[General]:
- Tags: Remove " d'n'b " because you already added DnB and Drum and Bass. Add Yuduki, the original Artist.
- I don't like the Diff names " Dear Easy" and "Dear Normal", it sounds really strange.
[Dear Easy]:00:17:612 (2) - It touches the HP-Bar a bit. Doesn't look nice.. Try to change it if you can.
00:21:058 (6) - Same as up. I think this is too much and it can be
unrankable.
00:28:984 (3) - Same as 00:17:612 (2).
00:32:086 (2) - ^
01:07:236 (2) - Remove Circle. Because I think it is a bit too overmapped for Easy. So make a Area with lower Beat Ticks.
01:08:614 (3) - ^
01:11:371 (4) - ^
01:12:750 (2) - ^
01:22:744 (2) - Clap doesn't fit so. Try to set Finish.
01:23:777 (1) - Remove Finish, set Whistle.
01:24:122 (2) - Clap doesn't fit so. Try to set Finish.
01:44:798 - Kiai Time doesn't make Sense there.
01:48:934 (3,4) - Fuse them both to a Slider.
[Dear Normal]:00:12:443 (1) - Set Clap at Start Point.
00:17:440 (2) - Remove Clap at End Point, set Whistle at End Point.
00:41:390 (1) - Set Clap at Start Point.
01:10:337 (1) - The Slider doesn't fit. Remove (2), then extend the Slider.
01:48:245 (2) - Short the Slider that the Beat is 1/2.
[Dear Rei]:00:06:067 (2) - Remove Whistle.
00:07:790 (6) - ^
00:13:476 (9) - Position looks stupid. Try to set it on a better place.
00:16:061 (7) - It doesn't stack on (6). Fix this.
00:21:402 (1) - ^
00:22:781 (3,4) - Jump is too big.
00:25:538 (3,4) - ^
00:28:467 (3,4,5) - You could try to stack like this:
http://puu.sh/fY1X00:41:217 (8,1) - Jump is too big.
00:55:174 (1) - Acutally useless to make new Combo here. Btw, it doesn't stack on (10).
01:06:547 (2) - Doesn't stack on (1).
01:07:235 (4,5) - Jump is too big.
01:08:269 (7,8) - ^
01:14:128 (6) - It would look better if you stack it at the End Point.
01:16:884 (4) - Doesn't stack on (1).
01:19:469 (6,7) - Jump is too big.
01:20:847 (2,3) - ^
01:23:087 (2) - Doesn't stack on (1).
01:24:466 (5) - Doesn't stack on (4).
01:26:878 to 01:50:313 - Remove all Whistles. It absolutley don't fit with the Music.
01:44:281 (6,7,8) - Jumps are too big.
(It is just my Opinion for the Jumps. Btw what Diff should this be? Insane?)