1. MiaoFu x EijiKuinbii's Rebirth (5.84 stars, 1759 notes)

iCeya wrote:

00:20:849 (2) - 这个不要折返可能会更好 因为我没在大白线听到声音 √

01:24:343 (4) - 加个clap 以突出这个圈的跳( X 这个圈不加音效才突出人声啊

01:28:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11150036 个人觉得这样会好一点 √

01:42:326 (5) - 加个圈放在01:42:411 (1) - 开头 如何 √

02:00:139 (1) - 拉到02:00:778 (2) - √ 这样显得太激霸了，我加一个圈在白线上

03:15:479 (1,1) - 间距（就是打起来有一点不顺）03:15:820 (1,1) - X keep 感觉还好

04:09:173 (8) - NC一下 后面都到12了 / NC please √

06:03:377 (2) - NC 06:01:161 (4) - 06:06:104 (2) - 06:08:832 (2) -
Different rhythms but you use same distance / NC X keep

[Kamiya] wrote:

01:02:866 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 稍微做出点参差感会不会好些，至少是能看得出来的叠加感，每个01:03:889 (1,2) - 的滑条首都偏移一点。 √

03:26:729 (2) - nc plz 太难辨了。（至少第一次玩的时候 √

03:28:093 (1,1,2) - 这里的距离会不会太近了，03:28:775 - 放在这里如何。 √

03:43:434 (4) - nc? X keep

Come[Back]Home wrote:

MiaoFu x EijiKuinbii's Rebirth

* 00:11:729 (3,3,3) - How about you place nc's on those? I think it kinda fits with the music and patterns √
* 00:39:343 (2,1) - I think the spacing here is too big, it felt forced and unnatural while playing. It flows well, but the spacing is just a bit too much. X but actually i play at here have no mistake,so no change
* 00:44:371 (4) - Why is a circle here? There is no sound to be mapped. √ okay~i do think delete it is more natural^ ^
* 00:44:798 (1,2) - Those should be kicksliders like you did afterwards. 00:47:525 (1,2) - 00:50:252 (1,2) - etc. Its kind of weird that they are the only ones which are circles. √
* 01:32:014 (2,1) - The spacing here is too extreme. I suggest that you ctrl+g (2) and then move it too 222/100. That way it flows nicely into (1) and it doesn't feel weird while playing anymore. Its just a suggestion though, but the spacing is too extreme right now. √ Right,it's spacing has a little big...i change this part in another way~
* 02:22:894 (2,3) - This is really weird. All the 1/4 patterns have higher spacing than this, so it is really easy to missread those as 1/4 as well. I suggest that you increase the spacing here to indicate that it is not 1/4. After the first time players will realise that its not, so you can keep the following same objects as they are. X in my mind,02:21:957 - i think players can distinguish rhythm is going to convert here.02:22:894 (2,3) - So there seem hard to pass with strange rhythm spacing,but for Extra player,also they can base on music to find their sense of rhythm，KEEP
* 02:44:457 (1,2) - Why does this one have low spacing while those have higher spacing? 02:45:820 (1,2) - 02:47:184 (1,2) - 02:48:548 (1,2) - Itr seems inconsistent to me, so I think you should increase the spacing of this one 02:44:457 (1,2) - as well. √
* 03:05:593 (1) - How about you increase the spacing of this one? It has a strong sound on it, so to emphasize it higher spacing would be nice. X i want to make its flow more easy so KEEP
* 04:13:349 (1,2,3) - Why is (2) there? Parts like 04:14:712 (2,3) - 04:17:440 (2,3) - Dont have a circle inbetween them, so why here? √

Really cool map! I loved it. Good luck!~ c: