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DJ Okawari - Flower Dance

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JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年12月14日 at 22:53:06

Artist: DJ Okawari
Title: Flower Dance
Source: Kaleidoscope
Tags: shinki samuel326 a cup of coffee
BPM: 100
Filesize: 5832kb
Play Time: 03:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Blossom (4.02 stars, 304 notes)
  2. Flower (5 stars, 636 notes)
  3. Shinki's Inflorescence (1.7 stars, 185 notes)
Download: DJ Okawari - Flower Dance
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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8th beatmap.

Shinki's Easy by Shinki.
Special thanks to: spboxer3, yangzd88, _Kiva, sherrie__fay, Weiren, EvianBubble, _llkey_18 and VanMoNky!!
Mp3 file obtained from s/23207.

There are lots of flowers in the Flower diff. Hope you'll enjoy!

這是一張送給那個人的圖
And this is a present for that guy
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Yumeko Yuki
135 posts
Joined December 2010
Yumeko Yuki
加油~沙发一个先 8-)
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
I like cats.
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LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
啦啦啦啦
呀呀呀呀
呖呖呖呖
咯咯咯咯
:o
我擦
:o
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
Good luck >< if you need taiko diff just tell me


(D: not long enough ._________________________________.)
-Mantis-
95 posts
Joined March 2011
-Mantis-
Well, it's already mapped: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/23207
Good luck though!
sell an apple
19 posts
Joined April 2011
sell an apple
Good map~I love it. ;)
Well,here is your star~
lol :D
star star star star star star
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
这歌各种耐听._.

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_Kiva
981 posts
Joined January 2010
_Kiva
oh yeah i love this song although JauiPlaY is a un-self heavy mapper.
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
oh yeah i love this song although JauiPlaY is a un-self heavy mapper.

我错了
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JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Both of you are correct, damn.
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
其实我一直想完整听出开头那段听力 但总是差一两个听不出

source可以写Kaleidoscope 这个专辑
offest-6?

Shinki's Easy

不太理解这whistle加的思路 比如[00;59:882] 这两个whistle连起来显得不够平和
建议去掉sliderslide音
[00:40:257] 为什么把kiaiend放在这了

Normal

建议去掉sliderslide音
[00:45;782] 这finish如果尾音再长一点~~

Flower

依然建议去掉sliderslide音
[00:56:582] 这不如reverse一下 加大点间距
下同

这歌就靠你rank了
star
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
[扶老二]
00:32:882 (4,5,6) - 这里应该是1/6吧..(后面部分一样不再吐槽
00:39:182 (3,4,1,2) - 这间距略坑爹
00:44:582 (1) - ...其实我很想说把这个slider分拆成两个的(突出鼓点)
00:54:182 (1) - +whistle ; 00:54:482 (2) - clap
00:55:382 (1) - spacing稍微近了些
01:06:632 - vol略减抹杀存在感
01:11:282 (3) - 1/6..
01:16:232 - 同上上
01:42:182 (1) - 减少个reverse
01:45:632 - +whistle?
01:51:632 (4) - ^
01:55:382 (3) - ^
01:57:632 (2) - ^
02:59:432 (1) - 1/12 plz
03:35:882 (1) - remove whistle ; 03:36:032 (2) - +whistle?
03:48:482 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - so beautiful,so wtf.敢2个note一combo吗..
03:59:582 (1) - 1/6

....其实我不喜欢最后kiai前那一段 拼45°旋转有点overuse.

nice map :D
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
怒mod
[genenal]
kaleidoscope放入Source
skin跑起來很奇怪...是不是有問題 我記得是要10個圖片的?

[Shinki's Easy]
01:06:182 (1) - 跳太遠所以不適合在easy裡面出現
01:55:382 (3) - 音效試著對調看看我認為這樣蠻適合的 看你的感覺!
02:40:982 (1) - 節奏太近了 在easy裡面不是很好~
[Normal]
這麼慢的歌Normal你居然排到4顆星 該Ban了!! \:D/
kiai time居然沒在timing上這太該死了!
01:13:982 (3,1) - 不管!這不夠直!
02:46:982 (3,4,1) - (1)的位置沒排好
03:48:182 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 臥槽 這你...

[Flower]
kiai time又沒在timing上這該Ban了! \:D/
00:27:782 (5,6,1,2) - 這蛋疼的間距是怎麼回是阿?
00:38:582 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 這什麼鬼觸該Ban了 \:D/
02:52:982 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ...無言了
03:02:582 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 瞎了
03:07:382 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 我的臉僵住了
03:59:582 (1) - 可以在04:00:032 - 結束 然後在04:00:182 - 加一個note嗎 你那給我overmap的感覺
可惡做這樣我的Flower Dance還怎麼混阿 你說阿!!!

哼~不給你看♪~


該Ban了啦!!
Twice_old
Twice_old
怒围观JPY的图w
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
^^怒围观傲娇spboxer3
mochi
779 posts
Joined June 2010
mochi
[Flower]
fine

Is Flower insane difficulty? Feels like you need a hard difficulty :l
-Baby Strawberry-
387 posts
Joined September 2011
-Baby Strawberry-
❤Hihi~! 《Flower Dance》, 好听又耐听的钢琴曲。
❤开始mod~！

❤总的来说。。。
SPOILER
❤我真的非常❤这个作图的风格，不光是拉条好看，而且谱面铺的满满的。皮肤也很不错。
❤难度名称。既然最高叫flower，别的难度是普通名称会不会有点。。。（不会形容，抱歉）？ 或者把各个难度改成各种花的名字？
❤作图摆放节奏都没问题，我认为唯一不足在于音效方面，虽然我不专业，但是有些地方的音效的确不是很合适，我会在各难度里面指明。
❤我觉得可以rank。
❤【Flower】 diff
SPOILER
00:24:182 如果可以的话，能不能按完skip以后在这个时间点开始游戏呢？
00:39:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这几个note的速度比之前的快一倍，要不要提示一下？
00:45:782 (1,2,3,4) - 像这种拉条的尾端声音要不要弄成无声的？有声音总感觉有点乱。。
00:48:182 (1,2,3,4) - 同上
01:01:382 (1) - 这个的折返处弄成无声？
01:43:382 (1,2,3,4) - 尾部无声？
01:45:782 (1,2,3,4) - 同上
01:58:982 (1) - 折返处无声？
02:23:882&02:24:032 加note？
02:28:682&02:28:832，如果上一个做了的话，这里也加两个note
02:31:082 (2) - 尾巴的finish去掉？
02:40:382 转圈在这里结束吧，否则后面转完马上拉条会不会不太好啊？
02:49:982 感觉应该加note，
03:21:782 (1,2,3,4) - 尾部无声？
03:24:182 (1,2,3,4) - 同上
03:48:482 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 很漂亮，但是会不会微难啊？
03:50:582 (1,2,3,4) - 尾部无声？
03:52:982 (1,2,3,4) - 同上

❤【Normal】 diff

SPOILER
00:27:782 (3) - 去掉开头的whistler，结尾加whistler
00:30:182 (4) - 同上
00:28:982 (1) - 去掉whistler
00:29:432 (2) - 开头whistler
00:31:382 (1) - 去掉开头whistler，改为结尾whistler
00:37:382 (2) - 同上
01:04:382 (4) - 加finish
01:04:982 (1) - 去掉finish
01:09:782 (1) - 去掉开头whistler，改为结尾whistler
01:15:782 (3) - 同上
03:44:882 (4) - 去掉whistler

❤ 【Shinki's Easy】 diff
SPOILER
00:40:382 (3) - 加whistler？
01:01:382 (3) - 去掉whistler？
01:42:182 (3) - 去掉whistler？
01:42:782 (4) - 加whistler？
01:51:782 (2) - 最后一拍去掉whistler？
02:00:182 (1) - spinner尾部加finish？
02:21:782 (1,1) - 这两个的音效我也找不出什么好点的来，不过听着不太好
02:25:982 (2) - 尾部whistler
02:26:582 (1) - 去掉whistler
02:27:182 (2) - 加上whistler
02:27:782 (3) - 去掉whistler
02:28:382 (4) - 加上whistler
02:31:382 (1,1,1) - 这3个跟之前的一样，听着不舒服但是没有好办法
02:45:782 (3) - 去掉头部whistler，在尾部加上whistler
02:48:182 (1) - 去掉最后一拍whistler
02:52:382 (2) - 加whistler
03:04:382 (3) - 加whistler
03:07:382 (1,1,2,3) - 音效微别扭
03:28:382 (2) - 加whistler
03:36:182 (1) - 去掉whistler
03:36:782 (2) - 加上whistler
03:37:382 (3) - 去掉whistler
03:37:982 (4) - 加上whistler
03:49:382 (2) - 去掉最后一拍whistler
03:52:982 (3) - 去掉开头whistler

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note摆放毫无问题，但是在hitsound上多下下功夫。
因为hitsound是个比较主观的东西，所以我的音效mod只是建议。
继续加油 ;)
新人modder，以上modding仅个人建议。
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
S h i o n
:) 你好~ （from queue )

好文艺的图 根本找不到什么不合适的...

Flower的
02:59:282 (3,1) 这里和后面的03:18:632 (4,1) 相比 少了一个note .. 在02:59:432 (x)

no kd please

/me 推倒 326 and runs
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
Hi hi~ 因為我說過 所以我來mod瞜!!~

mod 2 diff 抱歉...

Normal:

SPOILER
00:47:882 (5) - 刪除?
00:50:282 (5) - ^
00:54:182 (5) - 中間刪除whistle
00:57:482 (4) - 刪除?
00:59:882 (5) - ^
01:51:782 (5) - 中間刪除whistle
02:02:582 (1) - 聲音降到65%
02:49:982 (3) - 加個note並加clap
03:30:182 (5) - 中間刪除whistle
03:58:982 (3) - 用成這樣我覺得比較好>_<


Flower:

SPOILER
00:40:082 (3,5,7) - NC?
01:11:282 (3) - 來回加一次

能找到的就這些了
做得太好了
Skin也不錯!
這音效你可以試試 感覺更好 ( 個人認為>_<
Star!!!~~

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