This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, January 14, 2009 at 4:10:36 PM

Artist: Kelly Bailey
Title: Path to Borealis
BPM: 108
Filesize: 11941kb
Play Time: 03:49
Difficulties Available:

1. Advisor (3.05 stars, 257 notes)
2. Barnacle (0.54 stars, 71 notes)
3. Fast Zombie (1.54 stars, 118 notes)
4. GMan (4.57 stars, 288 notes)
5. Poison Zombie (2.43 stars, 230 notes)
6. Zombie (2.24 stars, 202 notes)

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Mostly Unheard song, from HL2 BETA, and is a mixture of suitsong_3/triage at dawn and the radio music.

Plus some great piano solos.

The timing is pretty much right on. You've got some spacing issues in the part you've mapped, most noticeably at 00:24:61 (3) and 00:42:39 (4). And isn't there something you could do about the unnecessarily long video?...

I like custom sounds/skin alot. I think making custom hitcircles would be even more effective.

On to the actual mapping:

Fast Zombie:
00:27:67 (2) - Too close to (1).
00:31:28 (1) - Too far from end of (4).
00:35:72 (1) - Too close to (2).
00:40:72 (1) - Too close to end of (4).
00:42:39 (4) - Too far from (3).
00:47:39 (5) - Perhaps too far from (4), definitely too far from (6).
01:12:39 (1) - (1) - (6) are too close to each other, spread them out more.
01:31:28 (3) - (3) - (5) are too close together.
01:34:33 (2) - Too close to (3).
01:53:50 (1) - Too close to (2).
01:58:22 (4) - Too close to (3), too far from (5).

These apply to other difficulties as well.

00:42:39 (4) - Too far from (3).
Wrong
otherwise ty

So, let's see. Like I said, I love the custom sound for the spinner. Well, it makes me laugh. But now about the beatmap itself.

It's nice :P There are some issues though. I'm gonna list them:

Fast Zombie:

- 00:47:40 (5,6): I do think they're a little too far away from 4. That annoys me a bit, and since this is the easiest difficulty, you should space them a bit more equally.
- 01:02:40 (1): The slider is a bit too tough for beginners. This is the easiest difficulty blah blah blah. :P

Zombie:

- 01:31:28 (3,4,5): I think, they're spaced a bit too near to each other. People could think you have to tap very fast because they're so close.
- 01:34:05 (1,2,3): 2 is a bit too far away from 1.
- 01:58:22 (3,4,5): 4 is spaced a bit too near to 3, and 5 is too far away from 4.
- 02:12:39 (3,4,5,6): I think 4, 5, 6 are spaced a bit too far away from 3's end. It doesn't matter that much, but it bothers me a bit.

Poison Zombie:

- 01:31:28 (3,4,5): I think, they're spaced a bit too near to each other. People could think you have to tap very fast because they're so close. (Know this line?)
- 01:34:05 (1,2,3): 2 is a bit too far away from 1. (Or this one?)
- 01:58:22 (3,4,5): 4 is spaced a bit too near to 3, and 5 is too far away from 4. (lol)
- 02:12:39 (3,4,5,6): I think 4, 5, 6 are spaced a bit too far away from 3's end. It doesn't matter that much, but it bothers me a bit. (lolwutl)
- 03:49:05 (3,4): Yai, something new! 4 is spaced to far away from 3.

Antlion Guard:

- 01:00:17 (5,6): Can you see it? you have to tap 6 EXACTLY at the same time as the slider 5 ends. Fix this.
- 01:34:05 (1,2,3): 2 is a bit too far away from 1. (Well...)
- 01:55:72 (5,6,7,8) You spaced it that way: (5)--(6)----(7)--(8). Move it that way: (5)---(6)---(7)---(8)
Or, in words: 7 is too far away from 6. Fix that.
- 01:58:50 (4,5): 5 definitely is too far away from 4.
- 02:11:28 (7,1,2,3): 7, 2 and 3 have to be tapped whilde slider 1 is going: NO
- 03:33:50 (16,1,2,3): 16 has to be tapped while 1 is going, 2's beginning is 1's ending and 3 has to be tapped while 2 is going. Once again: NOEZ!


GMan:

- 01:34:05 (1,2,3): 2 is a bit too far away from 1.(...Ugh...)
- 01:55:72 (5,6,7,8) You spaced it that way: (5)--(6)----(7)--(8). Move it that way: (5)---(6)---(7)---(8)
Or, in words: 7 is too far away from 6. Fix that. (:D)
- 01:58:50 (4,5): 5 definitely is too far away from 4.(D:)

Fix that and get this ranked.

Done

The "Holy crap, antlions!" line doesn't really fit the somber tone of the song.

thank you. suggestions?

(edit you current post)

Timing's pretty good. Even though it won't make much of a difference, I still think it sounds better and would say to use a 17,950 offset, which is only +2 of what you have.

Fast Zombie
01:02:39 (1) - I think this should be a little closer to the slider end before it.

Zombie. (You should take that period out unless you have a reason for it)
01:31:28 (3,4,5) - Spread these out.
03:26:28 (2) - This could stand to be moved just a tad bit further away from the 1. Just to be safe.

Poison Zombie
01:33:50 (1,2,3) - Uh, no. Make the 3 closer, which I guess would mean the 4 should come closer, too. Or you could just move the 1 a little higher up.
02:26:83 (7) - New Combo
02:29:89 (10) - New Combo
03:11:83 (10) - New Combo or make it closer to the 9.

Advisor
03:45:17 (3,4) - This is a little too far and it's less predictable than the other wonky spacing.

a 17,950 offset makes stuff late...but i did change it to 17,946, seems better

Zombie.
03:55:72 (1,2,3,4) - I'm starting to wonder why these four notes are here. You have a 10 second spinner, which is a little long, by the way, then a little break, then four notes and that's it. So...weird.

Poison Zombie
02:28:08 (2) - Syncs to nothing. At least nothing a human can hear at normal speed.

This map isn't bad, but I still think it's just shy of a Bubble. Star for now.

Edit: I would think about making those spinners shorter. At least the one in the middle.

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01:16:27 (8) - Shorten this by 1/4.
01:18:50 (2) - ^
What the heck do you mean?

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