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By2 - Da Mao Xian (Big Adventure)

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popner
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popner
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年6月2日 at 12:21:25

Artist: By2
Title: Da Mao Xian (Big Adventure)
Tags: Adult Ceremony Cheng Ren Li chickgod [CSGA]Ar3sgice
BPM: 160
Filesize: 3038kb
Play Time: 02:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ar3's Normal (2.87 stars, 163 notes)
  2. Chick (5 stars, 454 notes)
  3. Hard (4.94 stars, 331 notes)
Download: By2 - Da Mao Xian (Big Adventure)
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#7
By2 is a Chinese language & twin girls group from Singapore.
Members: Miko & Yumi.
Click to know more about them.
Album: 成人礼 (Adult Ceremony) Song: 大冒险 (Big Adventure)

Ar3's Normal - By [CSGA]Ar3sgice.
Hard - By me.
Chick - By chickgod.
Last edited by popner , edited 132 times in total.
chickgod
24 posts
Joined July 2010
chickgod
我感觉间距还可以大点。。。。。。。。

为什回复太短。。。
yzhbxiang
71 posts
Joined January 2011
yzhbxiang
Insane

00:47:417; It sounds better if delete this circle, because there exists a short break.
01:14:230; The circle 5 and 6 seems a little too close, plz try to reset them.
01:26:325; The oject isn't snapped, you'd better reset this circle.

In brief, it is a very bright song, sounds good, and the design architecture is well-done! :)
Breeze
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Joined March 2009
Breeze
BPM is fine, Offset should be 355 so that downbeat is right on long white tick
popner
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Breeze wrote:

BPM is fine, Offset should be 355 so that downbeat is right on long white tick
fixed.
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
新手mod，纯属建议:)

SPOILER
Normal:
00:15:355 (3,1,2,3) - 这里打的时候感觉很糟糕，考虑调整下节奏或者改用slider
00:46:855 (1,2) - 中间红线上感觉少了一个note
01:04:855 (3) - Slider起点的timing感觉不对，建议向前移动到红线
01:07:855 (1,2) - 同上
01:28:105 (3,4) - 中间空拍别扭
02:16:480 (6) - 考虑在这里开始新的combo


Hard:

难度已经和Insane差不多了

00:38:792 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - 间距，建议摆到同一点

第二段kiai mode的时间是不是持续的太长了
结尾段空白太长了

Insane：

00:27:355 (6,1) - 感觉跳的有些突兀
00:32:792 (3,1) - 同样是跳的问题
00:37:667 (1,2,3) - 建议摆到同一点或者按照DS的距离拉开，这样摆放略难看
00:38:980 (5,6,7,8,1) - 同上
00:50:980 (2,3) - 间距

01:32:042 (1) - 感觉spinner拉长了

结尾的空白段太长了（超过整歌的20%），请考虑做满或者切歌




蛮好的图！ 我很喜欢的说，加油
Banana
794 posts
Joined October 2010
Banana
Title: da mao xian->Da Mao Xian
Preview Time没设..找到某个时间timing菜单最下面一个，就是设置选歌界面点上去歌开始放的时间点，每个难度一样
以下..
都是个人感觉
normal有点难..
（滑条比note之间的移动要快..）
（节奏也快了，要是为新手设计的难度，半拍要尽量少）
normal
圈调大一格CircleSize:3
00:40:105 (2,1) - 距离短了..
00:48:730 (1) - 这个转盘。。个人感觉没必要

hard
00:48:730 (1) - 还是觉得转盘奇怪。。
02:18:355 (1) - 结尾的转盘我觉得02:18:167开始02:19:105结束
chick
00:15:917 (2) - 这附近有个2*的绿线，貌似不需要（如果只是为了改变距离的话按alt在界面右上角调distance spacing就好）后面类似，不重复了。
00:23:042 (1,2,3,4) - 稍微跳一点（用distance spacing），正方形转个角度，不然挡住（5）的箭头。
01:45:542 (7,8) - 遮挡..不喜欢，跳一下吧
02:14:230 (7,8) - 喜欢把这两个用滑条连一下
02:17:417 (4,5) - 我是觉得这里的变速很不自然，于是用滑条（不过我已经把2*的绿线去掉了）连起来，最后排的正方形转了个角度。
总体很好的~
wule
150 posts
Joined April 2011
wule
中文歌支持！这个看拼音还以为打毛线啊哈哈
群里面看到的，随便MOD一些

ALL
KIAI全部从00:51:355和02:06:355开始

normal
00:41:042 (1) - spacing
00:48:730 (1) - 从00:48:355开始
01:14:230 (1) - newcombo for视觉效果
01:17:980 提前结束SPINNER，这里换成一个NOTE怎么样
01:37:855 - SPINNER，到01:37:855结束


HARD
02:16:855 (1) - newcombo
02:17:605 (1) - newcombo
fine

chick
00:09:355 (5) - newcombo
00:46:480 (4) - 故意的吗？
00:58:667 (7) - new..
02:00:355 (6) - n..


对不起啊我想给KUDOSU的，但是最近要攒一些，所以只好先抱歉啦 :o
shenpei310
136 posts
Joined January 2010
shenpei310

Banana wrote:

Title: da mao xian->Da Mao Xian

chick
00:15:917 (2) - 这附近有个2*的绿线，貌似不需要（如果只是为了改变距离的话按alt在界面右上角调distance spacing就好）后面类似，不重复了。全删了
00:23:042 (1,2,3,4) - 稍微跳一点（用distance spacing），正方形转个角度，不然挡住（5）的箭头。嗯
01:45:542 (7,8) - 遮挡..不喜欢，跳一下吧OK
02:14:230 (7,8) - 喜欢把这两个用滑条连一下好主意
02:17:417 (4,5) - 我是觉得这里的变速很不自然，于是用滑条（不过我已经把2*的绿线去掉了）连起来，最后排的正方形转了个角度。啥意思没看懂。
总体很好的~
shenpei310
136 posts
Joined January 2010
shenpei310

atk1992 wrote:

中文歌支持！这个看拼音还以为打毛线啊哈哈
群里面看到的，随便MOD一些



chick
00:09:355 (5) - newcombo嗯
00:46:480 (4) - 故意的吗？失误
00:58:667 (7) - new..
02:00:355 (6) - n..done


对不起啊我想给KUDOSU的，但是最近要攒一些，所以只好先抱歉啦 :o
Download: By2 - da mao xian(Big adventure) (popner) [chick].osu
popner
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Topic Starter
popner

Banana wrote:

Title: da mao xian->Da Mao Xian done
Preview Time没设..找到某个时间timing菜单最下面一个，就是设置选歌界面点上去歌开始放的时间点，每个难度一样
以下.. 本来想最后再弄，现在加了
都是个人感觉
normal有点难..
（滑条比note之间的移动要快..）
（节奏也快了，要是为新手设计的难度，半拍要尽量少） 很多原地二分音，基本还行吧。。normal
圈调大一格CircleSize:3 改了，不过似乎有点挤
00:40:105 (2,1) - 距离短了.. 没注意。。改了
00:48:730 (1) - 这个转盘。。个人感觉没必要 删了会有一小段停顿，不自然
hard
00:48:730 (1) - 还是觉得转盘奇怪。。删了
02:18:355 (1) - 结尾的转盘我觉得02:18:167开始02:19:105结束 改了

总体很好的~
Last edited by popner , edited 3 times in total.
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
popner

atk1992 wrote:

中文歌支持！这个看拼音还以为打毛线啊哈哈
群里面看到的，随便MOD一些

ALL
KIAI全部从00:51:355和02:06:355开始 改了，之前确实太长

normal
00:41:042 (1) - spacing 改了
00:48:730 (1) - 从00:48:355开始 这个spiner删了
01:14:230 (1) - newcombo for视觉效果 改了，不过其实差不多。。
01:17:980 提前结束SPINNER，这里换成一个NOTE怎么样 好主意
01:37:855 - SPINNER，到01:37:855结束 不懂


HARD
02:16:855 (1) - newcombo done
02:17:605 (1) - newcombo done
fine


对不起啊我想给KUDOSU的，但是最近要攒一些，所以只好先抱歉啦 :o
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
popner

Scorpiour wrote:

新手mod，纯属建议:)

SPOILER
Normal:
00:15:355 (3,1,2,3) - 这里打的时候感觉很糟糕，考虑调整下节奏或者改用slider
00:46:855 (1,2) - 中间红线上感觉少了一个note
01:04:855 (3) - Slider起点的timing感觉不对，建议向前移动到红线
01:07:855 (1,2) - 同上
01:28:105 (3,4) - 中间空拍别扭
02:16:480 (6) - 考虑在这里开始新的combo


Hard:

难度已经和Insane差不多了

00:38:792 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - 间距，建议摆到同一点

第二段kiai mode的时间是不是持续的太长了
结尾段空白太长了

Insane：

00:27:355 (6,1) - 感觉跳的有些突兀
00:32:792 (3,1) - 同样是跳的问题
00:37:667 (1,2,3) - 建议摆到同一点或者按照DS的距离拉开，这样摆放略难看
00:38:980 (5,6,7,8,1) - 同上
00:50:980 (2,3) - 间距

01:32:042 (1) - 感觉spinner拉长了

结尾的空白段太长了（超过整歌的20%），请考虑做满或者切歌




蛮好的图！ 我很喜欢的说，加油

综合几位的建议改了一下，改动比较大。
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
mod by request (recheck)

normal:

00:32:625 (5,1) - 不建议在需要稳定节奏的normal难度里使用这种半拍连接。。。

00:41:062 (3) - 建议向前移动到白线，然后拉长一格以保持总长度不变

01:13:875 (2) - 建议延长到01:14:625,删掉01:14:625 (1,2) - ，然后spinner从01:15:000开始


01:36:000 (2,3,1) - 使用默认皮肤的时候1这里有比较明显的遮挡，在normal难度下还是避免出现吧

hard:

hard难度大量的使用3连5连真的没问题么？还有大跨度的跳，感觉像insane了……

01:09:187 (6) - 建议删掉，节奏上感觉有点别扭

chick:
00:47:625 (1,2,3,4) - 放在同一点上吧，这么放感觉不是很好看

01:12:375 (1,1) - 太近了吧。。spinner后面Note贴这么近而且偏离中心点很多感觉略坑……

01:39:000 (4) - 头部加个clap？
popner
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popner
11.12.9 略微降低hard难度
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
路过
Pink Agate
497 posts
Joined September 2011
Pink Agate
路过看见中文歌曲支持个
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
guest diff done~ :)

发错帖实在是...

Download: By2 - Da Mao Xian(Big Adventure) (popner) [Ar3's Easy].osu
popner
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popner
Resurrect
Cygnus
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Joined December 2011
Cygnus
  • General
  1. Remove By2 in Tags because it's already your Artist.

  2. I think grey combo color doesn't really fit the map, please remove it on every diff. :O

  3. 02:18:370 (1) - This last spinner should end on 02:21:370.

  • Easy
  1. 00:01:870 (2) - Move 2nd Point of this slider one grid right for better blanket.

  2. 00:14:620 (3) - Same as what's stated above.

  3. 00:37:870 (3) - Move 1 grid up.

  4. 00:49:870 (2) - Move 2nd and 3rd point one grid left.

  5. 01:01:870 (2) - Move 2nd point two grids right.

  6. 01:17:432 (2) - Please try to avoid this overlap. You have all the space you can get. XD

  7. 01:44:245 (2) - Move 3rd point one grid right.

  8. 02:01:682 (2) - Move 5th point one grid right.

  9. Overall Difficulty +1

  10. HP Drain +1

  • Normal
  1. 00:10:682 (1) - I believe this spinner fits more if you start it on 00:10:870.

  2. 00:15:370 (3) - Please try to avoid this overlap. :O

  3. 00:31:495 (3) - Please stack this with (1) for better gameplay.

  4. 00:46:495 (5) - This too is not stacked with (3).

  5. 01:38:995 (1) - I don't think a new combo is necessary for this note.

  6. 01:50:620 (1) - This slider is too early to start after a spinner. Please try to shorten the spinner until 01:49:870.

  7. 01:50:995 (1) - Don't put a new combo on this.

  • Hard
  1. 00:33:557 (2,3,4,5) - I don't know if this is just me, but this is a huge jump for a hard diff. Try to scale them down please? :O

  2. 01:06:370 (9) - You are definitely missing a new combo on this note.

  3. 01:21:370 (9) - Here too.

  4. 02:14:620 (7) - Not sure about this, but I think you also need a new combo for this one.

  • chick
  1. 00:27:557 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing. Please make them equal for better gameplay.

  2. 00:30:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't know if you're trying to make a pentagon shape. If so, please fix them. :o

  3. 00:37:870 (3) - This slider has one weird structure. I suggest you remake this one and make sure to remove the 1st red point.

  4. 00:38:995 (5,6,7,8) - They look better when stacked with (1) on 00:39:370.

  5. 00:40:120 (1) - I think there's no need for a new combo for this one.

  6. 00:47:620 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bad idea, please try some other patterns instead of this.

  7. 01:09:370 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing consistent for this combo please.

  8. 01:13:495 (1,2,3,4) - I hope you're aware that this is not a square-shaped pattern.

  9. 01:14:245 (5,6) - I suggest you stack (5) with (1) and (6) with (2).

  10. 01:32:057 (1) - I believe this spinner should start on 01:31:870.

  11. 01:41:432 (4) - Please change this slider. It really looks strange and doesn't fit with the rhythm.

  12. 01:50:620 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern again.. Please change it. :o

  13. 02:01:120 (3) - One grid down.

  14. 02:13:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why is there a stream on this part? I suggest you just change these notes with triple streams.

  15. 02:17:620 (1,2,3,4) - Make this square larger than the previous one to give players a bit more of a challenge before the song ends.
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