1. Sol Ciel (3.06 stars, 889 notes)

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00:11:505 (1,1,1,1) - I think this pattern isn't rankable, you should review the timing here, you can place a new timing point at 492 than make a 1/3 pattern because that one is totally unconsistent and unreadable correctly for the player

00:54:104 (1) - I think the distance snap is too high here reduce it a bit

02:07:928 (3) - Be carefull with the changing rythm, maybe a slider could be better imo

02:11:016 (4) - Same here

02:12:339 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is very difficult to read, you must make a visible différence between the 1/4 and 1/2 Distance Snap

02:26:457 (2) - https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/zemhdrw.png this rythm should be easier

03:12:045 (1,2) - DS is different for every other patterns like this one, why did you changed that one ? and for the rest of this part, make 1 Constent DS between that reverse and slider, because this one is changing a lot and confusing the player and it's look kinda weird in editor

04:27:812 (1) - This is not following the voice with rythm

04:48:389 (1) - Kiai isn't needed on that bookmark

04:41:538 (1,2) - Replace on white tick the 1 and finish the 2 on the white tick

06:06:918 (3,4,5,6) - Wow, too spaced compared to other 1/4 patterns

06:09:271 (2) - Same

06:13:094 (1) - Same

Ponoyoshi wrote:

NM from my queue

only gonna respond to my parts

Sol Ciel

00:11:505 (1,1,1,1) - I think this pattern isn't rankable, you should review the timing here, you can place a new timing point at 492 than make a 1/3 pattern because that one is totally unconsistent and unreadable correctly for the player - yeah i changed but idk if it's good

00:54:104 (1) - I think the distance snap is too high here reduce it a bit - nerfed

03:12:045 (1,2) - DS is different for every other patterns like this one, why did you changed that one ? and for the rest of this part, make 1 Constent DS between that reverse and slider, because this one is changing a lot and confusing the player and it's look kinda weird in editor - made them all the same ds

04:27:812 (1) - This is not following the voice with rythm - it isn't supposed to

04:48:389 (1) - Kiai isn't needed on that bookmark - ??? it is needed, but i changed some stuff around

04:41:538 (1,2) - Replace on white tick the 1 and finish the 2 on the white tick - singer is off here, so the timing will be screwed. Changed it around tho

Relaxing beatmap, pretty clean globally

Good luck~

Ponoyoshi wrote:

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Sol Ciel

02:07:928 (3) - Be carefull with the changing rythm, maybe a slider could be better imo stacked these instead

02:11:016 (4) - Same here slider'd/

02:12:339 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is very difficult to read, you must make a visible différence between the 1/4 and 1/2 Distance Snap It's actualy 1/6 and 1/4 but yeah. Done making it more visible.

02:26:457 (2) - https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/zemhdrw.png this rythm should be easier naaah, your suggestion is right. But it'll be quite undermapped since the vocal is strong enough to be mapped.

06:06:918 (3,4,5,6) - Wow, too spaced compared to other 1/4 patterns It is quite spaced but it's intentional and still easily play able who have some experiences on reading stuffs.

06:09:271 (2) - Same

06:13:094 (1) - Same

Relaxing beatmap, pretty clean globally

Good luck~

_Meep_ wrote:

ze mod by ze meep

00:04:281 (1,2,3) - These are off sync

00:05:544 (1,2) - ^

00:08:385 (2,3) - ^ etc. etc. I'll leave it up to you to fix - same as above, tbh i didn't do the timing, and im shit at timing, will get someone to check this

00:44:692 (1,2) - It feels better if you Ctrl+G this and ctrl+g them AGAIN individually to fit the tone of the bell - sure

01:03:516 (1,3) - Not aligned/parallel ;w; - fixed

01:15:281 (1,2,3) - This is a bit too close imo,tagged along with the slow AR and its pretty hard to read whether theres even a gap - yas o/

01:31:163 (5) - I dont see a need for this note to be a 3/4 - violin is really slow and dragging so i drag the slider

01:35:869 (2) - this too,and if its still a 3/4, the indication that its a 3/4 into the slider 01:36:457 (1) - is still quite vague imo - fixed spacing and changed rhythm, but keeping the 1/4 gap

04:49:565 (3,4) - blanket off - fixed

Sorry that its small,I don't see much problems with the diff. - thanks meep <3

Log Off Now wrote:

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damn this is a noice map

[Sol Ciel]

There are some minor blanket errors at the start

00:18:670 (1) - slider end to x222 y81
00:23:122 (1) - slider end to x294 y146
00:30:576 (1) - slider end to x269 y36 - all fixed
00:52:339 (2,3,4,5) - Not a fan of this square flow, as this is the only flow that feels 'forced' when compared to the rest of this section, also the jump between (5,6) is also a little bit awkward because of this, a more smooth curved or triangle shape would be preferred imo - changed to triangle
01:15:281 (1,2,3) - I like the idea behind this, although I think it could feel a bit more natural to play, maybe try something like this? - fixed
03:20:722 (3,4) - Fix parallel, it's the only one thats not perfectly parallel in this section - done
03:29:104 (3) - NC to further enhance the readability of this? - sure
04:11:874 (3,4,5) - Any reason why this doesn't get as much spacing emphasis as 04:09:687 (4,5) - no reason, fixed.
04:22:812 (4,2) - Fix stack - fixed
05:22:212 (3) - slider end to x195 y149 - not really sure what you mean here
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Nice map gl! (sorry if it seemed super aesthetics focused, it's pretty solid otherwise) - yay

_Meep_ wrote:

ze mod by ze meep

03:06:898 - Spinner should start here instead because of vocal,imo right


Sorry that its small,I don't see much problems with the diff.

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damn this is a noice map ayy <3

[Sol Ciel]

There are some minor blanket errors at the start

02:24:692 (3,4) - Blanket? ooh right
02:33:957 (3,4,5) - Try to keep visual distance between (4,5) the same since this creates a weird unnecessary movement to play atm fair enough
02:57:339 (2) - Angle this slider a bit more to the right for a smoother flow, atm it feels like you need to do a tiny adjustment to the left done
02:58:222 (5,6) - Parallels nice one
03:05:869 (1,1) - I understand why you put the spinner here, but I feel like it doesn't fit the vocal as good as it could do, I would try a rhythm like this and start the spinner here 03:07:045 (1) - instead to get the full vocal covered and clickable. agreed
06:03:389 (7,8,1) - I would actually have a lot more spacing here just because of how much the music/hitsounds emphasise the next note, but I guess doing that would mess up the consistency, so up to you I guess naah, your suggestion is good
06:27:212 (1) - This slider looks a bit strange XD, I would move the anchor point further down so it doesn't look as strange/out of place done
06:46:036 (1) - ^ ^



Nice map gl! (sorry if it seemed super aesthetics focused, it's pretty solid otherwise)

Nao Tomori wrote:

ello

this mod is going to be really shitty cuz this map is nice..
rip


[aurelion sol]
before anything, the ar seems really high for this slow, lower density mapping. most 3 star diffs have lower ar than this, and this one isn't incredibly technical or anything that requires this high ar.

00:26:673 (3) - not the same slider as 2 for some reason? also awkward overlap wit h00:27:550 (1) - but that's kind of unavoidable - unfixable overlap lo but fixed the same slider issue

00:31:458 (2,3,4) - these hitsounds seem really loud for the tiny music box theyre following, the set 99 that it switches to at 00:40:561 - :ok_hand:

00:34:693 (6) - this placement seemed kind of random, blanket something or stack or something idk its just in the middle of nowhere - yeah tbh, fixed

00:50:575 (3) - shouldn't this have a bit more spacing? with the strong vocal like 00:54:104 (1) - or 00:49:398 (1) - ctrl+g \o/

01:14:104 (3) - seems like the only time that the slider isn't a mirrored version of the other one. - fixed

04:16:874 (3) - why is this one only lower spacing randomly? all the other ones at least have a followpoint. - fixed

04:35:913 (1) - you could make this look a bit better by doing this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6812406 since right now it looks somewhat "partitioned" - okay \o/

04:51:624 (4) - pretty large spacing here compared to similar other vocals imo. - fixed

04:56:624 - any reason this is kicksliders instead of a stream? stream was done here at 04:47:163 - which sounds pretty similar - yeah changed

05:02:506 (1) - weird to see this with no spacing emphasis when 05:04:859 (1) - gets a lot more, and all the other ones too. seems like an accident. - fixed too

sry for shit mod - tfw when applied everything

1. 00:17:969 (2,1) - The overlap here is not cool I think, you can just try to reverse the slider on the other side. It's just an exemple.
2. 00:55:281 (3,4,5) - Are you sure that those notes are parrallels on each other?
3. 01:57:045 (4,5,6) - Those notes like that on this part of the song is not needed I think, why not using longer sliders since its a slow part? Like you did here: 02:04:692 (1,2,3,4) -
4. 02:07:634 (2) - You should start the NC here, because the new rhythm is starting here c:
5. 02:10:575 (3) - Why not doing a reverse here? It can give more emphasis with the song I guess.
6. 02:47:045 (1) - That's so sad that the slider don't start on the same point as this note 02:46:163 (4) - you can try stacking it ;w;
7. 05:26:918 (2,3) - https://puu.sh/sQCyB/884c2a6c73.png Do something more spaced like that, I think it's more beautiful to see~
8. 05:47:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't really like the way they are packed on the border of the grid :/
9. 06:03:389 (7,8) - You can stack those two notes on this slider 06:03:683 (1) -
10. 06:12:800 (4) - Same for this note! Why the 5 is stacked, but not the 4?
11. 06:56:330 (1) - Why this is not mapped at the end? I think there is lot of potential!

Nao Tomori wrote:

ello eyy

this mod is going to be really shitty cuz this map is nice.. ty ty
rip


[aurelion sol]
before anything, the ar seems really high for this slow, lower density mapping. most 3 star diffs have lower ar than this, and this one isn't incredibly technical or anything that requires this high ar. Naah, I like 8.5 cause this map quite hard to read if I'm using AR lower than that.

01:46:310 - 01:48:075 - this suddenly ignores the violin, but you had 1/4 rhythms on it earlier which worked nicely. It is , but giving the player same plays for quite a long time gonna bore the players

01:59:986 (1) - not lined up with the "stream" thought I already have it

02:17:634 (4) - this looks a bit weird since the notes before it don't lead in to the slider properly. something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6812371 would look a bit better and making the angles on those circles consistent would look even better than my shitty sketch right

02:35:869 (3) - weird movement here. you have to abuse slider leniency to do 1-2 but 3 is super close to 2, even though it also has emphasis. i recommend moving 3 a bit away from the end of 2. aight

03:04:398 (2,3) - weird to abandon the 1/1 + 1/1 slider rhythm that you'd been doing up to now, at 02:59:692 (2) - and 03:02:045 (2) - right

05:30:447 (6) - make these overlaps consistent size: 05:28:094 (6) - 05:37:212 (5) - theyre generally pretty consistent the one i started with is off-center yep

05:53:094 (3,4) - might look marginally nicer if you rotated them so the cursor can go straight into the slider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6812559 this is Mir's

06:08:389 (1) - this does not sound strong enough to warrant a very large 1/4 jump going into it from a circle. i recommend moving 06:08:241 (8) - up or 1 down to lower the spacing here. - compare to 06:12:947 (5) - where it's stacked and it's a stronger vocal, 06:27:212 (1) - where slider leniency can be used.

06:51:624 (2) - this could look nicer with a little more spacing and a wider angle, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6812452 (this is like a pixel movement or something) agreed

k

sry for shit mod It's not shit at all! Please be more confident with yourself!

Pachiru wrote:

[Shu-shu]

1. 01:57:045 (4,5,6) - Those notes like that on this part of the song is not needed I think, why not using longer sliders since its a slow part? Like you did here: 02:04:692 (1,2,3,4) - naaah, I want to give player different experiences while playing this map
2. 02:07:634 (2) - You should start the NC here, because the new rhythm is starting here c: nope, the current one is already correct. If you listen to the vocal carefully.
3. 02:10:575 (3) - Why not doing a reverse here? It can give more emphasis with the song I guess. Naah, I really want to click something on 02:11:457 (4) - so yeah
4. 02:47:045 (1) - That's so sad that the slider don't start on the same point as this note 02:46:163 (4) - you can try stacking it ;w; did this intentionally since I just like this kind of stack play
5. 05:26:918 (2,3) - https://puu.sh/sQCyB/884c2a6c73.png Do something more spaced like that, I think it's more beautiful to see~ sure
6. 06:12:800 (4) - Same for this note! Why the 5 is stacked, but not the 4? agree
7. 06:56:330 (1) - Why this is not mapped at the end? I think there is lot of potential! It is! But let's just see.

That's all for me, this is great map! And there is a huge work on the hitsounds! Good luck for ranking <3