1. Aeon's Hard (4,74 stars, 479 notes)
2. Hard (4,35 stars, 349 notes)
3. Normal (2,21 stars, 188 notes)

lele94 wrote:

it's a beatiful map and.... xxheroxx is the best to create the maps!!! good map!

Aeon wrote:

[normal]

0:50:843(1,2) remove 2 and extend 1 by 1 beat
0:55:843(3) move back 1/4 beat and add one where 3 was
1:02:102 feel like a note is missing here
1:02:455 ^
1:02:808 turn in to slider to end 3/4 beat later on the blue bar
01:03:515 add a note here
1:03:886 add a note here
01:04:223(1) same as in 01:02:808
1:10:218(2) extend by 1/2 beat

01:13:400 repeat the same steps as 1:02:102
01:21:509(2) extend by 3/4 beat
01:39:152(3) end slider half a beat before and where it ended before start a new slider to end at 01:40:387
02:04:205 repeat the same steps as 1:02:102
02:15:496 repeat the same steps as 1:02:102
02:23:612(2) extend slider by 3/4 beat
02:55:023 repeat the same steps as 1:02:102
03:02:074 feel like a note is missing here
03:05:955 repeat the same steps as 1:02:102
03:13:365 feel like a note is missing

[hard]

02:58:192(1 to 11) try removing 4 7 and 11
03:09:484(1 to 11) ^
03.30.479(2) doesnt hit anything instead replace with 2 sliders to hit the "told you"

My Conclusion
nice job, the music is nice and the map is pretty fun still needas alot of work though

0_o wrote:

Skillet! I love this song/CD

Awesome skin btw

I did a quick run through, just a few of my thoughts..

Normal:
00:50:810 - 00:53:633 - I can see the rhythm you're going for, but when I played it it just felt sort of awkward, and didn't really fit in with the rest of the map.

Hard
02:43:725 - 02:51:841 - This is probably just personal preference, but when this section started I was expecting a mellow section with soft hitsounds, slowed down sliders etc, but instead it's the most intense sections of the map. I don't know, I just feel that the tone of the map should reflect the tone of the song.

02:59:074 (6) I think it sounds better, and makes it more interesting if this is just taken out.
03:10:366 (6) ^

Good luck!

Aeon wrote:

well now you need some hitsounds xD

still think that in the end that slider repeating 5 or 6 times on hard doesnt hit anything.... or are you trying to create rhythm ?

edit:

remember this on normal ?

0:50:843(1,2) remove 2 and extend 1 by 1 beat go to divisor 1/4 and extend it bit 1/4 just checked and sounds better since it hits the beat.... sorry, i was mistaken xD

edit 2:

[normal]
01:22:920(4) maybe end the slider instead of repeating and add a note at 1:23:979(half a beat later)
03:02:426(3,4) note doesnt hit anything.... remove ? and pull back 4 by 1/4
03:13718(3,4) ^

edit3

01:56:226 missing note here
1:58:912(1 to 11) move 3 back 1/4 beat and 6 forward 1/4 beat
02:07:028 (opcional) add a note here
02:18:319 ^
2:43:725(1) according to rules slider can never end where it starts, players need to see where the ball goes
3:03:309(5) doesnt hit anything remove
03:14:600(5)^

xxheroxx wrote:

Aeon wrote:

well i can give it a try

edit: its done(almost) and its now uploading ill post a the link in a bit

i got one question.... throughout the map i feel that the distance snap is too close.... how to i change the value ?


edit 2:

done
http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=28530bfba686e50be7c82ed4b8f0c380e04e75f6e8ebb871

check it out then give me some feedback... still need to fix distance snap and add sounds... but sounds will go according to the sounds you use on your maps

I can't download your beatmap and i don't know why