1. Memories (5.42 stars, 1616 notes)

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hey ily4, from my queue:

[General]
Add kiai somewhere
(Ex. 04:20:092 to 04:52:479 or 02:51:961 to 02:59:345
will ask for opinion about that
[Oni]
00:03:469: Change to k since the stream will have a better hearing
but it doesn't suit the music o.o
00:22:731 and 00:23:072: Remove, since in 00:23:072 is near to the big Don so remove it to make consistency, and 00:22:731 to make on consistency in the next note
but there're music here
00:38:242: Change to k to fit the pitch
will think about it
00:39:094 (248, 249): Ctrl + G?
nice! and change
00:40:288 to 00:45:060: Don't you think this flow is boring? Add some notes
but the music is like that...If I add more notes it will cause overmapping
02:49:884: Delete this note , same reason
there's music here again
02:54:499: Delete this note to emphasize better
same
03:01:422: Same
the drum sound maybe a bit soft,but there're music here
03:02:807 and 03:03:268 and 03:03:730: Delete, since this note doesn't do anything
^
03:40:207 (1081, 1082): Ctrl + G?
doesn't fit the music
03:44:639: Delete
there's music here
03:50:093: Change to k to fit the pitch
no to be consistent with 03:47:366 -



Cursor at 03:50:775
??
Nice music, GL on ranking

Prophecy wrote:

From my Modding Queue, Short mod requested.


[General]
> No kiai time? Try to add 1 or 2.
I can't find places to add...could you suggest some?

[Oni]
> Overmapped or it should be Inner Oni. I'll rename the diff name to something else
> Start from 00:02:959 (2) - to 00:21:709 (201) - it's totally a Inner pattern, too much note there and the rhythm doesn't support too much notes there, consider to remove some.
but the background music is just full of 1/4...
> 00:25:800 - add a don here as you follow vocal there 00:26:311 (219,220) - . following instrument here
> Again from 01:41:141 (581) - to 01:43:698 (610) - , too long @w@, but until now, it's quite good. same reason as the part
> 02:23:346 (822) - add kat to follow the background music like 02:25:308 (828,829) - 02:25:308 (826,827) - want to add variation between this
> 02:34:423 (861,863) - put these into kat, vocal higher pitch and prevent too many ddddddddddddddddddddddd also changed 02:34:423 - this to k too
> 02:35:692 (867) - not suggested, hard to hit but OK yes I think 130bpm 1/4 finisher is ok
~ 03:12:790 (1035) to 03:58:275 (1136) - Good part! Awesome! Thanks!

Solid difficulty but you should aware about the long pattern, Good job!

But can you mod this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/483110 (Just Inner difficulty) Thank you!