1. Easy (1,02 stars, 112 notes)
2. Hard (4,47 stars, 304 notes)
3. Normal (3,12 stars, 174 notes)

Aleks719 wrote:

General
bliiii... mp3 bitrate is 224kpbs! changed
i got offset ~700 (-26ms). Imo, better. 700 is too early :/

Hard
HP +1? Seems fine
00:10:926 (1) - add sliderbody whistle? sounds similar, just for fun :> I hate this soud so much, it follows me in my nightmares you know ;~; so no sorry
00:13:926 (1) - ^
00:15:726 (1) - ^
00:17:826 (2) - ^
etc etc etc.d
01:33:726 (5,6) - this stack, fine for me, but IceBeam always says unstack it, cuz of SL 0 etc you know Ah yes, but I'm rebellious hehe, if someone else has problems with it I will change.
01:36:126 (4,5,6) - *lol, nazi* make in line lol, I suck at making lines xD, but fixed I guess.
01:44:826 (3) - imo, should be 1/4 later, on 01:44:976 oh you're right
01:55:326 (1,2) - this stack again :3
02:09:126 (6,7,8,9) - for me, better this : I see what you want to do, but sorry I don't like :/

Normal
If it will be easiest diff, then fine. If not - HP+1 too? It will be the easiest
Similar suggestion about sliderbody whistles o/ ;~;
00:18:850 (1) - If it will be not easiest diff, then fine. If not , imo - too short .-. Auto reach 4000 bonus, so I guess it's enough
01:44:500 (1,2) - huh, spacing?

BLI! Star!

wcx19911123 wrote:

OMG , what's this

what is bli?

This bli was sublitted using bli-game sublission on samebli 17 blicembre 2011 bli 15:21:19

Artist: Yousei Teikoku
Title: Gothic Lolita Doctrine
Tags: Fairy Yui Itsuki
BPM: BLI
Filesize: 4712kb
Play Time: 0B:LI
Difficulties Available:

1. Bli (6,00 bli, 42 bli)

Downblioad: Yousei Teikoku - Gothic Lolita Doctrine
Inforblition: Scores/Beatmap Listing

wcx19911123 wrote:

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OMG , what's this

what is bli?

This bli was sublitted using bli-game sublission on samebli 17 blicembre 2011 bli 15:21:19

Artist: Yousei Teikoku
Title: Gothic Lolita Doctrine
Tags: Fairy Yui Itsuki
BPM: BLI
Filesize: 4712kb
Play Time: 0B:LI
Difficulties Available:

1. Bli (6,00 bli, 42 bli)

Downblioad: Yousei Teikoku - Gothic Lolita Doctrine
Inforblition: Scores/Beatmap Listing

[General]
offset=734(+8) is better to me ok
I suggest you to make an Easy diff for better diff spread , Normal now is kinda too hard to play for newbies , and it is 3.05 stars now.. ok
I think you should enable letterbox during breaks , this map has no sb or video.. No letterbox don't fit the BG here :/

[Normal]
00:18:876 (1,1) - the spinner is kinda short imo , and the slider is far from the slider , it makes newbies hard to play with this..
00:54:726 (4) - this slider's shape is kinda ugly imo.. make it looks like this http://puu.sh/c2f7
02:24:726 - move timing section to here and turn volume up a bit , I feel the finish is too quiet..
All fixed ~

[Hard]
AR+1 plz.. this AR is too low and it makes reading the pattern become very hard imo.. ok
00:00:726 (1,2) - I suggest make this into a slider , there are no beats before this , so it is hard to know when to click the second note.. ok
00:08:526 (1) - make here 3 repeat sldiers and a circle ? I think it is better to follow the sond , now it just 1 repeat slider , feel kinda boring.. I don't really like thius kind of pattern :/
01:08:526 (1,2,3) - oh , this pattern make it hard to read the rhyme imo , it looks like the spacing between 1,2 and 2,3 is the same , just looks like.. so it is kinda confusing here.. changed the last slider into 2 circles :3
01:22:326 (1,2) - this anti jump is very confusing.. deal to 01:22:026 (6,1) - 6 stack on slider end and then 1 move out , so it is easy to read as 2 is on 01:22:626. I strongly suggest you change this , stack them or move them far away is much better , anyway I don't think here need anti-jumps , don't fit the song imo Ok ;~;
02:22:026 (1,2,3) - ah , this is not on a line :p hehe, fixed
02:24:726 - same as Normal of course

that's all , I hope Easy diff will coming soon :3
good luck

1. A Kiai time here 01:17:534 and finish 01:36:726 feels really good,if only you want

Thite wrote:

hi~
all my suggestion

Easy
00:36:734 (1) - add finish this spinner
00:55:934 (3) - add finish this slider end
02:19:934 (1) - add whistle?
All done

Normal
00:28:934 (1) - remove new combo Nope ~ A new phrases start on this slider, so it needs a new combo.
00:57:734 (1) - remove new combo and add finish this slider end Oh yes o.o
01:03:134 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/chTE try to put like this? ok
01:20:534 (2,3) - spacing Spacing is fine here ?
02:17:234 (1) - add whistle this slider start? ok
02:22:034 (1) - ^ ^

Hard
HP Drain and OD +1? I want them like this, this song is slow so I don't want to use high difficulty settings.
00:08:534 (1) - add finish this slider end? It already have a finish
01:34:034 (6) - ^ ^
01:53:534 (1) - 1grid up? ok
01:56:534 (4) - new combo ok
02:17:234 (1) - add whistle? ok
02:22:034 (1) - ^ ok

really good map~

Aleks719 wrote:

;)

Hard
01:48:734 (1,2) - imo Sorry but It sounds kinda weird imo :/

Normal
00:17:534 (2,1) - imo, pattern in Hard in this time fits much better (note+slider with reverse+note). Suggest to copy or use similar objects. I changed the slider but I want to keep this spinner (it follows the "shhhh" sound)
00:43:934 (3) - replace nc here from next slider? ok
01:03:734 (3) - missed clap at the start~ fixed ~
02:12:734 (1) - remove nc ok

Easy
hum, hum, diff starts from 00:07:934 (spinner), you don't need in audio lead-in here. set it 0. of course ~
00:36:734 (1) - spinner. hum. just note instead of spinner in other diffs. I prefer spinner in every diff :3 So, add it to Normal and Hard as here? ok
02:00:734 (7) - long combo. 01:58:934 (4) - add nc here? ok