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Kajae

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Kajae 2008-09-14T05:43:02+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Kotobuki Minako - Dear My Keys ~Kenban no Mahou~ (poisonn) [lufi10's waifu].osu

Last edited by Kajae 2008-09-22T00:30:53+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

Kajae

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Kajae 2008-09-15T23:27:35+00:00

Bump! As I am waiting for ranking feedback (obviously)

Kajae

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Kajae 2008-09-17T18:34:26+00:00

I'd really like some feedback on this map. In my eyes, I don't see much wrong with it unless someone doesn't like how some sliders are shaped or what have you.

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2008-09-17T20:51:59+00:00

Wow, really good job on timing. I think it's perfect

But you should fix lots of beatspacing, because there are lots of mistakes.
Use this as a guide or maybe turn on distance snap (choose multiplier holding Alt)
Other than that...

- Normal:
00:44:40 (5) - shorten this by 1/2
And since it's a normal, you should consider decreasing a little circle size, since that one is more fit for an hard.

- Hard:
00:44:40 (5) - shorten by 1/4
01:11:17 (7) - same
01:14:86 (1) - should be 1/4 longer
01:18:55 (7) - shorten by 1/4
01:20:86 (11) - should be 1/4 late
01:21:09 (12) - should be 1/4 longer

Fix spacing and this map will be cool

Kajae

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Kajae 2008-09-17T20:52:59+00:00

Ok, thanks for that help, Card. Fixed those problems

The beat spacing was mainly because I'd add a note or move one around and forget to check the distance after that. And I wasn't using beat spacing for combo end to combo beginning.

This is why it always pays to have someone else go over your work.

Also: I'm glad the timing is good. I spent WAY too long messin with that

Mogsy

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Mogsy 2008-09-17T23:05:17+00:00

Normal:
Some spacing consistency issues, but I'm willing to overlook them, since it's never a huge distance difference.

Bubbled, unless someone wants to pop it due to those minor spacing issues.

Kajae

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Kajae 2008-09-17T23:10:46+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Kajae

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Kajae 2008-09-21T00:19:27+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

kingcobra52

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kingcobra52 2008-09-22T00:21:05+00:00

Normal:

00:47:64 (1) - Move 1/2 beat forward in the timeline, then add a break before this.
00:49:94 (5) - Increase the length by 1/2 beat.

Also, anything else that you see that you can change to make a map a bit easier (but not too easy), please do.

Hard:

00:28:71 (3) - Decrease the length by 1/4 and recalculate the break.
01:01:94 (3) - Decrease the length by 1/4, add 1 more repeat.

btw, the reason the spacing is inconsistent is because you're using the default grid level of 1. You don't have to change this map, but for future maps, I would advise that you use grid level 2 or 3 for more precise spacing.

Downgraded to star.

Kajae

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Kajae 2008-09-22T00:25:35+00:00

Ok, fixed those things you mentioned kingcobra. Along with the beat spacing. Changing the grid to 3 and re-doing all the notes showed HUGE differences than grid size 1. The only thing I looked at before doing this map was the FAQ for editing which didn't mention grid size. I just didn't look around enough in the actual editor.

As for making Normal easier, as far as notes go I honestly think it's fine. I've played songs that were harder and still called "Normal." I increased circle size and dropped overall difficulty down to default middle, as it was 1 above. Also moved a few notes around for easier visibility and ease of hitting.

Kajae

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Kajae 2008-10-07T18:13:01+00:00

Bump for approval! Or more feedback. Or both!