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Peter Fox - Haus am See [Taiko|Osu]

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Topic Starter
Magicphoenix
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 28. Oktober 2012 at 16:19:37

Artist: Peter Fox
Title: Haus am See
Tags: Stadtaffe p3n DarkDunskin Cold Steel Reggae
BPM: 123,7
Filesize: 18108kb
Play Time: 03:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dunskin's Taiko Oni (4,89 stars, 925 notes)
  2. Ende der Strasse (3,17 stars, 232 notes)
  3. Haus am See (4,93 stars, 477 notes)
  4. Orangenbaumblaetter (1,4 stars, 154 notes)
  5. p3n's faule Huette (4,88 stars, 506 notes)
Download: Peter Fox - Haus am See
Download: Peter Fox - Haus am See (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Und am Ende der Straße steht ein Haus am See,
Orangenbaumblätter liegen auf dem Weg,
Ich hab 20 Kinder meine Frau ist schön,
Alle komm' vorbei ich brauch nie rauszugeh'n !


(Orangenbaumblaetter = orange tree leaves //Easy
Ende der Strasse = end of the street //Normal
p3n's faule Huette = p3n's lazy shed //Hard
Haus am See = house at the lake //Hard)
DarkDunskin
Und am Ende der Straße steht ein Dark am See~
Hier ist die Taiko die du haben wolltest + BG:

Download: Peter Fox - Haus am See (Magicphoenix) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu


p3n
[General]
MP3 is 256kbps - don't change until a MAT/BAT demands it 8-)


[Orangenbaumblaetter]
01:25:608 (1) - someone WILL tell you this is unrankable because some ppl with strange slider graphics wont see the way the slider goes...try to leave some space in the middle or do something else entirely :roll:
03:22:019 (1,1,2,1) - Would sound better with:
- 03:22:019 (1) - shorten to 03:24:929 (end on white tick);
- 03:25:657 (1) - move to 03:25:414 and add 1x repeat;
- 03:28:082 (1) - move to 03:27:840 (white tick)
http://puu.sh/cuKG

smooth 1,3 stars :P


[p3n's faule huette]
DAT MAP!!!1
update:
Download: Peter Fox - Haus am See (Magicphoenix) [p3n's faule Huette].osu


[Haus am See]
01:48:890 (8) - start the new combo here? [lol NC modpost lol]
02:33:515 (5) - move turning point [ending point] of the slider to 288/264 to make it match the orientation of 02:33:030 (4)
03:23:232 (6,1,2) - personally I would only use 03:23:959 - 03:24:080 - 03:24:444 - 03:24:929 - 03:25:172 as beats for the actual vocal follow here (in whatever hitobjects you want): http://puu.sh/cuPP


have this
Hika
hi mod request weee

SPOILER
Overall -
AAAAAA I LOVE THIS SONG <3
Don't forget to change the bitrate of the mp3.

Orangenbaumblaetter -
00:35:649 (3) - New combo.
01:59:561 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:07:807 (1) - ^
03:04:557 (2) - Finish on the tail of the slider.
03:22:019 (1) - This slider sounds bad. Consider remapping.

p3n's faule Huette -
The hitsounding after the 2nd kiai timing, is it finished? .. I can't tell. If it isn't finish it..
00:19:642 (5) - Remove clap.
00:21:461 (6) - ^
00:22:431 (4) - ^
00:21:825 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:22:068 (2) - New combo.
00:47:290 (3) - ^
01:45:010 (5) - ^
01:48:890 (9) - Remove clap.
02:00:774 (4) - New combo.
02:35:455 (2) - Add whistle.
03:03:102 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:09:408 (1) - ^
03:18:381 (6) - New combo.
03:25:657 (9) - ^

Haus am See -
00:19:642 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:19:885 (2) - Add new combo.
01:17:363 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:11:930 (8) - New combo.
02:12:173 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:15:083 (8) - New combo.
02:15:568 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:15:810 (2) - New combo.
03:10:863 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I hope this is rankable since Freestyler does it... I mean this is slower but still, GOODLUCK \:D/

Sorry, I love to look at combos. x:

Good luck. <3
Topic Starter
Magicphoenix

p3n wrote:

[General]
MP3 is 256kbps - don't change until a MAT/BAT demands it 8-)


[Orangenbaumblaetter]
01:25:608 (1) - someone WILL tell you this is unrankable because some ppl with strange slider graphics wont see the way the slider goes...try to leave some space in the middle or do something else entirely :roll: distanz erhöht
03:22:019 (1,1,2,1) - Would sound better with:
- 03:22:019 (1) - shorten to 03:24:929 (end on white tick); ok
- 03:25:657 (1) - move to 03:25:414 and add 1x repeat; nope
- 03:28:082 (1) - move to 03:27:840 (white tick) ^
http://puu.sh/cuKG

smooth 1,3 stars :P


[p3n's faule huette]
DAT MAP!!!1
update:
[attachment=0:cfcf7]Peter Fox - Haus am See (Magicphoenix) [p3n's faule Huette].osu[/attachment:cfcf7]


[Haus am See]
01:48:890 (8) - start the new combo here? [lol NC modpost lol] ok
02:33:515 (5) - move turning point [ending point] of the slider to 288/264 to make it match the orientation of 02:33:030 (4)
03:23:232 (6,1,2) - personally I would only use 03:23:959 - 03:24:080 - 03:24:444 - 03:24:929 - 03:25:172 as beats for the actual vocal follow here (in whatever hitobjects you want): http://puu.sh/cuPP nope


have this
=)
Topic Starter
Magicphoenix

Hika wrote:

hi mod request weee

SPOILER
Overall -
AAAAAA I LOVE THIS SONG <3 =)
Don't forget to change the bitrate of the mp3. okay

Orangenbaumblaetter -
00:35:649 (3) - New combo. ok
01:59:561 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
02:07:807 (1) - ^ nope
03:04:557 (2) - Finish on the tail of the slider. no
03:22:019 (1) - This slider sounds bad. Consider remapping. did

p3n's faule Huette -
The hitsounding after the 2nd kiai timing, is it finished? .. I can't tell. If it isn't finish it..
00:19:642 (5) - Remove clap.
00:21:461 (6) - ^
00:22:431 (4) - ^
00:21:825 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:22:068 (2) - New combo.
00:47:290 (3) - ^
01:45:010 (5) - ^
01:48:890 (9) - Remove clap.
02:00:774 (4) - New combo.
02:35:455 (2) - Add whistle.
03:03:102 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:09:408 (1) - ^
03:18:381 (6) - New combo.
03:25:657 (9) - ^

Haus am See -
00:19:642 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:19:885 (2) - Add new combo. ok
01:17:363 (1) - Remove new combo. ok
02:11:930 (8) - New combo.
02:12:173 (1) - Remove new combo. ok
02:15:083 (8) - New combo.
02:15:568 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:15:810 (2) - New combo. did some new combos but not like you did it, thanks for reminding
03:10:863 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I hope this is rankable since Freestyler does it... I mean this is slower but still, GOODLUCK \:D/ it's way slower and the circle spacing is even increasing so i think it should be no problem :P

Sorry, I love to look at combos. x:

Good luck. <3
Thank you very much Hika !!
p3n

Hika wrote:

p3n's faule Huette -
The hitsounding after the 2nd kiai timing, is it finished? .. I can't tell. If it isn't finish it.. woah I think it got mixed up between the different versions (one on my netbook and one on the PC) changed to the final version
00:19:642 (5) - Remove clap.
00:21:461 (6) - ^
00:22:431 (4) - ^
00:21:825 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:22:068 (2) - New combo.
00:47:290 (3) - ^
01:45:010 (5) - ^
01:48:890 (9) - Remove clap.
02:00:774 (4) - New combo.
02:35:455 (2) - Add whistle.
03:03:102 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:09:408 (1) - ^
03:18:381 (6) - New combo. did something else
03:25:657 (9) - ^
everything else applied
Thanks Hika o/

Download: Peter Fox - Haus am See (Magicphoenix) [p3n's faule Huette].osu
nimi
Hey, modding as requested

[p3n's faule Huette]
finish the 3rd kiai at the same time it does on the other diffs? (here it ends at 02:58:737, on the others at 03:06:498)
consider increasing a bit the overall difficulty, it's too low for the diff's level
01:34:824 (6) - new combo here suits better than at 01:35:309 (1), so consider changing it
02:02:714 (6,7,8,9) - place it at the same place of 02:00:532 (1)? looks better imo
03:03:830 (1) - remove new combo? seems unecessary to me

[Haus am See]
00:35:649 (4) - add new combo?
00:52:140 (4) - i'm not sure about this, but consider using Ctrl+R to keep the jumpy pattern of the combo
02:18:963 (3) - add new combo here? (as added in 02:03:806 (1))
02:19:327 (5) - same as above, but in relation to 02:04:169 (1)
02:58:737 (3) - add new combo? the rhythm kinda changes here
03:10:863 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - alskdjlaskdj why

sorry for making you wait :( i fell asleep earlier
Starry_old
request from queue. This is also my first German song I modded so

[General]

I think you should put a countdown to get people ready because the song starts as soon as you click the map.

[Orangenbaumblaetter]

01:06:692 (2,3) - I think you should remove 3 and reverse 2.
01:55:681 (3,4,5) - I think a slider fits here better.
02:31:574 (1,2) - Remove 2 reverse 1?
03:16:198 (3) - I don't think reverse is needed.

[p3n's faule Huette]

00:09:941 (1) - remove new combo
00:13:822 (1) - ^
00:10:669 (2) - New combo
00:14:549 (2) - ^
00:42:439 (11) - ^
01:26:578 (3) - ^
01:48:890 (9) - ^
02:44:064 (5) - ^
00:40:742 (8) - This note is suppose to be like this?
03:06:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Split this.
03:10:378 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel that this combo can be shorten.
03:28:446 (2,3) - Remove 3 reverse 2?

[Haus am See]

00:02:181 (5) - New combo
00:09:457 (5) - ^
00:35:649 (4) - ^
02:15:083 (4) - ^
02:24:784 (5) - ^
03:07:953 (4) - ^
01:17:848 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:16:926 (5,6,7) - Slider go better here?
03:20:564 (6,7) - Remove 7 reverse 6?

Good luck~ That's all I could find.
Topic Starter
Magicphoenix

Wiinter wrote:

[Haus am See]
00:35:649 (4) - add new combo? ok
00:52:140 (4) - i'm not sure about this, but consider using Ctrl+R to keep the jumpy pattern of the combo ok
02:18:963 (3) - add new combo here? (as added in 02:03:806 (1)) removed previous combo instead
02:19:327 (5) - same as above, but in relation to 02:04:169 (1) no change
02:58:737 (3) - add new combo? the rhythm kinda changes here nope
03:10:863 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - alskdjlaskdj why I like it, problem? :D

sorry for making you wait :( i fell asleep earlier hehehe ^^ no problem
Thank you very much Wiinter :D
Topic Starter
Magicphoenix

Starry wrote:

request from queue. This is also my first German song I modded so

[General]

I think you should put a countdown to get people ready because the song starts as soon as you click the map. No it doesn't , I have cooldown lol

[Orangenbaumblaetter]

01:06:692 (2,3) - I think you should remove 3 and reverse 2. nope
01:55:681 (3,4,5) - I think a slider fits here better. ^
02:31:574 (1,2) - Remove 2 reverse 1? hmm i see what you did there, but no
03:16:198 (3) - I don't think reverse is needed. removed

[Haus am See]

00:02:181 (5) - New combo nope
00:09:457 (5) - ^ ^
00:35:649 (4) - ^ ok
02:15:083 (4) - ^ no
02:24:784 (5) - ^ ok
03:07:953 (4) - ^ nope
01:17:848 (1) - Remove new combo? no
03:16:926 (5,6,7) - Slider go better here? no change
03:20:564 (6,7) - Remove 7 reverse 6? nope

Good luck~ That's all I could find.
Thank you very much Starry =)
p3n

Starry wrote:

[p3n's faule Huette]
00:09:941 (1) - remove new combo rearranged some combos
00:13:822 (1) - ^
00:10:669 (2) - New combo
00:14:549 (2) - ^
00:42:439 (11) - ^
01:26:578 (3) - ^
01:48:890 (9) - ^
02:44:064 (5) - ^
00:40:742 (8) - This note is suppose to be like this? it is. if this is unreadable for some ppl I will change it. It sure is damn hard to play hidden
03:06:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Split this. if by splitting you meant combo then ok
03:10:378 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel that this combo can be shorten. changed
03:28:446 (2,3) - Remove 3 reverse 2? hmm sounds better so why not

Wiinter wrote:

Hey, modding as requested

[p3n's faule Huette]
finish the 3rd kiai at the same time it does on the other diffs? (here it ends at 02:58:737, on the others at 03:06:498) fixed
consider increasing a bit the overall difficulty, it's too low for the diff's level OD+1 should be enough...this is supposed to be "hard" not "insane"
01:34:824 (6) - new combo here suits better than at 01:35:309 (1), so consider changing it done, seems reasonable
02:02:714 (6,7,8,9) - place it at the same place of 02:00:532 (1)? looks better imo it is stacked properly in play mode...the difference in the editor is just to avoid the stacking bug orz
03:03:830 (1) - remove new combo? seems unecessary to me sure
Thanks Starry and Wiinter!
Download: Peter Fox - Haus am See (Magicphoenix) [p3n's faule Huette].osu
haha5957
[General]
Taiko's Audio lead in is 3, and others is 2... just have it have 2

[Orangenwhateverlol]

02:21:388 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/217358 this?
02:49:521 (2) - just change the red point to normal point (right-click the red point)
I know why you did this but I don't think it looks good.. curve should cover next (1) nicely
or try this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/217362 if you really want symetrical shape (next : x0.88 doesnt really matter)
03:00:677 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/217364 this?

[p3n's]
00:07:031 - (timing section) remove it, since not needed
00:08:001 - (timing section) remove it, since not needed
00:59:416 (7,9) - offscreen, not a good idea
01:48:648 (8) - NC
02:00:532 (1,2,3,4,5) - used grid snap and grid level 3 or 4 and redo this work - doesnt look nice here

[Haus am see]
this map's circle are too cornered? I mean... like 02:28:664 (3,4,5,6) - 02:34:485 (1,2,3,4,1) -
Idk if it really matters but just pointing out.. I mean.. It feels uncomfortable for me O.O

00:43:409 (3,4,5) - umm, not good
01:31:671 (7,2,3) - 7,2,3 forms a strange shape... maybe move 3 a bit?
p3n

haha5957 wrote:

[p3n's]
00:07:031 - (timing section) remove it, since not needed
00:08:001 - (timing section) remove it, since not needed true...not used anymore
00:59:416 (7,9) - offscreen, not a good idea not exactly "off screen" but moved a bit closer to prevent them from touching the health bar
01:48:648 (8) - NC hmmkay
02:00:532 (1,2,3,4,5) - used grid snap and grid level 3 or 4 and redo this work - doesnt look nice here moved sliders a bit but the following stack is placed properly to prevent stacking bug during play-mode
Thanks o/

Download: Peter Fox - Haus am See (Magicphoenix) [p3n's faule Huette].osu
Topic Starter
Magicphoenix

haha5957 wrote:

[General]
Taiko's Audio lead in is 3, and others is 2... just have it have 2

[Orangenwhateverlol]

02:21:388 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/217358 this? ok
02:49:521 (2) - just change the red point to normal point (right-click the red point) ok
I know why you did this but I don't think it looks good.. curve should cover next (1) nicely
or try this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/217362 if you really want symetrical shape (next : x0.88 doesnt really matter)
03:00:677 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/217364 this? no

[Haus am see]
this map's circle are too cornered? I mean... like 02:28:664 (3,4,5,6) - 02:34:485 (1,2,3,4,1) -
Idk if it really matters but just pointing out.. I mean.. It feels uncomfortable for me O.O Hmm, not for me :p

00:43:409 (3,4,5) - umm, not good Why not? looks fine to me =)
01:31:671 (7,2,3) - 7,2,3 forms a strange shape... maybe move 3 a bit? Nope


Thank you very much haha5957 =)
Takos
Hi~ >w</
All Suggestions

Overall
  • Bitrate is 256kbps. Convert this to 128~192kbps
    Why do 2 diffs have same slider velocity o.O
Orangenbaumblatter
  • Circle Size +1?
p3n's faule Huette
  • 01:04:266 (7) - Add New Combo
    01:08:511 (2) - This note touches HP Bar
    01:12:027 (6) - Add New Combo
    02:34:485 (1) - Remove New Combo
Haus am See
  • 00:02:181 (5) - nazi, this slider is touching (3), maybe move it upwards a few grids?
    00:30:313 (1,2,3,4) - I think using a jump here suits more than using a jump for 00:29:586 (1,2,3) -
    00:43:409 (3,4) - This doesn't look pretty to me, maybe use the symetrical shape of (4) for (3)?
    01:32:156 (1) - This note goes outside the screen
    01:38:947 (6,7) - The repeat sign is kind of difficult to read
    02:15:568 (1) - Remove New Combo
    02:15:810 (2) - Add New Combo
    03:17:411 (7) - This note feels out of place to me, maybe delete this note?
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Magicphoenix

Takos wrote:

Hi~ >w</
All Suggestions

Overall
  • Bitrate is 256kbps. Convert this to 128~192kbps k = =..
    Why do 2 diffs have same slider velocity o.O is it a problem? :P
Orangenbaumblatter
  • Circle Size +1?
Haus am See
  • 00:02:181 (5) - nazi, this slider is touching (3), maybe move it upwards a few grids? ok
    00:30:313 (1,2,3,4) - I think using a jump here suits more than using a jump for 00:29:586 (1,2,3) - nop
    00:43:409 (3,4) - This doesn't look pretty to me, maybe use the symetrical shape of (4) for (3)? hm i like it this way
    01:32:156 (1) - This note goes outside the screen lol xD fuixed
    01:38:947 (6,7) - The repeat sign is kind of difficult to read i don't think it is...i will change it if another modded points it out
    02:15:568 (1) - Remove New Combo
    02:15:810 (2) - Add New Combo NC follows vocal so no sorry ><
    03:17:411 (7) - This note feels out of place to me, maybe delete this note? it follows the last syllable :P
Good luck~
Thank you very much for mod Takos =w=~
p3n

Takos wrote:

p3n's faule Huette
  • 01:04:266 (7) - Add New Combo
    01:08:511 (2) - This note touches HP Bar moved a bit
    01:12:027 (6) - Add New Combo
    02:34:485 (1) - Remove New Combo
    rearranged some combos after your suggestions
thanks!

Download: Peter Fox - Haus am See (Magicphoenix) [p3n's faule Huette].osu
Pokie
Guten Tag~Sorry for delay -w-


General
  • - Custom clap is cute XD
    - 03:27:840 - Didn't BPM changed at this point :\?
    - Can't mod taiko -w-


Orangeblablambalala
  • - rofl XD
01:32:399 (2) - Nice!
02:07:807 (1) - Cancel new combo? or use new combo on 01:51:801 (2) - too
03:22:019 (1) - Tiny spacing error



p3n's
  • - Hitsound's usage was a good impression, but needs improve
00:17:217 (3) - Spacing? Quite confusing on this part
00:19:400 (4) - Remove whistle
00:21:582 (7) - umm~ Hitsounds are too strong :\ At least remove clap, it doesn't fit music
00:22:553 (4) - ^
00:23:765 (2) - Why finish too?
00:24:493 (4,5) - No hitsounds -w-?
00:36:134 (2) - Clap-none
00:38:559 (8) - Whistle-none-whislte
00:45:350 (2) - Clap /Actually there are too much hitsound suggestions, but I can't write all of them. Since it's not my map though, you have your own method to use hitsounds. So fix the follwing parts of hitsounding on your diff if you want.
00:52:140 (7) - New combo, due to this pattern.
01:10:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - No hitsounds again -w-?
01:45:010 (1) - Why new combo?
01:45:980 (2) - Spacing
01:46:950 (1,2,3) - er...It doesn't work too much to under 4 notes :( That's the diff|erence. But there aren't a 4 beats rhythm, so my suggestion is place them with same spacing, like this: http://puu.sh/dsuN
02:02:714 (6,7,8,9) - Spacing, at least stack them under where you placed 02:00:774 (2)



Hold-some-thing
  • - Sorry for a wrong diff name^ XD
00:08:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - -w-? eh, why claps on 1 and 3 beats?!
00:30:313 (1) - This one is obviously following the pattern on this combo 00:29:586 (1,2,3), so new combo here is quite weird. Try to do what you did on 02:03:442 (1,2,3,4) :D
00:44:380 (5) - +1/4 beats to slider
00:45:835 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm should be like this: http://puu.sh/dsxS
00:49:473 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda confused, hope new combo on (3) would help -w-
01:13:482 (1) - hmmm~ XD
02:50:976 (1) - clap-clap?


Interesting song -w-/
hu, hu, hu. yea-aaay
-kevincela-
Hi~

[Orangenbaumblaetter]


  1. 00:10:911 (3) - (nazi) 2 grids right?
  2. 00:20:127 - This part looks a bit empty... Maybe you should add a note on there.
  3. 01:41:130 (1) - I suggest you to put this some grids higher,jest because it could be more readable (just a suggestion,though)
  4. 02:07:807 (1) - Remove new combo?
  5. 03:22:019 (1) - Spacing

[p3n's faule Huette]


  1. 00:27:767 (2) - I think this note is unnecessary,since it doesen't follow anything. You should delete it.
  2. 01:45:010 (1) - Remove the new combo here?
  3. 02:02:714 (6,7,8,9) - Put them 1 grid left and up
  4. 03:20:564 (7) - Maybe put this note where the slider 03:19:594 (4) - has ended?

[Haus am See]


  1. 01:30:216 (4) - New combo? (just to follow the new combos of the previous pattern)

Pretty good map and song,good luck ^^
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