1. ~ fragments of the night ~ // seven key - 7Key (6.86 stars, 4129 notes)
2. ~ furrows of tomorrow ~ // four key - 4Key (4.99 stars, 3484 notes)

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Album : http://confetto.chu.jp/secretale/
Artist : Nanahira
Title : Petals
Music : Camellia
Background Art : Sjao - Spring 2018 Fanart

1. 01:22:566 (82566|1,82645|2,82723|1,82801|2) - and 01:22:957 (82957|1,83035|2,83113|1,83191|2) - are really similar, i suggest u vary the pattern between them
2. 01:29:207 - 01:29:832 - 01:30:457 - 01:31:082 - these sounds should definitely be emphasized by the double cuz u use double for these sounds before, and it is strong enough to put double. If u are concerned about marking the difference between 01:29:051 (89051|3,89051|2,89207|3) -, u can make those in different columns so that they will be emphasized and difference will be noted out obviously
3. 01:37:176 (97176|1,97176|3) - this is the same sound as 01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1) - so if u double that, u have to double all of these 01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1) -
4. 01:37:801 - 01:38:426 - make sure u also double these two if u accept my previous idea
5. 01:39:676 (99676|2,100301|1,100926|2,102801|2,103504|1) - ^
6. 01:44:676 (104676|2,105301|1,105926|2,107801|2,109676|1,110301|2,110926|1) - ^
7. 01:49:520 - 01:50:145 - 01:50:770 - u only put double notes in this part for the vocal sound but not on the previous parts. It seems really inconsistent cuz this part really doesnt make such big difference with the previous one. I suggest not to double these sounds too in this part
8. 01:52:801 (112801|2,112801|3,112879|0) - they have the same sounds, so better double 01:52:879 (112879|0) -
9. 01:54:676 (114676|0,115301|3,115926|1,117801|3,118426|0) - same as above
10. 01:58:895 - u also need a double here
11. 01:59:676 (119676|3,120301|0,120926|1,122801|0,123426|2,123738|3) - same for double
12. 02:04:676 (124676|3,125301|2,125926|0,127801|2,128426|3,128895|2) - ^
13. wont go forward for the double notes issue. Remember just to double those with W sound
14. 02:13:582 (133582|0,133582|1,133582|2,133660|3,133738|2,133816|1) - 02:08:582 (128582|0,128582|1,128582|3,128660|2,128738|0,128738|3,128816|1) - should all be double? according to this: 01:43:582 (103582|2,103582|3,103660|1,103660|0,103738|2,103738|3,103816|1,103816|0) -
15. 02:17:488 - 02:17:801 - need double and add W sounds
16. 02:22:332 - 02:22:645 - better add notes here
17. 02:23:113 (143113|1,143270|1,143738|2,143895|2) - if ok u may avoid such small jacks imo
18. 02:33:895 - to 02:35:145 - should all be double imo. As u can see this part: 02:23:895 - 1/1 02:31:395 - 1/2 02:33:895 - 1/4
19. 02:47:488 (167488|1) - may wanna move to 4 to at least nerf some left-hand bias here
20. 02:56:551 (176551|0,176551|1,176629|3) - these two same sounds so if double then both double
21. 03:09:207 (189207|1,189207|0,189233|2,189233|3) - what's this???
22. 03:12:020 (192020|3,192020|0,192020|2) - only F sound here why triple? better nerf to single note
23. 03:17:020 (197020|2,197020|0,197020|3) - ^
24. 03:46:551 - piano sound here add notes
25. 04:07:645 - 04:08:270 - 04:08:895 - 04:10:145 - 04:11:395 - make them all double notes cuz F sound just like what u do at 04:12:645 (252645|3,252645|0) -
26. 04:19:207 (259207|3,259832|0,260457|1,261082|2) - double them. Reason as 01:29:207 - 01:29:832 - 01:30:457 - 01:31:082 -
27. 04:42:801 (282801|2,282801|0,282879|3) - so if double both double
28. 04:46:082 (286082|1,286082|3,286082|0,286160|2,286238|1,286238|0,286316|3,286395|0,286395|2) - why not try double all of them like what u did here 04:48:582 (288582|3,288582|2,288660|0,288660|1,288738|2,288738|3,288816|1,288816|0,288895|3,288895|2) -

Arzenvald wrote:

im so sad

ready for bn check

Leonita wrote:

Arzenvald wrote:

im so sad

ready for bn check

kode?

riunosk wrote:

from mod queue 1 2 3 4

mamahira

00:30:457 (30457|2,30613|1) - if these were following the vocals, 00:31:707 - there should be notes here and 00:32:957 - and so on // i follow some kind of echo, not vocal

00:42:645 (42645|1,42645|2) - on hearing at 25%, it sounds like a triple note burst // ahh, too hard to hear though D:

01:31:395 (91395|0,91551|0,91707|0,91863|0,92020|0,92176|0,92332|0) - im assuming this is intended? // nope, moved some

01:42:957 (102957|1,103113|1,103270|1,103504|1,103660|1,103816|1) - somewhat broken anchor // mm i'll move some stuff

01:52:879 (112879|0,112957|0) - any reason for forcing this minijack? // hoo for transition to the next part, kinda light tho so i think its fine

02:55:457 (175457|2,175613|2,175770|2,175926|2) - anchor // keep, actually to make things a little intense towards the end of the kiai

04:43:113 (283113|2,283270|2,283426|2,283582|2,283738|2,283895|2,284051|2,284207|2,284363|2) - ^
04:44:207 (284207|1,284363|1,284520|1,284676|1,284832|1) - ^why
04:45:457 (285457|3,285613|3,285770|3,285926|3,286082|3) - ^the
04:46:395 (286395|2,286551|2,286707|2,286863|2,287020|2,287176|2) - ^sudden
04:47:332 (287332|0,287488|0,287645|0,287801|0,287957|0,288113|0,288270|0,288426|0) - ^anchor
04:50:770 (290770|3,290926|3,291082|3,291238|3,291395|3,291551|3,291707|3) - ^spike
04:51:082 (291082|0,291238|0,291395|0,291551|0,291707|0,291863|0,292020|0) - ^??
04:52:020 (292020|3,292176|3,292332|3,292488|3,292645|3,292801|3,292957|3,293113|3,293270|3,293426|3,293582|3,293738|3,293895|3) - big one
04:57:332 (297332|3,297488|3,297645|3,297801|3,297957|3,298113|3,298270|3,298426|3) - ^
04:59:207 (299207|3,299363|3,299520|3,299676|3,299832|3,299988|3,300145|3,300301|3,300457|3) - ^
// hehehe, i'll try to move some anchors, but they were intended for the stream direction, left-to-right and right-to-left stream direction, following pitches per each stanzas, i'll see if i can reduce the anchor, i forgot to put bookmarks tho
Interesting chart, but sudden anchor spikes at the end

gud luk for renk

btw what has camellia got to do with anything here? did he make the track?


also i added a new map that you can do a m4m for here


juicy bg

DDMythical wrote:

1 / 2 / 3 / 4

ignoring the no marathon rule on my queue because cute loli bg you m4m'd

General

What a strange place for a preview point!
I would cut the mp3 to save filespace because bns are generally picky about that. You can easily move the preview point so i imagine this wont be a major issue for you.

Flower

01:14:363 (74363|1,74520|1,74676|1) - Strange anchors in the stream, Could repattern out
01:15:613 (75613|1,75770|1,75926|1) - ^
01:18:035 (78035|2,78191|2,78348|2,78504|2) - ^
01:20:770 (80770|2,80926|2,81082|2) - ^
01:23:035 (83035|2,83191|2,83348|2,83504|2) - ^
01:23:973 (83973|2,84129|2,84285|2) - ^
01:24:832 (84832|1,84988|1,85145|1) - ^
02:23:738 (143738|2) - This note is a bit weird as it leads into the massively long anchor but with a different sound. You could put this on 4th column and change the previous double to [12] // only keep this, the small anchor is actually intended, that's how i put kick > snare or kick > cymbol (or big beats)


reeee i literally cant mod this because its really well layered and i cant notice any problems

Tofu1222 wrote:

I was intending to make this but hmmm....

then i will focus on my Bassdrop Freaks...

Mod here XDD

[Flowers]

1. 01:22:566 (82566|1,82645|2,82723|1,82801|2) - and 01:22:957 (82957|1,83035|2,83113|1,83191|2) - are really similar, i suggest u vary the pattern between them // ok
   
2. 01:29:207 - 01:29:832 - 01:30:457 - 01:31:082 - these sounds should definitely be emphasized by the double cuz u use double for these sounds before, and it is strong enough to put double. If u are concerned about marking the difference between 01:29:051 (89051|3,89051|2,89207|3) -, u can make those in different columns so that they will be emphasized and difference will be noted out obviously // i'll keep this, its kind of gimmick where the anchor has emphasized the light snare already hihihi
   
3. 01:37:176 (97176|1,97176|3) - this is the same sound as 01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1) - so if u double that, u have to double all of these 01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1) - // another gimmick i try to implement here, you got the idea, the kick sound where it has 1/2 space before the snare has 1 note, the anchor emphasize it, while the double one is where the kick far enough to the next snare.. i'll refine this arrangement either way
   
4. 01:37:801 - 01:38:426 - make sure u also double these two if u accept my previous idea
5. 01:39:676 (99676|2,100301|1,100926|2,102801|2,103504|1) - ^
6. 01:44:676 (104676|2,105301|1,105926|2,107801|2,109676|1,110301|2,110926|1) - ^
   
7. 01:49:520 - 01:50:145 - 01:50:770 - u only put double notes in this part for the vocal sound but not on the previous parts. It seems really inconsistent cuz this part really doesnt make such big difference with the previous one. I suggest not to double these sounds too in this part // hehe you got the idea of this double, and yea it was intended to add some notes to highlight them so it become sightly (but not really) denser to the end of kiai, i want to give some escalating density in there, will consider to remove tho!
   
8. 01:52:801 (112801|2,112801|3,112879|0) - they have the same sounds, so better double 01:52:879 (112879|0) - // oo i'll make them single then.. applied
   
9. 01:54:676 (114676|0,115301|3,115926|1,117801|3,118426|0) - same as above // i might add doubles here to differ this section and the previous one.. thought?
   
10. 01:58:895 - u also need a double here // okay
    
11. 01:59:676 (119676|3,120301|0,120926|1,122801|0,123426|2,123738|3) - same for double
12. 02:04:676 (124676|3,125301|2,125926|0,127801|2,128426|3,128895|2) - ^
    
13. wont go forward for the double notes issue. Remember just to double those with W sound // xD i know, if more people point this out i'll consider to fix
    
14. 02:13:582 (133582|0,133582|1,133582|2,133660|3,133738|2,133816|1) - 02:08:582 (128582|0,128582|1,128582|3,128660|2,128738|0,128738|3,128816|1) - should all be double? according to this: 01:43:582 (103582|2,103582|3,103660|1,103660|0,103738|2,103738|3,103816|1,103816|0) - // different section, also the denser JS is on kiai
    
15. 02:17:488 - 02:17:801 - need double and add W sounds // omg i didn't caught those kick, added
    
16. 02:22:332 - 02:22:645 - better add notes here // hmm i have different idea
    
17. 02:23:113 (143113|1,143270|1,143738|2,143895|2) - if ok u may avoid such small jacks imo
    
18. 02:33:895 - to 02:35:145 - should all be double imo. As u can see this part: 02:23:895 - 1/1 02:31:395 - 1/2 02:33:895 - 1/4 // welp i won't make long JS, but instead its become denser now
    
19. 02:47:488 (167488|1) - may wanna move to 4 to at least nerf some left-hand bias here // ok, evil D:
    
20. 02:56:551 (176551|0,176551|1,176629|3) - these two same sounds so if double then both double // ok
    
21. 03:09:207 (189207|1,189207|0,189233|2,189233|3) - what's this??? // echo XD im sure there's 2 different snare there
    
22. 03:12:020 (192020|3,192020|0,192020|2) - only F sound here why triple? better nerf to single note // the chime is somehow contrast to be layered differently, so i put triple
    
23. 03:17:020 (197020|2,197020|0,197020|3) - ^ // same
    
24. 03:46:551 - piano sound here add notes
25. 04:07:645 - 04:08:270 - 04:08:895 - 04:10:145 - 04:11:395 - make them all double notes cuz F sound just like what u do at 04:12:645 (252645|3,252645|0) - // different part, those single are intended as a variation
    
26. 04:19:207 (259207|3,259832|0,260457|1,261082|2) - double them. Reason as 01:29:207 - 01:29:832 - 01:30:457 - 01:31:082 - // ok
    
27. 04:42:801 (282801|2,282801|0,282879|3) - so if double both double
    
28. 04:46:082 (286082|1,286082|3,286082|0,286160|2,286238|1,286238|0,286316|3,286395|0,286395|2) - why not try double all of them like what u did here 04:48:582 (288582|3,288582|2,288660|0,288660|1,288738|2,288738|3,288816|1,288816|0,288895|3,288895|2) - // different sound

That's all. Good luck and hope my mods can help you! // it really is! thank you for the detailed mods! some idea aren't fully rejected, some are rearranged differently

Mage wrote:

just some things

00:00:145 - 00:05:145 - make doubles // i got the idea, but i'll keep everything single in the intro :3

01:04:051 - sound, add note // added and some thing rearranged
01:04:285 - add note, but i'm not sure, maybe you wanted to highlight vocal // rearranged as above ^

02:57:176 - 02:57:410 - should be doubles // applied differently

03:42:957 - LNs should ends here cuz sound ends here // 1/4 earlier but okay!

04:09:520 - 04:10:145 - 04:10:770 - 04:11:395 - would be cool if you put here doubles to highlight vocal // hmmmmmmmm i want to D: but i want to make a single stream in this section

04:23:895 - double? // dense and evil.. i like it.. ok!

Virtue- wrote:

General

- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : OK!
- Files : OK!

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• [Flower]

1. 00:17:020 (17020|0,17645|1,18738|3,18816|2,18895|1) - http://puu.sh/wHjO1/3b17283177.jpg gpp sih, cmn rada susah gitu ya mencetny. 00:17:020 (17020|0) - mending turunin ujungny 1 bar biar sejajar sama sblhny, biar ena // a e s t h e t i c s
   
2. 00:19:832 (19832|2,19910|3,19988|0) - jadiin gini aja, ena kok http://puu.sh/wHjUl/64c058b487.jpg // pen nge mirror yg atas :C
   
3. 00:21:395 (21395|3) - sama nih, turunin 1 bar // :S hmm pen konsisten sama yg atas
   
4. 00:28:895 (28895|3,28895|2,29363|0,29441|1,29520|3,29598|2,29676|1,29754|0,29832|2,29910|3,29988|2,30066|1) - http://puu.sh/wHjXm/87f96a5162.jpg pls ajee, susah amat di pencet astaga.. cobain ini dah http://puu.sh/wHjZb/fb0d2121c6.jpg // sek sek, di bikin lebih mudah
   
5. 01:46:551 - add note, ada hi hat // spicy spacing, keep, gimmick tho
   
6. 01:53:582 (113582|3,113660|2) - double aja // sek, baru kiai 1, di bikin gk mashy, (di bedain sama kiai 2)
   
7. 02:07:801 (127801|2,128426|3) - sengaja single? // di semua part yg nge-anchor 1/2 satu satu aja C:
   
8. 02:37:254 (157254|2,157293|1,157332|0,157371|3,157410|2,157449|1,157488|0,157527|2,157566|1,157605|3,157645|0,157645|2) - :'VV mungkin gini lebih gud http://puu.sh/wHkkD/65eb337701.png // yah, 02:37:488 (157488|0,157527|2,157566|1,157605|3,157645|2) - ini nya sengaja biar gk JS banget
   
9. 03:36:941 - add LN buat vocal? // no vocal, biar yg main pencet pencetan improvisasi sendiri awokawokwokwkwk
   
10. 03:59:051 - add note, ada piano // ok, headset gw kurang bagus, add ae lah klo kata org ada piano mah
    
11. 04:01:395 (241395|0) - jadiin LN buat vocal, trs tambahin LN juga di 04:02:645 - // nda mau isi vocal huee..

i guess that's it, good luck!