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ICHIKO - First Kiss (TV Size)

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Hellzero
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Hellzero
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 августа 2011 г. at 11:06:30

Artist: ICHIKO
Title: First Kiss (TV Size)
Source: Zero no Tsukaima
Tags: KuraiPettan
BPM: 156
Filesize: 11797kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 341 notes)
  2. Kurai's Hard (4,85 stars, 238 notes)
  3. Normal (2,99 stars, 109 notes)
Download: ICHIKO - First Kiss (TV Size)
Download: ICHIKO - First Kiss (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Zero no Tsukaima =w=
Thx to KuraiPettan for hard diff

Special thx to: interprais

Enjoy~
Last edited by Hellzero , edited 45 times in total.
phoon
204 posts
Joined December 2010
phoon
1~
Gorlum
705 posts
Joined May 2010
Gorlum
!
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
Suggestions because I'm a noob.

[Insane]
The hitsounds go well with the song in this difficulty. But the combos seem inconsistent. You should make it so that they match. For example:

00:26:974 (1) - New combo should start here to match the previous part. (00:23:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - )
00:27:359 (1) - Remove new combo. Same reason as above.

and:

01:09:474 (1) - New combo here to match the previous part. (01:03:320 (1) - )

Other then that, it all plays out fine.

Mighty fine map. Here is a star.
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Hellzero
Change NC
Thx for modding
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
[General]
- Disable countdown, it is not used.
- Add the background video if you can. It's just my request.
- I worry about diff spread. There is huge score gap between Normal and Insane, it's not good. Making Hard diff would be better IMO.


[Insane]
00:14:686 (x) - Add a note
00:21:994 (1) - remove new combo
00:22:379 (2) - new combo
00:41:802 (8) - ^
00:44:879 (6) - ^ / add finish to start of slider
00:55:071 (3,4) - flip horizontally
01:12:571 (7) - new combo
01:12:763 (1) - remove new combo
01:21:994 - move end kiai to 01:25:456 like normal diff.
01:25:263 (4) - new combo will more fit to music
01:26:898 (4) - new combo


[Normal]
00:53:148 (1) - Hmm, this jump to sudden for normal diff.
01:18:917 (1) - add finish to start of slider
Very good map for normal diff. <3


Gook luck ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)
Yeah, I love zero no Louise. <3
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hi hi ~

General;
- Your BG looks too simple to me, maybe try this one ?
SPOILER
- Disable countdown on both diffs
- It would be nice to have a 3rd diff

Skin;
- Maybe make the comboburst a bit bigger ? But do not exceed the max dimensions

Normal;
- 00:00:456 >> Replace the whistle with a finish ?
- 00:21:994 >> New combo and whistle at start ?
- 00:41:032 >> Add a note ?
- 00:42:379 (6) >> Move to 00:42:186; then add a note at 00:42:571
- 00:47:571 (1,2) >> They sound nice but while playing I got a weird feeling hitting these
- 00:52:763 >> Finish ?
- 00:54:302 >> ^
- 01:01:802 >> End the slider at 01:02:186 and add a repeat ?
- 01:07:956 >> End the slider at 01:08:340 and add a repeat ?
- 01:18:917 >> Finish ?
- 01:26:609 (1,2) >> Kinda hard to hit well (2) because (1) is on a white tick and then you have to hit a red tick (2), so maybe add notes at 01:26:802 and 01:27:379

Insane;
- 00:09:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) >> I don't think these jumps fit but oh well
- 01:26:898 (4,6) >> Don't sound good or make sense to me
- This diff is too hard for a 2 diff set, so again I recommend making a Hard

* Star ~
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Hellzero
ykcarrot's mod

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
- Disable countdown, it is not used. fixed
- Add the background video if you can. It's just my request. I'll add later :3
- I worry about diff spread. There is huge score gap between Normal and Insane, it's not good. Making Hard diff would be better IMO. Waiting GuestDiff


[Insane]
00:14:686 (x) - Add a note fixed
00:21:994 (1) - remove new combo fixed
00:22:379 (2) - new combo fixed
00:41:802 (8) - ^ fixed
00:44:879 (6) - ^ / add finish to start of slider fixed nice :3
00:55:071 (3,4) - flip horizontally fixed :3
01:12:571 (7) - new combo fixed
01:12:763 (1) - remove new combo fixed
01:21:994 - move end kiai to 01:25:456 like normal diff. fixed
01:25:263 (4) - new combo will more fit to music fixed
01:26:898 (4) - new combo fixed


[Normal]
00:53:148 (1) - Hmm, this jump to sudden for normal diff. Oops >///< fixed
01:18:917 (1) - add finish to start of slider added
Very good map for normal diff. <3 Thx :3


Gook luck ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)
Yeah, I love zero no Louise. <3
Great mod. Thank U :3

lovhin456's mod

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi hi ~

General;
- Your BG looks too simple to me, maybe try this one ? Great <3
- Disable countdown on both diffs fixed
- It would be nice to have a 3rd diff coming soon~

Skin;
- Maybe make the comboburst a bit bigger ? But do not exceed the max dimensions

Normal;
- 00:00:456 >> Replace the whistle with a finish ?fixed
- 00:21:994 >> New combo and whistle at start ? fixed
- 00:41:032 >> Add a note ? fixed
- 00:42:379 (6) >> Move to 00:42:186; then add a note at 00:42:571fixed
- 00:47:571 (1,2) >> They sound nice but while playing I got a weird feeling hitting these :|
- 00:52:763 >> Finish ?fixed
- 00:54:302 >> ^ fixed
- 01:01:802 >> End the slider at 01:02:186 and add a repeat ? no
- 01:07:956 >> End the slider at 01:08:340 and add a repeat ? no
- 01:18:917 >> Finish ? i have :|
- 01:26:609 (1,2) >> Kinda hard to hit well (2) because (1) is on a white tick and then you have to hit a red tick (2), so maybe add notes at 01:26:802 and 01:27:379 fixed

Insane;
- 00:09:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) >> I don't think these jumps fit but oh well :|
- 01:26:898 (4,6) >> Don't sound good or make sense to me do you have idei?
- This diff is too hard for a 2 diff set, so again I recommend making a Hard Waiting GuestDiff

* Star ~
Thanks for modding :3

Update!
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
Hello~

First of all, Your timing is wrong. The beginning is a bit slower than the rest of the map. Here is the good timing (I'm no a pro at timing but it works well ;P)
  1. Offset : 466ms ~ BPM : 155
  2. Offset : 7389ms ~ BPM : 156
(Don't forget to resnap your notes, etc...)

You need a Hard in your map, because the gap between Normal and Insane is too huge ! And soon it will be unrankable if difficulties are not in a consecutive order such as "Easy ~ Normal ~ Hard" or "Normal ~ Hard ~ Insane". But don't worry, I made a Hard Difficulty for you 8D
Download: ICHIKO - First Kiss (TV Size) (Hellzero) [Kurai's Hard].osu
If you like it, add it to your map ;) (The good timing is in this difficulty)

And, Combo color 1 and Combo color 3 don't fit the background because the contrast between the color and the background make them not clearly visible. It's kinda unreadable, consider changing them to something more readabe ;)

:>
h3k1ru
osu! Alumni
1,910 posts
Joined March 2010
h3k1ru
yay Kurai glad to see ur diff here

got few suggestions during testplay ur diff:

the star rating shows ur Hard is harder than Insane for 0.01 star, decrease it somehow?

00:12:773 (1) - move spinner from blue ticks to white?
00:19:889 (1,3) - make this notes sounds normal hit? only 1 and 3, but 2 stay with soft whistle
00:34:312 - need a note :<
00:34:696 (1) - nc coz of ^
00:52:389 (7) - finish?

nice hard :)
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
Hi~

My suggestions:

[General]


  • Combo Colour 3 is a bit hard to see
    Timing is a bit off ,I agree with Kurai
[Normal]


  • 00:35:840 (3): This repeat slider is too long. I suggest changing it into this:
    SPOILER
    01:25:071 : Kiai Time ends here
[Hard]


  • 00:07:956 : Add a circle here
    00:43:532 (1): Add finish to the beginning
    00:51:032 (9): Move to the position of ⑥
    00:52:571 (9): New combo and 00:52:763 (1): Remove New Combo
    00:58:629 (4): I suggest moving to 00:58:821 and add Clap hitsound
    01:00:455 (3): Remove Clap hitsound
    01:25:071 : Kiai Time ends here
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
Great!!
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Hellzero
Thanks all for modding ^^
Added video.
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7
TV size of this song :D Noob mods from me...
[Kurai's Hard]
00:07:389 (1,2,3,4,5) This is position like a stream which is confusing (i thought i have to hit these note really fast). Can you position it in a different way?
00:58:735 (2,3,4) Space like 00:30:658
[Insane]
-1 hp drain (if you miss a lot of notes in the beginning and hit the notes after your hp goes up really slowly)

Solid map, starred!
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Tsundere!

Normal
00:15:850 (1) - Finish at the beginning
01:26:619 (1,2) - ^
01:27:773 (3) - Finish

Kurai
00:12:677 (1) - wouldn't it be better to end it at 00:14:312? :3
00:20:273 (3) - Finish
00:30:850 (4) - Finish at the end
00:41:619 (5) - fix spacing?
01:00:273 (1) - Finish at the end?
01:12:773 (1) - Finish at the beginning
01:27:196 (2) - Finish

Insane
00:32:389 (6) - New Combo?
00:15:850 (1) - Finish at the beginning
01:14:888 (4) - 1 grid up (Lv. 4)
01:26:427 (3) - Finish at the end
01:27:004 (2) - ^
01:27:581 (4) - Finish on the repeat & end?

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ~~☆
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Hellzero
Thank U <3
All finish added
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

[General]

Can you convert the FLV into AVI? Because i lagged just playing the video.

[Normal]

Nothing~

[Kurai's Hard]

00:12:677 (1) - This spinner sounds off, can you end it on the white tick?
The rest of this map is fine~

[Insane]

AR -1?
00:14:215 (1) - this sounds off, i'm not sure about this tho but you should check this just to make sure.


Nothing major here so take a star and thanks for posting in my queue!!
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
There should be only one timeline imo...
Try BPM:156.000 Offset: 469
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
Hellzero

Crimmi wrote:

[General]

Can you convert the FLV into AVI? Because i lagged just playing the video. okay

[Insane]

AR -1? AR7 on insane? D: no way
00:14:215 (1) - this sounds off, i'm not sure about this tho but you should check this just to make sure. i think it ok


Nothing major here so take a star and thanks for posting in my queue!!
Kurai
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Joined March 2009
Kurai

Selee wrote:

There should be only one timeline imo...
Try BPM:156.000 Offset: 469
I'm still not sure about that.

Download: ICHIKO - First Kiss (TV Size) (Hellzero) [Kurai's Hard].osu
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