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DWB feat. NIRGILIS - SHINY SHINY (TV Size)

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eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
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eldnl
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 07 de agosto de 2011 at 05:22:47 a.m.

Artist: DWB feat. NIRGILIS
Title: SHINY SHINY (TV Size)
Source: Deadman Wonderland
Tags: OzzyOzrock Haneii
BPM: 126
Filesize: 9060kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,75 stars, 76 notes)
  2. Haneii's Normal (3,58 stars, 126 notes)
  3. Hard (4,46 stars, 163 notes)
  4. Insane (4,93 stars, 215 notes)
  5. Ozzy's Taiko (4,81 stars, 304 notes)
Download: DWB feat. NIRGILIS - SHINY SHINY (TV Size)
Download: DWB feat. NIRGILIS - SHINY SHINY (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Deadman Wonderland ED

Verdi's Taiko Inner Oni here http://puu.sh/40PA

Ready
Last edited by eldnl , edited 45 times in total.
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
Sliderslide sounds very loud during the beginning, maybe add a custom silent sliderslide to the part before the break? :3
Also, more hitsounds would also sound really great before the kiai, maybe more whistles~?

[Easy]
01:01:991 (2) - Add finish?
01:03:896 (2) - ^
01:04:610 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 01:08:419?
01:16:991 (3) - Add finish?
01:18:896 (3) - ^

[Hard]
01:01:515 (4 end) - Add finish?
01:03:420 (4 end) - ^
01:16:753 (2 end) - ^
01:18:657 (2 end) - ^

[Insane]
01:01:515 (4 end) - ...Yeah, all same sliders in this diff too, add finish?

Sorry for a pretty useless modding, can't find anything bad about this. Great map, have a star<3
eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
2,930 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
eldnl

Lanttu wrote:

Sliderslide sounds very loud during the beginning, maybe add a custom silent sliderslide to the part before the break? :3
Also, more hitsounds would also sound really great before the kiai, maybe more whistles~? Do not know how to silence the sliders >.>

[Easy]
01:01:991 (2) - Add finish?
01:03:896 (2) - ^
01:04:610 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 01:08:419?
01:16:991 (3) - Add finish?
01:18:896 (3) - ^

[Hard]
01:01:515 (4 end) - Add finish?
01:03:420 (4 end) - ^
01:16:753 (2 end) - ^
01:18:657 (2 end) - ^

[Insane]
01:01:515 (4 end) - ...Yeah, all same sliders in this diff too, add finish?

Sorry for a pretty useless modding, can't find anything bad about this. Great map, have a star<3
Some changes. Thanks for mod :3
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
modding :D
All Suggestion

SPOILER
[General]
  1. 320kbps... unrankable
    use this? 192kbps http://puu.sh/2inz (No need change to offset)
  2. delete.osb and fullsubmit

    [Easy]
  3. 01:17:467 (x) - add note and clap?
  4. 01:19:372 (x) - ^

    [Hard]
  5. 01:00:324 (x) - add note?
  6. 01:02:229 (x) - ^
  7. 01:04:134 (x) - ^

good~ star :)
eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
2,930 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
eldnl

swish wrote:

modding :D
All Suggestion

SPOILER
[General]
  1. 320kbps... unrankable
    use this? 192kbps http://puu.sh/2inz (No need change to offset)
  2. delete.osb and fullsubmit

    [Easy]
  3. 01:17:467 (x) - add note and clap?
  4. 01:19:372 (x) - ^

    [Hard]
  5. 01:00:324 (x) - add note?
  6. 01:02:229 (x) - ^
  7. 01:04:134 (x) - ^

good~ star :)
Some fixed and thanks you very much for the mp3 :D
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
vivere
Hola :>

[Easy]:

• Approach Rate: -1 o -2, como mas te guste, ya que en 3 lo veo dificil... imo xD

00:14:134- Movelo 1 grid a la izquiera porque esta separado del 3 =P
01:29:848 (4, 5)- Recomiendo que a estas dos notas las cambies por un slider, ya que puede hacer que mayoria de los payers nuevos se equivoquen >.<.

[Hard]:

01:08:896- Pon una nota aqui sobre el slider? se ve muy bien asi... imo :>

[Insane]:

00:50:919- Muevelo 4 grids a la derecha y 1 hacia arriba... asi queda alineado con el (1).

Por favor, si puedes cambia el Circle Size a 4, no me gustan los círculos pequeños D:
_________________

Todo lo demás lo encuentro bien así que...

Star ^.~/
eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
2,930 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
eldnl

vivere wrote:

Hola :>

[Easy]:

• Approach Rate: -1 o -2, como mas te guste, ya que en 3 lo veo dificil... imo xD No, se cierran muy lento D:

00:14:134- Movelo 1 grid a la izquiera porque esta separado del 3 =P Oh shit, no le digas a nadie xD
01:29:848 (4, 5)- Recomiendo que a estas dos notas las cambies por un slider, ya que puede hacer que mayoria de los payers nuevos se equivoquen >.<. Ya lo tenia en cuenta, pero es como para acentuar esa parte.

[Hard]:

01:08:896- Pon una nota aqui sobre el slider? se ve muy bien asi... imo :> En esa parte sigue la voz no el instrumental

[Insane]:

00:50:919- Muevelo 4 grids a la derecha y 1 hacia arriba... asi queda alineado con el (1). Esta bien asi :d

Por favor, si puedes cambia el Circle Size a 4, no me gustan los círculos pequeños D: Se ve bien
_________________

Todo lo demás lo encuentro bien así que...

Star ^.~/
Gracias por el mod vivere :D
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
vivere

eldnl wrote:

00:14:134- Movelo 1 grid a la izquiera porque esta separado del 3 =P Oh shit, no le digas a nadie xD
... Lo marcaba el AiMod :P
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Elly-chan
Key: Red HAS TO BE FIXED. Blue IS A SUGGESTION.

(General)
-Add Tags. = w=
-Normal?
-Distance Snap For Hard and Insane - Some fixes unless you want it to be close and/or jumpy.
-Remove One Of The Two Kiai's.

(Normal)
Overall Difficulty - set to 3
Good Patterns :)

(Hard)
Slider Tick Rate - Change To 1.
-Distance snap? o uo
Good!!

(Insane)
Some Distance Snapping? o uo
Good!!

Star.~
eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
2,930 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
eldnl

Elly-chan wrote:

Key: Red HAS TO BE FIXED. Blue IS A SUGGESTION.

(General)
-Add Tags. = w= After, and this is orange.
-Normal? Maybe
-Distance Snap For Hard and Insane - Some fixes unless you want it to be close and/or jumpy. ?
-Remove One Of The Two Kiai's. What the ...

(Normal)
Overall Difficulty - set to 3 It's fine.
Good Patterns :)

(Hard)
Slider Tick Rate - Change To 1. Nop
-Distance snap? o uo ?
Good!!

(Insane)
Some Distance Snapping? o uo ?
Good!!

Star.~
thanks ;D
Deif
Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon
3,564 posts
Joined April 2010
Deif
Hola :3

General:
  1. Hay bastante diferencia de dificultad entre el Easy y el Hard. ¿Harás un Normal? (o encárgale en trabajo sucio a alguien/guest diff ;p)
  2. Para los Tags podrías añadir el significado de DWB (Deadman Wonderland Band). Tsk, ya está en el Source "Deadman Wonderland"...
Easy:
  1. Sugerencia tonta: Slider Tick = 2?
Hard:
  1. 00:35:324 (4,5) - Te recomiendo usar la misma distancia que con (3,4), de 2,13x aprox.
Insane:
  1. 00:50:681 (2,3) - Como antes, deberías usar la misma distancia que con (1,2), y además quedaría simétrico ;p
  2. Sugerencia de hitsounds: En el kiai se oyen claps en grupos de 2 siempre (ej: 0:55:562-0:55:800, 0:57:467-0:57:705, etc). Creo que estos son los que te faltarían (en los otros niveles quizá no se pueda, ya que faltan notas/sliderticks para ponerles el clap):
  3. 00:59:610 (4) - Clap en el principio.
  4. 01:01:515 (4) - ^
  5. 01:03:420 (4) - ^
  6. 01:05:324 (4) - Clap.
  7. 01:12:943 (x) - Añade nota o convierte a (5) en un slider con fin aquí + Clap.
  8. 01:16:753 (3) - Clap en el principio.
  9. 01:18:657 (3) - ^
Buen trabajo, sí señor =) Aquí tienes tu merecida estrella~
Verdisphena
4,240 posts
Joined June 2010
Verdisphena
:oops:
kazumikos
393 posts
Joined February 2010
kazumikos
hai~ ^^

nothing much to say ur map is almost flawless lol
just suggestions ;)

[General]
no hitsound at the first half of the map, well, nothing wrong, but some whistle after 00:23:658 would be nice :3

[Easy]
00:59:372 (2) - may be end at 01:00:324? or add a note there?
01:25:562 (2) - add whistle? y r there whistles at 01:27:467 (3) - and 01:29:372 (3) - but not here?

[Hard]
lets see, after 00:35:562 there's a silent part, how about making volume fading out at 00:35:324 (4,5) ? make one time section at 00:35:205 with volume 60%, one at 00:35:443 with 40% and one before 00:37:943 (1) with 80%?
01:01:515 (4) - add whistle to this slider (then remove whistle at the start and the end)
01:03:420 (4) - ^
01:05:324 (2,3,4,5,6) - add whistle?

[Insane]
volume fate out like [hard] ?
00:39:372 (5) - move the slider to start at 00:39:253, then add a note at 00:39:610? this fit the rhythm better ;) (ignore this if u want though xD)
01:01:515 (4) - add whistle to this slider (remove whistle at the start and the end)?
01:03:419 (4) - ^
01:05:324 (4,5,6,7,8) - add whistle?

star~
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
Easy

01:11:277 (3,4) - Would you mind fixing this spacing?

Hard

00:15:800 (2,3,4) - Make spacing even

00:28:896 (7,8) - use 1.0 snap? 00:30:562 (5) - this should be repositioned to the newly positioned note.


This is fun.
Insane

I didn't see anything really.



Good job. Star
eldnl
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eldnl
Fixed, thanks all for mod :D
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
Heya.

Speedy mod desu wa~
A couple of suggestions. I think it'd be better if you do that.

General
Offset + 5ms ? I dunno, the notes feel a bit too early to me.
How 'bout mapping an extra 4 Star Normal? Don't be lazy :<

Insane
Reduce the volume from the beginning to 00:37:948 - by 20%
00:10:329 (4) - delete this note, there is no actual vocal in here
00:41:758 (6) - align with the stream?
00:51:044 (3) - fix spacing to 1.6x
01:01:520 (4) - add clap
01:03:424 (4) - ^
01:12:948 - add note with clap? to keep the clap pattern up, ya know.
01:16:758 (3) - add clap
01:18:663 (3) - ^
01:25:086 (1) - add whistle
01:25:324 (2) - remove whistle
01:25:562 (3) - add whistle

Hard
Reduce the volume from the beginning to 00:37:948 - by 20%
00:57:705 - add note + clap?
00:59:372 (3) - add clap to end
01:01:515 (4) - add clap
01:03:420 (4) -
01:07:229 (6,7) - you don't really need those green lines in here, also it'd be better if you'd start the slider at 01:07:229 - . You can extend it a lil' bit, or you can lower the BPM multi a bit to make the slider keep its length.
01:11:039 - add note + clap?
01:12:943 - ^
01:14:848 (5) - add clap
01:16:753 (2) - ^
01:18:657 (2) - ^
01:25:086 (1) - add whistle
01:25:324 (2) - remove whistle
01:25:562 (3) - add whistle

Easy
Reduce the volume from the beginning to 00:37:948 - by 20%
00:40:800 (4) - extend by 1/4th


Star 'n go.
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
Easy
00:40:800 (4) - Extend to the white tick

Hard
Technically fine, but some of the jumps are a little tough compared to the overall difficulty of the map. AIMod lists all of the ones I was gonna point out, so you can check those out yourself.

Insane
~

Pretty solid, have a star.
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Mod a pedido de nanin <.<

offset: 8.446 o por ahi, confirmalo con alguien mas por ahi, pero creo que el que estas usando esta adelantado, igual puede ser un leve desajuste del bpm ya que el MixMeister me muestra 126,02. Ahi revisa tu, si necesitas mas ayuda me avisas.

[Hard]
-01:23:658 finish al inicio?

[Insane]
-00:23:445 (5,1) - el jump mas grande del map, creo q es poco predecible y que no estaria mal reducirlo un poco, a la mitad tal vez.

Esop, buen map :3, me gusta la cancion = ^^, asi que suerte.
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
thx reqs
but,nothing XD

nice~
MoodyRPG
2,754 posts
Joined August 2010
MoodyRPG
[Easy]

01:13:181 (1) - Mejor un finish al principio del slider?

[Hard]

00:27:943 (4) - Nuevo combo?

[Insane]

00:50:895 (3) - Haz que sea simetrico con (1)

Star~
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