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Asuca Hayashi - Chiisaki Mono(Graveyard plz)

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minyeob
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2008년 11월 12일 수요일 at 오후 4:21:23

Artist: Asuca Hayashi
Title: Chiisaki Mono
BPM: 140.04
Filesize: 5221kb
Play Time: 05:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Training Beats (1.6 stars, 273 notes)
  2. Wishing Beats (2.81 stars, 391 notes)
  3. Desiring Beats (4.25 stars, 526 notes)
Download: Asuca Hayashi - Chiisaki Mono
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This song is Ending song on Pokemon 6th movie. Wish maker Jirachi.

5 minute full version.
Somebody check beatspacing!
-----------------------------------------------------Update---------------
(9/21)
1. Submit
2. Sound effect+
3. [Desire] (Hard) Mode +

(9/22)
1. [Desire] difficulty increased.[4.08stars-> 4.18 stars]

(9/23)
1. Clap sound effect +

(9/24)
Lyric+
Hope[Easy] mode +
Mode name changed.
Easy- [Hope]->[Training Beats]
Normal- [Wish]->[Wishing Beats]
Hard- [Desire]->[Desiring Beats]

(9/25)
Download Error fixed

(9/27)
Timing fixed.
Desiring beats difficulty increased. [Desiring Beats- 4.18 stars--> 4.26 stars]


(10/11~10/16)
A lot of Beatspacing fix

(11/12)
REQUEST graveyard
aquabluu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
minyeob
I don't want to get a trouble with a mod too.
But I want to make full version.
Also Shotgun Symphony, Christmas Party etc. are longer than 5 minutes too.----------> Before approve rule lol

I want someone's replies! Relax Relax
Maybe Some day someone replies...
aquabluu
If you want instant replies go on IRC and call out a mod's name
Topic Starter
minyeob
To aquabluu,

Your post makes me shocked. (on beatmap reserving thread.)

You reserved Chiisaki Mono on 8/13.

I didn't know how to reserve the beatmaps when you reserved!

I submitted this beatmap on 9/21

Do you think I disturbed you?
Do you think my Chiisaki Mono is disturbing your Chiisaki Mono to be ranked?

If you answer like------------> You're disturbing me, minyeob

I can consider(Deleting this post) for you

If you answer bright side like---------------> That's OK

Thanks a lot.

Answer truely.

But accroding to your replies, I don't think I'm disturbing you.
aquabluu
There's no policy on duplicate beatmaps yet. So you can still have yours up.
And no, you're not preventing me from getting it ranked. Not a single mod has seen it ever since I submitted it. That's shocking
Topic Starter
minyeob
I think I'm negative person.

I have to imitate you :? :?

I'll call mod tomorrow and get a star mark(?)--------> I have to fix beat spacing. :(

By the way, how to use BanchoBot when chating?
Like seeing player's profile, link beatmap site etc.
aquabluu
Hm, this isn't the place for it. I'll message you.
btw, your timing's off. Offset around 14000, near the word 'shizuka ni'. BPM is fine
m980
Okay..

BPM + Offset seem fine to me.

You should fix up your Beatspacing.

Desiring Beats
Fix up your Beatspacing..
00:13:89 (1,2,3) - These beats are closer to all the other 1/4 note combos. Spread them out abit like the other 1/4 beat combos.
00:14:86 (4,5,6) - I think 5,6 should be moved away from 4, being that close compared to other beat combos.
00:25:03 (7,8,9) - Like Above. Move 8,9 away from 7.
00:43:03 (1,2,3,4) - This Formation get's used later in the Map, but in those formations, all of them are 1/4 apart, in this one, 2-3 are 1 beat apart. Move these abit more apart.
00:46:24 (4,5,6,7) - Move these abit further from eachother please.
00:48:81 (2,3,4,5) - 2-3 are right, 5 should be further away from 4.
00:51:38 (Combo) - 1 seems too close to 2, 3-5 also seem to close to eachother.
00:56:52 (1,2,3,4) - I think 1-3 should move abit further from 4.
01:02:73 (1,2,3,4,5) - All these notes are on blue ticks. Move them onto the ticks after the notes. so 1/4 forward/later in the song.
01:09:80 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1-5 are all too close to eachother. Move them further from eachother.
01:23:94 (6,7,8) - I'd move 7 so it's right inbetween 6,8
01:27:80 (7,8,9,10) - these are too close to eachother.
01:32:94 (1,2,3,4) - 1 should move further away from 2
01:58:65 (5,6,7) - Are Kind of close to eachother.
01:59:93 (7,1,2) - These ARE close to eachother.
02:09:36 (6,7,8,9) - move 7-9 further away from 6
02:14:07 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Either move the first combo closer, or the second combo further from eachother.

At this point, I got confused which beats were too close or too far from eachother.. But I hope you get the point. Fix up the rest. Try to find them yourself

Wishing Beats
00:17:10 (1,2,3) - 1,2 should go abit closer to 3
00:24:39 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 3-6 should go closer together, 7,8 should go further away from 6.
00:30:81 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1-3 are too far from eachother, and so is 5-7
00:46:24 (4,5,6,7) - Too close
00:49:67 (4,5) - Too close
00:53:52 (3,4) - Too close
01:02:63 (1,2,3,4) - Move forward 1/4 a beat.
01:04:23 (5,6,7) - Kind of close to eachother?
01:09:80 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too close to eachother
01:16:23 (4,5,6,7) - Are Kind of close together?
01:28:44 (8,9,1) - Should go closer to eachother.
01:29:51 (2,3,4) - Too far from eachother. as well as 6 and 7
01:33:37 (2,3,4) - Move them closer to eachother
01:58:00 (4,5) - Move 5 further away from 4
02:03:79 (3,4) - Move 1-3 further away from 4.
02:08:93 (5,6,7) - Lack of Consistency. Move 6-7 abit further to the right.
02:20:93 (1,2) - Kind of close to eachother. Move 1 away from 2.
02:58:63 (2,3,4,5,6) - Kind of close to eachother. Move abit further away from eachother.

I'll leave the rest up to you. You'll have to be able to find the mistakes in your own maps...

Training Beats
These beats aren't even snapped properly. Snap them please!

00:30:41 (2,1,2) - Woah.. Hold up.. that is a pretty big jump. Move these beats around.
00:32:55 (4,5,1,1) - Move these further away from eachother, to suit beatspacing.
00:51:83 (2,3) - Move 3 further away from the end of 2.
01:02:65 (1,2) - Move later 1/4 or earlier 1/4
01:10:68 (1,2,3) - Spacing isn't consistent with all the other 1/4 beats in the map.
01:22:25 (1,2) - Lack of Consistency again.. Move further away abit.
01:29:54 (6,7,8,9) - Lack of Consistency. Move closer together.
01:46:35 (1) - Move later 1/4 or earlier 1/4
02:03:38 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Further away from eachother, or all the ones that are 1 beat away should be closer.. I'm getting confused..
02:14:95 (2,1) - Move 1 closer to 2
02:26:95 (9,10,11) - Consistency..
02:48:37 (1,2,3,4) - Move 4 so that it is closer to 3..

I haven't modded all the maps fully.. It's getting pretty late (Not Really), and I am getting pretty tired..

You really need to fix up beatspacing. It's really inconsistent..
mattyu007
Please remove the lyrics from the first post, it is used for information on the beatmap, not for lyrics, especially on a really long song such as this one...
James
if you want the path of james beatmapping, go pm me.
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