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paraoka - Manima ni (Short Ver.)

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NatsumeRin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年2月4日 at 22:05:22

Artist: paraoka
Title: Manima ni (Short Ver.)
Tags: haru*nya climbb65588 kanarin
BPM: 185
Filesize: 5813kb
Play Time: 02:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Climbb & Kana's Taiko (4.83 stars, 1074 notes)
  2. Easy (2.65 stars, 176 notes)
  3. Hard (5 stars, 475 notes)
  4. Normal (4.14 stars, 233 notes)
  5. Rin (4.9 stars, 576 notes)
Download: paraoka - Manima ni (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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mp3 file is from Mixagji's ver and...
BG is from Apricot's ver
the song is fun to map, just this. moved to pending.
artpiggo
just leave a star in case you need it someday.
L_P
难得没到5星
edit: 不过没弄错。。。还是真正的五星
Ayakura Mei
我没星所以只能add fav.支持一下 :(
Verdisphena
Lovely sliders <3
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
前排
eveless
[Rin]
00:28:325 (x) - 补个音...?
00:37:649 (2) - spacing
01:00:027 (2) - ^
01:26:784 (1) - 前面的那个clap就算了这个的音量是不是有点大...
01:48:514 (1) - 按照你之前的下法其实这不用nc的吧
02:09:271 (1) - ^
02:14:136 (6) - 加个finish并且nc一下?
02:29:055 (1) - clap音量真心跪求减小.

[Hard]
02:08:297 (1,2,3,4) - 这边间距递减进入kiai?
02:13:162 (4) - spacing

[Normal]
00:35:541 (1) - 为什么不和4叠一起
01:59:216 (3) - 变速晚了1ms.

[Easy]
02:09:271 (T) - 烧了这根多余的绿线
Cygnus
Hi there. Here's a Mod for the coolest mapper ever. <3
GENERAL
  1. 00:01:649 - Remove clap. Replace with soft whistle.
EASY
  1. 00:30:352 - Remove whistle.

  2. 00:54:676 - (1,1) Are the new combos necessary?

  3. 01:24:514 - (4,5) Fix their spacing, they're not consistent. Try this: http://puu.sh/ejKj

  4. 01:56:946 - (1,1) Are the new combos necessary?

  5. 02:27:108 - (4,5) Fix their spacing, they're not consistent. Try this: http://puu.sh/ejKg
NORMAL
  1. 00:25:162 - Add whistle.

  2. 00:29:703 - Change this slider. It's not good.

  3. 00:56:298 - (1,2,3) I hope you're aware these notes are not stacked with the previous slider.

  4. 01:58:568 - ^
HARD
  1. 00:28:081 - Move this slider up. It's already at the corner.

  2. 00:36:190 - Hope you're not aware this is not stacked with the previous slider.

  3. 01:00:027 - (2,3) One grid up, one grid right.

  4. 01:22:406 - (4,5,6) Move this away from the corner.

  5. 01:26:460 - (2,1) These notes are not stacked.
RIN
  1. To be frank, your sliders are ugly on this diff. Can't you think of something better?

  2. Seems fine. Just the sliders. D:
The map was awesome. Love the Hard Diff. <3 Hope this gets ranked soon!
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

goodbye wrote:

[Rin]
00:28:325 (x) - 补个音...? 排版好像会比较尴尬又懒得大改
00:37:649 (2) - spacing 改了
01:00:027 (2) - ^ ^
01:26:784 (1) - 前面的那个clap就算了这个的音量是不是有点大... 无感觉
01:48:514 (1) - 按照你之前的下法其实这不用nc的吧 前面那个为了跳把NC提前扔了,这还是保留一下吧
02:09:271 (1) - ^ ^
02:14:136 (6) - 加个finish并且nc一下? finish加了nc没有
02:29:055 (1) - clap音量真心跪求减小. 既然这么坚持我减了10%但我真的没觉得问题...

[Hard]
02:08:297 (1,2,3,4) - 这边间距递减进入kiai? 不了..
02:13:162 (4) - spacing 手滑

[Normal]
00:35:541 (1) - 为什么不和4叠一起 感觉就是这样..?
01:59:216 (3) - 变速晚了1ms. 略傻逼

[Easy]
02:09:271 (T) - 烧了这根多余的绿线
烧了


Philippines wrote:

Hi there. Here's a Mod for the coolest mapper ever. <3
GENERAL
  1. 00:01:649 - Remove clap. Replace with soft whistle.
finaly changed S1-finish


EASY
  1. 00:30:352 - Remove whistle. no.

  2. 00:54:676 - (1,1) Are the new combos necessary? make it more obvious.

  3. 01:24:514 - (4,5) Fix their spacing, they're not consistent. Try this: http://puu.sh/ejKj changed a bit.

  4. 01:56:946 - (1,1) Are the new combos necessary? same

  5. 02:27:108 - (4,5) Fix their spacing, they're not consistent. Try this: http://puu.sh/ejKg same.
NORMAL
  1. 00:25:162 - Add whistle. no.

  2. 00:29:703 - Change this slider. It's not good. wat

  3. 00:56:298 - (1,2,3) I hope you're aware these notes are not stacked with the previous slider. it's manually stacked. actually play it once and you'll know.
  4. 01:58:568 - ^ ^
HARD
  1. 00:28:081 - Move this slider up. It's already at the corner. changed a bit.

  2. 00:36:190 - Hope you're not aware this is not stacked with the previous slider. manually stack.

  3. 01:00:027 - (2,3) One grid up, one grid right. no.,

  4. 01:22:406 - (4,5,6) Move this away from the corner. it's still ok imo

  5. 01:26:460 - (2,1) These notes are not stacked. manually stack.
RIN
  1. To be frank, your sliders are ugly on this diff. Can't you think of something better? are you serious...those sliders looks good to me...

  2. Seems fine. Just the sliders. D:
The map was awesome. Love the Hard Diff. <3 Hope this gets ranked soon!
Aenna
art
DeathBlood
Shoot Star!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
DaxMasterix
From #modreq

General
  1. Taiko Diff WIP (?
Easy
  1. 00:14:135 - Remove the Clap of the Reverse of the Slider.
  2. 00:54:676 - Remove NC
  3. 00:55:325 - ^
  4. 01:05:379 - Whistle
  5. 01:27:433 - Remove Clap
  6. 01:56:946 - Remove NC
  7. 01:57:595 - ^
  8. 02:07:649 - Whistle
  9. 02:29:703 - Remove Clap
Normal
  1. 00:14:135 - Remove the Clap of the Reverse of the Slider.
  2. 00:54:676 - Remove NC
  3. 00:55:325 - ^
  4. 01:04:730 - Add a Whistle At the End of the Slider.
  5. 01:05:379 - ^
  6. 01:26:784 - Remove the Clap of the Reverse of the Slider.
  7. 01:56:946 - Remove NC
  8. 01:57:595 - ^
  9. 02:07:000 - Add a Whistle At the End of the Slider.
  10. 02:07:649 - ^
  11. 02:29:054 - Remove the Clap of the Reverse of the Slider.
  12. 02:30:676 - Remove the Note and add A Spinner? [Finished at 02:32:946]
Hard
  1. 00:14:135 - Remove the clap in the End of the Slider.
  2. 01:26:784 - Remove the Clap of the Reverse of the Slider.
  3. 02:29:054 - ^
Rin
  1. 00:14:135 - Remove the clap in the End of the Slider.
  2. 01:26:784 - Remove the Clap of the Reverse of the Slider.
  3. 02:29:054 - ^
Nice Mapset :I
Copter-kun
Hey NatsumeRin.

General

There seem to be the clap hitsound in 01:27:433 and 02:29:703 in all difficulty, I suggest chaging them to a different hitsound.

Easy

No problems found here

Normal

No problems here

Hard

00:37:487 (1) - Might want to remove NC, it doesn't fit this quite well.
01:50:784 (1,2,3,4) - Isn't this jump a little too hard for hard players?
02:06:351 (3) - 1 grid down, just to keep it straight
02:09:270 (1,1) - I do not like this stack much.

Rin

00:45:919 (1) - To get it symmetrical to this pattern, I suggest removing this NC
01:48:514 (1) - Same problem to ^

Good map, I hope this gets ranked soon!
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

DaxMasterix wrote:

From #modreq

General
  1. Taiko Diff WIP (? Yes, waiting for climbb65588
Easy
  1. 00:14:135 - Remove the Clap of the Reverse of the Slider. ehh why
  2. 00:54:676 - Remove NC to make it more obvious so i guess it's not needed.
  3. 00:55:325 - ^ ^
  4. 01:05:379 - Whistle no.
  5. 01:27:433 - Remove Clap ...?
  6. 01:56:946 - Remove NC same as first part.
  7. 01:57:595 - ^ ^
  8. 02:07:649 - Whistle ^
  9. 02:29:703 - Remove Clap ^
Normal
  1. 00:14:135 - Remove the Clap of the Reverse of the Slider. ..why?
  2. 00:54:676 - Remove NC same as Easy.
  3. 00:55:325 - ^ ^
  4. 01:04:730 - Add a Whistle At the End of the Slider. seems good.
  5. 01:05:379 - ^ ^
  6. 01:26:784 - Remove the Clap of the Reverse of the Slider. no.
  7. 01:56:946 - Remove NC same.
  8. 01:57:595 - ^ ^
  9. 02:07:000 - Add a Whistle At the End of the Slider. good.
  10. 02:07:649 - ^ ^
  11. 02:29:054 - Remove the Clap of the Reverse of the Slider.
  12. 02:30:676 - Remove the Note and add A Spinner? [Finished at 02:32:946] i may consider this later since i'm not very sure now.
Hard
  1. 00:14:135 - Remove the clap in the End of the Slider. no.
  2. 01:26:784 - Remove the Clap of the Reverse of the Slider. ^
  3. 02:29:054 - ^ ^
Rin
  1. 00:14:135 - Remove the clap in the End of the Slider. same as Hard.
  2. 01:26:784 - Remove the Clap of the Reverse of the Slider.
  3. 02:29:054 - ^
Nice Mapset :I

Copter-kun wrote:

Hey NatsumeRin.

General

There seem to be the clap hitsound in 01:27:433 and 02:29:703 in all difficulty, I suggest chaging them to a different hitsound. ehh i don't really get what's wrong with it now... but it seems not very good to you guys..? i'll get more opinions about this and then decide.

Easy

No problems found here

Normal

No problems here

Hard

00:37:487 (1) - Might want to remove NC, it doesn't fit this quite well. i guess you're right.
01:50:784 (1,2,3,4) - Isn't this jump a little too hard for hard players? not really. even in early Shinxyn maps you could find plenty of them
02:06:351 (3) - 1 grid down, just to keep it straight ..? it's already straight now?
02:09:270 (1,1) - I do not like this stack much. deal with it...? in fact it used to be 1/8.

Rin

00:45:919 (1) - To get it symmetrical to this pattern, I suggest removing this NC ehh i still hope it could me more obvious for a jump
01:48:514 (1) - Same problem to ^ ^

Good map, I hope this gets ranked soon!
LaceWingfield
Mod Request from Shana Aisaka's queue

all Modding in Grid size tiny

[Easy]
00:16:730 (2): 1 grid right better?
00:22:568 (3): 1 grid left??
00:27:757 (3): 1 grid left and up?
00:34:892 (3): 1 grid right?
00:35:865 (4): ^
00:53:054 (3): 1 grid down?
00:59:541 (1): 1 grid right?
01:09:919 (1): 1 grid left?
01:26:784 (1): 1 grid right?
01:28:081 (3): ^
01:41:054 (1): ^
01:55:325 (3): 1 grid down

[Normal]
00:08:298 (3): 1 grid up?
00:12:190 (4): 1 grid right?
00:28:406 (1): 1 grid up?
00:49:162 (1): 1 grid right?
00:54:676 (1): ^
00:59:217 (6): 1 grid up
01:09:919 (1): 1 grid left
01:11:865 (4): 1 grid right
01:51:433 (1): 1 grid left
02:25:811 (2): 1 grid right

[Hard]
00:17:379 (3): 1 grid left?
00:40:406 (2): 1 grid up?
00:45:919 (5): ^
01:08:622 (1): 1 grid right?
01:12:107 (5,6,7): 1 grid up?
02:15:108 (3): 1 grid right
02:27:757 (1): 1 grid down?

[Rin]
00:18:027 (5): 1 grid right?

too fast for me to mod .. my eyes Dx

don't KD if it's useless

star?
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
fixed some... orz.
L_P
开始朝50张rank图冲了吗。。。anyway, star一个 +8
ryuu
haaaaai ~
r-r-r-rin..it's u Q___Q i'm your fanat Q_________Q

i guess my mod will be short. because i have a feeling that everything in it is a perfectly *3*
well,go ahead ~

[Easy]

00:56:298 (1) - nc. and delete nc here 00:56:946 (1). and then 00:54:027 (1,1,1) - will be felt for one complete whole.
01:58:568 (2) - ^

[Normal]

00:37:162 - note?
00:59:217 (6) - nc
00:59:541 (1) - delete nc
01:01:811 (4) - nc
01:02:135 (1) - delete nc
01:39:433 - n-note?
02:01:487 (6,1) - same as 00:59:217 and 00:59:541
02:04:081 (4,1) - same as 01:01:811 and 01:02:135

[Rin]

00:20:460 (4) - nc
00:20:622 (1) - del nc
00:39:919 (5) - nc
00:40:081 (1) - del nc
00:50:298 (6) - nc
00:50:460 (1) - del nc
01:01:811 (4) - nc
01:02:135 (1) - del nc
01:13:649 (6) - nc
01:13:811 (1) - del nc
01:21:433 (6) - nc
01:21:595 (1) - del nc
01:25:162 (4) - nc
01:25:487 (1) - del nc
01:43:487 (5) - nc
01:43:649 (1) - del nc
02:01:649 (4) - nc
02:01:811 (1) - del nc
02:04:081 (4) - nc
02:04:406 (1) - del nc
02:06:838 (4) - nc
02:07:000 (1) - del nc
02:15:920 (6) - nc
02:16:082 (1) - del nc
02:27:433 (4) - nc
02:27:758 (1) - del nc

[Hard]

00:20:460 (4) - nc
00:20:622 (1) - del nc
00:25:649 (4) - nc
00:25:811 (1) - del nc
00:30:838 (4) - nc
00:31:000 (1) - del nc
01:04:568 (4) - nc
01:04:730 (1) - del nc
01:14:784 (4) - nc
01:15:108 (1) - del nc
01:25:162 (4) - nc
01:25:487 (1) - del nc
02:06:838 (4) - nc
02:07:000 (1) - del nc
02:17:054 (4) - nc
02:17:378 (1) - del nc
02:27:432 (4) - nc
02:27:757 (1) - del nc

that's all ._.
sorry..i'm so picky in relation to nc. it's my feeling.
anyway,star ~~
suzutsukikanade
As you requested in my modding queue.

But...I did not find anything wrong here ...
wanted to give a star to this map, but I do not have kds more > <

GL in this map!
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

[Ryuu] wrote:

haaaaai ~
r-r-r-rin..it's u Q___Q i'm your fanat Q_________Q

i guess my mod will be short. because i have a feeling that everything in it is a perfectly *3*
well,go ahead ~

[Easy]

00:56:298 (1) - nc. and delete nc here 00:56:946 (1). and then 00:54:027 (1,1,1) - will be felt for one complete whole. makes sense.
01:58:568 (2) - ^ ^

[Normal]

00:37:162 - note? k.
00:59:217 (6) - nc ehh. no to these 2. i still hope could start next part with a long white line (won't mention it in the next lines)
00:59:541 (1) - delete nc
01:01:811 (4) - nc ^
01:02:135 (1) - delete nc
01:39:433 - n-note? done.
02:01:487 (6,1) - same as 00:59:217 and 00:59:541 no.
02:04:081 (4,1) - same as 01:01:811 and 01:02:135 no

[Rin]
sorry no change to the new combos...

00:20:460 (4) - nc
00:20:622 (1) - del nc
00:39:919 (5) - nc
00:40:081 (1) - del nc
00:50:298 (6) - nc
00:50:460 (1) - del nc
01:01:811 (4) - nc
01:02:135 (1) - del nc
01:13:649 (6) - nc
01:13:811 (1) - del nc
01:21:433 (6) - nc
01:21:595 (1) - del nc
01:25:162 (4) - nc
01:25:487 (1) - del nc
01:43:487 (5) - nc
01:43:649 (1) - del nc
02:01:649 (4) - nc
02:01:811 (1) - del nc
02:04:081 (4) - nc
02:04:406 (1) - del nc
02:06:838 (4) - nc
02:07:000 (1) - del nc
02:15:920 (6) - nc
02:16:082 (1) - del nc
02:27:433 (4) - nc
02:27:758 (1) - del nc

[Hard]

00:20:460 (4) - nc
00:20:622 (1) - del nc
00:25:649 (4) - nc
00:25:811 (1) - del nc
00:30:838 (4) - nc
00:31:000 (1) - del nc
01:04:568 (4) - nc
01:04:730 (1) - del nc
01:14:784 (4) - nc
01:15:108 (1) - del nc
01:25:162 (4) - nc
01:25:487 (1) - del nc
02:06:838 (4) - nc
02:07:000 (1) - del nc
02:17:054 (4) - nc
02:17:378 (1) - del nc
02:27:432 (4) - nc
02:27:757 (1) - del nc

that's all ._.
sorry..i'm so picky in relation to nc. it's my feeling.
anyway,star ~~
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