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Jet - Are you Gonna Be My Girl

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RhqStud722
6 posts
Joined April 2008
Topic Starter
RhqStud722
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 13 September 2008 at 15:16:14

Artist: Jet
Title: Are you Gonna Be My Girl
BPM: 125
Filesize: 4460kb
Play Time: 03:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.78 stars, 147 notes)
Download: Jet - Are you Gonna Be My Girl
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This is my first beatmap submitted and I hope it does well. If any problems please tell me so I can make improvements in the future. I know maybe the offset and BPM may be a bit off but I've made an effort. I am planning to make more difficulties so it isn't only insane.
ReploidArmada
27 posts
Joined August 2008
ReploidArmada
I like the song, but not that it only has one difficulty (OMGWTFBBQ). I believe it would be in your interest to begin working on a couple easier ones. I'm sure a mod is gonna call you out on that.

More gripes:
00:49:54 (7) - Part of that slider seems to be desynced, sounds like the 1st and 3rd iterations.
00:22:42 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - And all other strings like it. Not only does this string of beats come up 9 times in the whole song, but the bad spacing is bad, and even worse because you have notes going at 1/2 beats. Protip: Holding Alt enforces proper spacing for beats based on where and how long ago the last note was.
00:26:86 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Part of this seems desynced.
00:36:04 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Another likely desync.
01:18:22 (17) - What's the point of this slider? It doesn't have a clear link to the song, and you could probably do just as well with another slider that hits on the beats.
03:14:32 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - Long combo is looooooooooong. Break it in half, please.

Other than that, there might be some timing/offset or other issues that I missed; I don't have the godlike ability to sense those problems that the BAT members have. Also, the beatmap basically consisted of 2-3 strings of notes repeated ad nauseaum(sp); While you're fixing the beat spacing, it would be a good idea to throw some more creativity in there through interesting beat lines and appropriate hitsounds.
RhqStud722
6 posts
Joined April 2008
Topic Starter
RhqStud722

ReploidArmada wrote:

I like the song, but not that it only has one difficulty (OMGWTFBBQ). I believe it would be in your interest to begin working on a couple easier ones. I'm sure a mod is gonna call you out on that.

More gripes:
00:49:54 (7) - Part of that slider seems to be desynced, sounds like the 1st and 3rd iterations.
00:22:42 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - And all other strings like it. Not only does this string of beats come up 9 times in the whole song, but the bad spacing is bad, and even worse because you have notes going at 1/2 beats. Protip: Holding Alt enforces proper spacing for beats based on where and how long ago the last note was.
00:26:86 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Part of this seems desynced.
00:36:04 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Another likely desync.
01:18:22 (17) - What's the point of this slider? It doesn't have a clear link to the song, and you could probably do just as well with another slider that hits on the beats.
03:14:32 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - Long combo is looooooooooong. Break it in half, please.

Other than that, there might be some timing/offset or other issues that I missed; I don't have the godlike ability to sense those problems that the BAT members have. Also, the beatmap basically consisted of 2-3 strings of notes repeated ad nauseaum(sp); While you're fixing the beat spacing, it would be a good idea to throw some more creativity in there through interesting beat lines and appropriate hitsounds.
Thanks for the hints and fixes I appreciate it I hope I can improve next time. As this was reaaly a test i might let this one die into the graveyard rather than try to improve this one when i could make a completely fresh one.

Just to check my main problems are repititivity, desyncs, spacing and long combos. Thanks very much hope you can enjoy any future maps!
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