1. Easy (1,05 stars, 126 notes)
2. Hard (4,92 stars, 341 notes)
3. Hellzero's Normal (4,07 stars, 213 notes)
4. Insane (5 stars, 544 notes)

Hellzero wrote:

Here my diff and some suggestions

General
BG size: Only 800*600 or 1024*768 800x666. I think that's also okay.
MP3: In map use only 50% of full length mp3. Maybe some MATs will require cut mp3. And about bitrate desirable use 192kbs. ~v
You have different tags. Fix it! done
Disable countdown! done

Insane
00:49:426 (5) - NC done
01:15:720 - add note here? done
02:22:603 (1) - make jumps? done
Like this

SPOILER

02:24:014 (1,1) - ^ Recently, this technique is popular. It's just suggestion not more. done

SPOILER

Insane very fun to play. Good job! thanks (:

wcx19911123 wrote:

from in-game pm

[General]
as I said , you need a Normal diff in this map , I'm happy to see that you did it , you should really thanks to Hellzero :3
seems you should cut the mp3 file , cuz you didn't map all the song
others are fine

[Easy]
this diff's SV is too high , kinda hard for newbies ..
and the DS is too low , it is very confusing with the high slider speed :(
00:50:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - change some circles to slider please , or this kills newbies 0.0
01:02:838 (2,3,4) - too make the flow better , I suggest you ctrl + j on this

remapped whole diff^^

[Hellzero's Normal]
01:06:367 (3,4,1) - this is confusing , people can't tell when the sliders end , cuz your sliders before this are all repeat 1 time. also , the anti-jump on (1) make it more confusing
01:51:544 (3,4,1) - this is better than 01:06:367 (3,4,1)
02:36:720 (3,4,1) - this.. still kinda confusing... maybe try like this ? http://puu.sh/6jzI

[Hard]
00:55:074 (2) - repeat 1 time less , and add a note at 00:56:132 , fit the music better done
01:06:367 (3) - I suggest you ctrl + r on this done
01:33:014 - add note , follow the drums better imo done
02:18:367 (5,6,7,8) - make the starting of the sliders on a square , will looks better done
02:25:426 (2) - same as 00:55:074 (2) done
02:36:720 (1,2,3,4) - yes , this looks better than 02:18:367 (5,6,7,8)

[Insane]
00:28:603 (3,4) - ctrl + r done
00:28:956 (5,6) - move (5) to 00:29:309 and move (6) to 00:28:956 , not ctrl + r on this 0.0 done
00:33:191 (5) - newcombo done

good luck
01:12:544 (2,4) - I suggest not stack on sliders.. hard to read no :3 It's easy to read^^
01:52:073 (6,7) - this jump is too huge.. done
02:25:426 (9) - change to streams ? no. I hate long streams :D
kinda like Gold Dust , but I think that is more fun to play than this ...

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Hellzero's Normal]
01:06:367 (3,4,1) - this is confusing , people can't tell when the sliders end , cuz your sliders before this are all repeat 1 time. also , the anti-jump on (1) make it more confusing Oh sorry for this jump my mistake, but about sliders i know what it not recommend use 2 repeat on normal diff but i will!
01:51:544 (3,4,1) - this is better than 01:06:367 (3,4,1)
02:36:720 (3,4,1) - this.. still kinda confusing... maybe try like this ? http://puu.sh/6jzI ok

Kite wrote:

[General]
Consider raising the volume a bit

[Timing]
Offset +8

[Easy]
End first kiai at 01:19:108?
00:46:638 (1) - remove new combo
01:42:049 (1) - Delete and add a single circle at 01:42:402 maybe, feels better for me this way

[Hellzero's Normal]
Pretty hard for a Normal diff, which results in a huge difficulty jump from Easy to Normal.
Didn't find anything worth mentioning.

[Hard]
End first kiai at 01:19:108?
01:55:108 (6) - Make it 1 return less?

[Insane]
End first kiai at 01:19:108?
Map-wise it seems fine, although it feels a bit like a jump overkill to me D:
Not gonna try to nazi mod or anything here, as it's mappers choice how to interpret the song into a difficulty like this.
Couldn't find anything that's incredibly wrong or map breaking anyways.

[Overall]
Pretty decent, nice use of hitsounds.

Good luck o/

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my modding sux

HellDawn wrote:

Hellzero
00:14:175- spacing too close
00:15:057- spacing too far

HellDawn wrote:

General
Please change to bg 800x600 K. Finally i fixed this^^'
Can you use this combo colours section

SPOILER

Dunno why. Can't see anything wrong with my color set.

Easy
00:34:646- Break drag to here Doesn't fit to the music imo, so i won't change it^^'
01:40:293- New combo Only 1 slider in a combo isn't that good imo.

Hellzero
00:14:175- spacing too close
00:15:057- spacing too far

Hard
Choruses are a bit too clapclapclap. Tone down the clapping a bit? They fit to the music, so why change it?^^'

Nice mapset

knjiga wrote:

Hellzero: the map is nice really, only the same thing as kite said, probably too difficult for normal. Maybe you can make it somewhat easier by changing some sliders to single notes or removing reverses from some of them too, and still keep the same gameplay feel. It can possibly also stay like this, if no mats/bats find it to be a problem.

DoKoLP wrote:

knjiga wrote:

Hellzero: the map is nice really, only the same thing as kite said, probably too difficult for normal. Maybe you can make it somewhat easier by changing some sliders to single notes or removing reverses from some of them too, and still keep the same gameplay feel. It can possibly also stay like this, if no mats/bats find it to be a problem.

My girlfriend (plays osu for not that long) could pass it very well, so i don't think it's too hard for normal (:

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[HellZero's Normal]
00:47:352 (1) - Try bringing the head a grid up so it doesn't touch (2) So stuff but ok
00:49:116 (3) - This one's end one down.

Some parts, you new combo every stanza, others every other. WHY. Indeed, fixed
But this is really good, nice job. Thanks!

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
I would've really recommended to use 1.0 distance snap, as it's sort of confusing to tell the time distance as it is now.
I'll still mod it as it is now but keep that in mind.

Hm, this is all good. If anything, I'll point out this:
01:43:116 (9,10) - Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156423 Omg. How did i make such ugly sliders and didn't notice that?!?! O_o. Fixed!
[HellZero's Normal]
00:47:352 (1) - Try bringing the head a grid up so it doesn't touch (2)
00:49:116 (3) - This one's end one down.

Some parts, you new combo every stanza, others every other. WHY.
But this is really good, nice job.
[Hard]
Some parts of this are easy, then it breaks into hard, then easy lol. Mainly kiai.

02:17:705 (4) - One grid up. done
02:26:528 (3) - Yeah I think I liked this better below the repeating slider. done

Good job here!
[Insane]
01:18:852 (12,13,14,15) - Noo why did you stack these. Even a repeat is nicer. No place for it and also i kinda like those buttonstreams :3
02:04:116 (7,8,9) - Continue this compressed instead of stacked? ~^
This diff is awesome! Great job here~ :3 Thanks (:

eldnl wrote:

[General]

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[Easy]

Considering the slider velocity and the distance snap, looks really tight and it's a little confusing and annoying, 0.8x work 100% better. I did remap the whole map with 0,8x D: Luckily it's just easy diff
00:22:646 (1~) Kinda weird, use the same ticks, follow a consistent rhythm, maybe you can add a repeat to the slider and do something like this? http://puu.sh/6rvB also you can change the position of the slider. It fits to the music well imo, so no change.
01:34:646 (1) Remove new combo here and add in the next note, you have a problem here with the combos. done
01:42:410 (8) Add a new combo here. done
01:48:057 (11) ^ New combo here too. done
01:50:175 (1) Remove new combo here. done

[Normal]

The approach rate looks very fast to be a normal, I suggest to use AR4 fit much better.
00:56:528 - Very close to the spinner, really hard for beginners, you should change it.
01:36:057 (1) A clap in the middle to follow the pattern?
02:26:881 - Very close to the spinner again.
A bit hard to be a normal but is fine.

[Hard]

You use the same AP than the insane difficulty? orz feels better with AR7 imo. done
00:11:352 - I like your clap pattern, but I think is a little empty in part like this 00:12:410 ~ 00:15:234 etc can't hear anything wrong
00:53:705 (1,2,3) These sliders are very odd, please extend (1) and move these slider in oder direction to avoid the anti jump between (3,1). For example: http://puu.sh/6tOZ No. I think it's fine as it is now.
02:24:057 (1,2,3) ^ Same ~~~~~~~~~^
Overall looks awesome, so funny. Thanks :b

[Insane]

00:11:352 - I like your clap pattern, but I think is a little empty in part like this 00:12:410 ~ 00:15:234 etc ^
00:29:705 - These jumps are annoying, make some different, this maybe? http://puu.sh/6tQX Matter of taste. I like it as it is now.
00:45:234 - Make a perfect square? Personally I do not like these jumps. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~^
01:55:822 (4) Needs a new combo here. done
02:25:469 (9) The reverse-arrow of this slider is hidden by the previous hit-burst, I have no problem with this, but some MAT/BAT tell me that this is unrankable (A little stupid strange) I don't know If the change is really necessary. For an insane map it's clearly obvious to hold a sliderreverse after a stream. It's in many maps like this.
02:48:763 - I can't see the purpose of the volume fade, not fit with the song, If you really want this just use 65% - 45% - 30%. (I can't hear with 20%) done

Stupid suggestions but I'm tired, sorry xD