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Ok, here we go. With an initial offset of 2,506 and using BPM's of 120 and 60, go around and replace and reposition all of the timing sections in the map since the BPM change throws them off. It's just simpler to go around and replace them instead of adjusting each individual offset back on track.
Normal
There's a lot of inconsistent spacing in here. A lot of it isn't really big and you probably did it for a pattern or something, but I'm just pointing it out.
00:57:94 (3,1) - Relatively big jump for this difficulty.
01:44:89 (1,2,1,2,1) - This might be a little too spread out.
01:48:39 (1,1) - Kinda close.
01:49:88 (1,2) - These are a little close, too.
02:09:49 (1,1) - Definitely too close.
02:12:48 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing got kinda wide, then back to normal after this point. Kind of awkward to have to change your mouse movement speed for such a short period on Normal.
02:14:98 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Continuation of that spacing.
02:46:95 (1,1) - Big, disorienting jump.
03:02:93 (5,1) - Another jump.
04:06:96 (1,2) - This one's a little too far for me since it's only spaced like this right here, followed by your standard spacing again.
04:26:94 (1) - Might as well make this one a little closer.
Hard
00:35:96 (1) - I think this is a little too close to the slider.
00:47:20 (6,7) - Big jump.
00:49:69 (6,7) - And again.
01:04:44 (1,2,3) - This little stunt, followed by a slow slider, is sure to throw many people off. Kind of cheap if you ask me. Not to mention the alternating slider speed. So disorienting.
02:51:99 (1,2,3,4) - These things are spaced way too far out for that speed.
03:48:71 (1,2,3) - This spacing is pushing it for me.
03:55:83 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Don't be an FFF.
04:34:91 (1) - I don't know if a 26 second spinner is um...good.
Edit: By the way, this looks pretty fun aside from the wonky spacing.
Normal
There's a lot of inconsistent spacing in here. A lot of it isn't really big and you probably did it for a pattern or something, but I'm just pointing it out.
00:57:94 (3,1) - Relatively big jump for this difficulty.
01:44:89 (1,2,1,2,1) - This might be a little too spread out.
01:48:39 (1,1) - Kinda close.
01:49:88 (1,2) - These are a little close, too.
02:09:49 (1,1) - Definitely too close.
02:12:48 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing got kinda wide, then back to normal after this point. Kind of awkward to have to change your mouse movement speed for such a short period on Normal.
02:14:98 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Continuation of that spacing.
02:46:95 (1,1) - Big, disorienting jump.
03:02:93 (5,1) - Another jump.
04:06:96 (1,2) - This one's a little too far for me since it's only spaced like this right here, followed by your standard spacing again.
04:26:94 (1) - Might as well make this one a little closer.
Hard
00:35:96 (1) - I think this is a little too close to the slider.
00:47:20 (6,7) - Big jump.
00:49:69 (6,7) - And again.
01:04:44 (1,2,3) - This little stunt, followed by a slow slider, is sure to throw many people off. Kind of cheap if you ask me. Not to mention the alternating slider speed. So disorienting.
02:51:99 (1,2,3,4) - These things are spaced way too far out for that speed.
03:48:71 (1,2,3) - This spacing is pushing it for me.
03:55:83 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Don't be an FFF.
04:34:91 (1) - I don't know if a 26 second spinner is um...good.
Edit: By the way, this looks pretty fun aside from the wonky spacing.
Topic Starter
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Normal
Go around and resync everything. A lot of it got pulled back a 1/4 from the BPM change.
Hard
04:17:00 (1,1,1,1) - Resnap
Go around and resync everything. A lot of it got pulled back a 1/4 from the BPM change.
Hard
04:17:00 (1,1,1,1) - Resnap
Topic Starter
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Normal
01:12:00 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Looks like this stuff got shifted 1/4 beat in the wrong direction. Move it over 1/2 beat to the right.
Everything else looks pretty good. I just hope the next mod doesn't get too anal about the stuff I left alone.
01:12:00 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Looks like this stuff got shifted 1/4 beat in the wrong direction. Move it over 1/2 beat to the right.
Everything else looks pretty good. I just hope the next mod doesn't get too anal about the stuff I left alone.
Topic Starter
Done.Seibei4211 wrote:
Normal
01:12:00 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Looks like this stuff got shifted 1/4 beat in the wrong direction. Move it over 1/2 beat to the right.
Everything else looks pretty good. I just hope the next mod doesn't get too anal about the stuff I left alone.
Normal
00:09:75 (1,1) - Move this one so it's the same distance as that combo, just so it's a smoother transition from the different spacings.
01:02:50 (3,1) - I still think that's a big jump, and since it's the only jump like that in the map, it might as well be shortened. Not to mention it's Normal.
Hard
02:24:50 (1) - This is the only slider shorter than the other similar sliders using that beat pattern, so make it match by adding 1/4 beat to it.
02:34:25 (3) - New combo because the slider speed shouldn't change in mid-combo. That's just confusing. At least with a new combo, anything can happen.
02:41:88 (2) - New combo.
I'm surprised the max score on Hard isn't over 10 million. So I guess that's not an issue at all. By the way, there's a big lack of hit sounds in this map. I strongly suggest putting more in. Starred.
00:09:75 (1,1) - Move this one so it's the same distance as that combo, just so it's a smoother transition from the different spacings.
01:02:50 (3,1) - I still think that's a big jump, and since it's the only jump like that in the map, it might as well be shortened. Not to mention it's Normal.
Hard
02:24:50 (1) - This is the only slider shorter than the other similar sliders using that beat pattern, so make it match by adding 1/4 beat to it.
02:34:25 (3) - New combo because the slider speed shouldn't change in mid-combo. That's just confusing. At least with a new combo, anything can happen.
02:41:88 (2) - New combo.
I'm surprised the max score on Hard isn't over 10 million. So I guess that's not an issue at all. By the way, there's a big lack of hit sounds in this map. I strongly suggest putting more in. Starred.
Topic Starter
Fixed all.Seibei4211 wrote:
Normal
00:09:75 (1,1) - Move this one so it's the same distance as that combo, just so it's a smoother transition from the different spacings.
01:02:50 (3,1) - I still think that's a big jump, and since it's the only jump like that in the map, it might as well be shortened. Not to mention it's Normal.
Hard
02:24:50 (1) - This is the only slider shorter than the other similar sliders using that beat pattern, so make it match by adding 1/4 beat to it.
02:34:25 (3) - New combo because the slider speed shouldn't change in mid-combo. That's just confusing. At least with a new combo, anything can happen.
02:41:88 (2) - New combo.
I'm surprised the max score on Hard isn't over 10 million. So I guess that's not an issue at all. By the way, there's a big lack of hit sounds in this map. I strongly suggest putting more in. Starred.
Added more sounds.
Hit Sound Mod
Normal
00:05:25 (1,2,3,4,1) - A little too much whistle.
00:22:50 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - No, no, no.
00:46:00 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Did you really think that sounded good when you put those whistles there like that?
01:04:50 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Aaall whistles? Make this not so. Make sure none of the sliders are.
02:22:00 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1) - Remove whistles from these sliders, man. Piercing my ears.
02:39:50 (1) - This one, too.
03:59:75 (1,2,3,4,5) - Blah.
04:09:50 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - For these and any other quadruplets like them, make the clap noises every other note i.e. 1,3.
Hard
00:22:50 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Nooo.
00:46:00 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Oh dear, my ears.
01:05:00 (1,2,1) - Whistles on these long sliders and any other long slider is just painful.
01:45:00 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Why?
01:47:63 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:52:00 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think these are appropriate.
02:53:25 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:07:00 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Claps really overpower this song in general. Especially these.
Normal Mod
Hard
01:12:50 (1) - This is suddenly ending on an 8th.
02:09:00 (1,1) - I don't approve. This was changed.
04:14:50 (1) - I don't really like how this sounds.
Normal
00:05:25 (1,2,3,4,1) - A little too much whistle.
00:22:50 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - No, no, no.
00:46:00 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Did you really think that sounded good when you put those whistles there like that?
01:04:50 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Aaall whistles? Make this not so. Make sure none of the sliders are.
02:22:00 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1) - Remove whistles from these sliders, man. Piercing my ears.
02:39:50 (1) - This one, too.
03:59:75 (1,2,3,4,5) - Blah.
04:09:50 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - For these and any other quadruplets like them, make the clap noises every other note i.e. 1,3.
Hard
00:22:50 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Nooo.
00:46:00 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Oh dear, my ears.
01:05:00 (1,2,1) - Whistles on these long sliders and any other long slider is just painful.
01:45:00 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Why?
01:47:63 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:52:00 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think these are appropriate.
02:53:25 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:07:00 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Claps really overpower this song in general. Especially these.
Normal Mod
Hard
01:12:50 (1) - This is suddenly ending on an 8th.
02:09:00 (1,1) - I don't approve. This was changed.
04:14:50 (1) - I don't really like how this sounds.
Topic Starter
Yeah. I was a bit over-zealous with the sounds. The only comment I have isSeibei4211 wrote:
Hit Sound Mod
Normal
00:05:25 (1,2,3,4,1) - A little too much whistle.
00:22:50 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - No, no, no.
00:46:00 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Did you really think that sounded good when you put those whistles there like that?
01:04:50 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Aaall whistles? Make this not so. Make sure none of the sliders are.
02:22:00 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1) - Remove whistles from these sliders, man. Piercing my ears.
02:39:50 (1) - This one, too.
03:59:75 (1,2,3,4,5) - Blah.
04:09:50 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - For these and any other quadruplets like them, make the clap noises every other note i.e. 1,3.
Hard
00:22:50 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Nooo.
00:46:00 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Oh dear, my ears.
01:05:00 (1,2,1) - Whistles on these long sliders and any other long slider is just painful.
01:45:00 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Why?
01:47:63 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:52:00 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think these are appropriate.
02:53:25 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:07:00 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Claps really overpower this song in general. Especially these.
Normal Mod
Hard
01:12:50 (1) - This is suddenly ending on an 8th.
02:09:00 (1,1) - I don't approve. This was changed.
04:14:50 (1) - I don't really like how this sounds.
02:09:00 (1,1) - I don't approve. This was changed.
was an accident. I hate how sometimes I would click on a vector and it will fly off to the side for some reason. That's what happened here, though I didn't notice it at first.
00:36:00 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1, etc...) - Just a hit sound suggestion, but I think this section and others like it sound good with hit sounds placed on the synth hits with the pattern like "Synth, 1 1/2 beat, synth, 1 1/2 beat, synth, 1 beat, synth" That's just what I'd do. It's not an unrankable offense.
Looks close to a bubble. I'm getting so sick of modding this bigass song, man. Get it ranked already!
Looks close to a bubble. I'm getting so sick of modding this bigass song, man. Get it ranked already!
Topic Starter
Added the suggested sound additions.Seibei4211 wrote:
00:36:00 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1, etc...) - Just a hit sound suggestion, but I think this section and others like it sound good with hit sounds placed on the synth hits with the pattern like "Synth, 1 1/2 beat, synth, 1 1/2 beat, synth, 1 beat, synth" That's just what I'd do. It's not an unrankable offense.
Looks close to a bubble. I'm getting so sick of modding this bigass song, man. Get it ranked already!
I also want this ranked too! I've been trying to ask people.
AUGH! You forgot to put hit sounds on 00:36:00 (1) - this section in Normal. WHYYYY?! Change it and I'll bubble...but I wanted to bubble it nooooow! *crycry*
Topic Starter
Oops. My bad. I've added them in now.Seibei4211 wrote:
AUGH! You forgot to put hit sounds on 00:36:00 (1) - this section in Normal. WHYYYY?! Change it and I'll bubble...but I wanted to bubble it nooooow! *crycry*
Phew. Ok. I guess I can bubble this now. Finally. Now it's someone else's problem unless/until someone pops this bubble.
The spacing in Hard changes values, but it's consistent in each part of the beatmap, so I guess that's ok. The slider velocity change is also not so shocking as to completely throw people off. Some unusual traits, but remains in the realm of rankable, I believe, so...ranked.
Topic Starter
Yes! Thank you so much, Seibei, for helping me so much on the map. Thanks Sinistro for ranking it.
Uhm.. places like this in the map is really annoying.
01:10:922 - 01:11:256. it's ok.. but then after it, with the same spacing, you have to click slower.
This doesn't feel really right to be ranked
01:19:505 - 01:19:765, 1,2,3 It goes slow, ok that's good but then, with the same spacing...
01:21:005 - 01:21:255, 5,6,7 It goes faster.
This is just pure random, and I don't get why this is ranked
02:26:256 - 02:26:756 wrong spacing, though that is ok.
02:39:006 - 02:39:380 again wrong spacing, now it's again slower..
02:52:006 - 02:52:756 wrong spacing...
02:53:256 -02:54:006 ...
why rank this if the maker can also just press ALT when puttin' down a note?
Or if you do wrong spacing, make it not pure random fast clicking slow clicking.
This feels like a map, mapped before 2007..
03:02:006 - 03:03:006 ...
Ok I stop... T_T
But I really don't get why this is getting ranked IMHO..
01:10:922 - 01:11:256. it's ok.. but then after it, with the same spacing, you have to click slower.
This doesn't feel really right to be ranked
01:19:505 - 01:19:765, 1,2,3 It goes slow, ok that's good but then, with the same spacing...
01:21:005 - 01:21:255, 5,6,7 It goes faster.
This is just pure random, and I don't get why this is ranked
02:26:256 - 02:26:756 wrong spacing, though that is ok.
02:39:006 - 02:39:380 again wrong spacing, now it's again slower..
02:52:006 - 02:52:756 wrong spacing...
02:53:256 -02:54:006 ...
why rank this if the maker can also just press ALT when puttin' down a note?
Or if you do wrong spacing, make it not pure random fast clicking slow clicking.
This feels like a map, mapped before 2007..
03:02:006 - 03:03:006 ...
Ok I stop... T_T
But I really don't get why this is getting ranked IMHO..
Unranked because I don't like hard.
here's a few points to start - i can't be bothered fully modding this because there's too much i dont agree with
* turn stacking back on
* spinner at end is too long
* 03:03:00 (9) - offscreen slider
* 03:14:00 (1,2) - ...
too much abuse of bpm changes
impossible to read the song unless you know it
and its not really a song you can learn
here's a few points to start - i can't be bothered fully modding this because there's too much i dont agree with
* turn stacking back on
* spinner at end is too long
* 03:03:00 (9) - offscreen slider
* 03:14:00 (1,2) - ...
too much abuse of bpm changes
impossible to read the song unless you know it
and its not really a song you can learn