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Leyka

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Leyka 2008-10-06T15:37:42+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2008年10月20日 at 下午 11:00:18

Artist: Kalafina
Title: oblivious
Tags: oblivious
BPM: 125
Filesize: 17877kb
Play Time: 03:56
Difficulties Available:

Normal (2.67 stars, 260 notes)
Hard (3.72 stars, 328 notes)
JAMES DIFFICULTY!! (4.37 stars, 260 notes)

Download: Kalafina - oblivious
Download: Kalafina - oblivious (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Edit1 10/06/2008:My first beatmap
Edit2 10/07/2008:Make hard rym more wide
correct some mistake
countdown change to double time
Edit3 10/07/2008:big change,hard mode get more slider,spinner

Edit4 10/07/2008:insane bpm change to 125,all note have reset,used grid snap
Edit5 10/07/2008:Hard bpm change to 125,reset note
countdown back to normal speed,grid snap
Edit6 10/07/2008:Hard offset change to 9976 ,distance some note
Insane offest change to 9976,sound right note
Edit7 10/08/2008:Snap 1/2 ,slider reset
Edit8 10/08/2008:Hard change to Normal, Insane to Hard
Edit9 10/09/2008:beatspacing normal and hard,fix slider beat
Edit10 10/11/2008:beat fix (hard)
Edit11 10/12/2008:sound effect (normal)
Edit12 10/12/2008:sound effect,more harder(hard)
Edit13 10/12/2008:add video (hard and normal)
change hard setting
sound effect,little beat problem fix(hard)
Edit14 10/13/2008:fix double break
sound fix
spacing fix
lower over all difficulty(hard)
delete some note add 2 spinner
Edit15 10/13/2008:fix all
Edit16 10/14/2008:Sync video
fix james problems
Edit17 10/15/2008:add insane
james beat us all
Edit18 10/16/2008:remove insane
Edit19 10/16/2008:add james!
Edit20 10/17/2008:update James
Edit21 10/20/2008:color change

Last edited by Leyka 2008-10-20T15:02:14+00:00, edited 60 times in total.

awp

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awp 2008-10-07T16:55:31+00:00

My cries for Sinistro's patience were for naught - this is a really good map for a first try. Just a few things:

Timing is quite good, especially after resnapping all notes. After resnapping, re-adjust the length of any sliders that do not snap correctly - one example is 00:34:45 (10) on Hard.

Second major concern: beatspacing. Taken from [Hard]: 00:30:61 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) is an excellent use of beatspacing. It's intuitive. However, 01:11:65 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) is inconsistent in a few places (from 5 to 6 in the first combo and from 1 to 2 in the next combo). Within any given combo, when the time between hits is shorter, the notes should be closer together.

Third major concern: Hard is actually pretty easy (you may be better off renaming it to [Normal]) and Insane is almost identical to Hard - try taking a look at the differences between some other people's Hard and Insane maps to gauge how different they are. It might help you to start Insane off on a completely clean slate - delete every note and start the map over, using new, more complex patterns.

You're off to a great start.

awp

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awp 2008-10-07T17:09:58+00:00

revive!

Download: Kalafina - oblivious (Kirisame) [Hard].osu

Leyka

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Leyka 2008-10-07T17:40:13+00:00

Fixed problem..check it out

awp

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awp 2008-10-09T09:25:59+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Leyka

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Leyka 2008-10-12T13:45:02+00:00

Edit 10/09/2008:beatspacing normal and hard,fix slider beat

Leyka

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Leyka 2008-10-14T07:16:34+00:00

BUMP..
can someone help me to check it?

Seibei4211

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Seibei4211 2008-10-14T09:24:17+00:00

Phew. Ok. Most of the small problems in Hard should be fixed and if you fixed the ones in Normal, then those should be good, too. The big problem that remains, however, is the spacing inconsistency in both maps that awp has mentioned already.

For Normal, I like a 1.00 slider rate with .7 distance spacing. Hard, the 2.40 can stay, but try to get everything else to be something like .5 distance spacing.

I really like this song/map, so don't give up on it~ :]

Seibei4211

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Seibei4211 2008-10-14T11:05:18+00:00

Here you go.

Download: Kalafina - oblivious (Kirisame) [Modded Normal].osu

Seibei4211

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Seibei4211 2008-10-14T12:08:16+00:00

Ok, Hard spacing is MUCH better. Here are the remaining problems keeping it from being perfect.

Lemme just remind you that whenever you move something in the timeline, make sure you respace the note in the map. Also, one tick = 1/4 of a beat for me.

00:11:41 (3) - Move one tick to the right.
01:09:01 (1) - This is a little close to the slider before it. Use distance spacing again and move it away.
01:42:55 (10) - Move one tick to the right, then shorten by one tick.
01:44:77 (5) - Move one tick to the left.
01:49:57 (5) - Move one tick to the left, then lengthen by one tick.
01:53:65 (10) - Make this repeat once like it used to.
02:12:85 (1,2,3) - Move these one tick to the right.
02:46:45 (1) - Make this closer to the combo before it. It's breaking the rhythm, not to mention a little confusing at first since the slider end has better distance spacing than the start.
02:50:29 (1,2,3,4) - Delete these duplets, then replace the break afterwards.
03:09:25 (5) - Move one tick to the left.
Optional: 03:20:53 (9) - Replace this with a spinner that ends at 3:24:376. It's awkward, but acceptable, to use the spinner you have right now. Either way. Just a suggestion. You could have it end where it's ending right now, too.
03:46:45 (4) - Move one tick to the right.

Most of these are easy fixes. Once you get Normal respaced, let me know and I'll give you the list for that.

EVA-X

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EVA-X 2008-10-14T12:17:22+00:00

ok
beta 0.99

Download: Kalafina - oblivious (Kirisame) [Insane].osu

Last edited by EVA-X 2008-10-15T09:37:59+00:00, edited 9 times in total.

Leyka

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Leyka 2008-10-14T12:20:15+00:00

all done
super punch bump

Seibei4211

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Seibei4211 2008-10-14T19:02:57+00:00

~~And with those fixes over chat, Normal and Hard are finally perfect in my eyes~~~ Once Insane is up, I'll try to get some mods to look at this map. I like it.

Edit: Ok, whoops. Forgot to check and see if Hard's fixes were implemented properly. After rechecking and tweaking a few more things, it is perfect again~

James

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James 2008-10-15T09:50:21+00:00

~~i get random 100s but who cares im bubbling it.~~

theres another diff coming so im popping it again

James

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James 2008-10-15T17:04:53+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

James

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James 2008-10-15T20:26:26+00:00

for Kirisame:

http://up.ppy.sh/files/asdf.rar

do the instructions below before testing it.

instructions:
1. put all 3 files in oblivious folder
2. open up JAMES DIFFICULTY !!
3. go to 03:20:536.
4. check if there is slider tick/slide sound. if there is, see 4.1. if there isnt, see 4.2.

4.1. go to timing tab > timing setup panel > select the second timing section > go to audio tab at the left side > check custom override.

4.2. do nothing.

5. go try it now~

if thats fine enough for you, go ahead. i still might change something though. i want to abuse the slider tick rate 4 throughout the song. it fits perfectly~

EDIT: i changed something at the middle, so just choose whatever difficulty you want to upload, whether the one inside the folder or the one as attachment.

oh yeah, if you dont want this added just attach the osu file at the first topic

Download: Kalafina - oblivious (Kirisame) [JAMES DIFFICULTY!!].osu

Leyka

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Leyka 2008-10-16T05:07:15+00:00

willco!

Leyka

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Leyka 2008-10-16T05:40:31+00:00

James wrote:
for Kirisame:

http://up.ppy.sh/files/asdf.rar

do the instructions below before testing it.

instructions:
1. put all 3 files in oblivious folder
2. open up JAMES DIFFICULTY !!
3. go to 03:20:536.
4. check if there is slider tick/slide sound. if there is, see 4.1. if there isnt, see 4.2.

4.1. go to timing tab > timing setup panel > select the second timing section > go to audio tab at the left side > check custom override.

4.2. do nothing.
5. go try it now~

if thats fine enough for you, go ahead. i still might change something though. i want to abuse the slider tick rate 4 throughout the song. it fits perfectly~

EDIT: i changed something at the middle, so just choose whatever difficulty you want to upload, whether the one inside the folder or the one as attachment.

oh yeah, if you dont want this added just attach the osu file at the first topic