Alexis Erisian - Dead Body Face Down · forum

Hybreed

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Hybreed 2008-09-29T01:34:19+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on October-11-08 at 9:20:30 AM

Artist: Alexis Erisian
Title: Dead Body Face Down
BPM: 110
Filesize: 6338kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.87 stars, 113 notes)
Normal (4.21 stars, 271 notes)
Hard (4.65 stars, 347 notes)

Download: Alexis Erisian - Dead Body Face Down
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Uhm... yeah. Just a new beatmap I made. Its cool, I guess. I think its perfectly timed. Ive tested it a few times. It works, in my opinion. Hope it passes! Don't really care if it dosn't.

Edit: Tick thing upped one so when it comes to the larger sliders, it won't drain out the Health.

Edit TWO: I added whistle sounds at the end of combos.

Edit THREE: I listened to Echo and mapped the second break and put it in later on. Three point three, moved like three beats. Three point 5, edited difficulty, and fixed up one part of the song.

Edit FOUR: No song changes, but I added a cool zombie head hit circle! Four point 1: Should work now. Four point 5: Color changes, background updated. ZOMBIE THEME! Four point 7: I should really plan things out before making upload after upload... more Zombie theme stuff >> Four point 9: Some spacing issues fixed, hopefully.

EDIT FIVE! Thank you Echo for modding my map once more! I hope I have fixed the spacing issues, now. All seems to be well made up.

Edit SIX! Easy mode! Yes. Very easy.

EDIT SEVEN: I am working on Hard Mode, it isn't done yet, but its there. Fixed spacing Cheese said, and upgraded my text images to give them a grunge look.

EDIT EIGHT: Hard mode done! Woot!

EDIT NINE: Colors made easier to see.

Last edited by Hybreed 2008-10-11T16:22:43+00:00, edited 22 times in total.

Hybreed

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Hybreed 2008-09-29T20:18:34+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Echo

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Here since the beginning

Echo 2008-09-30T03:27:54+00:00

Not bad at all. Timing is good (maybe slightly later offset), and overall beat placement is pretty good.

In some places spacing could be improved, such as 01:45:22 (7) - 01:53:41 (1) where everything has the same spacing but the time intervals are different.

Also imo you should map the second break, and put the break at 01:28:86 - 01:43:59 instead, because that section is less eventful.

And tbh this isn't really my kind of song so you'll have to forgive me if I never post again in this thread ==

Hybreed

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Hybreed 2008-09-30T03:45:36+00:00

Thanks, Echo, I fixed that up and mapped the second break, moving it later on.

Hybreed

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Hybreed 2008-10-01T03:05:15+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Hybreed

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Hybreed 2008-10-02T22:01:35+00:00

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Echo

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Here since the beginning

Echo 2008-10-03T00:34:13+00:00

00:21:22 (4) - too far away from 3
00:23:95 (1) - is too close to 5
00:47:95 (1) - too close to 2
01:13:04 (2) - too close to 1
01:14:13 (1,2,3) - gaps between them can be a bit smaller

the pattern used at the following times are spaced misleadingly - the gap from (1,2) to (3,4) to (5) should be bigger than that of (5) to (6) to (7)
01:44:68 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11)
01:46:86 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
01:49:04 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
01:51:22 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
01:57:77 (1,2,3,4,5,6)

02:08:68 (1) - too close to 4
02:15:22 (1) - too close to 2
02:17:41 (4) - too close to 3
02:40:31 (1) - too close to 3

didn't look at your new skin though, too lazy to redownload .osz ^^;

more difficulties needed

Hybreed

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Hybreed 2008-10-03T00:34:48+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Echo

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Here since the beginning

Echo 2008-10-03T01:24:45+00:00

01:14:13 (1) - can be a bit more left
02:40:31 (1) - too close to 3

=> more difficulties plz <=

Hybreed

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Hybreed 2008-10-03T01:25:06+00:00

Added easy mode and fixed what you said

Hybreed

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Hybreed 2008-10-03T16:25:14+00:00

BUMP: Also working on Hard Mode. By hard I mean extreme :O

CheeseWarlock

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CheeseWarlock 2008-10-03T17:28:12+00:00

Easy:
00:12:50 (6) - Should be placed a little closer to (5). And I'd like to see a few more 1/2 note beats through the song.
01:31:59 (1) - Odd place to end the slider. AND NO THIS DOES NOT OPPOSE MY PREVIOUS COMMENT.

Normal:
Odd spacing abounds here; some of it I don't mind.
00:17:41 (1) - Space farther from previous beat.
00:53:41 (3) - See above.
01:14:95 (2) - Shift to the left a bit, spacing-wise.
01:20:68 (1) - Farther away.
01:22:31 (3) - This slider is just plain ugly.
01:45:77 (9) - Make the spacing consistent.
02:26:13 (1) - Farther away plz.
02:37:04 (1) - See above.
02:40:31 (1) - See above.
02:43:59 (1) - See above.
02:47:95 (1) - See above.

Also, I'd like to see a bit of editing work done on the text images. Turn down the brightness, add borders, just something to make them more detailed than just single colours.

Hybreed

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Hybreed 2008-10-04T03:42:04+00:00

Ive fixed those spacing issues, working on adding a border to my images. Also working on a hard mode, and that is the reason I havn't updated it yet!