1. Astom's Hard (4,89 stars, 481 notes)
2. Insane (4,99 stars, 533 notes)
3. Normal (3,04 stars, 239 notes)

1. 05/11:
   uploaded to WIP
   Fixes according to Jarby's mod.
2. 06/10:
   Uploaded Astom's Hard.
   Moved to pending.
   Fixes according to Charles445's mod.
3. 06/11:
   Fixes according to NoHitter's mod.
   Added a custom normal-sliderslide.
   Fixes according to p3n's mod.
4. 06/12:
   Fixes according to Azure_Kyte's mod.
   Changed a star pattern in Insane (thanks Shiirn).
5. 06/13:
   Fix according to senaya's mod
   Fixes according to Azure_Kyte's mod
   Fixes according to jericho2442's suggestions (IRC)
   Fixes according to Ayeen's mod.
6. 06/14:
   Fixes according to Sir_Minelli's mod.
7. 06/15:
   Fixes according to lovhin456's mod.
   Changed background.
   Added a missing hitsound to the folder.
   Fixes according to KingsAK2's mod.
   Fixes according to KuraiPettan's mod.
   Fixes according to NotShinta's mod.
   Added a soft-slidertick hitsound.
   Fixes according to RandomJibberish's mod.
8. 06/16:
   Updated Astom's diff.
   Bubbled by RandomJibberish.

Jarby wrote:

Not going to get into adjusting the timing itself, but switch the offset to 1137 for the sake of the metronome. Alright.

Insane:

01:04:415 (8,9) - We don't do jumps like this. If you must, put a new combo on 5 and 9 to seperate them. Also, I find the switch from the straight to heavily curved stream pattern uncalled for. Stick to one for both in this segment I'd say. Well, the sounds here change completely, so I wanted to make the pattern change completely because of that. I added the new combos.
01:22:820 (1,1,2) - Are you sure you don't want to at least incorporate sliders here? It's too drastic a switch in difficulty and style otherwise. A boring and unsettling switch indeed. Actually, here again, the song completely changes. It switches to a boring streak of held notes. I just didn't want to use sliders because I wanted to try out what HP sopts played like.
01:46:649 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Failed symmetry. Ctrl+H, victory. I suck.
01:55:586 (5,6,7) - The massive spacing shift here is just uncalled for. That's it. Changed for now. Might switch to sliders.
02:17:288 - Oh no, unreadable spacing shift due to lack of ticks! Make a storyboard or something if you want, I don't know. hm... None of the testplayers had problems here. I thought leaving a blank right after the previous note would reset the player's mind and make them base the slider speed on the first sliders they play... Waiting for more feedback here.
02:51:330 (1,1,2) - Are you sure you don't want to at least incorporate sliders here? Same answer as above.
02:58:139 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how cramped these are all of a sudden especially when you consider the lack of the pattern at the previous section. It fails to build momentum for me. They aren't building momentum - the momentum would be killed by the angular change anyway. But since I used progressive spacing the first time, I need to use progressive spacing here as well.

Charles445 wrote:

General
The background is very colorful, why not use something like orange to replace combo color 1? The colours are from Hatsune Miku's suit (black) and hair (blue). Orange wouldn't fit. :/
The beginning part before the first break sounds very late to me. Might want to check the timing again WHAT THE FUCK MY SLIDERENDS ALL UNSNAPPED D: thanks for noticing

Normal
Those finishes are breaking my ear drums, they're so loud! But they have the same volume as in Insane ;_; not fixing for now
I don't like the use of new combo spacing in this difficulty. It just doesn't fit this normal. I needed to make something consistent with Insane, so I used the same tricks. I just didn't use as drastic spacing changes as in Insane. I did hesitate about it though, so I asked a new player I know, and he didn't have problems playing it, so I assumed it was fine.
00:13:043 - New combo? It would be more consistent Okay
01:24:096 - Move this to 01:24:522. No, it's mean to be on the beginning of the lyrics
02:52:607 - Move this to 02:53:032. Same


Insane
I highly recommend NOT using Circle Size 6. You should use Circle Size 5 or 4. Garven's idea ! I actually like how it plays
00:12:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stack leniency is making this stack badly. Try doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/98464 looks good, fixed
Nothing really here, the hp drain is perfect and the spacing is good. thanks
You used more than 3 slider speeds but blended it well so I don't care. They're at the HP drain spot

NoHItter wrote:

Normal
There seems to be some inconsistency with the distance spacing of notes separated by 1/2 in the timeline. The spacing itself changes depending on the section - that applies as well to 1/1 notes.
00:27:501 (1,2,1) - Not too sure about these anti-jumps. (Especially on Normal) Changed
00:28:351 (1) - Was expecting the normal finish here. After all, all other finishes in the chorus are normal finishes. D: my mistake, fixed
01:04:947 (1) - [nazi] Spacing. Sorry, it really stood out. Oh man. What a disgrace. You're right to point it out.
01:24:309 (x) - Add note? made a slider
01:36:437 (1) - Same as 00:28:351 (1) Fixed.
01:39:841 (1) - Move this further away from previous combo? Okay
02:52:820 (x) - Add note here? made a slider
03:04:947 (1) - Same as 00:28:351 (1) fixed


Insane
I don't suppose, I can convince you to increase Circle Size? hehe =p
00:12:618 (5) - I'm not sure about the inconsistent spacing in this compressed stream :/ Well, they weren't supposed to be that far from each other. But the idea is that there are two parts in the lyrics (like dodododo dadadada) so I wanted the stream to represent that. I've used that several times later in the map.
00:27:501 (1,2) - Stack these instead? No, the anti-jumps are made on purpose.
00:28:351 (1) - Was expecting the normal finish here. After all, all other finishes in the chorus are normal finishes. Fixed.
01:04:522 (1) - Same as 00:12:618 (5) Same answer
01:04:947 (5) - Don't stack this on the previous note? okay
01:35:585 (2,3) - Space them with the same spacing as the previous combos? had to stack them ><
01:36:437 (1) - Same as 00:28:351 (1) fixed
02:09:096 (4,5) - I don't suggest you add inconsistent spacing in streams.
02:09:522 (8,9) - Same as above
02:09:947 (12,13) - Same as above
not fixing for now - it does play fine and is readable
02:27:607 (1,1,1,1) - They just barely hit the 2000 Bonus mark. Perhaps just making them two spinners? hm I'd rather not... not fixing for now
02:40:266 (1,2) - I really think adding anti-jumps is confusing :/ They are readable though - not fixing ><
03:01:543 (1,2) - Don't stack these? kinda forced to stack them :/
03:04:947 (1) - Same as 00:28:351 (1)

Charles445 wrote:

Aston's Hard Astom cof cof
00:08:153 (2) - This slider doesn't fit the music much fixed
01:05:373 - Remove new combo? no
01:49:309 (3,4,5,6) - This doesn't fit the music. The music is on the 1/3 and your stream is on the 1/4. fixed, but not really necesary
02:11:756 (4) - This slider is hard to read because it is under the other slider. Please move it out from under there. ok ok
02:13:458 (4) - ^^
It's a very nice hard; it complements the Insane very well. ^^

[/quote="p3n"]

[Astom's Hard]
00:10:066 (5,6,7,8,9) - Kinda confusing, I had to look it up in the editor to get the 1/4 triplet right. Maybe stack (6,7,8) and use 1,0x spacing between (4,5) (6,7,8) and (9,10)? mm no
Great map. thx

p3n wrote:

Couldn't find much more than stuff that is a matter of taste. Guess this is not worth any kd for modding an almost perfect mapset.

[Normal]
00:29:202 (3) - not as perfectly curved as all your other sliders fixed =p
01:00:479 (3,1,2,3,4) - mini-anti-jump doesn't fit here imo (and looks weird) okay, changed
flawless otherwise.

[Astom's Hard]
00:10:066 (5,6,7,8,9) - Kinda confusing, I had to look it up in the editor to get the 1/4 triplet right. Maybe stack (6,7,8) and use 1,0x spacing between (4,5) (6,7,8) and (9,10)?
Great map.

[Insane]
Dem streamz are f'n pr0 omgwtfbbq! I don't like it personally but other than that nothing "wrong" with it.


~star

• • I honestly don't like the combo colours. Why don't you choose some colours that would match with the background?
  I know that the actual colours are from Hatsune Miku's suit, but... D:
  Anyway, if you want to change them, you could use these, for example:
  SPOILER

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 234,77,77
  Combo2 : 155,216,238
  Combo3 : 227,224,79

• • 00:28:351 (1,2) - I don't like this stack, fix it.
  • 03:10:266 (1) - Add a slider repetition.

quintitem wrote:

hihi~ <3

[General]
- hmm maybe use one red line: bpm 141.000 offset1117 then it's ok? :3 Discussed over IRC.
- more than 3 slider velocity... hmm I think you know already so it's you want to do this, right? ma and it's no problem during I play, so ok xD hehe =P they do fit, so I don't think it's a problem

[Insane]
- 00:12:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is readable for all 1/4 but...spacing too close so maybe a little ugly IMO? D: maybe the spacing in 1~4 and 5~8 can more bigger? xD like this-> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/98813 I do like the way it is now. It used to be stacked, but stack leniency made it ugly, so I had to do that. ><


then others are fine >w</ star~

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

• • I honestly don't like the combo colours. Why don't you choose some colours that would match with the background?
  I know that the actual colours are from Hatsune Miku's suit, but... D: I don't see what would suit a Hatsune Miku map more than a Hatsune Miku suit D: Also these colours are easy to see on this background, so not changing, sorry :/
  Anyway, if you want to change them, you could use these, for example:
  SPOILER

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 234,77,77
  Combo2 : 155,216,238
  Combo3 : 227,224,79

[Astom's Hard]

• • 00:28:351 (1,2) - I don't like this stack, fix it.
  • 03:10:266 (1) - Add a slider repetition.

Nice map, good job. Thanks !