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Olivia Noelle - Skyscraper (Nightcore Mix)

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BounceBabe
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 13. März 2013 at 17:40:35

Artist: Olivia Noelle
Title: Skyscraper (Nightcore Mix)
Tags: demi lovato cover
BPM: 124,8
Filesize: 5409kb
Play Time: 02:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,15 stars, 146 notes)
  2. Hard (4,4 stars, 336 notes)
  3. Normal (3,43 stars, 237 notes)
Download: Olivia Noelle - Skyscraper (Nightcore Mix)
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This is a wonderful cover song by Olivia Noelle. The original artist is "Demi Lovato" but the cover song sounds better to me.
This song is dedicated to all the people who had bad experiences with love. The song will also be an encouragement to those who were disappointed many times in love things before.

Changelog

- Finally added a Normal
- Added a new sliderreserved-arrow
- Added new skin elements

Thanks to everyone helping me to improve this map!
HeatKai
put "demi lovato" and " cover " in tags?
Topic Starter
BounceBabe

HeatKai wrote:

put "demi lovato" and " cover " in tags?
probably should, yes ^^
riffy
and that's what I like. Good music and nice maps!

[General]
  1. You need a [Normal] diff, if you want your map to be ranked. Without Normal mapset is incomplete
  2. According to AiBat your kiais are inconsistent. Check Kiai #9's start, please!
  3. Why different combo colours? :V
[Hard]
  1. 00:19:971 (2) - Personally, I think that this jump is quite confusing and distance is too big for such a calm song. How about reversing this slider to make it less sudden?
  2. 00:26:943 (1,3) - are you sure about finishes here? there's no anything that sounds like these finishes in music, imo.
  3. 00:29:587 (6) - 00:14:443 (1) - and some other patterns - don't ruin your awesome map with sudden antijump! They're really unexpected and weird in relaxing flow.
  4. 01:00:356 - how about ending spinner here instead.Or you can silince its end and finish spinner at 01:00:596 - it'll fit with music, too.
  5. 01:14:298 - I'm not sure, but how about circle here to follow vocals and music? Sounds cute, imo.
  6. 01:46:750 - 01:31:366 - 01:29:443 - I'd map them to follow vocals and to have consistent flow. but keep this one - 01:24:154 - without circles. It makes kiai start more awesome.
  7. 02:49:250 (1) - kinda inconsistent spacing according to others sliders :< a bit confusing for players

  8. AIBat v3.1 wrote:

    Spinner New Combo
    01:32:447 (8) - Consider adding a NC on this spinner.
    01:49:635 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
[Easy]
  1. You can use softer slowdown. (x0,75) because x0.5 ois too sudden for EASIEST diff in the mapset :<
  2. 01:43:385 (6,1) - this overlap is probably confusing for beginners. If it's possible, fix it.
  3. 00:07:712 (1,2) - sometimes, there's inconsistent spacing. If it's possible, fix it, please!
  4. 01:39:058 (1) - and somesimilar patterns. Overlap with spinner's hitburst! Confusing for beginners. You have an awesome and easy flow + great rhythm! Don't ruin this Easy diff with overlaps :<
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Go-go! Resurrect >3</
Stefan
If the Mapset is complete, I'll mod this as next.
Topic Starter
BounceBabe
Thank, but cant map until weekend since im in school. But will add a Normal diff
Darksonic
Is there something wrong with downloading this?, I wanna mod it but I can't because when I dl this it has only 780 kbs, and can't add this into my maps xD.
787B

Darksonic wrote:

Is there something wrong with downloading this?, I wanna mod it but I can't because when I dl this it has only 780 kbs, and can't add this into my maps xD.
Same here, I can't load this.
Topic Starter
BounceBabe
Updated, so now you can download it again, i think!
Dark_Ai
no
It still doesn't work :/
Darksonic
Nope, not working.
787B

Darksonic wrote:

Nope, not working.
Topic Starter
BounceBabe
Download from the description please until the upload error is fixed ._.
787B
Hey you again ♪
Sorry double post, kinda lazy to edit previous post.

General
Basically you told me that the BAT's didn't know what to do in relation of the error I, and other people get when loading this map. You should get an Admin, or even peppy itself to help this out.
By the way, I found the reverse arrow very hard to see on your skin, because it pretty much matches with the combo colors you've used.

Easy
00:09:635 (2) - Hmm, would be better if this was placed on a better alignment with previous slider's curvature. Something like x:192 y:200
00:41:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Combo kinda long for an easy. Suggest adding a new combo in (3) or in (5).
01:20:789 (1,2) - When I was first testing this sliders I thought for sure it was going to do a loop. Players might get confused on this kind of slider here, so I really suggest reshaping it. And by the way, 01:22:712 (2) - isn't perfectly stacked with that slider as well.
01:22:712 - Add break?
01:41:943 (4) - NC would fit perfect here, what do you think?
02:14:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since combo is a bit long, like in 00:41:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6) I suggest adding a new one at (5)
02:18:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same here, new combo at (5)
02:53:096 (1,2) - I really suggest to move this stack to be aligned with previous slider. You need to use grid level 4 to do that though.
02:53:577 - Add Break?
02:58:866 (4) - NC to emphasize?

Normal
00:34:635 (1) - Don't know if you've followed the vocals or the instrumental here. If you've followed the vocals, the slider shouldn't start here. It looks very hard to hit this without a closer previous beat.
00:57:712 (1) - I dunno, I think you should've followed your patterns here and started this spin at the red tick. Although it doesn't really makes it perfect, it just makes it better. If you can find another place for this spin, it would be nice. I think it's kinda late how the spin starts after the "skyscraper" part.
02:33:625 (2,3) - I'd try a different pattern. I understand you've tried to follow the vocals, but I think it could be better into this way, so it can keep your flows consistent. You could try another patter though, but I advise starting still on the white tick, this part of the songs makes it feel like it should be consistent.

Hard
Hmm, couldn't find much trouble here, although, I quite don't like the triple stacks followed by a spin, like in 01:32:087 (5,6,7,1) - for example. But they are playable, and if you're fine with them, it's ok, it's just me anyways.
00:16:846 (3) - Not correctly stacked with 00:16:366 (2) -
01:09:250 (4) - NC?
02:58:866 (5) - NC to emphasize, just like in Easy?

Edit: You're going to add the Normal again, right?

Good luck in there.
Topic Starter
BounceBabe

Wolf wrote:

Edit: You're going to add the Normal again, right?
Sure, when it lets me :'D
Stefan
Download does not w--

Download the map here if the dl doesnt work
Okay. :3

[General]
- Is "cover" really neccessary as Tag?
- Please use the recommened blank Audio-File for normal-sliderslide.wav, soft-sliderslide.wav, spinnerbonus.wav and spinnerspin.wav. You can download it here: http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav
- Tickrate must be consistent through the Mapset. Okay, it's not unrankable, but I still don't see to hold TR 4 in Normal. TR 2 sounds great so please keep TR 2 at Normal and Hard.
- I love the Sliderfollow Circle. ;w;

[Easy]
00:21:173 (4,5) - This is too hard for a Beginner. I won't mind if you use a Slider for the Rhythm, but stacked Circles with 1/1 and 1/2 is too hard. Try to change it somehow.
00:26:943 (1) - Fix the Symmetry here.
00:31:510 (2) - Can you make this more curvy?
00:33:433 (4,5,1) - Same problem as the first point.
00:35:356 (2) - Same as 00:31:510 (2).
00:37:520 (4) - The Middle Points not that good, I perfer to make it as one Slider without Repeat.
00:50:019 (1,3) - You really could do the Slider Shape better.. you may try this Code if you want. Otherwise, do something similar as this. http://puu.sh/1MXvP
256,48,50020,6,0,P|256:136|256:136|232:184|264:232,1,180
328,352,51462,1,8,0:0:0
328,352,51943,6,0,P|328:264|328:264|352:216|320:168,1,180
256,48,53385,1,8,0:0:0
01:15:020 (2) - This should end at the red Tick before.
01:20:789 (1) - Add Whistle at the Sliderbody.
01:43:866 (1) - Remove Finish/Whistle at the End and set Clap.
01:45:789 (2) - Set Finish.
01:55:164 (3) - Finish sounds too much, I suggest to remove it.
02:45:404 - 02:52:616 - The Slowdown might be a bit sudden and will irritate. Also, I don't find it smart to use it there. As example, 02:55:981 would fit better at all.

[Normal]
- Combo Colours are different as in the other Diffs.
00:07:712 (1) - Please use here the purple Combo Colour.. the Repeat Arrow is extremly bad to see with the current Combo Colour.
00:19:250 (1) - Remove Clap here, it sounds too awkward.
00:20:933 (3) - I don't find the Slider good. Most player will try to tap at the white tick, not at the red Tick. Player would feel better if you make this pattern: http://puu.sh/1Np1J
00:42:087 (4,5) - Unstack it
01:03:000 (4,1) - Swap their Position, sounds way better: http://puu.sh/1Np6s
01:22:231 (5,6,7) - This pattern are more neat: http://puu.sh/1Npgb
01:31:366 (6) - Change it to a 1/1 Slider without repeat.
01:34:250 (1,1,2,3,4) - Select them and move this pattern at 256,320. I really find this better as to stick it so much at left. lol
01:43:385 (5) - Would sound better if you move it at the white Tick before.
01:43:625 - Add a Circle if you do what I suggested before.
01:49:635 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - Make this? http://puu.sh/1NpmI
02:33:385 (1,2) - Make this, I find this part very bad. http://puu.sh/1Npv7
02:37:471 (3) - Whistle maybe?
02:39:635 (1,1,2,3,4) - Do something similar how I suggested in 01:49:635 (1,1,2,3,4,5).
02:53:096 (3) - NC

[Hard]
AR -1? It might be a bit too fast with AR8.
00:09:635 (1) - The curve is pretty ugly, I am sure you can do this better. :c
00:13:721 (4,5) - Move it to 256,208. Es bildet mit (2,3) davor einen "schöneren Dreieck" und es sieht hässlich aus, wenn es 00:14:443 (1) berührt. :P
00:44:010 (4) - Stack it on (2), it feels better to play as to stack.
01:09:130 (3) - At all, I don't find 1/4 good. It sounds too overmapped imo. However, this Triplet is really bad and you should remove (3).
01:16:822 (4) - ^
01:20:669 (5) - Just to say, this Triplet sounds nice here. So this one, you should keep.
01:22:592 (6) - But this here sounds too much again. lol
01:28:361 (6) - ^
01:36:294 (1) - Remove Finish.
01:43:385 (7,8) - Unstacked plays better.
01:54:923 (3) - Remove Finish.
02:26:294 (1,1) - Make it as one Spinner.



At all, I didn't really liked the Easy Diff. It has too many Tick Switches and it is at the moment too hard as Easy. Even when the Star Rating say something different. (lol) About Normal, it's okay.. but why Tick Rate 4? TwT.. And the Hard Diff is nice to play. The only thing I dislike are some 1/4 Triplets since this Song definitely does not need 1/4 so much. Good Luck with the Map. :)
Darksonic
Download is still not working for me huh x_x
Topic Starter
BounceBabe
I know, i thought it fixed it what peppy and jericho2442 said, but it didnt... Gotta wait until im at home again (weekend) then i can try to fix it :<
Topic Starter
BounceBabe
@Stefan: I know about the sliderticks.. i try to make somthing different at the end sometime and thanks
Marcin
Let's see - I told you I'll mod it in 1 hour, but I forget sorry :(
[General]
The repeat arrow, on kiai time, with white notes is INVISIBLE. Please fix it. You can achieve that by either changing white color to something else (but it won't fit then :( ), Or making arrows other colour than one you're using as combo colour.
[Easy]
00:33:433 (4,5,1) - Well, Easy is supposed to be easy, and making stack of 3 notes, where 2 notes are 3/2 between, and 2 notes 1/1 between, is hard for newbies (IMO).
01:16:702 (1,2,3,4) - You have made 2 stacks, but one of them is 1/2, and second one is 1/1, and it's same combo - Newbies are trying to follow constant rhythm when they're playing. (Just saying, you can leave it alone if you can't replace it).
Hm, Overall: Rhythm is strange, I mean you're following red ticks on hitcircles - it'll cause noobs to hit 100, and I'm pretty sure that. Anyway diff is fine.
[Normal]
Slider tick 4? Dafuq? Please, make it at least -2....
01:18:866 (3,4) - They are... well... ugly ;_:
01:35:212 (3) - How about, removing that circle after, and making this slider ending on blue tick, and then adding repeat arrow?
01:49:635 (1) - Unstack please... too much stacks are boring ;_;
00:26:702 (1,2,3) - How about making slow-downs here?
Overall: This more looks like hard for me.... but maybe it's because I never play normals :3
[Hard]
AR -1 Please, it more fits to the song (Because it's so slow.... and ar 8 breaks that feeling)
00:09:635 (1) - This slider, remove it and place it again to use new slider placing which will make it prettier :)
00:13:962 (5,1) - that anty-jump... well it's not a problem but i wanted to say that :D
00:20:933 (4) - How about slowing it down?
01:10:452 (1,2,3) - Please, don't make it with stack, you've already made many stacks.. :(
01:22:592 (6) - Spacing~~


Poor mod from poor modder, And I'm sorry for making you unhappy :C, I'll give all my stars instead D;
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