:21:374 (1) - to a 1/2 slider to follow rhythm more accurate
     
  16. 06:24:398 - same Dx
     
  17. 08:01:839 (1,2) - symmetrical? ?
     
  18. 08:36:956 - I think this beat need to be highlighted, how about this Ok, lets try

That's all, good luck ;) thx
Thx for mod o/

ksg

ksg wrote:

m4m~

Marathon

00:09:281 (2) - NC here instead of the next slider for consistency's sake. This circle part of prev slider

00:14:863 (7) - NC again because you NC'd the previous long repeat too. Ok

00:23:002 (3) - x:340 y:318 so it's the same distance from 00:22:305 (1,2) - these two. Idk what did you mean, but Ok xd

00:23:933 (3) - Having the major beat on the repeat could be questionable but this is up to you entirely. Mhm

00:32:537 (2,3) - Blanket Mhm

00:58:584 (6) - Consider NC for emphasis on the changing sound. Good idea

01:05:560 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try to make this star pattern more "even" for visual quality. 72° angles are your friend! I didnt want make here star xd

01:45:677 (4) - Would look better if you align this with 01:45:328 (3) - It was before, but now I am trying save spacing here

02:16:723 (1) - Not sure if this needs NC Usually sliders like this feels like with 2 reapets only, I decided emphise with NC more than that

03:48:700 (5) - x:195 y:214? Um, well

08:40:677 (1) - Move starting point to the left a little bit for better symmetry Idk, I'll try xd

08:42:770 (3) - NC Well

09:58:002 (5) - x:424 y:198 Why not

10:01:723 (3) - Something similar to ^ Ok

10:19:514 (5,6,7,8,1) - Because of the overall difficulty of the map, the spacing between these is pretty big. Either move them closer or make them 1 tick shorter to make it easier to transition. Difficulty sets here shmiklak's part xd but here followcircles placed pretty close to next sliders, I dont think, what players could have problems here xd

That's all, good luck with the map, it's really cool! Thx \o/
Thx for mod o/
Misure
951 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure
  1. 03:46:026 (1,2,3,4,1) - things like this? as the distance :arrow: I just mean maybe 34 close to 12 rather than the NC seems better imo LOL
  2. 09:42:537 (2,3,4) - nazi stack :arrow: stack is off I mean :lol:
O-Moei
O-Moei
Hi !, 🌀NM request

✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )

I never modded marathons before. So I guess for now, I'll just mod from the beginning, until 04:11:142 -
Here we go...

General :
✨It's the same songs with this map ?. Maybe add these in Tags. It is all has been equalized through the songs
Tags
House Trance Electro Progressive Remix Acapella Instrumental Calvin Harris Ellie Goulding Need Love Nicky Romero Alesso One Republic Lose Myself Lana Del Rey Young Beautiful Kaskade Symphonica Burn Tiesto Steve Angello Matisse Sadko SLVR Sebjak Marcus Schossow Liceu Krewella Legacy Arno Cost Chasing R3hab Quintino Atmosphere Moguai Dimitri Vegas Like Mike Mammoth Hard Rock Sofa Rasputin Summertime Sadness David Guetta GLOWINTHEDARK Fatboy Slim Eat Sleep Rave Repeat Thomas Newson New World Sound Flute Knife LRAD Tommy Trash Aston Shuffle Sunrise GTA Henrix Digital Lab Hit It Showtek Get Loose Martik Garrix Animals Zedd Lucky Date Fall Into The Sky Alive Dannic Clobber Wakanda Deorro Yee TJR Suckaz Don Diablo Matt Nash Starlight Chuckie Down This W&W Ummet Ozcan Code Hardwell MakJ Countdown DVBBS Borgeous Tsunami Avicii Aloe Blacc Wake Party Axwell Center Universe Capital Cities Safe Booyah Armin Van Buuren Trevore Guthrie What Feels Dyro Paradise Apollo Clarity Alvaro Mercer Lil Jon

Marathon :
💧02:26:956 - Stacked 2 green lines

✨01:40:444 (1,2) - Swap this NC (since you did this system like 01:36:723 (4,1) -)

✨02:59:514 (1,3) - ^ (for consistencies NC stanzas)
03:03:235 (1,3) - ^
03:06:956 (1,3) - ^ then remove NC here 03:10:677 (1) -

✨03:33:933 (5,1) - ^
03:28:351 (1,2) - ^

✨03:44:165 (4) - NC
03:38:584 (3) - NC (like 03:31:142 (1) - )

✨01:49:746 (6) - This one can be NC for closing scene
04:11:142 (3) - ^

✨02:16:723 (1) - No need to NC this one, I guess
03:25:328 (1) - ^

✨02:26:491 (8) - Two suggestions :
1. You can give an SV change then NC this, for variety since it has a different rhythm within the song
2. You can give it a bit more spacing with 02:26:956 (1) - , so there's no need to NC

Okai, that's all from me. All e best :)
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak
fixed from Misure's mod:
  1. Nothing, because everything is fine for me.
fixed from ksg's mod:
  1. NCs
  2. rythm snapping
Please, stop showing me this 07:46:258 (1,2,3) - I know that this stack is not stacked. It's my idea, it fits the music because every sound is different and I wanted to distinguish it.

thank you.
Update file:http://shmiklak.s-ul.eu/wispggeblan
KappaPraise
316 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
KappaPraise

O-Moei wrote:

Hi !, 🌀NM request

✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )

I never modded marathons before. So I guess for now, I'll just mod from the beginning, until 04:11:142 -
Here we go...

General :
✨It's the same songs with this map ?. Maybe add these in Tags. It is all has been equalized through the songs
Tags
House Trance Electro Progressive Remix Acapella Instrumental Calvin Harris Ellie Goulding Need Love Nicky Romero Alesso One Republic Lose Myself Lana Del Rey Young Beautiful Kaskade Symphonica Burn Tiesto Steve Angello Matisse Sadko SLVR Sebjak Marcus Schossow Liceu Krewella Legacy Arno Cost Chasing R3hab Quintino Atmosphere Moguai Dimitri Vegas Like Mike Mammoth Hard Rock Sofa Rasputin Summertime Sadness David Guetta GLOWINTHEDARK Fatboy Slim Eat Sleep Rave Repeat Thomas Newson New World Sound Flute Knife LRAD Tommy Trash Aston Shuffle Sunrise GTA Henrix Digital Lab Hit It Showtek Get Loose Martik Garrix Animals Zedd Lucky Date Fall Into The Sky Alive Dannic Clobber Wakanda Deorro Yee TJR Suckaz Don Diablo Matt Nash Starlight Chuckie Down This W&W Ummet Ozcan Code Hardwell MakJ Countdown DVBBS Borgeous Tsunami Avicii Aloe Blacc Wake Party Axwell Center Universe Capital Cities Safe Booyah Armin Van Buuren Trevore Guthrie What Feels Dyro Paradise Apollo Clarity Alvaro Mercer Lil Jon

Marathon :
💧02:26:956 - Stacked 2 green lines Ops...

✨01:40:444 (1,2) - Swap this NC (since you did this system like 01:36:723 (4,1) -)

✨02:59:514 (1,3) - ^ (for consistencies NC stanzas)
03:03:235 (1,3) - ^
03:06:956 (1,3) - ^ then remove NC here 03:10:677 (1) -

✨03:33:933 (5,1) - ^
03:28:351 (1,2) - ^

✨03:44:165 (4) - NC
03:38:584 (3) - NC (like 03:31:142 (1) - )

✨01:49:746 (6) - This one can be NC for closing scene
04:11:142 (3) - ^

✨02:16:723 (1) - No need to NC this one, I guess
03:25:328 (1) - ^
Fixed almost all NC problems

✨02:26:491 (8) - Two suggestions :
1. You can give an SV change then NC this, for variety since it has a different rhythm within the song
2. You can give it a bit more spacing with 02:26:956 (1) - , so there's no need to NC
Add faster SV, NC and new shape, but didnt increse spaceing add didnt removed NC from next slider, because anyway SV changing add we need this NC.

Okai, that's all from me. All e best :)
Thx for NC mod xd
Electoz
1,886 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
Denied kudosu as requested by M a r v o l l o.
O-Moei
O-Moei
OMG, most of my mod is NC mods, I just realized XDXD

but well, it's cool map already anyway. Good luck :)
xChorse
765 posts
Joined December 2012
xChorse
nice map

irc mod thing
2016-10-04 17:20 WISPG_G: have you a minute(around 30 minutes) for me? xd
2016-10-04 17:21 xChorse: sure
2016-10-04 17:21 WISPG_G: can you please mod my marathon?
2016-10-04 17:21 WISPG_G: xd
2016-10-04 17:21 xChorse: lol
2016-10-04 17:21 WISPG_G: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1091478 Dzeko & Torres - 2013 In 10 Minutes]
2016-10-04 17:21 xChorse: I can I pretty much told you everything I could
2016-10-04 17:21 xChorse: I can check the newest part though
2016-10-04 17:22 WISPG_G: Check whatever you want, but help me with mod please
2016-10-04 17:22 WISPG_G: xd
2016-10-04 17:22 WISPG_G: also
2016-10-04 17:22 WISPG_G: redownload please
2016-10-04 17:22 xChorse: yeah
2016-10-04 17:23 WISPG_G: there some additional hitsounds xd
2016-10-04 17:23 WISPG_G: hope you'll like it
2016-10-04 17:24 xChorse: I can tell you some things that I would change
2016-10-04 17:25 xChorse: but I don't want to go too in-depth
2016-10-04 17:25 xChorse: 00:17:653 (3,3) -
2016-10-04 17:25 xChorse: I would curve these a bit more
2016-10-04 17:26 xChorse: they look pretty bland like this
2016-10-04 17:26 WISPG_G: may be
2016-10-04 17:26 WISPG_G: i thought about that too
2016-10-04 17:27 xChorse: 00:25:793 (1,2) - idk if the extended slider is needed but it covers the vocals so you can keep it if you want
2016-10-04 17:27 WISPG_G: yep
2016-10-04 17:28 xChorse: 01:16:258 (1) -
2016-10-04 17:28 xChorse: this one is a bit bland too
2016-10-04 17:28 xChorse: it has a really strong sound here but the slider doesn't represent the sound too well
2016-10-04 17:28 xChorse: make it something more interesting like 01:21:374 (4) -
2016-10-04 17:29 WISPG_G: I can make blanket xd
2016-10-04 17:29 xChorse: yeah that's good too
2016-10-04 17:31 xChorse: 02:15:560 (5) - idk about this stack
2016-10-04 17:32 xChorse: 03:29:281 (1) -
2016-10-04 17:32 xChorse: copy paste and rotate this 03:27:421 (2) - instead
2016-10-04 17:32 xChorse: the (1) looks a bit derpy
2016-10-04 17:33 WISPG_G: Good idea
2016-10-04 17:34 WISPG_G: Can I ask you?
2016-10-04 17:34 xChorse: 04:11:142 (1) - move this to x:176 y:240
2016-10-04 17:34 WISPG_G: 03:37:421 (2) - this slider
2016-10-04 17:34 xChorse: sure
2016-10-04 17:34 WISPG_G: Do you hear how it ends on 1 tick earlier?
2016-10-04 17:34 WISPG_G: Too?
2016-10-04 17:35 xChorse: sound ends on 03:38:119 - but it fades out really fast
2016-10-04 17:36 xChorse: 05:23:700 (1) - I pointed this one out before but I'll still mention it
2016-10-04 17:36 xChorse: Maybe NC this? 05:25:560 (2) -
2016-10-04 17:37 WISPG_G: Mhm
2016-10-04 17:39 xChorse: no NC here 06:41:685 (1,2) - so take 06:39:979 (1) - off as well
2016-10-04 17:39 WISPG_G: This is not my part
2016-10-04 17:40 xChorse: ok gonna ignore that part then
2016-10-04 17:41 xChorse: 08:21:839 (4,5,1) - awkward flow break
2016-10-04 17:42 xChorse: 08:36:723 (2) - you mapped this sound but not this08:44:165 -
2016-10-04 17:43 WISPG_G: I'll try improve that flow
2016-10-04 17:43 WISPG_G: and also maybe will add somethin there
2016-10-04 17:44 xChorse: Maybe make the spacing lower on these 10:19:514 (5,6,7,8) -
2016-10-04 17:44 xChorse: pretty easy to accidentally drop the slider like this
2016-10-04 17:44 WISPG_G: and you too that way xd
2016-10-04 17:45 xChorse: Wouldn't want that at the end of the map xd
2016-10-04 17:45 xChorse: would be fine if it was like 1 min in
2016-10-04 17:45 xChorse: but losing combo to such a thing would feel so bad lol
2016-10-04 17:45 WISPG_G: I asked around 3 times I guess already
2016-10-04 17:45 xChorse: 10:20:444 (7) - isn't stacked on the stream so there's nothing stopping you tbh
2016-10-04 17:45 WISPG_G: But followcircles placed pretty close to next slider and its hard break here combo
2016-10-04 17:46 xChorse: welp
2016-10-04 17:46 xChorse: your decision
2016-10-04 17:47 xChorse: that's it pretty much
ItashaS13
678 posts
Joined January 2014
ItashaS13


  • Marathon

    00:32:537 (2) - stack its end with 00:31:374 (6) -
    00:36:258 (4) - should do ctrl+h to this and move to its actual position because the end of the slider doesnt really looks good with the placement of the next circle, doing ctrl+h and moving it back fixes it
    01:21:374 (4) - move this down to make a line straight from 3
    02:21:142 (9) - in the parts like this you should make something like you did 01:30:212 (5,6,7,8,1) - to make emphasis on that sound
    02:28:584 - this should be clickable
    02:36:026 - ^
    02:28:816 (1,2) - spacing here looks like 1/4 instead of 1/2, should fix it
    03:17:188 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here isnt too much? yea, low bpm and 1/2 but still
    04:56:026 (2,3,4) - should improve the flow here, the slidershape makes a little break of flow, and the rest of triplet-sliders will not have such break
    06:39:359 (1,2) - this should be like 06:39:824 (3,4) - < https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6244855 >
    07:46:491 (3) - this should look better at 289/328 imo
    07:46:491 (3) - this one at 256/91
    07:56:258 (1,2) - snapping here changes but the spacing looks the same as 07:55:793 (6,1) - (move the 2 closer)
    09:10:677 (1) - blanket
    09:28:351 (3) - ^
    09:32:072 (3) - ^
    09:39:979 (8,2) - stack their ends properly
    10:35:328 (6) - this is intentional? the spacing? if itsnt intentional, fix it

GLGL sorry for short mod this map is very good :x
KappaPraise
316 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
KappaPraise

Itasha_S13 wrote:



  • Marathon

    00:32:537 (2) - stack its end with 00:31:374 (6) - ok
    00:36:258 (4) - should do ctrl+h to this and move to its actual position because the end of the slider doesnt really looks good with the placement of the next circle, doing ctrl+h and moving it back fixes it I cant see any problems with that
    01:21:374 (4) - move this down to make a line straight from 3 Well
    02:21:142 (9) - in the parts like this you should make something like you did 01:30:212 (5,6,7,8,1) - to make emphasis on that sound I tried, but making 1 hitsound here sounds bad for me
    02:28:584 - this should be clickable not rly xd
    02:36:026 - ^ ^
    02:28:816 (1,2) - spacing here looks like 1/4 instead of 1/2, should fix it Oh, I dont know how I made it X_X fixed
    03:17:188 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here isnt too much? yea, low bpm and 1/2 but still You asked yourself on your question xd
    04:56:026 (2,3,4) - should improve the flow here, the slidershape makes a little break of flow, and the rest of triplet-sliders will not have such break Its fine, I planned that
    09:10:677 (1) - blanket :V
    09:28:351 (3) - ^ :VV
    09:32:072 (3) - ^ :VVV
    09:39:979 (8,2) - stack their ends properly Um... an eagle eye xd
    10:35:328 (6) - this is intentional? the spacing? if itsnt intentional, fix it wut?
GLGL sorry for short mod this map is very good :x
Thx for mod o/
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak
no changes. NCs were placed for sound, not for tacts. patterns fully fit my standards. thank you for checking.
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