<3 you for mapping this. Also, I don't mind that it's already been mapped, considering I did something like this (remapped Pokemon Theme so newbies stand a chance). ;P
Normal:
00:23:58 (1,1) - For these two, turn on grid snap (turn off distance snap), and move them both to the center line. They're both close to it, but it looks much neater if they line up.
00:25:26 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This one, turn on grid snap, and just snap each note to the grid, so they line up nicely.
*DO THIS ON EVERY LINE OF NOTES THAT SHOULD BE STRAIGHT*
Anyways, after doing what I just said, there may be some notes that don't line up, like 00:27:96 (1). You can decide if you want them to line up or not, but grid snapping straight lines look a lot neater. Won't take you long, too, only a few minutes.
Hard:
Same as said on Normal about the grid snapping. Make sure to turn off distance snap if you do this.
Only a neatness issue, really. Other than that, good job! I like it much better than the already mapped one (which was a first map, and not that good, though kinda fun. ;P)
EDIT: And change the artist to:
Veltpunch
That's what the artist is known as in English, and is what almost everyone else recognizes it as.
Download:
Taeyang - Wedding Dress (Kite) [mew].osu