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Laza Morgan - This Girl (Nightcore Mix)

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ShadowSoul
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 30. Januar 2012 at 21:07:06

Artist: Laza Morgan
Title: This Girl (Nightcore Mix)
Tags: Tony MoonShade
BPM: 157,52
Filesize: 8909kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,96 stars, 273 notes)
  2. MoonShade's Easy (1,78 stars, 88 notes)
  3. Tony's Normal (3,14 stars, 119 notes)
Download: Laza Morgan - This Girl (Nightcore Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Special Thanks to :
osuplayer111 for the awesome mp3 <3
MoonShade and Tony for the diffs <3

Mapset
MoonShade's Easy : Done
Tony's Normal : Done
Hard : Done
Tony
Jenny
lol
Andrea
Did some quick IRC Mod for now.

SPOILER
00:46 <osuplayer111> : you didn't even thank me on topic for mp3!
00:46 <osuplayer111> : what a bad guy
00:47 <ShadowSoul> : i'm waiting for sb before changing anything :*
00:47 <osuplayer111> : I mean first post
00:47 <osuplayer111> : ;-;
00:47 <ShadowSoul> : yaya fu xD i forgot :( sry D:
00:47 <osuplayer111> : do that bitch :(
00:47 <osuplayer111> : it takes 1 sec u.u
00:50 <ShadowSoul> : updated bitch ~
00:56 <osuplayer111> : your Hard is sexy
00:57 <ShadowSoul> : yay o:
00:57 <osuplayer111> : get this shit bubbled
00:57 <osuplayer111> : and I'll rank it
00:57 <osuplayer111> : <3
00:57 <ShadowSoul> : i'll get mods by Lissette and happy
00:57 <ShadowSoul> : xD
00:57 <ShadowSoul> : <3
00:59 <osuplayer111> : yay
00:59 <ShadowSoul> : btw
00:59 <ShadowSoul> : i need to put some finishes
00:59 <ShadowSoul> : but i suck at hitsounds
00:59 <ShadowSoul> : xD
01:00 <ShadowSoul> : tell me where <3
01:00 <ShadowSoul> : xD
01:00 <osuplayer111> : 00:36:732 (1) -
01:00 <osuplayer111> : at the begin
01:00 <osuplayer111> : 00:48:923 (1) - ^
01:01 <osuplayer111> : 01:25:494 (1) - ^
01:01 <osuplayer111> : 01:37:684 (1) - ^
01:01 <osuplayer111> : 01:49:860 (x) - add note with finish
01:02 <ShadowSoul> : not more ?^^
01:02 <osuplayer111> : nah
01:02 <osuplayer111> : doesn't need finish this song
01:02 <osuplayer111> : should I post this log? 0.0
01:02 <ShadowSoul> : your choice :3
01:03 <osuplayer111> : ok let me do that
Mismagius
IRC Mod
22:08 <Blue_Dragon> : here it shows that the folder size is 11.7MB
22:08 <Blue_Dragon> : the minimum for rank is 10MB, could you reduce the filesize a bit
22:08 <Blue_Dragon> : ? D:
22:08 <Blue_Dragon> : maximum*
22:09 <ShadowSoul> : i try ma best o:
22:09 <Blue_Dragon> : ok anyway
22:10 <Blue_Dragon> : on Easy
22:10 <Blue_Dragon> : there are lots of unsnapped objects
22:11 <ShadowSoul> : i see
22:12 <ShadowSoul> : snapped ~
22:18 <Blue_Dragon> : back
22:18 <Blue_Dragon> : anyway
22:18 <ShadowSoul> : wb
22:19 <Blue_Dragon> : I didn't see anything on Easy besides the unsnapped notes
22:19 <Blue_Dragon> : going to normal
22:19 <Blue_Dragon> : OH
22:19 <Blue_Dragon> : on Easy
22:19 <Blue_Dragon> : and also all diffs
22:20 <Blue_Dragon> : the green sections are unsnapped, please resnap manually
22:21 <Blue_Dragon> : :o
22:21 <ShadowSoul> : i do :o
22:22 <Blue_Dragon> : ok
22:23 <ShadowSoul> : ok done
22:24 <Blue_Dragon> : on Normal
22:24 <Blue_Dragon> : 01:01:113 (3) - might want to add a finish here
22:24 <Blue_Dragon> : & also a new combo at that same note
22:24 <Blue_Dragon> : since it's the downbeat
22:25 <ShadowSoul> : agreed
22:25 <Blue_Dragon> : 01:41:494 (4) - I'd say add a finish at the start of this slider, for consistency with (2) of the same combo
22:26 <ShadowSoul> : i think that should be ok ^^
22:27 <Blue_Dragon> : that's all for normal :o
22:28 <Blue_Dragon> : By the way, mind cutting the mp3 if possible?
22:28 <Blue_Dragon> : you only mapped 68% of it, it's just taking space
22:28 <ShadowSoul> : mh yea
22:28 <Blue_Dragon> : not reeeeally necessary
22:28 <Blue_Dragon> : and i know this kind of thing is boring and annoying to fix xD
22:29 <ShadowSoul> : i can't cut mp3's but i asked a osuplayer^^
22:29 <Blue_Dragon> : xD okay
22:30 <Blue_Dragon> : 00:38:256 (4) - The new combo should be here
22:30 <Blue_Dragon> : on Hard
22:30 <Blue_Dragon> : instead of here 00:38:447 (1) -
22:30 <Blue_Dragon> : but that's your choice, I see you followed the vocals
22:30 <Blue_Dragon> : so that's completely optional
22:31 <ShadowSoul> : it's oka so ;3
22:31 <ShadowSoul> : okay*
22:31 <Blue_Dragon> : 00:41:494 (1) - no need to add a new combo here xD
22:31 <ShadowSoul> : oh .. why is there a new combo ?xDD
22:31 <ShadowSoul> : ok changed xD
22:31 <Blue_Dragon> : 00:50:441 (4,1) - and here's the same thing as I mentioned earlier
22:32 <Blue_Dragon> : change only if you want
22:32 <Blue_Dragon> : 00:53:685 (1) - and here's the same thing about the new combo
22:33 <ShadowSoul> : changed again
22:33 <Blue_Dragon> : the map itself is awesome
22:33 <Blue_Dragon> : great job
22:33 <ShadowSoul> : thanks <3
22:34 <Blue_Dragon> : well, that's it :3
22:34 <Blue_Dragon> : should I post this in the thread?
22:34 <ShadowSoul> : okay :D
22:34 <ShadowSoul> : ofc
22:34 <Blue_Dragon> : okay
Ruish
uhh i was actually modding it while you updated xD

General
- what happened to 300?
- try to make the file smaller? it's over 10mb with no video
easy
- snap all the objects
00:56:154 - note here to match 00:43:967 (3)
01:32:720 - ^
~good

normal
- snap all the objects
~nothing much to say

hard
- snap all the objects
- put a break in hard like in normal and easy?
00:44:537 - note here?
00:56:725 - ^

normal and hard still have unsnapped notes though
good~ can't find any major problems. A little bit blinding though, lol.
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

Ruish wrote:

uhh i was actually modding it while you updated xD

General
- what happened to 300? transparent lol .
- try to make the file smaller? it's over 10mb with no video already done



hard
- snap all the objects
- put a break in hard like in normal and easy?
00:44:537 - note here? no
00:56:725 - ^ no

normal and hard still have unsnapped notes though fixed..
good~ can't find any major problems. A little bit blinding though, lol.
Armin
[MoonShade's Easy]

Looks clean and without big problems.

[Tony's Normal]

Whoops Tony, it seems that you have a lot of unsapped stuff! Just fix that with resnapping all notes and to recalculate all sliders' lenghts

01:24:531 (x) - Seems legit to add a hitcircle here too, in order to avoid an empty section and to make homogeneous the flow (and because it sounds good too :3)

[Hard]

01:17:484 (1,2,3) - 01:17:484 (1,2,3) - Please symmetrify this pattern (just move it in the middle of the grid)
Mok
[General]
hit0.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256.
Just a curiosity... Why touhou, shana and parts of Ookami skin? xD

Anyway, map's good to me.
Nice hitsounds :D
marshallracer

Mok wrote:

Just a curiosity... Why touhou, shana and parts of Ookami skin? xD
It's actually a Skinmix from a certain person, which was put into this map

Edit : no permission -> delete the skin
Tony

Armin wrote:

[Tony's Normal]

Whoops Tony, it seems that you have a lot of unsapped stuff! Just fix that with resnapping all notes and to recalculate all sliders' lenghts
Dunno what happened. :S
[D]avideTheBest[ITA]
[Easy]

00:29:873 (5) - make like this http://puu.sh/bVGK
00:36:729 (1) - put KIAI here
00:44:346 (4) - make like this http://puu.sh/bVGQ
01:17:865 (3,4,1) - make like this http://puu.sh/bVHw (the anchor point of this slider make like this http://puu.sh/bVHG)
01:25:483 (1) - put KIAI here
01:36:529 (4) - make like this http://puu.sh/bVHZ

[Normal]

00:36:729 (1) - put KIAI here
00:42:823 (1,3) - make like this http://puu.sh/bVIu
01:10:247 (1,2) - make like this http://puu.sh/bVJ3
01:19:388 (1,2) - make like this http://puu.sh/bVJB
01:25:483 (1) - put KIAI here
01:37:671 (1,2) - make like this http://puu.sh/bVJB
01:43:766 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/bVKa
01:46:813 (3,4) - if you do it, fix the distance between 2 - 3 - 4

[Hard]

00:29:682 (3) - insert a spin here and make it stop at 00:30:634
00:31:015 (2) - make like this http://puu.sh/bVL8
00:36:729 (1) - put KIAI here and make the slider like this http://puu.sh/bVTN
00:37:300 (2) - add a note
00:37:490 (2) - remove a note
00:40:347 - add a note
00:40:538 (8) - remove note
00:48:917 (1) - make the slider like this http://puu.sh/bVTN
00:49:488 - add a note
00:49:679 (2) - remove note
00:52:536 - add a note
00:52:726 (8) -
00:55:583 - add a note
00:55:773 (3) - remove note
01:18:436 (3) - insert a spin here and make it stop at 01:19:388
roll: 01:19:769 (2) - make like this http://puu.sh/bVL8
01:25:483 (1) - put KIAI here
01:26:054 - add a note
01:26:245 (2) - remove note
01:29:101 - add a note
01:29:292 (3) - remove note
01:32:148 - add a note
01:32:339 (3) - remove note
01:38:243 - add note
01:38:433 (2) - remove note
01:41:290 - add note
01:41:480 (3) - remove note
01:44:337 - add note
01:44:527 (3) - remove note

I hope i helped you, if you want give me a kudosu :)
MoonShade

[D]avideTheBest[ITA] wrote:

[Easy]
00:29:873 (5) - make like this http://puu.sh/bVGK ~ no reason to do that
00:36:729 (1) - put KIAI here ~ souls decision
00:44:346 (4) - make like this http://puu.sh/bVGQ ~ think it looks nicer how it is
01:17:865 (3,4,1) - make like this http://puu.sh/bVHw (the anchor point of this slider make like this http://puu.sh/bVHG) ~ don't see a huge difference here, just made it a bit nicer i guess
01:25:483 (1) - put KIAI here ~ ^
01:36:529 (4) - make like this http://puu.sh/bVHZ ~ instead made some 4-grid nazi stuff. Don't see a reason for only 1 sliderpoint.
Edit: oh Ruish I overlooked you. I won't change anything, sry :(

thx for your mods!

Download: Laza Morgan - This Girl (Nightcore Mix) (ShadowSoul) [MoonShade's Easy].osu
Lissette
Hard
00:29:682 (3) - I think a new combo here fit very well, since this slider is an anti jump and is a wiggle slider..... 00:48:346 (1) - you did it here
01:18:436 (3) - same
01:34:053 (7) - new combo
01:46:241 (7) - new combo (i wont point them all, i think you get the point, just try to be consistent with the new combo pattern so your map doesn't look messy)

Storyboard
The pulse of "Lonely Girl.png" could be more smooth.
Some lyrics are under the scorebar and the score, and looks bad
Crop the unnecessary transparency from your sb files plz, to file like this "For you.png", "Yeah.png", etc.
Enable "Display storyboard in front of combo fire" in all diffs, so the combofire dont hide the storyboard
Disable "Letter-box during breaks" in all diffs too
Delete all files that you are not using in the storyboard
All SB files must be .png, you have some .jpg around there
I personally didn't like the lyrics font, could be more visible maybe.

Skin
Don't use transparent files for hit-300 and make them sizes like the templateskin
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

Lissette wrote:

Hard
00:29:682 (3) - I think a new combo here fit very well, since this slider is an anti jump and is a wiggle slider..... 00:48:346 (1) - you did it here
01:18:436 (3) - same
01:34:053 (7) - new combo
01:46:241 (7) - new combo (i wont point them all, i think you get the point, just try to be consistent with the new combo pattern so your map doesn't look messy)

Storyboard
The pulse of "Lonely Girl.png" could be more smooth.
Some lyrics are under the scorebar and the score, and looks bad
Crop the unnecessary transparency from your sb files plz, to file like this "For you.png", "Yeah.png", etc.
Enable "Display storyboard in front of combo fire" in all diffs, so the combofire dont hide the storyboard
Disable "Letter-box during breaks" in all diffs too
Delete all files that you are not using in the storyboard
All SB files must be .png, you have some .jpg around there
I personally didn't like the lyrics font, could be more visible maybe.

Skin
Don't use transparent files for hit-300 and make them sizes like the templateskin
Fixed All , and SB deleted ..
riffy
Hi.
All diffs looks nice for me.
Good Luck.
Star for you.
New page for me /o/
Topic Starter
ShadowSoul

-Bakari- wrote:

Hi.
All diffs looks nice for me.
Good Luck.
Star for you.
New page for me /o/
Haha :DD
Thank You (:
Lissette
Some IRC modding and Bubble~

Lovely map~ :)
Andrea
Looks pretty nice to me :3

Ranked~
MoonShade
Yay~
Nice Work you guys :3
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