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Rei Kondoh - The Sun Rises

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An64fan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on January 14, 2009 at 9:09:07 PM

Artist: Rei Kondoh
Title: The Sun Rises
Tags: Okami
BPM: 130
Filesize: 9780kb
Play Time: 03:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.96 stars, 145 notes)
  2. Goddess (4.64 stars, 420 notes)
  3. Hard (3.81 stars, 318 notes)
  4. Normal (2.11 stars, 199 notes)
Download: Rei Kondoh - The Sun Rises
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My most recent deemed-by-me-as-complete map. And I've been working to finish this up recently as well, going through the past few days to do slight tweaks to timing and spacing. Added hitsounds only last night. Of course, if there's anything that needs to be further tweaked, say the word and I'm on it.

Update (Oct.23): Just changed a couple hitsounds on Hard that I didn't seem to place right.
Update 2: Tweaked a few little things, and did another difficulty. For some reason the drain seems higher on it when it's the same as Hard. Weird. Feedback on this as well, please.
Update 3: Moved a couple beats in Goddess... Still questioning a couple bits here, as well as the drain rate.
Update (Oct.24): Figured I may as well update what I've done so far. Screwed around a bit with drain and some of the beats of Goddess.
Update 4: Made some fixes by Dawn's suggestion and adjusted a bit of spacing in Normal and Easy in general. Also made a couple more changes to Goddess.
Update (Oct.28): Ok. Bump. But I double-checked the tick rate, which had been driving me nuts.
Update (Oct.31): Made some adjustments based on Card's feedback.
Update 5: Whoops! And spinner idea implemented, indeed, that sounds good. <3
Update (Nov.1): Fixed a really stupid spacing mistake on Hard (which wasn't the sliders at the second volume change, btw).
Update (Nov.3): Touched up parts based on m980's nazi list. =3 Also made some notable physical changes to Normal and Hard.
Update (Nov.4): Made a couple of Dawn's changes which I missed before.
Update (Nov.17): Added tags which should have been there to begin with. My bad.
Update (Nov.24): More fixes suggested by m980.
Update (Dec.20): Added some breaks in Easy through Hard, made some small structural changes and adjustments.
Update: Whoops again. Fixed the offset to foul's suggestion.
Update: (Jan.14): Made some adjustments to parts pointed out by foul and SFG.
DawnII
Timing looks good.

[Easy]
01:09:03 (4) - Too close to (3).
01:53:34 (2) - Too close to (1).

[Normal]
00:10:87 (5) - Too close to (4).
00:27:49 (5) - Too close to (4,6).
00:40:41 (6) - Too far from (7).
00:41:80 (8) - Too far from (9).
00:43:18 (10) - Too far from (11).
01:02:57 (1) - Too close to (2).
01:04:87 (3) - Too far from (4).
01:35:34 (7) - Too close to (6).
01:53:34 (2) - Too close to (1).
02:25:18 (4) - Too far from (3,5).

[Hard]
00:54:49 (6) - New combo here.
00:56:80 (12) - New combo again.
01:01:18 (4,5,6) - A tad unevenly spaced. Clean this up a little.
01:03:03 (2,3,4) - Same here.
01:06:72 (1) - A little too far from (2).
01:22:87 (6) - New combo here.
01:45:03 (2,3,4) - Unevenly spaced.
01:53:34 (5) - Too close to (4).
02:25:18 (4,5,6) - Unevenly spaced.
02:40:87 (7) - Bit close to (6).
02:51:03 (3) - Too far from (4).
03:01:18 (4,5,6) - Unevenly spaced.

[Goddess]
00:53:11 (6,7,8) - End too far from each other.
01:01:18 (4,5,6) - Unevenly spaced.
01:06:72 (1) - Too far from (2).
01:22:87 (6) - Too far from (7). New combo.
01:24:26 (12) - Too far from (11).
01:27:72 (9,10) - Unevenly spaced.
01:30:26 (2) - This stream all looks very awkward. Tighten gap between: (3,4) (7,8) (9,10)
01:45:03 (5) - Too far from (6). Leave this if you want.
01:51:72 (5) - New combo.
01:52:41 (10) - New combo.
02:02:16 (4) - This isn't snapped to anything?
02:25:41 (5) - Too far from (6).
02:37:18 (1) - Too far from (2).
02:41:80 (8) - Too far from (7).
02:42:72 (3) - Too far from (2).
Topic Starter
An64fan
Thanks Dawn. Slight spacing adjustments made all around in Normal and a couple little spots in Easy, especially that you pointed out.

Made some more little changes to Goddess as well.
minyeob
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Topic Starter
An64fan
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Card N'FoRcE
- Easy:
02:10:41 (3) - move it a little up
03:03:03 (5) - move it a little to the right

- Normal:
No problems :D

- Hard:
00:29:68 (8,9) - i think these two are pretty useless, since that sound stops at 7, but no problem if they stay.
00:49:64 (1,2) - why don't move them at the center of the grid? :P
02:02:57 (1) - 02:00:72 (1) - maybe changing spacing for the same time snap is a bit harsh, but since other mappers do it, i dunno what to say...
02:11:10 (10) - i think another two beat fit well here, but it's the same thing as 00:29:68 i said before
02:14:91 (12,13) - same as 00:29:68
02:44:80 (1,2) - space them like 02:39:72 (4,5), as you did in the whole map.

- Goddess:
No time to look at it for now, sorry :(

Anyway how about a spinner at 3:03:494 that ends at 3:06:725? I think it fits wery well.
Topic Starter
An64fan
00:29:68 (8,9) - i think these two are pretty useless, since that sound stops at 7, but no problem if they stay.
You're not listening close enough. =3

00:49:64 (1,2) - why don't move them at the center of the grid?
Looks better a bit off-center. Like how many photos look dull if the subject is right in the middle. (It might just be that I'm weird, as well)

02:02:57 (1) - 02:00:72 (1) - Made a slight adjustment here. Let's hope my sense of distance IS indeed working at the moment (I have slight doubts about if it is at the immediate moment)

02:11:10 (10) - Listen more closely lol.

02:44:80 (1,2) - space them like 02:39:72 (4,5), as you did in the whole map.
Not entirely sure what you're getting at here. The timing is completely different between those two spots. (though I did make a slight adjustment here)

Anywho, made some adjustments and updated.
m980
Hi

Easy
02:30:26 (1,2) - Spacing. Move 1 closer to 2.
02:32:57 (2,3,4) - Move these closer to eachother.

Normal
00:10:87 (5) - Move this abit to the left.
00:14:80 (4,5) - Move these closer to 3.
00:24:26 (2) - Move this abit up.
01:10:41 (3,4) - Move these abit to the left.
02:20:57 (5) - Abit to the left and abit down.
02:30:72 (2) - Spacing. Move 1 closer to 2.

Hard
00:14:80 (4,5,6,7) - Move these closer to 3.
00:33:49 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uhh.. Looks weird. Spacing is messed up. Fix
00:54:49 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Spacing is Inconsistent.
00:57:49 (15) - Abit to the left.
01:01:41 (5,6) - Abit to the right.
01:03:26 (3,4) - To the right.
01:07:18 (2,3,4) - ^
01:08:34 (5,6,7) - Closer.
01:09:95 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:30:26 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent.
01:38:34 (3) - Abit down.
01:45:03 (2,3,4) - 4 closer to 3
02:25:41 (5,6) - Closer to 4
02:28:87 (1,2,3) - Closer
02:36:49 (6,7) - To the Left.
02:37:41 (2,3) - Closer
02:39:72 (4,5,6) - Closer
02:45:03 (2) - ^
02:46:64 (5) - ^
02:51:49 (4) - ^
02:52:41 (2,3,4) - ^
02:53:57 (5,6) - ... ^
02:59:57 (1,2) - ^^^
03:01:64 (6) - ^^^^^

Goddess
00:14:80 (4,5,6,7) - Move these closer to 3...
00:48:26 (4) - To the left.
00:50:34 (3) - ^
00:51:95 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^^^ i mean Closer.
00:54:49 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^^
01:01:18 (4,5,6) - Closer
01:07:18 (2,3,4) - Closer to 1.
01:08:80 (6,7) - Closer
01:17:80 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Closer. Fill in the gaps man.
Look through the whole map. Any beats that are 1/2 a beat (timing wise) apart that have a gap in them, move those beats closer, so that they slightly overlap.
01:45:14 (6,7,8,9) - Put these closer so that it is obvious that these are 1/4 beats.
02:00:26 (4,5,6) - Same here.
02:05:80 (5,6,7) - As well as here.


Normal/Hard/Goddess all seem too similar. If you don't want to redo them, just flip the whole map for normal/hard/goddess so that none are really identical.
Topic Starter
An64fan
Da da, da da, da.... Adjusted most of the half-beat sets in Hard and Goddess. Except for those spots too awesome to bother touching. :)


00:50:34 (3)
^Lol. Stupid spacing mistake I missed. Thanks for pointing it out.

01:45:03 (5)
^I caught another stupid spacing mistake of mine. :P Actually, I think I caught this earlier but forgot when I was last making fixes...

There were a few weird sliders on Goddess. O_o Don't know what happened with those, but I fixed those too.

Anyways, Normal is now horizontally flipped and Hard has gotten a 180% rotation to differentiate the difficulties a little more. Goddess remains as it is. After Normal being based off of Easy, Hard off of Normal, and finally Goddess off of Hard, I think that Goddess is only like...I don't know, but I think only a relatively small chunk really resembles Easy. XD

And tell me if I've missed anything. Because I might have. Updated.

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Wizard Of Orz
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Topic Starter
An64fan
Missed the rest of Dawn's list. ): Though at least I made come combo changes by her suggestions.

DawnII wrote:

02:02:16 (4) - This isn't snapped to anything?
I think it's snapped to a 1/8th. I have no idea how I did that. Fixed.

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m980
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Topic Starter
An64fan
Fix'd. :D
foulcoon
Offset is on the wrong beat...?
I'm getting 7,652

Easy]
No real complaints, however it could use a break or two. Map is an Easy difficulty and 3 minutes with no breaks is rough.

[Normal]
Same as Easy.

[Hard]
All good, however once again, you might want to add a break. Not only would it help the players, but it would detract from the fact that this map is very similar to Goddess.

[Goddess]
00:30:84 (2,3) - make these like the rest of the combo..
Go through and make sure all stack/streams of 2 and 3 notes are equally spaced, because these are the problem spots.
Topic Starter
An64fan
Managed to squeeze in a couple of breaks for Easy through to Hard, also made a few little structural changes on Easy and Normal, not too much though. Updated.
foulcoon
after pro changes in IRC you can has bubble.

my only regret is not forcing you to make spacing on goddess huge
Mogsy
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liji789
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