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Topic Starter
Renumi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, January 19, 2017 at 9:49:27 PM

Artist: tomppabeats
Title: i want to tell you i love you but i can't (ft. olli)
Tags: beats helsinki battle theduckmask
BPM: 92
Filesize: 2051kb
Play Time: 00:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. battle's easy (1.24 stars, 30 notes)
  2. normal (1.59 stars, 50 notes)
Download: tomppabeats - i want to tell you i love you but i can't (ft. olli)
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easy by battle ;
normal by renumi ;
storyboard created by theduckmask.
Est-
2016-12-17 00:49 Est-: shitmap
2016-12-17 00:49 Est-: remap
2016-12-17 00:49 Est-: kds pls
2016-12-17 00:50 Renumi: ty
2016-12-17 00:50 Renumi: post log
2016-12-17 00:50 Renumi: i'll kd
2016-12-17 00:50 Est-: kk
Topic Starter
Renumi

Est- wrote:

2016-12-17 00:49 Est-: shitmap
2016-12-17 00:49 Est-: remap
2016-12-17 00:49 Est-: kds pls
2016-12-17 00:50 Renumi: ty
2016-12-17 00:50 Renumi: post log
2016-12-17 00:50 Renumi: i'll kd
2016-12-17 00:50 Est-: kk
high quality irc mod as always my dearest
Julie
Simple map =w=
[Easy]

00:21:570 (1) - How about putting the red dot of the slider on the small beat in the slider http://puu.sh/sSjx5/936d203e66.jpg. So can feel the change of direction is at 00:22:222 - from a loud sound.

00:37:222 (1) - ^ Same reason here, http://puu.sh/sSjHR/a513ba04d4.jpg, is not exact, but the point is, the change of pitch at around 00:37:657 -
Weber
mod

battle's easy

00:17:657 (2) - flow is super harsh for easy players here leading into (3)
00:20:266 (4) - Slider end could be curved a little tighter around (3)
00:21:570 (1,2) - Align these two ends
00:35:918 (5) - I would use a red dot to bend this slider slightly upwards so it can have a similar visual effect to 00:37:222 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6826428
(Also as well as ^, I recommend tilting the slider no matter your decision on ^ at the same angle as the start of 00:37:222 (1) - to make a nice parallel.)

normal

00:15:049 (3) - Fairly certain 1/16 note placement isn't necessary for a song like this, placing it on blue tick is fine
00:25:483 (2) - ^
00:35:918 (3) - ^
00:33:309 (3,4,1) - These could flow a little better by bringing (4,1) a little higher

Good luck
Topic Starter
Renumi

Weber wrote:

mod

normal

00:15:049 (3) - Fairly certain 1/16 note placement isn't necessary for a song like this, placing it on blue tick is fine maybe i was pretty tired and thought they came at a later time but alright guess it's just me
00:25:483 (2) - ^
00:35:918 (3) - ^
00:33:309 (3,4,1) - These could flow a little better by bringing (4,1) a little higher true, lifted a bit higher + fixed a few stuff at that part

Good luck
thanks for the mod !
Battle
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Topic Starter
Renumi
kthx updated
Ora
battle's diff:

00:21:570 (1) - Maybe make the second part of this curve more symmetrical to blanket 00:22:875 (2) - better.
00:39:831 (4,5) - This could easily just be a blanket. The curve you have now is kind of random https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6830868


IRC with Renumi :^)
14:00 Renumi: oraroaoraoraoraorafroraroaroaroara
14:00 Renumi: do you do m4m im desperate
14:00 Ora: ay
14:00 Ora: yeah sure why not
14:00 Renumi: oh really
14:00 Ora: I havent modded in like a month tho
14:01 Renumi: i modded my first map in a month today too
14:01 Renumi: that makes too of us
14:01 Renumi: two*
14:02 Renumi: so which map are you taking?
14:02 Ora: xD
14:02 Ora: what do you mean?
14:02 Ora: Im trying to rank this
14:02 *Ora is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1119826 Kotringo - Harmonia]
14:02 Renumi: i mean adfsd
14:03 Renumi: oh that one o:
14:03 Ora: whats your map?
14:03 Renumi: uhhm sec
14:04 Renumi: long title beware
14:04 *Renumi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1157430 tomppabeats - i want to tell you i love you but i can't (ft. olli)]
14:04 Renumi: going to try to push this
14:05 Ora: I can just irc mod for you right now
14:06 Renumi: that works too
14:06 Renumi: :d
14:06 Ora: lol what is that kiai time
14:07 Renumi: i just want a burst
14:07 Renumi: no real kiai in this
14:07 Renumi: lol
14:07 Ora: I see
14:07 Ora: 00:37:222 - is pretty much the same
14:07 Ora: but i guess you just want 1 burst
14:08 Renumi: yeahp
14:08 Renumi: one burst into the next section of the song
14:10 Ora: hmm well the diff is basically an easy
14:11 Ora: has anyone complained about the DS?
14:11 Renumi: not really
14:12 Ora: I just say that because they usually want consistent DS throughout the entire map for lower diffs
14:12 Ora: i dont think it's a big problem but be ready for others to mention it
14:13 Renumi: alriight
14:13 Ora: 00:17:331 (2,1) -
14:13 Renumi: isn't ds consistent enough?
14:13 Ora: yeah yours is only changing at some parts by 1.0DS
14:13 Ora: thats why I didnt think it was a big deal
14:14 Ora: i mean
14:14 Ora: 0.1DS
14:14 Ora: not 1.0
14:14 Renumi: yeah alright
14:14 Ora: like if you look at 00:17:331 (2) -
14:14 Renumi: i should look over and fix those things
14:14 Ora: it says the previous is 1.08 and the next is .97]
14:15 Renumi: yeahyeah
14:15 Renumi: this is helpful o:
14:16 Ora: Im not saying it needs to be changed tbh
14:16 Ora: because there are circumstances where it's fine to do
14:16 Ora: and it's really not that big of a change
14:16 Ora: 0.1 is nothing
14:16 Renumi: exactly
14:16 Renumi: which is why i did that in the first place
14:17 Renumi: not saying it was intentional, just "should be fine"
14:17 Ora: yeah it's just for easy diffs, beginners are more comfortable where DS feels the same
14:17 Ora: like in battle's diff he only uses 1.3DS
14:17 Ora: for everything
14:18 Ora: k so for 00:17:331 (2,1) -
14:18 Ora: I think you could curve that slider better into 1
14:19 Ora: its just a tiny bit off
14:19 Ora: you do better at 00:13:744 (1,2) -
14:19 Renumi: i can see that :o
14:19 Renumi: repositioned
14:19 Ora: should be easy fix
14:19 Ora: k ^_^
14:20 Renumi: yea =w=
14:21 Ora: 00:22:875 (3,4,1) -
14:21 Ora: wait
14:21 Ora: yeah
14:21 Ora: spacing is a bit off there
14:22 Renumi: yeah
14:22 Ora: just use 1.0DS like you do for 00:33:309 (3,4,1) -
14:22 Renumi: will do ;w;7
14:22 Renumi: did it
14:24 Ora: like this stuff that Im modding is just polishing the map
14:24 Ora: your patterns and flow look great to me
14:25 Ora: just making sure everything is consistent
14:26 Ora: 00:20:918 (3) -
14:26 Ora: another really small easy change
14:26 Ora: 1.0ds like you do at 00:25:483 (2,3) -
14:26 Ora: and everythwere else for that same pattern
14:29 Ora: have you started looking for BNs for this yet?
14:29 Ora: it looks really good
14:30 Renumi: i've decided to get a few mods and opinions, even if it looks good
14:30 Renumi: better to be safe than sorry
14:31 Ora: yeah bns usually want like +12 SP before looking for one
14:31 Renumi: yea
14:31 Renumi: i'll get mods then i'll start looking for one
14:31 Renumi: when i reach a comfy sp that is
14:32 Ora: i mean it shouldnt be that long really lol
14:32 Ora: its like modding 1 diff of a tv size mapset
14:33 Ora: that timing point at 00:42:518 - did you make that?
14:33 Renumi: make as in..?
14:33 Renumi: ;w;
14:34 Ora: put it there xd
14:34 Renumi: o xd
14:34 Ora: Its fine how it is but I think you could have also just put the last note on 00:42:521 -
14:34 Ora: the 1/8 tick
14:35 Renumi: spinner and bpm in play panel
14:35 Renumi: i think?
14:35 Renumi: but then timing would be weird
14:35 Renumi: :d
14:35 Ora: I mean the offset you put is only -3MS offset
14:35 Ora: 42518
14:36 Ora: vs 42521
14:36 Ora: not that huge of a difference
14:36 Ora: but im not good with timing
14:36 Ora: so if thats the offset then keep it
14:36 Renumi: it's pretty solid
14:36 Renumi: yea
Topic Starter
Renumi

Ora wrote:

IRC with Renumi :^)
14:00 Renumi: oraroaoraoraoraorafroraroaroaroara
14:00 Renumi: do you do m4m im desperate
14:00 Ora: ay
14:00 Ora: yeah sure why not
14:00 Renumi: oh really
14:00 Ora: I havent modded in like a month tho
14:01 Renumi: i modded my first map in a month today too
14:01 Renumi: that makes too of us
14:01 Renumi: two*
14:02 Renumi: so which map are you taking?
14:02 Ora: xD
14:02 Ora: what do you mean?
14:02 Ora: Im trying to rank this
14:02 *Ora is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1119826 Kotringo - Harmonia]
14:02 Renumi: i mean adfsd
14:03 Renumi: oh that one o:
14:03 Ora: whats your map?
14:03 Renumi: uhhm sec
14:04 Renumi: long title beware
14:04 *Renumi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1157430 tomppabeats - i want to tell you i love you but i can't (ft. olli)]
14:04 Renumi: going to try to push this
14:05 Ora: I can just irc mod for you right now
14:06 Renumi: that works too
14:06 Renumi: :d
14:06 Ora: lol what is that kiai time
14:07 Renumi: i just want a burst
14:07 Renumi: no real kiai in this
14:07 Renumi: lol
14:07 Ora: I see
14:07 Ora: 00:37:222 - is pretty much the same
14:07 Ora: but i guess you just want 1 burst
14:08 Renumi: yeahp
14:08 Renumi: one burst into the next section of the song
14:10 Ora: hmm well the diff is basically an easy
14:11 Ora: has anyone complained about the DS?
14:11 Renumi: not really
14:12 Ora: I just say that because they usually want consistent DS throughout the entire map for lower diffs
14:12 Ora: i dont think it's a big problem but be ready for others to mention it
14:13 Renumi: alriight
14:13 Ora: 00:17:331 (2,1) -
14:13 Renumi: isn't ds consistent enough?
14:13 Ora: yeah yours is only changing at some parts by 1.0DS
14:13 Ora: thats why I didnt think it was a big deal
14:14 Ora: i mean
14:14 Ora: 0.1DS
14:14 Ora: not 1.0
14:14 Renumi: yeah alright
14:14 Ora: like if you look at 00:17:331 (2) -
14:14 Renumi: i should look over and fix those things
14:14 Ora: it says the previous is 1.08 and the next is .97]
14:15 Renumi: yeahyeah
14:15 Renumi: this is helpful o:
14:16 Ora: Im not saying it needs to be changed tbh
14:16 Ora: because there are circumstances where it's fine to do
14:16 Ora: and it's really not that big of a change
14:16 Ora: 0.1 is nothing
14:16 Renumi: exactly
14:16 Renumi: which is why i did that in the first place
14:17 Renumi: not saying it was intentional, just "should be fine"
14:17 Ora: yeah it's just for easy diffs, beginners are more comfortable where DS feels the same
14:17 Ora: like in battle's diff he only uses 1.3DS
14:17 Ora: for everything
14:18 Ora: k so for 00:17:331 (2,1) -
14:18 Ora: I think you could curve that slider better into 1
14:19 Ora: its just a tiny bit off
14:19 Ora: you do better at 00:13:744 (1,2) -
14:19 Renumi: i can see that :o
14:19 Renumi: repositioned
14:19 Ora: should be easy fix
14:19 Ora: k ^_^
14:20 Renumi: yea =w=
14:21 Ora: 00:22:875 (3,4,1) -
14:21 Ora: wait
14:21 Ora: yeah
14:21 Ora: spacing is a bit off there
14:22 Renumi: yeah
14:22 Ora: just use 1.0DS like you do for 00:33:309 (3,4,1) -
14:22 Renumi: will do ;w;7
14:22 Renumi: did it
14:24 Ora: like this stuff that Im modding is just polishing the map
14:24 Ora: your patterns and flow look great to me
14:25 Ora: just making sure everything is consistent
14:26 Ora: 00:20:918 (3) -
14:26 Ora: another really small easy change
14:26 Ora: 1.0ds like you do at 00:25:483 (2,3) -
14:26 Ora: and everythwere else for that same pattern
14:29 Ora: have you started looking for BNs for this yet?
14:29 Ora: it looks really good
14:30 Renumi: i've decided to get a few mods and opinions, even if it looks good
14:30 Renumi: better to be safe than sorry
14:31 Ora: yeah bns usually want like +12 SP before looking for one
14:31 Renumi: yea
14:31 Renumi: i'll get mods then i'll start looking for one
14:31 Renumi: when i reach a comfy sp that is
14:32 Ora: i mean it shouldnt be that long really lol
14:32 Ora: its like modding 1 diff of a tv size mapset
14:33 Ora: that timing point at 00:42:518 - did you make that?
14:33 Renumi: make as in..?
14:33 Renumi: ;w;
14:34 Ora: put it there xd
14:34 Renumi: o xd
14:34 Ora: Its fine how it is but I think you could have also just put the last note on 00:42:521 -
14:34 Ora: the 1/8 tick
14:35 Renumi: spinner and bpm in play panel
14:35 Renumi: i think?
14:35 Renumi: but then timing would be weird
14:35 Renumi: :d
14:35 Ora: I mean the offset you put is only -3MS offset
14:35 Ora: 42518
14:36 Ora: vs 42521
14:36 Ora: not that huge of a difference
14:36 Ora: but im not good with timing
14:36 Ora: so if thats the offset then keep it
14:36 Renumi: it's pretty solid
14:36 Renumi: yea
thanks !!
Battle
denied all, I don't want a blanket on the second one and the first one is so that the sound on the white tick has emphasis
Mir
Hi Ren-chan!~

Short mod for this map.~ Battle's diff is mainly some small aesthetics that are personal bugs tho.

[General]
  1. All good!

[]

Battle's Easy
[Easy]
  1. 00:18:962 (3) - If you move this closer to 2 you can get it equidistant from 00:17:657 (2,4) - without breaking DS.
  2. 00:21:570 (1,2) - Could improve this blanket.
  3. 00:23:853 (3,5) - :thinking: Might not be a huge deal, but I'll point it out so you're aware of this slight overlap.

Normal
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:962 (1) - This is the only place you skip the snare. I recommend mapping it for consistency.
The rest is fine.

Good luck!~
Battle
denied last point, it's not even visible in gameplay

please stop poking me, I know when mods come.
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Topic Starter
Renumi

Mir wrote:

Hi Ren-chan!~ >w<!~

Short mod for this map.~ Battle's diff is mainly some small aesthetics that are personal bugs tho.

[General]
  1. All good! :D

[Normal]
  1. 00:18:962 (1) - This is the only place you skip the snare. I recommend mapping it for consistency. well, i can see where you're coming from, but i also mapped this with the vocals in mind so i don't know... if more people point this out i'll reconsider changing it to something else; i'd like to keep this as long as it's not unrankable.
The rest is fine.

Good luck!~ thanks mir!~
also updated i'll stop poking battle lol
beaw
[battle's easy]
00:21:570 (1,2) - dad please blanket this better
00:39:831 (4,5) - this is nice but please make it less curvy

[normal]
00:30:701 (3,1) - dad please blanket this better
Topic Starter
Renumi

Stingy wrote:

[normal]
00:30:701 (3,1) - dad please blanket this better blanketed better and fixed some stuff that was bugging me personally around that part onward~
thanks curlee stingy >w>) /
Battle
fixed all
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: dedicated to a certain someone.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 10157
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22819
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:i want to tell you i love you but i can't (ft. olli)
TitleUnicode:i want to tell you i love you but i can't (ft. olli)
Artist:tomppabeats
ArtistUnicode:tomppabeats
Creator:Renumi
Version:battle's easy
Source:
Tags:beats tomppabeats helsinki olli!!! olli battle theduckmask
BeatmapID:1157430
BeatmapSetID:546432

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"huh.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
11136,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
32005,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
32168,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
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46431,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
47083,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
47735,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,147,147
Combo2 : 122,236,89
Combo3 : 157,157,255
SliderBorder : 188,202,224

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Topic Starter
Renumi
upd8ed
ZekeyHache
Hiiii ^^

[General]
  1. Seems you provided soundcloud and bandcamp from the artist... but I wasn't able to find this specific song anywhere there :c So, is there any reliable source for your metadata?
  2. Delete Thumbs.db from your SB folder~ In case you can't see this file, redownload your map and it should appear, then delete it and submit, I've seen this happen before~
  3. Your SB can be optimized. I'm pretty sure you don't need a blank 1366x768 image, since is just one color you can even make it 854x480 and it will look the same while needing less power, then you got a lot of unused space in the glow images, you can cut out the unused pixels :c
[Battle's Easy]
  1. 00:42:518 (1) - Well, I gotta say that it fits the music, but it's hard for beginners to understand this stack, it's pretty much a no no here. Even I got a 100 when hitting it :c
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:614 - Seems here is the only part where you ignored this kind of beat, so I recommend you to not ignore it to be more consistent~
  2. 00:37:222 (1,2) - I'm not a fan of how this feels, it would feel a lot better if you make (1)'s curve the opposite direction imo, like this
  3. 00:42:518 (1) - Just as in Easy, I believe this stack may be challenging, but it's more optional here~
Nice~
Topic Starter
Renumi
sankyu
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