1. Normal (4.34 stars, 264 notes)
2. Hard (4.41 stars, 461 notes)

m980 wrote:

Hi

Normal
01:08:24 (1,2,3) - Move these just abit up. (Spacing)
01:33:24 (3,4,5) - Move these away from 2. (Spacing)
02:01:61 (5,6) - These wouldn't be clear to see when to hit. (Playing Problems)
02:28:24 (1) - Move this so it's closer to the previous combo's 6. (Spacing)

Full Ver.
00:32:49 (4,5,6,7) - Rearrange this combo so that 4 is closer to 3 and spacing is fine. (Spacing)
00:36:99 (4,5) - Move away from the end of 2, (Spacing)
01:09:99 (3) - Move away from 2. Just abit. (Spacing)
01:27:99 (6) - I don't like it when sliders are concealed by things to make it unfair. (Unfairness)
02:01:61 (5,6) - These wouldn't be clear to see when to hit. (Playing Problems)
02:28:86 (3) - Move away from the end of 2. Move 4 afterwards. (Spacing)
02:39:86 (6,7) - Move closer to 5. (Spacing)
04:13:74 (5,6) - Uhh.... (Playing Problem)

awp wrote:

I think offset is 17250 - it feels beautifully timed at that for me.

[Normal]
No major issues jumped out at me, so I'm going to pick on a few minor nitpicks.
00:35:25 (3) - This slider has too many vertecies in it imo making the slider not-smooth looking. If that's the look you're going for, then kudos~

The distance snap is really modest, often making it difficult to infer how far apart notes should be timing-wise based on the distance separating them.

[Full ver]
00:17:87 (1) - This should fall on the whole-beat, yes?
01:55:50 (5) - I could predict the repeat on this slider based on the music and flow of the map, but it's somewhat hidden due to score explosions, so redirect the end-point such that it's clearly visible during play
02:33:75 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - A bit messy here. Try moving the 5-9 so that they don't cross over the 3 and 4.

Seibei4211 wrote:

Normal
00:56:00 (8) - New combo.
01:23:75 (7) - Move this 1/4 to the left. For these notes, you could just combine them into a short slider.
01:28:25 (7) - ^
01:33:75 (5) - ^
02:11:50 (5) - New combo.
02:22:50 (5) - ^
02:33:25 (3) - Same as 01:23:75
02:36:75 (1) - Delete this one.
02:46:75 (7) - New combo.
02:54:75 (7) - ^
02:56:50 (1,2,3,4) - I'd say delete these. I really wasn't expecting those notes there. They feel out of place.
03:01:75 (6) - This spot is a perfect place for a spinner. One that ends at 03:04:000.

Full ver. (You could just call this Hard. Easier difficulties often don't fully map the song, so you can just say Hard.)
01:12:00 (5,6) - Move these 1/4 to the left.
02:26:25 (6) - This would be a lot better as a slider that ended at 02:27:750.
02:43:50 (8,9) - I think you could make these a little more parallel. They look a little weird currently.
02:46:75 (7) - New combo.
02:54:75 (7) - ^
03:16:75 (7) - ^
03:30:25 (5) - I think this one should be 1/4 to the right.
03:32:12 (5) - ^
03:51:75 (1) - This sounds better if it ends a beat earlier.
04:04:75 (6) - New combo.
04:05:75 (10,11) - Move these 1/4 to the left, then readjust the slider so it ends on the same spot as before.
04:24:87 (7) - Sounds better 1/4 to the right.
04:25:75 (9) - New combo.
04:27:62 (14) - Move 1/4 to the right. Also, this spot is a perfect place for a spinner. One that ends at 04:29:75.

Seibei4211 wrote:

On second thought, this does bug me. Normal has a lot of streams that I don't like. They should be broken up with some sliders to make things easier and more interesting overall. Places such as these.

00:32:00 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
01:00:25 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
01:05:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
01:08:25 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
01:51:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
02:22:50 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5)
02:26:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5)
02:33:75 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
02:38:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
02:44:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Holy crap. Not one slider.

Some of these places are less urgent than others. This is just to point out the large lack of sliders in Normal.