1. Elly's Standard (4.06 stars, 256 notes)
2. Heavy (4.98 stars, 561 notes)
3. Light (2.39 stars, 248 notes)
4. Musty's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 859 notes)
5. Shiirn's Expert (5 stars, 571 notes)

1. Preview Points are inconsistent! Shiirn's difficulty has it as 13458 while the rest of the difficulties have 13272.

1. 00:18:303 (2,3) - Isn't this a bit too hard for the easiest difficulty in the mapset? 1/2s shouldn't be in easy diffs... Try deleting 00:18:489 (3) and then moving 00:18:862 (1) 1/2 forward.
2. 00:23:893 (3,4) - Same here, and also considering the note is stacked under the other slider, it should be even harder for newbies.. Maybe do something like this? Feels better for me.
3. 01:17:371 (1,2,3) - Starting the rhythm again with 1/2s isn't really recommended for the easiest difficulty - newbies may get confused by the rhythm. Try moving these 1/2 forward? It still works with the rhythm.
4. 01:32:464 (4) - Maybe add a new combo? It fits with the vocals..
5. 01:35:446 (1,2,3,4,5) - Once again, avoid using 1/2s like this on Easy difficulties. I'd do this. Also, if you do that, add a finish to (5) and maybe add a new combo to it? not sure.
6. 01:45:880 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as ^. Maybe do this
7. 02:07:309 (2,3,4,5,6) - The 1/2s are pretty hard to follow. Maybe do this?
8. 02:09:731 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here. Maybe do this?
9. 02:12:713 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Exactly. do this?
10. 02:15:694 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^. Maybe do this? It also looks better.
11. 02:29:110 (1,1) - This note is way too close after the spinner for an easy difficulty. Maybe remove 02:30:973 (1)?
12. 02:33:582 (6,1) - I think you should remove (6) and move (1) to where (6) was. It fits the music. But I'm not sure about the blank space after that, I guess it's okay.
13. 02:54:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Considering these are copypastes of what I stated earlier, please consider changing them too.
14. 03:06:377 (1) - Why does this spinner end so late? Maybe finish it a bit earlier so the newbies don't have to spin so much?

Elly-chan wrote:

In the way Kawayi Put It I'd Say No, But I Don't Know Why I Put A New Combo There In The First Place. So. Remove The New Combo For Me, Please? ;3 00:30:228

1. The soft-finish sound is very hard to hear. Considering it is used the most in the map, it would probably be a good idea to make it more noticeable.

1. 00:40:290 (1) - Fix spacing lololo... no, you really don't have to, it's pretty nazi.
2. 01:05:632 (1) - This spacing however isn't. This slider is creating a very large jump (1.5x on an easy). You should remove this jump
3. 01:17:371 (1) - This starting on the red tick is awkward and hard to read.
4. 01:53:706 - Add a circle, otherwise the transition from white to red is jarring.
5. 01:58:178 (1) - This comes much too soon after the spinner. This is the easiest diff, so it needs to be easy.
6. 02:06:750 (1,2) - Consider making these two just a slider, the white to red is a little confusing otherwise.
7. 02:30:973 (1) - This comes much too soon after the spinner.
8. 02:47:371 (1) - This slider is creating a very large jump (1.5x on an easy). You should remove this jump

1. 00:50:911 (4,5,1) - Fix the spacing on these please, the space between 5 and 1 is too small.
2. 01:08:800 (4,5,1) - Fix the spacing on these please, the space between 5 and 1 is too small.
3. 01:56:874 (5,6,1) - Fix the spacing on these please, the space between 6 and 1 is too small.
   
   Just spacing things to point out. Diff's really nice.

1. Audio Lead-in is too short! Make the Lead-in 3 seconds.
2. 00:46:253 - This pattern feels random and too hard to read for this difficulty. Make it a more consistent pattern please.
3. 02:28:178 - This pattern feels random and too hard to read for this difficulty. Make it a more consistent pattern please.
   
   It's rather boring at times, the finishes could be replaced with something more interesting.

1. 01:25:197 - Put a break here? The other diffs have a break, and this difficulty needs one.
2. 02:27:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Reduce the spacing of this stream. Right now it's significantly harder than Shiirn's difficulty.
   
   This diff's really nice.

1. Audio Lead-in 0.5 seconds please!
2. 00:41:595 - Add a circle on the 8 please, makes it play better
3. 02:11:036 - Add a circle on the 8 please, makes it play better
4. 02:17:185 (1) - Shorten this a repeat so it's not a 1/8 stream.
5. 02:29:110 (1) - Shorten this a repeat so it's not a 1/8 stream.
   
   This doesn't feel like a shiirn diff, lol

Charles445 wrote:

Folder checks out.

General

1. The soft-finish sound is very hard to hear. Considering it is used the most in the map, it would probably be a good idea to make it more noticeable.

nah

Light

1. 00:40:290 (1) - Fix spacing lololo... no, you really don't have to, it's pretty nazi.nah
2. 01:05:632 (1) - This spacing however isn't. This slider is creating a very large jump (1.5x on an easy). You should remove this jump ok
3. 01:17:371 (1) - This starting on the red tick is awkward and hard to read. nah
4. 01:53:706 - Add a circle, otherwise the transition from white to red is jarring. okay
5. 01:58:178 (1) - This comes much too soon after the spinner. This is the easiest diff, so it needs to be easy. nah
6. 02:06:750 (1,2) - Consider making these two just a slider, the white to red is a little confusing otherwise. okay
7. 02:30:973 (1) - This comes much too soon after the spinner. okay
8. 02:47:371 (1) - This slider is creating a very large jump (1.5x on an easy). You should remove this jump

okay

Elly's Standard

1. 00:50:911 (4,5,1) - Fix the spacing on these please, the space between 5 and 1 is too small. Nothing wrong with a few anti jumps
2. 01:08:800 (4,5,1) - Fix the spacing on these please, the space between 5 and 1 is too small.
3. 01:56:874 (5,6,1) - Fix the spacing on these please, the space between 6 and 1 is too small.
   
   Just spacing things to point out. Diff's really nice.

Musty's Taiko Oni

1. Audio Lead-in is too short! Make the Lead-in 3 seconds.
2. 00:46:253 - This pattern feels random and too hard to read for this difficulty. Make it a more consistent pattern please.
3. 02:28:178 - This pattern feels random and too hard to read for this difficulty. Make it a more consistent pattern please.
   
   It's rather boring at times, the finishes could be replaced with something more interesting.

will leave this up to musty

Heavy

1. 01:25:197 - Put a break here? The other diffs have a break, and this difficulty needs one. nao >;I
2. 02:27:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Reduce the spacing of this stream. Right now it's significantly harder than Shiirn's difficulty. that stream is easy
   
   This diff's really nice.

Shiirn's Oni

1. Audio Lead-in 0.5 seconds please! added!
2. 00:41:595 - Add a circle on the 8 please, makes it play better Will let shiirn decide
3. 02:11:036 - Add a circle on the 8 please, makes it play better
4. 02:17:185 (1) - Shorten this a repeat so it's not a 1/8 stream.
5. 02:29:110 (1) - Shorten this a repeat so it's not a 1/8 stream.
   
   This doesn't feel like a shiirn diff, lol

Faust wrote:

Hi.

Not much to add to this. Like I wouldn't, for all ztrot maps.

This is a pretty solid mapset. You have 3 mappers who do well in Normal, Hard and Insane difficulties respectively. No real issues.

Just an unsnapped bookmark on Light got it

Elly's Normal:

Maybe +1 to HP Drain. Just a bunch of nazis. got it

- 01:24:638 (5) - Not aligned. got it

- 02:12:340 (4,1,2,3) - ^ fixed

- 02:15:694 (1,2) - ^ fixed

- 02:22:588 (2,3,4,5) - Unsure if this is intentionally titled. left the same

Heavy:

- 00:14:762 (1) - Why not have it like this:

SPOILER

Following or any similar sliders could also use this little tweak I suppose.

- 00:17:930 (1) - 3rd slider point from the start needs a 1 grid down. Just do it. If you like it, do it for any similar ones.

- 00:41:781 (2) - Hmm, rather you have this as a 1/4 stack. If you don't mind, shift this to - 00:41:688 - fixed

Strange part is that from - 00:37:309 - till - 00:47:371 - the rhythm has intensity.

While - 02:30:787 - onwards is basically just a slow ride instead of going all out. eg. - 02:52:961 - till - 02:54:452 - Just asking for jumps.
gonna stick with this as is for the most part

Shiirn:

- 02:27:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - I feel that this needs to be less compressed. I like it how it is

- 02:54:079 - Why didn't you add a note, it would correlate with the song actually. I know what you're trying to do though. I just think that having this anti-jump stack here is mean. Done

That's it.