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[General]
- Is "cover" really neccessary as Tag?
- Please use the recommened blank Audio-File for normal-sliderslide.wav, soft-sliderslide.wav, spinnerbonus.wav and spinnerspin.wav. You can download it here:
http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav-
Tickrate must be consistent through the Mapset. Okay, it's not unrankable, but I still don't see to hold TR 4 in Normal. TR 2 sounds great so please keep TR 2 at Normal and Hard.
- I love the Sliderfollow Circle. ;w;
[Easy]
00:21:173 (4,5) - This is too hard for a Beginner. I won't mind if you use a Slider for the Rhythm, but stacked Circles with 1/1 and 1/2 is too hard. Try to change it somehow.
00:26:943 (1) - Fix the Symmetry here.
00:31:510 (2) - Can you make this more curvy?
00:33:433 (4,5,1) - Same problem as the first point.
00:35:356 (2) - Same as 00:31:510 (2).
00:37:520 (4) - The Middle Points not that good, I perfer to make it as one Slider without Repeat.
00:50:019 (1,3) - You really could do the Slider Shape better.. you may try this Code if you want. Otherwise, do something similar as this.
http://puu.sh/1MXvP256,48,50020,6,0,P|256:136|256:136|232:184|264:232,1,180
328,352,51462,1,8,0:0:0
328,352,51943,6,0,P|328:264|328:264|352:216|320:168,1,180
256,48,53385,1,8,0:0:0
01:15:020 (2) - This should end at the red Tick before.
01:20:789 (1) - Add Whistle at the Sliderbody.
01:43:866 (1) - Remove Finish/Whistle at the End and set Clap.
01:45:789 (2) - Set Finish.
01:55:164 (3) - Finish sounds too much, I suggest to remove it.
02:45:404 - 02:52:616 - The Slowdown might be a bit sudden and will irritate. Also, I don't find it smart to use it there. As example, 02:55:981 would fit better at all.
[Normal]
- Combo Colours are different as in the other Diffs.
00:07:712 (1) - Please use here the purple Combo Colour.. the Repeat Arrow is extremly bad to see with the current Combo Colour.
00:19:250 (1) - Remove Clap here, it sounds too awkward.
00:20:933 (3) - I don't find the Slider good. Most player will try to tap at the white tick, not at the red Tick. Player would feel better if you make this pattern:
http://puu.sh/1Np1J00:42:087 (4,5) - Unstack it
01:03:000 (4,1) - Swap their Position, sounds way better:
http://puu.sh/1Np6s01:22:231 (5,6,7) - This pattern are more neat:
http://puu.sh/1Npgb01:31:366 (6) - Change it to a 1/1 Slider without repeat.
01:34:250 (1,1,2,3,4) - Select them and move this pattern at 256,320. I really find this better as to stick it so much at left. lol
01:43:385 (5) - Would sound better if you move it at the white Tick before.
01:43:625 - Add a Circle if you do what I suggested before.
01:49:635 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - Make this?
http://puu.sh/1NpmI02:33:385 (1,2) - Make this, I find this part very bad.
http://puu.sh/1Npv702:37:471 (3) - Whistle maybe?
02:39:635 (1,1,2,3,4) - Do something similar how I suggested in 01:49:635 (1,1,2,3,4,5).
02:53:096 (3) - NC
[Hard]
AR -1? It might be a bit too fast with AR8.
00:09:635 (1) - The curve is pretty ugly, I am sure you can do this better. :c
00:13:721 (4,5) - Move it to 256,208. Es bildet mit (2,3) davor einen "schöneren Dreieck" und es sieht hässlich aus, wenn es 00:14:443 (1) berührt.
00:44:010 (4) - Stack it on (2), it feels better to play as to stack.
01:09:130 (3) - At all, I don't find 1/4 good. It sounds too overmapped imo. However, this Triplet is really bad and you should remove (3).
01:16:822 (4) - ^
01:20:669 (5) - Just to say, this Triplet sounds nice here. So this one, you should keep.
01:22:592 (6) - But this here sounds too much again. lol
01:28:361 (6) - ^
01:36:294 (1) - Remove Finish.
01:43:385 (7,8) - Unstacked plays better.
01:54:923 (3) - Remove Finish.
02:26:294 (1,1) - Make it as one Spinner.
At all, I didn't really liked the Easy Diff. It has too many Tick Switches and it is at the moment too hard as Easy. Even when the Star Rating say something different. (lol) About Normal, it's okay.. but why Tick Rate 4? TwT.. And the Hard Diff is nice to play. The only thing I dislike are some 1/4 Triplets since this Song definitely does not need 1/4 so much. Good Luck with the Map.