1. Insane (4.96 stars, 902 notes)

1. Song folder - mp3 fileが256kbpsなので192kbpsにしましょう。
2. Song folder - osb file 2つ削除? http://puu.sh/baqS 1つおもしろい名前付いてますが、SB入れる予定でしょうか？

1. Difficulty OD 9　!?
2. 00:07:279 (4) - add NC and 00:07:441 - remove NC ( or 00:07:441 (1) - remove NC and 00:07:603 - add NC )
3. 00:39:062 (2) - one grid up. x96,y304
4. 00:50:414 (5) - add NC
5. 01:00:792 (4) - ^
6. 01:07:279 (2) - ^ ( 02:09:549 (1) - と同じに)
7. 01:24:792 (3) - one grid right ? x184,y156 (わざと？)
8. 02:03:062 (4) - add NC
9. 02:40:846 (2) - リピートスライダーを使った方が良いように思いました。
10. 02:45:387 (4) - circle 削除
11. 02:50:576 (2) - one grid right. ? x328,y188 (わざと？)
12. 02:59:495 (3) - HPバーに結構被るので下げたほうがいいかも？
13. 03:17:171 (2) - 03:16:360 (3) - のヒットバーストと被るのでデフォルトの人には難しいかも?
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 03:24:954 (2,3,4) - 03:26:414 (2)と重なるように？ ↓
    
    SPOILER

    300,188,204792,5,8
    256,100,204954,1,0
    256,100,205035,1,0
    256,100,205116,2,0,B|176:100,1,80
    76,264,205441,1,8

15. 03:30:954 (7) - one grid down ? x324,y168
16. 04:01:116 (1) - HPバーに結構被るので下げたほうがいいかも？
17. 04:06:954 - ここのKIAI TIMEは無い方が良いと思いました。

1. The bitrate for ggggggggg.mp3 is 256 kb/s, this is not allowed and unrabkable, please change to 192 kb/s.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. Probably set the OD to 8? OD9 is mad with AR9!
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:50:576 (1) - I would prefer a new combo here because I can see a big jump is starting here, so you can add a new combo here as a reminder!Sure, it fits the music.
   2. 01:10:198 (2) - (design)yeah, you can do this slider much better~May be make a symmetry of this slider like
      this?
      

      119,369,70198,2,0,B|174:358|202:293|171:233,1,160,0|8

   3. 01:14:738 (1,2,3,4) - Let see about this jump, the jump between 4 slider are uneven, 01:15:225 (2,3) - is more close than (1.2) and (3.4)- .It that make it on purpose?If not, I recommend to fix this and it will make more fun during gameplay (and beautiful <3).
   4. 01:21:873 (1) - Add a new combo here?The reason is same as 00:50:576.
   5. 01:34:198 (5,6) - I have a combo idea here, If you want to follow the music, you can add it on (6)- , if you want to follow your jump pattern, you can add it on (5)-
   6. 02:02:738 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can see you have used this pattern in this map more than 1 time,would you change to another pattern if possible? Then player can get more "feeling" on this map.
   7. 02:44:738 (x) - I would add a note here if I were you because you place the note in this part base on instrument,so listen carefully, then you can here some sound here :> oh, you can place this note on (1)-
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:41:981 (3) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider?That seems fit the music much better.

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi!Seems this need a MAT so I'm here.


[General]

1. The bitrate for ggggggggg.mp3 is 256 kb/s, this is not allowed and unrabkable, please change to 192 kb/s. fixed!

[Insane]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. Probably set the OD to 8? OD9 is mad with AR9! OD9 is best for this map imo. so ill keep it! sorry
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:50:576 (1) - I would prefer a new combo here because I can see a big jump is starting here, so you can add a new combo here as a reminder!Sure, it fits the music. fixed!
   2. 01:10:198 (2) - (design)yeah, you can do this slider much better~May be make a symmetry of this slider like
      this? fixed! thanks for the code
      

      119,369,70198,2,0,B|174:358|202:293|171:233,1,160,0|8

   3. 01:14:738 (1,2,3,4) - Let see about this jump, the jump between 4 slider are uneven, 01:15:225 (2,3) - is more close than (1.2) and (3.4)- .It that make it on purpose?If not, I recommend to fix this and it will make more fun during gameplay (and beaytiful <3). fixed!
   4. 01:21:873 (1) - Add a new combo here?The reason is same as 00:50:576. added new combo to 01:21:387
   5. 01:34:198 (5,6) - I have a combo idea here, If you want to follow the music, you can add it on (6)- , if you want to follow your jump pattern, you can add it on (5)- I did change pattern here, added 2notes to 01:34:198 (5,6) and new combo next slider. now this part is follow the music and jump!
   6. 02:02:738 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can see you have used this pattern in this map more than 1 time,would you change to another pattern if possible? Then player can get more "feeling" on this map. fixed!
   7. 02:44:738 (x) - I would add a note here if I were you because you place the note in this part base on instrument,so listen carefully, then you can here some sound here :> oh, you can place this note on (1)- fixed!
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:41:981 (3) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider?That seems fit the music much better. fixed!

popped for now.Please at least fix the mp3 and I'll rebubble
Leave a Star here because it is really fun to play

If I did anything wrong,please tell me~