1. BakaHuang's Normal (2.82 stars, 193 notes)
2. Easy (1.19 stars, 133 notes)
3. Hard (4.42 stars, 305 notes)

HellDawn wrote:

General
Bpm and Offset very good
could u use this bg ?

SPOILER

http://tozsuzkalintilar.files.wordpress.com/2011/04/img-wallpapers-candle-light_water-priyadarsh-sarwade-77691.jpg

Easy
Incomplete.

BakaHuang's Normal
00:42:058 > Remove new combo Fixed
01:56:473 > RNC No!
02:36:981 > RNC No!
02:38:481 > New combo No!

Expert
Can't find anything wrong here.

Very nice maps, and I enjoy listen.
All the best!

KuraiPettan wrote:

BakaHuang's Normal
- AR +1, it will be more readable I thinkfix
00:10:551 (3) - Add a finis at the beginning of this slider ?fix
00:18:353 (2) - This kind of slider is not appropriate here, you'd better do a 1/2 long slider here.fix
00:24:054 (1) - But this one looks fine
00:27:355 (5) - Isn't this slider a bit close from (4) ? :/ Move it 1 grid down and it will look nicer imo fix
00:35:456 (2,3) - This part don't really fit the vocals, if you want to fit them, do something like http://puu.sh/1W9ofix
00:38:757 (1) - Add a clap at the beginning ? fix
00:51:960 (5) - Add a clap at the beginning ? fix
01:06:963 (3) - Add a clap onto the reverse ?fix
01:38:169 (2) - As 00:18:353 (2), it's not appropriate here :/fix
01:46:571 (1) - Add a clap at the end ?fix
02:14:777 (5) - Same for this one this one?
02:23:779 (5) - As 00:27:355 (5), this slider is too close rom (4) and it looks ugly, move it 1 grid down ?fix
02:24:978 (7) - A finish would be more appropriated here in my opinionfix
02:59:785 (5) - Try to make the end correctly stacked with (2) ?fix
03:02:186 (3) - Add a clap onto the reverse ?fix

Debbiee wrote:

BakaHuang's Normal
00:18:353 (2) - Remove this slider. Add a circle here: 00:18:353 no thanks, but i have changed it in another way
00:18:953 (3) - Then move this slider here: 00:18:653 Extend it here: 00:19:553^
00:24:054 (1) - Remove this slider. Add 2 circles instead: 00:24:054, 00:24:354no thanks

1. Ok first of all, I sort of want to encourage people on using grid level 4. I think it's much cooler imo, because you can be much more precise wihle placing circles and beziering the sliders. So that's an advise, and not actually part of the mod
2. I think that the Soft Hitclap on this song kind of sucks xD I'd at least use the Normal Hitclap - You know, just get it from the template skin and set it as the custom Soft one. But if you like you clap, keep it.

1. Let's say that... There are a lot of spacing issues. I'll mention a few, assuming that you worked with Grid Snap off. If you have Distance Snapping off, please turn it on.
2. 00:29:155 (7) - This isn't correctly snapped (from 6). Please fix it.
3. 00:41:758 (2) - Why is there a sort of jump here? I mean, the distance is much greater than the one you should use. Please fix this too.
4. Meh actually I don't think it's worth mentioning them all, not because I'm lazy but because I don't want to be a Nazi ;_; so:
5. My suggestion: Go through the whole map with Grid Snap and Distance Snap ON (both of them), use Grid Level 4, and try to place everything on the correct Distance from the previous object. You'll learn much more than if I just tell you what to fix

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi~

[General]

1. Ok first of all, I sort of want to encourage people on using grid level 4. I think it's much cooler imo, because you can be much more precise wihle placing circles and beziering the sliders. So that's an advise, and not actually part of the mod well, i used to map with grid 4 but i wanted to try with grid 3 and shift for angles. Mapping with grid 3 took less than mapping with grid 4. I was lazy..i know
2. I think that the Soft Hitclap on this song kind of sucks xD I'd at least use the Normal Hitclap - You know, just get it from the template skin and set it as the custom Soft one. But if you like you clap, keep it. dunno...maybe...i'll think about this

[Easy]

1. Let's say that... There are a lot of spacing issues. I'll mention a few, assuming that you worked with Grid Snap off. If you have Distance Snapping off, please turn it on.
2. 00:29:155 (7) - This isn't correctly snapped (from 6). Please fix it. good
3. 00:41:758 (2) - Why is there a sort of jump here? I mean, the distance is much greater than the one you should use. Please fix this too.
4. Meh actually I don't think it's worth mentioning them all, not because I'm lazy but because I don't want to be a Nazi ;_; so:
5. My suggestion: Go through the whole map with Grid Snap and Distance Snap ON (both of them), use Grid Level 4, and try to place everything on the correct Distance from the previous object. You'll learn much more than if I just tell you what to fix

Well, actually... I can't complain about how you NC'd in general, or about the hitsounds (except for the clap thing mentioned in [General]. The other diffs have basically the same issue mentioned in [Easy], but they are good. So what you have to do is take your time to check the distances, and see how much you can improve on that.
//ok. this will take a long time...
But appart from that, good job. Have my star

xykbear wrote:

M4M.but there all my opinion ,they're may be incorrect.
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[General]
to long blank at last,you'd better cut it. fixed

[Easy]
01:19:265 (3) - so strange with a finish,clap is better deleted that finish.
01:21:666 (3) - ^ same
01:24:366 (3) - ^ same
01:24:966 (1) - finish no.
01:51:972 (1,2,3,4) - this arrange is not a good idea for a new player.fixed
02:02:774 (5) - clap no.will break the pattern

[Expert]
awesome ω thanks :>
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my work: viewtopic.php?t=50867

1. 00:17:453 (1,2,3,4)
2. 00:21:654 (2,3,4,5)
3. 00:24:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
4. etc...