1. Alace's Taiko (4.94 stars, 401 notes)
2. Frantic (4.99 stars, 246 notes)
3. Hard (4.84 stars, 209 notes)
4. Relax (3.05 stars, 104 notes)

eldnl wrote:

[General]

Offset 1417 i think time is ok , test by selee. after my test , it works well too
The easier difficulty have 3.08 Start Difficulty, need an easier difficulty, I can make it :3
i think its easy enough, i can decrease it below 3 star only changing OD and hp drain.
[Relax]

Slider Tick 1 k
00:01:417 (1) you can make good sliders. I know. fixed
00:07:417 (3,4) Too close, use the distance snap. fixed
00:13:417 (1) This slider looks bad, you can separate the red points. And add finish at the start. fixed
00:18:854 (3,1) So far, please reduce a little the distance. And add finish at the end. (Remove clap, obviously...) i prefer not to use finish here sry
00:19:604 (2) Add finish at the end. ^
00:20:729 (4) Add finish in all. ^
00:22:417 (1) Finish. nice fixed
00:23:729 (3) Improve this slider, you can make the slider symmetrical? you can ask me in game i think its ok
00:32:729 (3) Sliders like this ;D okay..fixed
00:39:667 (5) Remove finish. k
00:56:167 (2,3,4) This part is a little hard for the easier diff. i think its ok, cus its need to be tough here
00:58:604 (2,3) Change it for a slider. k
01:12:667 (5,6) You can do better these sliders ... fixed
01:19:792 (1,2,3,4) Separate them, perhaps a little difficult for beginners. hmm ths gap is large , i decide to keep it to fit the song.
01:29:167 (1) Remove finish.k

[Hard]

AP Rate 7
Overall Difficulty 6
00:11:917 (1) Up the volume of finish i think now is more fit the song
00:13:229 (2) Finish at the start. k
00:18:854 (1) Finish at the end. same reason in easy
00:19:604 (2) ^ Same ^
00:20:729 (5,6,7,8,1) Finish ^
00:44:729 (1,2,3,4,5) please make a symmetrical star !! k
00:46:417 (1) Finish k
01:04:417 (1) ^ k
01:18:667 (1,2,3,4) Fix the square !! fixed
01:24:854 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) I'm not sure of this pattern, do not use different distances. i think its ok

Really good job with the hard difficulty, but is just a hard, don't need be so difficult, considering that lkp makes a difficulty.
i think its not so hard. also lkp makes hardest map consider wind god girl, lol.
Starred ~

Entrail wrote:

Hi there! Just a few points.

Relax
I really think you should consider changing all the sliders like for example the 00:50:917 (3) one. You should make them look like 00:47:917 (3). Imo the corner doesn't fit the slider, but it could easily be just my opinion.. o.o
Hmm, seems some people dont like this type of slider, however i wanna have a try on this type of slider.
imo , perfect symmetrical slider appears too much make the easier diff more boring to play,so i am try to make it more... nature.
00:53:542 - put a note here?
i think its ok

Hard
00:44:729 (1) - Move all five notes to the side? Imo they shouldn't stack with (10)
i think this stack works well.
01:06:667 (1) - The jump to (2) is a bit too long imo.
yeah,its somehow like a jump in insane diff,but i rly like this pattern. And i think a hard diff should have one or two challenge,isn't it ?

1. Add "Alace" and "lkp" to the tags of all difficulties. Might as well add "ed" and "ending".
2. The video is too large (854px). The maximum allowed is 800px.

1. This would need to be a bit easier to be really nice. The beginning is acceptable even if I think it's too hard, but the kiai is way too difficult. Try reducing the number of 1/2 beats and especially of kick sliders...
2. 01:25:135 (1) - The end of this spinner becomes abruptly silent. Move the timing section to the very end of it.

1. That was rather nice, but the jumps are really pushing it.
2. 00:09:667 (1) - For consistency, space this farther from (2).
3. 00:19:604 (2,3,6) - Add new combos here to mark the spacing changes.
4. 00:26:729 (4,5) - Very confusing and unexpected jump. I understand why (5,6) is a jump, but (4,5) shouldn't. Besides, the spacing is confusing because it looks like a 1/1 time difference.
5. 00:33:854 (7,1) - This is too much of a jump for a Hard. I don't think anything in the song justifies it either; rearrange 00:33:104 (5,6,7) - to draw (7) closer to (1).
6. 00:46:979 (2,3) - Why is there a jump here ? The lyrics are pretty calm here, there shouldn't be any jump imo. Also what's the point of reducing the slider speed if you're going to triple the spacing anyway ?
7. 00:48:479 (5,6) - Same.
8. 00:55:979 (3,4) - Same unexpected and (apparently ?) unjustified jump. It is also confusing because the spacing looks like 1/1 and this kind of pattern is often used in 1/1 rhythms.
9. 00:58:604 (3,4,5) - I don't think anything justifies such broken spacing. If you want to use jumps, at least space the jumps evenly. Also for consistency, (2) should be a simple circle, not a slider.
10. 00:59:354 (6) - To match the lyrics better, add a new combo here and on 01:00:667 (4) - and remove the one on 01:00:105 (1) -
11. 01:06:667 (1,2,3,4) - These are too confusing for a Hard. Jumps do fit here, but make them regularly spaced. Remember to make (4,5) a jump as well.
12. 01:09:667 (9,1) - Confusing spacing: (8,9) are spaced the same way but the time gap isn't the same.

1. Lots of jumps that I really don't like... I don't even see why there are jumps there at all.
2. 00:01:979 (5,6) - Like this. Why is there a jump here when the tone of the vocals didn't change from the previous notes, and they are spaced normally ?
3. 00:51:667 (6) - This might hit the HP bar in HR... Mind orientating the slider in a different way ?
4. 00:53:917 (1) - The repeat is hidden under (3)'s hitburst.

Odaril wrote:

General

Add "Alace" and "lkp" to the tags of all difficulties. Might as well add "ed" and "ending". Done
The video is too large (854px). The maximum allowed is 800px. working on it.
Relax~

This would need to be a bit easier to be really nice. The beginning is acceptable even if I think it's too hard, but the kiai is way too difficult. Try reducing the number of 1/2 beats and especially of kick sliders... fixed. and change my descriprtion on it lol
01:25:135 (1) - The end of this spinner becomes abruptly silent. Move the timing section to the very end of it. fixed
Hard

That was rather nice, but the jumps are really pushing it.
00:09:667 (1) - For consistency, space this farther from (2). fixed
00:19:604 (2,3,6) - Add new combos here to mark the spacing changes. fixed
00:26:729 (4,5) - Very confusing and unexpected jump. I understand why (5,6) is a jump, but (4,5) shouldn't. Besides, the spacing is confusing because it looks like a 1/1 time difference. hmm,for the clean and tidy mapset(lol), i made a jump in 4 ,5. also i think jump after stack is acceptable. anyway i changed spacing here to make it more consistency.
00:33:854 (7,1) - This is too much of a jump for a Hard. I don't think anything in the song justifies it either; rearrange 00:33:104 (5,6,7) - to draw (7) closer to (1). oops my fault. fixed
00:46:979 (2,3) - Why is there a jump here ? The lyrics are pretty calm here, there shouldn't be any jump imo. Also what's the point of reducing the slider speed if you're going to triple the spacing anyway ? yeah after think i think you are right. remove jumps here.
00:48:479 (5,6) - Same. ^
00:55:979 (3,4) - Same unexpected and (apparently ?) unjustified jump. It is also confusing because the spacing looks like 1/1 and this kind of pattern is often used in 1/1 rhythms. this part has been rmk
00:58:604 (3,4,5) - I don't think anything justifies such broken spacing. If you want to use jumps, at least space the jumps evenly. Also for consistency, (2) should be a simple circle, not a slider. back to normal spacing here ^
00:59:354 (6) - To match the lyrics better, add a new combo here and on 01:00:667 (4) - and remove the one on 01:00:105 (1) - fixed
01:06:667 (1,2,3,4) - These are too confusing for a Hard. Jumps do fit here, but make them regularly spaced. Remember to make (4,5) a jump as well. fixed
01:09:667 (9,1) - Confusing spacing: (8,9) are spaced the same way but the time gap isn't the same. fixed